FF#Winds Of Desire~Chpt 59(last)&epilogue on P-94~

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the beautiful FF of niya inspired me to write sumthing so I tried...its my first attempt to write a FF ...so bear with me😆 the words quoted within asteriks* *are thoughts of characters
FF# WINDS OF DESIRE
chapter #1
It was a dark gloomy night,Runjhun was talking to her mothers photograph,"Why you left me alone in this world?why I survived in that accident?why?"
Tears rolled down to her rosy cheeks.
Runjhun:mama-mami never accepted me as a part of their
family,for them I am an unpaid servant,no one loved me
or cared for me except amma.She is my angel.I have not
seen God but if there is god it would be like amma
Figure of amma revovled in runjhun's mind, a lady in her late 60s whose hairs are white like glacier on mountains
with patches of black.her smile was so divine.Anyone can get peace on having a glance of her face.
Runjhun got disturbed by a noise.She went to the window to see whats the matter.she was horrified by the scene.Two huge man after throwing a man from van near the gutter disappeared with the van in the darknrss of night.She tried to recognize the man in the dim light of moon .
**It was him...guddu...he is fatally wounded .,what should I do now. Calling mama mami for help will be a waste...I know he is not worthy of kindness but how can I leave him like this...No one gonna help him coz of his bad reppo...His friends kukkan and jabbu are out of town ,yesterday when I was going to market ,I had heard them talking...they may return tomorrow or day after tomorrow...I can feel his moaning...his pain...I cannot leave him like this.Although I hate him but there is something that is forcing me to help him**
She moved with determination to help him but the reason which led her to do this was unknown to her...
Precap:RUNJHUN NURSING GUDDU
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sur001 this is fantastic hunnnnnn😊😊😊😊😊
You have soo much imagination and talent.😃😃😃
Thank you so so much for this awesome FF. No joke I could picture the tears sliding down Runjhun's face. I can't wait to see the scene where Runjhun nurses Guddu. I hope the CVs read your FF~ hopefully they'll get inspired 😳👏👏👏👏
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Nice story!!! Pleez continue!!!😃

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awwwwesum start yaar
Eagerkyy waitin fo d nxt prtupdate soooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Great start I must say. Short and sweet.......so many people are writing FFs, just love it...this is making the forum more active.....waiting for your next episode

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wow loved your fan fiction👏and waiting eagerly for next part
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Sur my darling.....this is a fantabulous start.........i have always said the writers in this forum are visual.......u too are the same hun.......waiting to see Rhunjhun nurse her Guddu...update soon
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good one dear
do continue
runjhun nursing guud back to normal this is nice.
bye sumi
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Thanks to all of you for your support.......😊😊😊
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thanks to all of you for your support ......here is the next part the words within asteriks** ** are thoughts of character
FF#1
Chapter #2
winds of desire
Slowly and steadily she reached to the maingate,paused for a second
Runjhun:**Am i taking the right step???????
Mama-mami will kill me .(She scolded herself) Stop it
runjhun! Saving a life is more virtuous than being
selfish for yourself**
She opened the gate slowly to escape from the loud squeal it makes.In a moment she was standing near guddu .he was intoxciated and fatally wounded ............blood was pouring out like a fountain from his wounds.He was trying to get up but he was unable to move.He again tried ,,,, this time he got up as she gave him support ,in his coming and fading consciousness ,he tried to recognize the person who was an angel for him .
Runjhun:**he is heavy.I cannot bear his weight for a long time.I
will have to bring him back into senses**
guddu.....guddu try to walk
Guddu applied all his force to move but he didn't get mucch success.Runjhun somewhat dragged him to her room cum storeroom and made him lie down on her bed.....she was breathing heavily and the stink of blood and liquor was making the atmosphere suffocating ..She left the room to have some fresh air........
She returned with a tray in her hand which was equipped by an ointment made of herbs ,lukewarm water and a pile of cotton
Guddu was feeling better than before and was in his senses,his body was paining very much as if someone has thrown a mountain on him,on seeing Runjhun with tray,he got a shock.
Guddu:**She helped me whom I consider a bad luck for me .She
is taking pain for me whom I have given only pain.
Becoz of me her fiance Abhigyaan left her**
Runjhun wiped the wound which was few inches below his lips.She was slowly applying ointment and blowing hot air to the wound.
Guddu gave a sharp look on her and thought:**I never gave her
any respect but she is behaving so sweetly with me.I
can feel her warm breathe.I wanna feel her
breathe,cherish her beauty.The moonlight is making
her beauty pious.She is looking like,Aphrodite,the
goddess of beauty.Her lips are resembling the
blossoming roses.I wanna taste her rose like lips**
while he was thinking about her .,his dressing was over.She turned to leave but a force pulled her back. and the very next second she had covered him. She could feel his strong hand still holding her wrist..................threir eyes met and they were lost in each other.
Runjhun:**I always hated his touch or presence but today I wanna
get lost in his strong arms....I wanna go deep in his
dark eyes............I am unable resist myself to feel his
breath...........I wanna..............what the hell am I
thinking???????how can I think this for him??????????
I should be angry on him........**
Guddu:**Why I pulled her???????why my heart is not allowing
me to leave her?few hours back she was a curse to me
I dont wanted to see her face but meanwhile when she is
in my arms ,so close to me.,I wanna get lost in her
beauty.I have never felt for anyother girl like this.
Is this the sideeffect of liquor or have I gonna mad that I
am feeling a sloft corner for her in my heart**
They got disturbed by the voice of a moaning cat and Guddu pushed her back.
A mixed feeling of shock ,anger ,amazement ,shame ,and contentment ran over her
Runjhun :what do you think of yourselfand what do you mean by
this unworthy behaviour of yours??????
Guddu:what have i done?????
I just slightly pulled you to ask for water,its you who
is so delicate that you lost your control
**why aam I lying**
Runjhun:I have not lost my control ,its you who pulled me but I
know you never gonna accept your mistake,talking to
you is a mere waste of time....Why have I helped you
even?????????
Guddu:I had not asked help from you ,it was you who came
forward.If your lecture is over then leave, my body is
paining and I need rest
Runjhun:Ok fine I am leaving.I also dont get any pleasure in
talking to you
**how dare he to pull me ?????????instead of thanking
me that ungrateful soul is ordering mein my house**
She leaves the room giving an angry look to Guddu
PRECAP:- PANDEYS GETTING ANGRY ON RUNJHUN

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