MG FF:Prejudice Pt11 pg59 4 sept!( IMP.NOTE pg 63)

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hey guyz *hugz to all*😊

i hav been thinking of writing something worth reading... inspired by many of my friends who write awesome FFs no doubt...

there awesome FFs encouraged me too.. to write something on my fav jodi(MaanEET)!!

hope u all will like it!!


Prejudice



[intrduction to the plot will b given as the story will move..]

Part 1

morning 8:30 AM (khurana mansion)

an elegant lady(of 70 to75 yrs old) is sitting on couch instructing the factotums of the house.

Lady: nakul (one of the factotums)!! Aap nashta laga dijiye Maan aate hi honge, aur aaj unhe humare saath mandir bhi jana hai. Aap zara jaldi kijiye varna aap unke gusse ko jante hai.. ek to kitne dino k baad itni mushkil se humare saath breakfast krne ke liye ready hue hain..

Nakul: ji dadima, abhi laya.

Dadima(to herself) :ab hum aur intezaar nahi krenge.. aaj jis kaam k liye jaa rahe hain vo bann jaye bass!

Maan enters the mansion.

He is a 25 yr old, handsome,charming, he is kind of guy for whom any gurl can fall.. At present he is MD of KC(khurana constructions) n many other big firms.he is very disciplined n strict(same as ws shown in GHSP😆). His small world revolves around his dadima nd business.. he doesn't hate women bt feels uncomfortable around them coz of there piercing gaze on him.. he doesn't like the way they see him'.like they will devour him.. at present he is living in outhouse bcoz of some reason (that will b explained later).

Maan: dadi ma..!!

Dadi ma: ji beta aap aagaye. Hum aapka hi intezaar kr rahe the!

Kaise hai aap beta? Ayyiye baithiye..

(to nakul) nashta le aayyiye.

(to Maan) beta hum bohot khush hain k aap yaha aaye..

Maan: dadi ma aapne mujhe kyo bulaya hai?

Dadi ma: beta hume aapse aapke k Vishay mein baat krni thi. Beta aap to jante hain k hum ab buddhe ho gaye hain.. kya pata kab humse zindagi rusva ho jaye'

Maan: dadi ye sab aap kaisi baatein kr rahi hain..

Dadimaa: (cuts him) yehi sachh hai beta.. par jaane se pehle hum aapko khushiya dena chahte hain' hum aapko khush dekhna chahte hain. Hum aapko aise insaan k saath bandhana chahte hain jo aapko humare baad aapko sambhale..jo aapko poora kare.

Maan:aap janti hain k mai aapko kuch nahi hone doonga! Aur rahi baat ye 'jo aap keh rahi hain.. mujhe kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai..

Dadi ma: (now in a it angry tone) aaj aapko lag raha hai ke aap aise hi theek hain par kal kya jab aapke paas koi nahi hoga.. tab aapko pata chalega..

(now in normal pleading tone) beta hum chahte hain k aap ek ladki se mile jinhe humne aapke liye pasand kiya hai..bas ek baar humari baat maan lijiye beta..

Maan: inn sab se kya faida mera jawab vahi rahega "NA" !!

Dadima: beta hum sirf ek baar milne k liye keh rahe hain..

Maan: theek hai dadi ma agar aap aisa chahti hain to yehi hoga.. par aakhiri faisla mera hi hoga..!!

Dadi ma: (smiles) haan haan apka hi hoga..

Mean while nakul serves the bresk fast n dadi-potha both hav it in silence..

Precap: dadi ma: beta kya khayal hai aapka Geet k bare mein??

maan is lost in her..

Dadi ma: Maan beta hum aapse hi pooch rahe hain.

-priya😛

Pls press like button n comment..

Coz they will encourage me to continue!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey wow dis is too gud...love it....
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hi priya read ur FF liked it dear ... plz continue soon & thnks for the PM ...

Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey....
wow... this is really interesting...awesome yaar...
precap.. he sees geet....
cnt wait for that....
pls update soon.... 😃
and dnt forget to pm me.... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Priya, love it. MSK doesn't want to get married but is lost in Geet's thoughts...wow interesting. Please update soon and please add me to your PM list. Looking forward to read the next part. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehara

hey....

wow... this is really interesting...awesome yaar...
precap.. he sees geet....
cnt wait for that....
pls update soon.... 😃
and dnt forget to pm me.... 😃


i'll pm u..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dewdropred

res ... priya will comment later on ...


will wait for ur commnt!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: duniya12

Hi Priya, love it. MSK doesn't want to get married but is lost in Geet's thoughts...wow interesting. Please update soon and please add me to your PM list. Looking forward to read the next part. 😊


i m happy that u liked it😃
i'll update soon.......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love ur concept yaar
Thanks a lot!
Please continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

Love ur concept yaar

Thanks a lot!
Please continue soon


thnx for liking.......
i'll update soon.......

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