FF#Winds Of Desire~Chpt 59(last)&epilogue on P-94~ - Page 52

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

sur meri jaaan

maza agay yaaar ...
amazing prt ...
kya saza di amma ne ...bechare guddu aur runjhun ...but guddu bhi unka beta hai ...
kukkan bhaiya ki to band bajne ki taiyari chal rahi hai...per gudduji ke to kuch aur hi plans hai πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
updt sooon plezzz
if possible 2moro plezzz b4 ma xams start its starting on sunday so plezzz try n updt b4 that plezzz...cant wait to read d nxt prt

your wish is my command ...mai bhi ab regular updates full july tak nahi de paoongi...So iske baad to gaping karna padega...isliye ye update tumhare exam se pehle...Kukkan ki shadi Aur Guddu jki saza lekin phir bhi Guddu ji nahi chodenge ek bhi chance of some romance...will update soon...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NaiiNa1

Bechara Guddu!

Eagerly awaiting next chapter!!

Bechara...rules todne wala Guddu..manega thode hi na...will update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

great part. Thanks for the PM. liked Amma's teasing. Poor Guddu and Runjhun, have to stay in separate rooms until Kukkan's marriage. lol. update soon. 😊

Guddu loves to break rules and now when his betterhalf has confessed her love..no chance he will leave any moment to spend with her...will update soonSmile
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pri01

Hi Sur meri jaan thx u this awesome update and the Pm too πŸ€—πŸ€—

Kya punishment amma ne diya hain bechara Guddu
Happy that Kukkan will be settled down soon with Radhika
Just hoping that Guddu will not be catch redhanded otherwise punishment will be shift to 1 month phir kya karega bechara Guddu kyon ki aab intezaar nahi ho payega usseπŸ˜†
Plzz updt asa u can yaar love u sweatheart

Dont worry this time he will have ladder with him so he will escape...And I tried to give you and Nidh(as you both demanded ,a small installment of your demand)...hope you will like it...will update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Prabhkallu

Too good!! Can't wait for the next chapter. πŸ˜›

gunjhun has taken their first step now a lil trouble and then lots of fun on way ...will update soon...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MikanSakura

@prabhkallu; i love ur profile pic...muah...❀️

@sur...
sorry...main bohot jaldi mein thi, toh thoda overlook kar di thi...!! πŸ€ͺ
nice update...both of them...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
ur updates are always excellent...
update the next soon...!!!πŸ˜ƒ

Sanju...Guddu has lots of plan but poor soul can not take it ahead coz of the punishment so he will break the rule...will update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks alot for liking... Fourtieth part is on...
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FF #1
Chapter#40
Winds of desire
Runjhun opens the door of her room..her eyes went to the gift box and on the note placed above the box..She tries to see if anyone is there but no one was there.she picks up the box and reads the note...Guddu's voiceover-
My dear Dhrampatni,
A small gift from my side..Why are you smiling open the box..(Runjhun opens the box and smile comes on her face seeing the sari she had seen yesterday while car had punctured on the way to farmhouse but she could not afford the price of saree from her purse and asking from Aswin Shukla was below her dignity)I had seen you asking the price..I could have given it yesterday itself but I was knowing you won't accept an expensive gift from your boss but now you can being my wife and my boss..
Will you keep on staring or would try it..
Runjhun goes to bathroom and comes wearing that blue colour saree with stringed back blouse..
She was struggling to tie the knot..when she felt a touch which made her body shiver..It was him
Runjhun:You..what are you doing here?Amma will come..go..
Guddu:Shh..(keeping hand on her lips)if you will shout like this then Amma
will surely come(A short eyelock...Runjhun pushes Guddu away)
Runjhun:Why you came here...Amma will sleep with me today..She can come
here anytime
Guddu(embraces her from back):She won't come now
Runjhun:Why..she will inform you before coming..
Guddu:Maybe..now don't spoil the mood let me help you in tying the knot
Guddu slowly moves his fingers around her neck and places a kiss on her neck..
Runjhun:Guddu..
He keeps finger on her lips indicating to be silent and ties the knot and then slowly takes her in his arm and places her on bed...leans on her..Runjhun pushes him and run towards the gate ...Guddu holds the pallu of her sari making them renember their first kiss but this time passion was equal on both side...Guddu pulls Runjhun in his arms but she again pushes him giving a smile
Guddu:Enough if you don't want me to touch you I am going(Runjhun who was not expecting this reaction looks bewildered and tries o explain but Guddu snaps in between)My gifts will mean to you when you will accept me..I want this sari back now
Runjhun(almost choking):now
Guddu:now means now..
He moves to unpin the aanchal..Runjhun steps back and finally gets trapped between the wall and Guddu's arms..Guddu lgazed deeply in her eyes which were burning in passion and gave him permission to move forward...He nibbled on her earlobe making her hold his hand,...he then kissed her forhead and moved towards her cheeks followed by her chin..Runjhun closed her eyes and tightly holds his shirt...He started licking his lower lips...she parted her lips and then he trapped her lower lips between his lips and slowly nibbles on her lips...He wraped his hand around her waist and pulled her closer and then slowly ran his fingers through her hair...Runjhun was lost in him and to calm herself tightly holds his shirt her nails made scrath on his chest which was peeping out from his unbuttoned part..They were not feeling any pain ..Guddu kept on exploring every corner of her mouth with his tounges when finally their tounges met,he licked her tounge and then he slowly broke apart after sucking her luscious tounge...they were gasping for air..Guddu gave a look to Runjhun who was still unstable..He was knowing now there is no barrier in their relationship..He took her in his arm and again placed her on bed leaning on her...then only the knock made him realize Amma is on door...
Runjhun (pushes him):Now
Guddu:you go open the door..Guddu escaped using the ladder he had placed
below the balcony..Runjhun pinned her sari and straightened the
bedsheet..then opened the door
Amma:You took time to open the door(giving a look to the room)
Runjhun:I was changing amma..
Amma:Your lips are bleeding..how ?
Runjhun:Aba..I was pinning my sari and by mistake
Amma:I can understand beta..I have also got hurt many times when I was
young
Runjhun:Ji
Amma:From pin..Why what you thought?
Runjhun:Nothing...
Amma:Go and sleep its late..I need to talk to someone
Runjhun closed the door and smiled thinking about what happened...she was lying on bed...
This was really a different feeling...
I wanted to be in his arms ..i was feeling like my world is in his arms
I cannot believe he is the same person whose sight was making my mood sour
and now if I don't see him I feel as If something is missing from me...
Mr.Guddu Shukla...I just wanna say I love You
She gives a look to his photo and sleeps..
Guddu is taking shower and remembering the moments...
Oh God,what are my feelings.Her lips are softer than the rose's leaf,her
mouth is sweet as honey,and her kiss inflicts on me more pain than bee's
sting.My pulse is beating fast ,my heart throbs it is as if i were about
suffocate,yet,nevertheless,I want to have another kiss.I want to have in
my arms.This punishment will kill me she is my life and I am lifeless
without her...
He comes out in towel and his eyes go to his image reflected in mirror and to the scratch made by Runjhun...He smiled looking at it...

Precap-Amma making a new pair...

Guddu's thought I have copied from a site was just going through liked the lines and decided to make it Guddu's thoughts... but added mine too
Edited by sur001 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sur meri jaan thx u for this awesome updt and the first instalment as well Awww wat a passionate kiss yaar😳😳
Lovely saree and happy that now G's new boss is his wife. Wat a teasing comment by Amma
Once again thx u Sur jaanu u r a gifted writer keep it sweetheart πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sur, excellently done ff.
Very delightful to read ur ff.
u have made me wait eagerly for the updates.
Do write up the next chapter soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

now guddu would take whole of his eyes out n stick them on runjhun's back with fevicol...LOL...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...he already has a habit of staring at her back, instead of her face (i stil dont understand why..!!!😭)...n could start writing an essay on runjhun's lips...

1 suggestion: Mr. guddu,
runjhun ke lips jaisa body chahiye?? use veet rose...hair removal cream...velvet rose flowers eukt...ek khoobsurat ehsaas..!!! (m disguisted seeing this ad n the sensodyne ad...😑)
newaz, aj kya hai sur...subah se main kitni padhai kar rahi hun...nivedita's blog...then nidhi's updates...n then ur updates...itna main boards ke liye padhti toh 1st aati thi!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
superb update...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
continue asap!!!😊
Edited by MikanSakura - 15 years ago

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