FF#Winds Of Desire~Chpt 59(last)&epilogue on P-94~ - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

753

Views

94.4k

Users

40

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

niya_s thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 15 years ago
#11

The details....the thoughts...one word.... SUPERB!!!👏👏👏👏👏

It was what I expected to read but a thousand times more visual, more in depth and better.
I cant wait to read more but oh oh poor runjhun-she's gonna get in trouble😭😳😆
kinno thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#12
truly awesome update soon😃
tehzeeb25 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#13
awwwwwesum prt
Im scard fo runjhun ...hooope guddu saves her frm pandeys ...
Update soooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz thanxx 4 d pm
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 15 years ago
NidhaA thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Sur....meri jaan....kya writing hain.....their inner conflicts are beautiful........Rhunjhun as always is sweet.......Guddu bhaiyya to Guddu Bhaiyya hi hain.......what a jodi yaar......Hope Guddu saves her from the Pandeys.....love ya
Brindha87 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Really superb superb SUPERB👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.........
sur001 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#16
here I am with another update
FF #1
Chapter#3
winds of desire
It was a beautiful morning .......Runjhun opened her eyes with laziness......her eyes urged for rest but she neglected their request and welcomed the morning with a smile......her smile faded as soon as shr realized her mama-mamis are standing infront of her and scolding her
Mittho: aayhai bojharani .......why are you sleeping outside
your room on flooer......what you wanna show to people we
cannot provide even a room to you??????
Billo:tow jijji.......she wanna defame our name in society......
Runjhun : No mami .....I just.....
Kalsanwali: what you just .....I know your plan ..you gonna
complain about us to amma when she will return from
Haridwar.......you want us to be thrown out of house .
but I will throw you out of the house before you go on
with your nasty plan
Rajju : i say atleast listen to her for ones
Mittho:**Idiot Pandey again jumped in between** Aayhai
Pandeyji you dont get worried we know how to extract
words from her throat
She gave a tight slap to Runjhun then only a sound captured her interest..it came from Runjhun's room.......They slowly peeped in and got a shock on seeing Guddu sleeping in Runjhun's bed
Mittho: Bbojharani ....what this rascal guddua is doing here in
your bed ............Your eyes say ..you have slept
late.......How was your night
Rajju: What are you saying????????????And this is not the right
place to talk(indicating the room)
Mittho grabbed Runjhuns hair and dragged her downstairs in the hall....She gave a tight slap to her
Mittho:You shameless girl .you invite men at night to sleep
with you......not even for once you thoght about the family
Runjhun:I have no relation with him I just helped him......he was
fatally wounded so I helped him
Billo : dont give blank excuses ......we are not fools...........why
someone will help a person who defamed her honour in
front of everyone,,,,,,,,,,I wish Amma would have been here
to see your deed
Runjhun**i also wish Amma would have been here...she would
have supported me**
Mittho again slapped her and raised her hand for another one but
she stopped on hearing a voice which was not less than the
roar of a lion
Guddu who was awake by the noise...... was feeling bad for the lady, trying to prove her innocence:I say stop there .How can you beat her like this........I thought I am worst but you all are two steps further than me....You all are animals even they are better infront of you ........you beat her coz she helped me
Kalsanwali: If she wanted to help you then why she didnt informed us about you.......She went out of house like prostitutes at night
Vishnu:and who the hell are you to interfere ??????She is
supposed to answer when she is asked something
The word prostitute hurted Guddu mlore than Runjhun....... he caught Vishnu from his collar and gave a tight slap
Guddu: what kind of person are you???????...you are supporting
your wife instead of scolding her......(he gave an angry look
to kalsawali)Dont dare to call her 'prostitute' again
otherwise I will make you know the meaning of prostitue
Vishnu:you are threatning us in our house.....I swill sue you
Guddu:You rascal ...what do you think I dont know who tried to
kill me .they were your men........I am gonna destroy you
Pandeys if I dont get back my land..........now I am leaving
but dont dare to touch her otherwise you won't be able to
see the next morning
Runjhun looked at him with surprise**why is he saving me from their torture.....he is the only person who supported me after Amma...am I dreaming or is he really defending me**
Guddu understood what was going in her mind:Runjhun
Mishra......Dont think I am helping you or my heart changed
towards you........its the debt I am paying that you had on
me by saving my life.......our relation will alwys be the
same......we can never think good for each other or give
respect to each other and you Pandys return my land as
soon as possible otherewise get ready to pay for it
He left the place with staggering foot as he was still....... not that well but before leaving he gave the look of an wounded lion to Pandeys which really terrified them
as soon as he left every eye got fixed on vishnu pandey
PRECAP:- VISHNU REVEALING THE SECRET OF LAND
I know its boring but I am really trying hard to make it interesting
Edited by sur001 - 15 years ago
tehzeeb25 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#17

hey sur ..

awwwwwwesum prt yaar ....
luvd d way guddu saved runjhun ,,
update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 15 years ago
niya_s thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Umm boring ????? Helloooooo!!!!! I lovedddddddd itttt !!!!! Honestly sur it was very interesting :D it captured my attention from the beginning :-D I adore the phrases u used like guddu saying i thought I was worse but u all are 2 steps ahead of me ! It sounded very real and something u would actually hear people saying :-) keep updating Hun I'm really anxious to read oh n yeah I almost forgot awwww guddu defended runjhun yupee 😊
raaspach thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#19

not boring at all..

very interesting...
update soon...
NidhaA thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Sur it is really beautiful.......especially Guddu defending Rhunjhun.......i really liked the way he thought of her as a lady...offcourse she is..........and she is also second guessing herself....goodey goods.....ab yeh land ka kya chakkar hain.....jaldi solve karo meri jaan

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".