FF#Winds Of Desire~Chpt 59(last)&epilogue on P-94~ - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anova

What will Guddu do? Will he kidnap Runjhun again?😆 Or will he express his 'love'(as he will feel jealousy...) to her?(Or mama mamis and their Brahammasra Guddu??) Pls. make it romantic.😍 I am so curious. Pls. update sooon. Sur, u r a very good writer. I have enjoyed the dialogues of Kalsanwali, Guddu, Runjhun.👍🏼

No...this time brahmastra will be changed and they will have to pay for using it...
I will try to make it romantic but it will depend on the next plot
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

That was a SUPERGOOD update!!!

i LUVED the whole movie borrowing scene..Guddu: wen i hvae my chand zameen par.
😳😳 luved that!!
i c that the kabab mein haddi is coming bak ... but atleast we'll get to see some jealousyy 😃
really cnat wait... update soon dearr!! 😛

I always wanted to see a jealous and passionate Guddu ...so I am trying to make him little naughty,jealous and passionate...in my ff ...hope I will get success
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sur001

I always wanted to see a jealous and passionate Guddu ...so I am trying to make him little naughty,jealous and passionate...in my ff ...hope I will get success

m sure u will be successful, no doubt about that 😃 ... and me too- ive alwyas imagined a jealous, passionate Guddu 😍 and cant wait to read it now!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
You know i am really lucky...why coz I got you all as my regular readers who support me ...and give nice comments to me...I am sure now ...i am gonna have some like buttons and comments if i write bad to suggest me and motivate me...I am really thank full to you all ...but specially to my dear angels who are supporting me from first day onwards...I wont take name by mistake forgot one then I am gone but they are my angels so smart enough to know I am talking about them😉...Thank you
I will be updating soon...
Edited by sur001 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Eleventh part is on

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FF #1
Chapter#11
winds of desire
O god...I was almost dead...who the hell is this...dreaming while driving or relative of Salmaan khaan that cannot see people on road...Uh...I am really hurt...I raised my head to see whose car this is...and got shocked ...white ferari...Is Abhigyaan back...but why will he come here...I scolded myself...Runjhun stop dreaming...what will he be doing here...stop day dreaming and get up ...you are lying on road...I was really hurt...it was so painful to get up...my whole body was aching...that time I noticed two hands were there offering me help...one from right and another from left...the hands were of two people whom I wanna kill...Abhi and guddu but I was not able to stand on myself so grabbed both the hands as both were same in my eyes...Guddu left after i stood on my legs...I also headed towards the house ...but the voice of the man who had shown a beautiful dream of my future and broke it himself ...stopped me...I turned ...I could see the guilt in his eyes but how can I forget the pain I suffered...If Guddu done that all then he was also no less... infront of everyone forced me for chastity test...
Abhi :Runjhun ...I wanna talk to you...
Runjhun:Abhi...is anything else left to say...
Abhi:yes...that I am sorry...I cannot live without you ...
Runjhun:But you can not live with me either ...you had said ...remember..
Abhi:please Runjhun...dont make me feel more guilty...I am sorry...forgive
me...
Runjhun:Who am I to decide that you should be forgiven or not...ask from the
same society...they will surely forgive you...Abhi,,,,,please go...
Abhi:I will ...but first listen to me for once please...
Runjhun:Say...what you wanna say...
Abhi:Runjhun...I realised my mistake...I dont know what happened between
you and Guddu or what you feel about him...I just know that I love
you and cannot imagine my life without you...In these three months I
tried my best to forget you but cannot do so...Seen many girls for
marriage but was searching you in every girl...I am incomplete
without you...please forget everything...we will start a fresh life
without any stains of past...
Runjhun:I am sorry Abhi...I cannot forget that day and the conditon you had
kept...I will not be able to give you the respect a husband
deserves...now also you want to marry me after knowing this...
Abhi:I am ready to accept all your condition...
Runjhun:Its not condition...its a fact...
Abhi(takes her hand in his hand):I feel respect is earned and I am sure I will
earn my lost respect in your eyes...
Runjhun:Leave my hand...people are watching...
Abhi:I dont care...first tell me...will you marry me or not ...
Runjhun:Dont cereate a scene just leave my hand ...I need time...
Abhi:have you forgiven me????...
Before Runjhun could say anything Amma.who came to see why Rj is getting late replied...she has forgiven you...
Runjhun:But Amma ...how can I...
Amma:I just wanna see you happy and settled before my death...Please think for
once...
Runjhun:Amma ...if you want I will marry Abhi ...
Amma:If I want...what about you...
Runjhun :My happiness and needs are not different from yours...
Amma:Ok then I am going to fix the date of marriage...
Runjhun:Amma ...whats the hurry...we can wait for sometime...
Amma:No...I wanna make you free from these leech's captivity as soon as I
can ...Abhi...do you have any problem with my decision ...
Abhi:No amma...even I want to make Runjhun...The beauty of my house as
soon as possible...
Amma:Ok...then I am going to pandit ji...will call you and inform about
dates...(Amma leaves)
Runjhun also turns to go home...but Abhi stops her...
Abhi:Runjhun ...have you forgiven me ...
Runjhun:If Amma has forgiven you then I have also forgiven you...
Abhi:I wanna return you something...
Runjhun:what ??????
Abhi:Ring(takes out the ring)
Runjhun:but ...how can I take this ring...
Abhi:Its yours...
Runjhun:Its the same ring ...you made me to wear and promised many things
to me...its the same ring...you took at once infront of everyone
breaking all ties with me...
Abhi:thats why i wanna make you wear this infront of everyone...
.Guddu who watching all this stuff from his shop got irritated and decide to go and have some fresh air...Abhi took her hand in his hand and was about to slip the ring in her finger but then only ring sprung from his hand and stopped infront of Guddu...Abhi Stepped forward to have the ring but Runjhun stopped him and moved towards Guddu to take the ring...They were standing face to face and the ring was lying in between them...on the ground...Was this any sign by destiny...??
Do comment on ring bought by Abhi but ...😈
PRECAP- Both of them bend down to pick the ring...Guddu slips the ring in Runjhun's finger...How guess😊😉
Edited by sur001 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay im first!!
oh no... that stupid Abhigyan is bak with lame excuses! thank god he didnt get a chance to put the ring on R... precap seems veryy exciting.. wondering about Guddu's reaction to all this
update soon! 😃
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update. I like the ring. Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
sur jaaan gr8888 prt .
D ring is faaab 👍🏼
But d precap is d BEST ...
Updt sooon plezzz b4 i die wid curiosity ..plezzz updt sooon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Yay im first!!

oh no... that stupid Abhigyan is bak with lame excuses! thank god he didnt get a chance to put the ring on R... precap seems veryy exciting.. wondering about Guddu's reaction to all this
update soon! 😃

Runjhun...expresssed her feelings that ...she wanna kill him but maybe Guddu can do that ...😆😆...out of jealousy
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stars1234

Great update. I like the ring. Update soon.

Thanks for liking...I dont know about Abhi but I selected it among thirty rings...

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