FF#Winds Of Desire~Chpt 59(last)&epilogue on P-94~ - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Greattttt sur cant wait for next part. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sur meri jaaaaan awwwesum prt yaar ..
D saree is realyy pretty ....
Poor guddu wat not he had to go through just for one kiss...
Now plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSAP PLEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Eagerlyyyyyy waiting plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Dying to read d nxt prt plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Dont keep us waiting ........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
lol....nice part..
enjoyed reading it....
update soon pls....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sur meri jaan....tumne zaaroor meri umar lambi kar di....i have laughed so much today......both todays episode and this dhamakedaar update........imagine Rhunjhun in that saree....G ki toh hava nikal jayegi...........poor G....uski hava toh waise bhi nikal gayi hain....our poor hottie bed bug🤣....Chachi is so sweet...its gud tosee atleast one motherly person in R's life besides Amma........and the precap takes my breath away *gasping gor air* update soon hun...eagerly waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Sur. Pls. update sooooooon.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Guys..............I will update till evening or at night............ Notice- I am gonna write a passionate kiss between Gunjhun..........so who feels they are not prepared or very young for it..........Please dont check todays update....................
Just Kidding but notice should always be there for safety measures😆😉(not about the kiss as I am trying very hard to make it a passsionate one😭.............)
PS- @ Nidhsara
🤣 Great name for Guddu
Edited by sur001 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
i recently caught up with ur fan fiction and i love your storyline.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thanks Guys..............I will update till evening or at night............
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Notice- I am gonna write a passionate kiss between Gunjhun..........so who feels they are not prepared or very young for it..........Please dont check todays update....................
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<em>Just Kidding but notice should always be there for safety measures😆😉(not about the kiss as I am trying very hard to make it a passsionate one😭.............)

EAGERLYYYY WAITING YAAAR ...UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON .....
ME WAITING ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you very much for liking.......I wish the blouse is short😆.......
Eighth part is on...............
FF #1
Chapter#8
winds of desire
As soon as Chachi left .......I jumped off from bed and rushed towards the door...took a sigh of relief and closed the door......in hapiness that I am saved from a big turmoil.....I forgot about Guddu and sat on bed ....Thanking God for saving me............
Runjhun:Thank God(again sighes)
Guddu:Thank God....or....Oh God......your aunt has crushed me...... now you
wanna build my grave in this bed
Runjhun:(stands)Oh....Is your mouth filled with chillies.....that you cannot
say something good.....
Guddu:What do you expect from me.....to shower flowers on you for the royal
treatment your aunt has given me because of you.......who the hell beats
a bug untill the sticks break without seeing it.....
Runjhun:My chachi....she cannot see me in pain and so she gave punishment to
the bug......I think you got your lesson....and it seems You are really
afraid of my chachi as you are still hiding under the mattress....
Guddu:Guddu Shukla is Lion and remember ....Lion is not afraid of anyone
but sometimes elephant overpowers lion.....Help me to come out as your
lady elephant has made me half dead..........
Runjhun:How dare you to call my chachi an elephant......I wont help
you.......get out by yourself....
Guddu:(attitude....hoon.....I like it)....I havenot called your Chachi an
elephant.....let me correct......I called her lady Elephant......If you wont
help then your mama and mamis surely.....would love to help me.....what
say?????......
Runjhun:(Idiot .....Stupid......Fool......taking advantage of my fear)/.....Please
dont give much effort to your throat....sir.....Its my pleasure to help you
(grinds her teeth and gives her hand)
Guddu:Thats like a good girl(holds her hand and comes out)
(Runjhun)On seeing his worn out condition ......I would have surely felt pity on him if he would have not been a jerk with me....
(Guddu)Ah......I was speechless on seeing her beauty.....That model looks nothing infront of her......Her black hairs were like dark black clouds......ends.spreading below her waist.......her fair colour was like white snow flakes...........Her transparent saree was showing her body ....patrtially visible.........and the blouse...is this really a blouse??? ......there was nothing more than two laces on her upper portion if the breast part is not counted....I ardently wanted to kiss her.......but had to supress my feelings.....
(Runjhun) Why is he seeing me as if.......no he has no right to see me like this when I am hardly covered
Runjhun:Why are you staring me...........as if never seen me before....
Guddu:I have seen you often.....in your old simple suits but today you
are .....just what to say......ya looking very sexy....
Runjhun:(he called me sexy.....why am I blushing....)How much shameless you
are.......Forgotten the kisses of bamboo stick......
Guddu:Guddu Shukla is real man and I dont get hurt by these bamboos.....It
needs courage to hurt Guddu Shukla......Well the word kiss reminded
me..... you had promised something from me.....remember
Runjhun:No.....I dont remember.....but if you wanna have more sticks then you
can wait as its gonna be morning in less than an hour.....and all will
be soon awake.....
Guddu:I wiil gather your family here
Runjhun:As you wish.....
Guddu: your fear has flown away or you were acting till now......
Runjhun:I will prefer the first one....as Chachi will be my witness who will take my side and tell noone was in my room at night and I will say you forcibly came in and locked the room when I was coming to close the room .........
(Guddu) I am not afraid of her blank threats but determined that today I will kiss her at any cost.......I grabbed her aanchal inorder to stop her but accidently it slipped from her shoulder......to her hand and then slowly to her wrist and finally rested near her waistline..........I could feel her uneasiness and embaressment...
(Runjhun)I was shocked on the whole scenario........wanted to die with shame....What will he do next.....what kind of question I am asking....he will take full advantage of this situation........I felt a touch on my shoulder but he was not undressing me instead covering me up with my aanchal....slowly he moved his hand from my shoulder to my neck area.....I was feeling a tingling in my whole body....and then he passed his hand from my breast to my belly....very slowly......finally ending on my hand....in the way of covering me .....he embraced me from back......he explored most of my body parts making my nerves excited......he slowly turned me towards him.....I was breathless
Guuddu:I dont wanna hurt you but promise is promise......so dont force me to
do anything which you wont like atalll .......
(Runjhun)I was not in state of speaking as his act and touch had done his magic and I was lost in fairytale but a kiss .....no....I have not given this freedom to Abhi even.....I moved back and he took a step ahead towards me and finally my body slammed to the wall ....before I could escape from side he trapped me by fixing both his hands on the either sides of the wall.....I closed my eyes thinking that he will slam a forceful Kiss on my lips.......but again I got surprised when he started with licking my lips....it made my blood boil and heart started pounding very fastly......then he blew air on my lips that ran a chill in my whole body ...... I lost my control and my lips parted .....he took full advantage of the situation and trapped my lower lips between his instantly.....his warm ..wet yet gentle lips made me forget everything and unknowingly I grabbed his shirt tightly toring his upper two buttons ......he was sucking my lower lips as a bee sucks the juice of flowers ....nibbling gently on lips.......I dont know when I started moaning......longing for more....I grabbed his shirt more tightly touching his chest
(Guddu) I wanted to make this kiss a longer one by tasting her tongue from my tongue......but my main motive behind this kiss was to know is she even a little attracted to me and her moaning and the growing grip on my shirt assured me that the fire is set from both sides ....I can feel its her first kiss as she groaned instead of moaning when I firstly nibbled her lips....it took a little time to her to enjoy the nibbling...I could just slam a kiss on her lips but I couldnot have get her response so well.......I will have to end this kiss if not then there is fear to go far as she has not yet noticed .....that now she is not leaning on the wall but she is in my arms.........Some moments before she was embaressed that I touched her and now she even doesnot seems to notice.....that my hands are holding that ribbon which will open her blouse........ my heart is scolding me for my decision but now more than attraction it seems i have started loving her.....so dont wanted to defame her respect.......then only I noticed the phone ringing in my pocket which was on vibration mode......See the luck.....then only she submitted herself totally by removing the barrier and opened her mouth a little wider so that I can explore her from inside but ......I told to myself to have some patience ....its not the right time.....
PRECAP:- GUDDU LEAVES BUT BOTH ARE INSATIATED LONGING
FOR MORE
It was really hard to make the kiss a passionate one ......I applied all my effort....but I will thanks to the site where types of kisses where mentioned......I have mixed two -three of them together........I think kissing is really a tough thing.....thank God......I am saved from it till now.......
Please do comment how you felt about it not only the kiss but other parts also.......
Press like button if you liked it and if you dont like it then also do comment your reaction ......according to me comedy is much easier than writing a scene on kiss and that also making it passionate one.......really tired .......I took three hours for writing this although its short😆😆
Edited by sur001 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sur meri jaaaaaaaaan ...
Now wat can i say bout dis prt *blush*blush*
It was awwwwwwesum 😉
Simply faaaaab
Guddu is soooooooooooo romantic ..
😍
Even runjun is no less ...
update sooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Eagerlyyyy waiting ...
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 14 years ago

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