FF#Winds Of Desire~Chpt 59(last)&epilogue on P-94~ - Page 63

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Posted: 14 years ago
Haila Badi Babhiji...
Babli bitiya ne tho teek kaha...
Total charithra parivarthanšŸ˜† of Pandeys...
Par mujhe ihe Vishnu Pandey vakeel par tanik shak ho raha hain...
Bahuth chalu hain ihe vakeel...
Kalsanwali...pehli baar tumne apne pathi ko sahi karan ke liye mara...kudos...
Billo and Bantu...you turned out to be a real softies...
Aye hai Mittho mamiji...humein aap par aur Rajju par bahuth garv hain...ab aap asal mein Amma ke beta aur bahu bane...the true elders of PN
Guddu issi tarah tarsaathe rahon mautharma ko...magar zyaada hui gaye tho chidiya phuuurrr ud na jaawe ee ka khayal rakhna...
Loved it Princess...
Emotional and witty ...a total lovable update...
Thank you jaan and love youšŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

amazing prt sur ...

bas gunjun ke beach me sab kuch tek hojaye ...
updt sooon yaar
n thanxx 4 d pm

Oye yaar ladai lambi khich gaye but don't worry next update me aayegi milan ki bela...tabhi to ayega jiska mujhe tha intezaar...will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pri01

Hey Sur thx u for this lovely update and for the PM also

Finally the evil Pandeys are regretting better late than never... now only hoping Gunjhun will be together soon
Precap sounds interesting guess there's romance in the air
Plzzz update asap yaar

The coming update is the final installment of your demand...suhaagraat hai magar ghooghat nahi hoga yaar...will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life


Sur Bhabhi.. That was a wonderful update
glad that M & M realised their mistakes.. Ab sab theek hai.

Well done. Precap sounds good.

meri band baji pari hai yaar next update likh to diya hai but pehli baar aisa kuch likh rahi hoon...thanks to the FF writers and our serials..phew
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Haila Badi Babhiji...

Babli bitiya ne tho teek kaha...
Total charithra parivarthanšŸ˜† of Pandeys...
Par mujhe ihe Vishnu Pandey vakeel par tanik shak ho raha hain...
Bahuth chalu hain ihe vakeel...
Kalsanwali...pehli baar tumne apne pathi ko sahi karan ke liye mara...kudos...
Billo and Bantu...you turned out to be a real softies...
Aye hai Mittho mamiji...humein aap par aur Rajju par bahuth garv hain...ab aap asal mein Amma ke beta aur bahu bane...the true elders of PN
Guddu issi tarah tarsaathe rahon mautharma ko...magar zyaada hui gaye tho chidiya phuuurrr ud na jaawe ee ka khayal rakhna...
Loved it Princess...
Emotional and witty ...a total lovable update...
Thank you jaan and love youšŸ¤—

ab tarasne ka kaam khatn hua jaan aur aaye milan ki bela...agar hua bakwas to mat marna mujhe dhelašŸ˜†...Yaar kiss tak to chala leti thi maga pachas update puri hone ke khusi me do jism ko ek jaan kar diya ab dekho kya result hota hai...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...Isliye note padhna mat bhulna
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Posted: 14 years ago
if you all noticed then would have seen this FF will complete its fiftieth part...Thank you so much for jhelofying me...and for your support...
IMPORTANT THING
i am going to write consummation part...it will be coming within twenty minutes...so if you feel anything objective then tell me i will omit that part well i tried to be in a limit...So don't throw chappals at me if you feel the kisses were better than thisšŸ˜†...and my note gave you useless expectation...and please make sure below fifteen don't see well there is nothing of that sort much but prevention is better than cure kyoun bhai log
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for liking... Fiftieth part is on...
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
FF #1
Chapter#50
Winds of desire
Runjhun:Guddu ji ..listen to me
Guddu:Ya tell
Runjhun:Forget that na..
Guddu:what Runjhun..I have no issues with you but this time I am going to
give you plenty of time to think and then take your next step..
Mittho who was observing them from far felt there is something uneven in their relation..She brought Maha in a corner
Mittho:Whats going between Runjhun and Guddu..I felt a kind of tension
between them..
Maha:No mummy..everything is fine
Mittho:Ayhai Maha your face is saying you know everything just tell me
Maha tells her everything and calls Runjhun as directed by Mittho
Runjhun:Ji mami
Mittho:Whats the problem bitiya..?
Runjhun:Nothing
Mittho:beta these men look tough from outside but they are very sensitive from
inside..a little thing can hurt them..I hope you are understanding what
I am talking about. Marriage binds you with a family but first with your
husband and every relation has their own needs..you need to give
priority to your relation also ..you need to take one step ahead..This is a
relation and no matters who takes the first step ..
Runjhun:Mami but
Mittho:No if no but..just do as I say(tells her the plan)
Runjhun :Mami hum kaise ye
Mittho:Bojharani ab to apne pati ke dil ki rani bano...Maha you know which
dress you have to buy..
Maha:Ji amma(giggles)
In evening..
Mittho:amma in nearby temple Jagran will be there..we should go there pray to
mata rani
Amma:Not a bad idea..Runjhun get ready
Mittho:Aayhai Amma..I forgot to tell you..Runjhun has stomach ache..she
won't be able to go..she is resting in her room
Amma:Kya..ok then do one thing you all go I will live here with Runjhun(stands to go to her room)
Mittho:Aayhai Amma..you are girl's grandmother you need to be there.. and
don't go to her room she is sleeping now she will get disturbed ,Guddu
will stay with her after all he promised to be with her in every good and
bad moment..Kyoun Guddu beta
Guddu:Ok..I will stay here
All were about to leave..Maha comes to Guddu
Maha:all the best jiju
Guddu:for what
Maha giggles and leaves..
Guddu:aah sab chale gaye..let me check what my dharampatni ji is doing
sleeping or crying in pain
Guddu gets a shock as soon as he opens the door of his room..The room was decorated beautifully rose petals were scattered on bed inviting him..The room was enveloped with a sweet fragnance'Romantic atmosphere was set in the room ..
He ran his eyes throughout the room and in a corner he caught sight of the masterpiece of God..who belonged to him..Runjhun was wearing a white short one sleeved dress..she was looking smashing ..
It was getting hard for Guddu to control himself..He closed the door and lied on the bed trying to ignore her..runjhun was already nervous for her it was the situation of now or never..She lied beside Guddu... kept her hand on his shoulder..Guddu sprung up from bed and was about to move when Runjhun grabbed his hand...
hey (ui amma ui amma kya karata hai
ladaka hoke ladaki se kyun darata hai) - (2)
kuchh bole na bole raaje dil na khole
par mujhako hai maalum mujhape marata hai
Guddu throws her on bed..she sits on bed cupping her face with hand
ui amma ui amma kya karata hai
ladaka hoke ladaki se kyun darata haI
(thoda anaadi thoda sayaana
buddhu bada hai mera deewaana) - (2)
tauba duhaayi mushkil bataana
aaye ise na ladaki fasaana
she pulls the chair on which Guddu was about to sit ..he falls down she smiles
lallu hai bedardi hai meri baatein maane na
jaane kaisa aashiq hai dhadkan ko pehchanne na
gently hits him on his chest
chori se chhup chhup ke aahein bharat hai
ui amma ui amma kya karata hai
ladaka hoke ladaki se kyun darata hai
places her head on his chest
(nindein churaayi jaadu jagaaya
yeh rog isane mujhako lagayaa) - (2)
Guddu pushes her and gets up
kaise kategi meri jawaani
kaise banungi main isaki raani
mere anjaane dil ko aise kyun tadpaata hai
meri pyaasi saanson mein shola kyun bhadkaata hai
chaahat ki jwaala mein kaahe jalata hai
Again stops him and embraces him from back ..places a kiss on his neck
zui amma ui amma kya karata hai
ladaka hoke ladaki se kyun darata hai
kuchh bole na bole raaje dil na khole
par mujhako hai maalum mujhape marata hai
ui amma ui amma kya karata hai
ladaka hoke ladaki se kyun darata hai
Guddu holds her hand and pinned her against the wall ..their breaths were getting heavy..Guddu came closer Runjhun closed her eyes..Guddu smiled and left her..
Runjhun:Darr gaye
Guddu:hmm..I should be afraid na..you are made of wax if you will melt then
Runjhun:I wanna melt
Guddu:Sorry
Runjhun:You should be..I just joked once and for that asked thousand times
sorry did this all for you and wear this which can hardly be called
clothe but you are becoming saint now..
Guddu:Why I thought you like saints
Runjhun:I like only my husband who is lost
Guddu pulls Runjhun and embraces her from back:but you should like the new form of your husband who is not irritating you
Runjhun turns her head their face so close they could inhale each others breath :I love my old Mr.shukla(places a gentle kiss on his lips..)anything else you want to seal my words ..
Guddu:Let me think
Turns her around pulls her closer holding her waist ,unleashes her hair from other hand and clutches them gently ...starts licking her juicy lips making her moan ..then traps her nervous lips between his... sucking the juice like a bee slowly putting his tongues inside her mouth licking every corner of mouth..Runjhun places both her hand around his neck inviting him closer...the tongues of two hugged each other for a moment as they met after so many days..they broke apart gasping for breath Runjhun blushed like a new bride..buttons of his shirt got hooked with her mangalsutra ..in the process of getting it free his shirt's button got torn exposing his tonned chest..He moved his fingers seductively on her bare shoulder making her close his eyes..He whispered in his ear"are you Okay"..she just nodded her head giving him silent permission...He gently rubbed his lips on her shoulder then started placing small kisses on her neck then slowly nibbles on her earlobes ..slowly pulling the sleeve of other side placing frequent small kisses..He cupped her face in his hands
Runjhun:Guddu ji
Guddu placed his finger on her lips:shh..no words ..today we will listen
only each others breath..
He lifts her in his arms and placed her on bed placing a kiss on her forehead to calm her..he bends and rub her nose with his..He puts off his shirt and slowly opens the knot of the ribbion that was holding her cloth...
After that the night grown older making two hearts pound together making two souls one..With the growing night the moans grew louder and at a point it stopped leaving them breathless..Guddu looked at runjhun on her face he could see a contentment ..he brushed off her hair from her face placing a gentle kiss on her forehead..She ducked her face on his chest and then looked at him blushingly..
Guddu:I love you
Runjhun while sleeping in his arms embraced him tightly placing a kiss on his chest..then slowly whispered "Love you too"
They slept in each others arm unaware of the whole world..In morning Runjhun came to room after taking shower ..she paused on seeing the innocent face of Guddu while he was sleeping..She place a gentle kiss on his lips..
Runjhun:have I ever told you that you look so innocent in your sleep just like a
baby..love you
She turns to go..Guddu pulls her and wraps her in his arms
Guddu:No you had not told me..tell na
Runjhun:You shameless soul
Guddu:Chalo shameless hi sahi but yours..
Runjhun:leave ..all are coming back
Guddu:Give me bribe and go away
Runjhun:mood nahi hai(gets herself free and turns to go)
Guddu pulls her and covers her under him..gives a loving gaze..:mood nahi hai
Runjhun blushes ..guddu kisses her on lips and then starts kissing on her shoulder
Suddenly a knock made them both sprung up
Maha:(From outside)mohanpyaaron raat khatm hui...get up..
Precap:-Planning of honeymoon
Edited by sur001 - 14 years ago
NidhaA thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Suro rani
Meri pyaari si badi bhabhiji...
Kya awesome blowsome romance likha hain aapne...ā˜ŗļø
Rhunjun tho master nikli romance mein...
Guddu tho pehle se hi PHD hain
Ek dham jhakaas 50th update tha...
Arey aapko jhelofy karna tho humaar farz hain...
Humari pyaari dosth, and dho jagah mein humri bhabhiji jo hon...
Hak bantha hain aapka hum par...
Love ya...šŸ¤—


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Posted: 14 years ago
Really loved ur ff and this part left me blushing like crazyā˜ŗļø . do keep up the amazing work.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sur what an awesome update
Thx u for this passionate suhaagraat i must say it's beautifully written for ur first attemptšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ kya romance tha humari runjhun to chupa rustom nikliā˜ŗļø
Lots of hugs for meri jaan šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
Plzzz update asap u can and btw to jhelofy u is a pleasure for me as u r friend love u yaar

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