FF#Winds Of Desire~Chpt 59(last)&epilogue on P-94~ - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Absolutely Fabulous yaar.... 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: niya2121

Umm boring ????? Helloooooo!!!!! I lovedddddddd itttt !!!!! Honestly sur it was very interesting :D it captured my attention from the beginning :-D I adore the phrases u used like guddu saying i thought I was worse but u all are 2 steps ahead of me ! It sounded very real and something u would actually hear people saying :-) keep updating Hun I'm really anxious to read oh n yeah I almost forgot awwww guddu defended runjhun yupee 😊

Hey! how dare you niya2121 to call my friend worse😡😡
I just love her FF and her FF only inspired me to write something.........I can visualize in my mind whatever she writes...............
IF YOU GET HER THEN GIVE MY MESSAGE ..............NIYA UPDATE SOON ......I AM WAITING EAGERLY TO KNOW .........HOW OUR DEMON GONNA GET HIS BEAUTIFUL ANGEL
and thanks for liking it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreenithi

not boring at all..

very interesting...
update soon...

thanks for liking............ shree😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Sur it is really beautiful.......especially Guddu defending Rhunjhun.......i really liked the way he thought of her as a lady...offcourse she is..........and she is also second guessing herself....goodey goods.....ab yeh land ka kya chakkar hain.....jaldi solve karo meri jaan

thanks nidh.............land ke chakkar to abhi khud mujhe chakkar de raha hai..........and you too update soon yaar.........waiting eagerly to see their nok-jhok
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prabhkallu

Absolutely Fabulous yaar.... 😛

thanks yaar😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First two parts were awesome, but I am not stun by the reaction of Runjhun's Mami and Mama par I shock to know that Guddu sort of help her and created more problems for her.

Please continue soon and if you can update today (longer parts)
Edited by Miketa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miketa

First two parts were awesome, but I am not stun by the reaction of Runjhun's Mami and Mama par I shock to know that Guddu sort of help her and created more problems for her.

Please continue soon and if you can update today (longer parts)

Thanks Miketa.........I am lil busy but I am gonna update tomorrow......... for sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FF #1 Chapter#4 winds of desire It was Vishnu who was subjected to their questions now.........He understood that now he will have to vomit out every bit otherwise they gonna hang him to death without any hearing......he indicated them to follow him ...........he went to his room followed by others leaving Runjhun alone in the hall..........She was sobbing and cursing her fate............... ** Its my bad luck that is making me suffer..........but my heart knows ,I helped him just for the sake of humanity......Its true his touch produced a sensation in my body ....I got lost in his dark eyes for some moment......but at the same time I also cannot forget that dark night ......he kidnapped me......a night before my wedding .......I was lost in dreams of my wedding with Abhi,who had proposed me ....infront of everyone....I still remember his words.......Runjhun...I dont know how to propose a girl ......I am good in business proposals but really dont know how to convince a lady for marriage.....I will just say .......marry me ........and I promise..... you will never regret on your decision..all were shocked that a rich man like Abhigyaan dikshit is proposing me ......I looked at Amma.....she gave a silent permission from her eyes ........ I nodded and without wasting a second ...he slipped a diamond ring in my finger.......as if he was sure I will accept his proposal....... I was watching the ring ......not becoz it was made of diamond .........coz I was trying to see my futrure with Abhi in
that........I dont know when I fell asleep...but when I opened my eyes......it was all hazy.......then only a light fell on me.......it was him...Guddu where I am and what are you doing??
he replied with a evil grin that he has kidnapped me and not to worry .......he wold leave me in the morning......he was not interested in exploiting my body but my reputation...I had no other choice....then to wait for morning
He released me in morning.....as I stepped out from his house cum carrom club.........every eye was set on me.......filled with Questions and mockery......Some men were looking at me as if I am a prostitue.......Even someone from crowd called me his mistress..........an aged woman said about me that I am a characterless girl who cannot be satisfied with one man...........Abhi was also present there.......he didnot speak a single word neither against nor with me....as if in a dilemma......his parents were also there.....they were unhappy with this wedding from the first day........they wanted there handsome ,young son to marry a girl of their status.......the situation gave them a proper excuse to reject me......My amma begged to them for my happiness.....I was in state of shock........what was Guddu doing that day......laughing and enjoying as if he is watching a movie....Abhi had put a condition .....he wanted to know that I am pure or lost my chastity....How easily...without any hesitation he told .....we will go to doctor for your test so that everyones mouth will be shut....
I understood in everyone...he was also there...he had lost his trust on me....and a relation without trust is like a flower without fragrance.........I returned him the diamond ring ...its lustre was making me blind...it was like Abhi only ...lustrous from outside but dark inside.......he left the place.....he left me....That was a time which only I know ...how I passed....Everyone was mocking at me.Mamis were passing comments on me.......my only support was.Amma.she consoled me.......cared for me.......above all believed me.....**
She was not much affected by Guddus help as he was the person who destroyed his life,still people talk about her......She gave a faded smile on his help which meant nothing to her.....
on the other side Vishnu was standing infront of the other evil souls as a thief stands infront of the judge
Mittho: Aayhai Vishnu bhaiya....What was that rascal Guddu
saying??You tried to kill him for a piece of land...is it
true??Whats the matter?????
Kalsanwali: O Vishnu pare...You didn't tell anything to me
also...sasure...Hum bhi kalsan ke grampradhan ki
bitiyaa hain...I will cut your tongue and give it to dog for
breakfast.....
Vishnu:Shutup you....Kalsan ki taarka....I was not alone in this
plan my respected brothers who are acting to be
innocent.... had supported me that time
Mittho:Paandeyji...You planned a big game and not even cared to
mention it to me
Rajju:I say ....Mitho ji........you tell me,you would have allowed me
to do so......
Mittho: Never..I am not mad that I would have allowed you to
enter your hand in the mouth of lion.......See... he is fit and
fine.....ready to prowl on us
Billo: Bantu ji...........you.....
Bantu interrupted in between:Billo rani.......dont get angry on
me...I told them that I cannot hide anything from
you but Rajju bhaiya and Vishnu told me that if I
will tell you......you will be tensed and get dark
circles......I know how much you hate dark circles
Billo:Really Bantu ji....so sweet of you...ok I forgive you bjut for
this time only...Dont ever repeat this mistake again
Kalsanwali:If your romance is over.then I wanna know ....the
whole story
Vishnu:You remember..the case we won last week with the help of false documents......actually......the land belonged to Dinanath Shukla, father of Guddu Shukla........Dinanath was an honest teacher and a man of principles ....he was blessed with a sweet little family....Guddu was there only son.......he was an intelligent student and an obedient son......but always had a problem with his fathers principles......Once .......Dinanath was blamed that he leaked the papers........and got ten days notice from court to answer .....but he couldnot find anything................he was thrown out of his job......It was a big shock for him........he comitted sucide as he didn't have the courage to face the world.........Since then Guddu left home and never returned.........I know this coz I was the person who proved that Dinanath Shukla is a dishonest man....I fought the case against him........that time only I came to know about the land
Mittho:just for a piece of land.......you put your and your brothers life in danger....
Vishnu:You would have done the same thing if you were in my
place....that land's price is in crores............Many people had their eyes on that land after Dinanath Shukla's death but we pandey brothers emerged as the successors of the land........the success goes to my talent,my brothers money and not to forget coz of our Bhagonwali
Mittho:yeah ......these days your talent is in extracting money from our lockers
Vishnu:But they gonna get crores in return for their investment......
Mittho:what about Guddu????? he will make our life hell
Vishnu:Although he was aware of the land's price..he had no interest in that land.....I don't understand the reason for his sudden interest......Thats why we planned his murder....but Runjhun spoiled it all
Mittho:Don't worry ....I will see her.....You just focuss on getting a good deal of land and tackling Guddu.....(she yawns)....for.....the time being I would love to have tea .....bcoz of the whole drama I have not taken tea till now....
Rajju: Miitho ji.....Please make tea for all of us........Todays tea is from ...Rajju Pandeys side
Mittho:Ofcourse Pandey ji............Runjhun ....o ....Runjhun...bring tea for all of us and some snacks also
The evil souls got lost in planning that how they will invest such a large sum of money
PRECAP:- guddu in runjhjuns room
Edited by sur001 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb sur.....land ke chakkar ko aakhir nipta hi liya...well written......you gave the pandeys the correct name....evil souls.....i doubt wether they have that at all you know..........Well Rhunjhun kab tak naafratkarti rahogi...aakhir mein you arr gonna be his......hayyo rabbo what a precap.....Guddu in R's room.....kya karne ka iraada hain bhai😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwesum prt sur ...
M n Ms r realyyyy evil .....
D preca looks intrestin update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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