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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi friends...
As I come here each day expecting a RBO come back.. as it salvages the damage and trots slowly back to its feet I wish to speak my heart...
My association with this forum has not been very long, but I have made so many friends, in that short span, that I will never be able to disassociate myself away from here ever... I come back again and again for ShaNak and my friends... their intelligent posts, wacky one liners, to peppy talks and even healthy bickering... It is like having a second family... I sigh as I read the FF, SS, OS, Poetries... and wonder why the hell are we not in the run for producing a soap of our own... The VM makers, the siggi makers... so much talent... On this note I wish to contribute something too...
This is a dedication to -Manita- whose constant assurance and persistence gave me the courage to post my FF here amongst such talent! I hope that you will like my feeble efforts and love me too in the same way as you do my other talented friends... I also wish to add here that I could never join the leagues of you friends.. but would love to show them that all of us have real good ideas.. RBO can be led up to another golden path... like in the old...
A little more about my FF. I was entranced by love itself when I began my stint in writing. Am no pro.. but like to dwindle with my pen and transform my thoughts occasionally onto paper. Jane Austin's Pride and Prejudice have always entranced me in a classic way... And the picturization of this novel played by Mathew Macfadyen and Kiera Knightly leave me speechless every time I see them... just like ShaNak... I had written a story way back in 2007 when I had been inspired by P&P on totally different characters... But today I was encouraged by Mani, to create a FF on ShaNak and I think of no other story than P&P.. So I adapted P&P keeping ShaNak in mind... a little older and mature ShaNak... Hope you like it as much as I love creating it for you...
~~~~ Mani... this one is for you ~~~~~
Pride an Prejudice----
A story of Dr. Shantanu Khandelwal and Khanak Khanna...
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. I had no intention of it being similar to any other FF written here.. So if it seems so, then it is purely co-incidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Prologue
Pride and Prejudice (Khanak-Shantanu)
Dr. Shantanu Khandelwal 30 years is a well known Cardiac surgeon in Mumbai. Against his parents' wishes, he had taken up medicine and proved himself to his parents by having a name in his field in a short span of time. The only thing that bothers his family is that he is now is more cynical and even more angrier and detached towards life. Sunil and Madhavi Khandelwal his parents are in constant worry as to how will they bring their younger son back to living his life. Years ago he had been in love while studying medicine. The girl was his sister-in-law's sister, Natasha who was studying medicine too along with him. Fate played a bad role and Natasha died in a car accident. Ever since Shantanu refused to have anything to do with the female clan. He continued studying and became even more of a brute and a stranger to the outer world but becoming a Cardiac surgeon of repute...
Khanak Khanna 26 years is an Interior Designer and at a young age has her own flourishing business and also helps her father who is a builder and well known in the business circles as Govind Khanna and her mother Radha Khanna. She is presently living in Delhi where she does business with her close friend and architect Manav Mehra who is in love with life! Anything that is female and moving attracts his attention. But his views for Khanak are totally different than what his image portrays. For him she is inspiration and just a dear dear friend nothing more. And most importantly he knows that Khanak Khanna's heart lies elsewhere.. She had lost it to one boy now a man eve since she had been a teenager. But pride kept her from opening her mouth and she refused to talk about it. But Manu had known and for her sake kept quiet. And he does not wish to tell her that he secretly loves Khanak's cousin Maahi Khanna who is also in the same field as Khanak and helps her often.
Fate brings Pride and Prejudice close together and plays cupid...
Pride and Prejudice - Part 1 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1666662&TPN=2
Pride and Prejudice - Part 7 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42018282
Pride and Prejudice - Part 10 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42178803
Pride and Prejudice - Part 12 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42355320
Pride and Prejudice - Part 14 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42544553
Pride and Prejudice - Part 15 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42651116
Pride and Prejudcie - Part 16 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42809705
Pride and Prejudice - Part 18 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43069029
Pride and Prejudice - Part 19 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43148868
Pride and Prejudcie - Part 20 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43284228
Pride and Prejudice - Part 21 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43416800
Pride and Prejudice - Part 22 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43573203
Pride and Prejudice - Part 23 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43689481
Pride and Prejudice - Part 24 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43704443
Pride and Prejudice - Part 26 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44753474
Pride and Prejudice - Part 27- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45206104
Pride and Prejudice - Part 28 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45371422
Pride and Prejudice - Part 29 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45444509
Pride and Prejudice - Part 30 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45640785
Pride and Prejudice - Part 32 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46098684
Pride and Prejudice - Part 33 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47080786
Pride and Prejudice - Part 34 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47327862
Pride and Prejudice - Epilogue - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47835733
Thank you all... for reading and appreciating.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jess......

So, You Finally did it !!!! yayyyyyyy !!!!

Am super happy sweety !!! I have read your write ups dear and your replies on my FF tell a story of its own............You are too good when it comes to writing !!!
please stop saying 'feeble attempts' as the way you started tells a Class in itself !!!

I have been a very huge Fan on Pride and Prejudice and would love to read your interpretation !!!

Mature Shantanu, sorry Dr. Shantanu.........cynical, angrier.............wow !!! Bring him on !!! Nothing more attractive than a mature and angry Shaan !!!

Khanak........mature and with life !!!

Me already waiting for this love story to take it's shape and re-discover Shanak in a different light, making us fall in love with them yet again !!!!

Thanks for doing it !!!

And you dedicated to Meeee...😳.........*blush*.........thank yous from me !!! however your talent doesn't need any motivation or push..........you are naturally talented and beautifully gifted when it comes to writing !!!!

waiting for More .....................!!!!
Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jess.................🤗🤗🤗🤗

awesome prologue..................

Shantanu khandelwal cardiac surgeon...................& away from female species..............

khanak khanna............interior designer ..............

shanak in different avatar ..............amazing

loved it ...................

looking forward to ur FF...............
ur writing style is amazing..............

thanks to manita who told u to write.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei jessica,
i have read comments u write in mani's FF a lot n u r dedicating it to her..that is so sweet of u..i loved the prologue..mature shan being a doc is totally different..may be u made him doc seeing mani's profession..is it so?but u killed natasha at the start itself..no problem..it would be better this way..looking forward to ur update..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jessy! ... Good luck!!
the intro sounds good.....hav read P&P for school book review and its a clear-masterpiece!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
congrats on yr frst FF i hope u write many many many more FFs truly
im sure u will do a fab job n as mani was a superb surprise package wid her ff so will u

im so dying to read yr uploads

promise me ull update soon n not make us wait fr ages🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jess..congrats you for your 1st ff and loved the precap
looking very beautiful and supperb
waiting for next update
Edited by Deepali88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jess
Shaan a Doc.. That too a no nonsense one...
I m waiting !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guess what Jess!!
I am in love with P and P too and at one time had wished to write it with Shanak as the Darcy and Beth!!LOL Good you did it and love it that you have made them older!!:)
Looking forward to the rest! Thanks to Mani for making you do this!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wowieeeeess!!!

Another awesomeness on the block?😳

Nice intro!! Khanak all smartie and independent 😃
and teenage love!! Owwiieeee!! ⭐️

Shaaaaaantanu!! Sorry!!!
Dr. Shantanu!

*dreams abt angry Shaan*😍

*jerks back to reality*🤣🤣

So all set to spin Austen's magic again😳

Start Writing!!!

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