MG FF:Prejudice Pt11 pg59 4 sept!( IMP.NOTE pg 63) - Page 15

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Part 6

(Maan's monologue)

It's a right saying that friendship is the only way that makes two strangers well acquainted with one another in small span of time, and also it makes two people emotionally close. I never knew friendship is such a good feeling. I have never made friends with anyone, nor did I anytime want to indulge my self in friendship and all. Actually it was never the matter that people never wanted to make friends with me... They wanted... may be because of my fortune! But that was a kind of friendship one can easily afford when he wants... bt the real friendship that one wants to cherish is the one I my self is indulging in with my will MY FRIENDSHIP WITH GEET! Geet is different. After all she is the one whom I am going to spend my life with!

After Geet came to my life most of the things have changed. I was a loner. I never wanted anyone's company but my Dadi. She is the only one till now who knows the real Maan. She knows everything about me. She is the only parent I am left with. I never trusted anyone but few people. May be my past is not so pleasant as my present fortune is! And my past only resulted in making my self a loner. But now I do not want to spend my life as a loner. I want someone to share my happiness, my anxiety, my thoughts, my love, my fears. Yes I want a partner a friend. Dadi ma thinks that Geet is the only one who can make me true Maan. But what about me? Till today I don't know what I really want? Do I love her? But how can anyone love some one so soon.. I mean I have just met her once and my thoughts were filled with her and now she is working for me, should I say yes for marriage or should I give some time to our friendship. Though its true that I don't want to lose her but I can't do anything which I regret later. I think for now friendship is good.

(Maan's Monologue ends)

(Geet's monologue)

It just can't be true!.. m I dreaming?? I m now friends with Maan! The man whom I am going to marry. And he only asked me for the maan singh khurana asking me for friendship. I am just so happy!.. but.. I don't understand one thing' do I love him? Just before meeting him I was like against all this shaadi and all. I didn't wanted to meet him even. I had many plans for my marriage, my future. I always thought of standing on my own feet , to become independent. I wanted to finish my studies and wanted to to work. I never wanted to be a burden on any one! Bt now it seems that every thing has just changed. His first sight only worked like a arrow from cupid for me! I just forget everything even my personal plans which I have mulled over and over for years.. all words that I said as a promise to myself they come no where when he is near me! What happens to me when I see him? Is this love or mere infatuation..? does he too like me,love me? Does I too have same effect on him as his presence has on me?

He is a nice guy and I know that, but what about me, my life,my thoughts, my dreams? Love says sacrifice all but I don't know that I love him even or not! I don't know what I am to him.. just a girl who has been selected by his Dadi for marriage or does he think differently of me?

But I am happy today. I am really feeling differently, I am happy because of Our friendship. I love the fact that he will be my friend.. that I can shre my thoughts with him.. but will he understand? Will he listen to me? Or will he be the same as my parents who are just thinking abt my marriage and not the fact what I actually want from life! But my heart says he will understand. But what about him? Will I be asking too much from him? I don't want to lose him that is for sure.. I am confused and here is no one who understands me!

(Geet's monologue ends)

For some time there was silence in the Maan's cabin while both were seated on couch! They were in big confusion about oneself and each other.. they had many things which they wanted to be sorted out before. They were now friends and they could share there fears with each other ,there confusions and problems with each other.

(just than Maan's cell rang)

Maan: hello?

Ji....hmm'ok'ji hum pahuch jayenge.. ji' ok.. bye'.

(cuts the call)

(to Geet) tum ghar chali jao.. umm hume party mein jana hai ..vo dadi ma ka phone tha'. Humare kisi relative key aha party hai aur o hum dono ko le jana chahti hai..

Geet: par mai kaise.. mera matlab hai'..

(maan cuts her)

Maan: geet Dadi ma ne tumhare ghar valo se baat kr li hai..

Ab tum jao aur theek 8:00 baje tayyaar rehna.. hum lene aayenge..

Geet: ji.. (starts exiting the cabin)

Maan(smiles): geet ' ummm' bye'.take care..

Geet(she too smiles):bye..

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(just out side geet's house)

(Maan's monologue)

Maan Singh Khurana has never waited for anyone and now I m waiting for this girl!.. noticing my plight Dadima too is laughing and making my fun in her own way..

Dadi ma: beta kya hua? .. beta hum aap se kitni der se keh rahe hain ke andar chalke baithte hai kuch time toh lagta hi hai ladkiyo ko.. ab aise hi to nahi chal sakti na.. beta riwaz se chalna hota hai.

Maan: Dadi ma.. dekh rahi hai aap.. 3 hrs se ghar par hai aur abhi tak ready nahi hui.. aur hum yaha bahar uska wait kr rahe hain hrs se vo alag.!..

(he starts dialing Geet's number..)

Maan: geet kaha ho tum?... hum itni der se tumhara wait kr rahe hain. Aur tum abhi tak ready nahi hui'.. aakhir tum itni der se kr kya rahi ho? 'theek hai jaldi aao..

(cuts the call)

-----------------aftr 10 min Geet came---------------

And here she came.. she was dressed in white sari looking like an angel ' She had worn sleeve less blouse. White color the of purity was just looking perfect on her'. I had never seen a beauty like this' filled with so much purity, so serine , so innocent!

And now she is coming near me just like a bride' my anger vanished as I saw her.. she will b mine.. only mine! Only this thought is running my my head from the point I saw her!.... I m losing it man' hw could i.. but yes its true.. I hav lost everything to her!!

But this loss is not looking like a loss its looking like I hav gained everything!.....

My life has given me much more than what I hav lost in my past!......

(maan's monologue end)

Srry to end like this''😔

Nxt update will b really big'😃

Hope u all like this part!...😊

pls ignore the istakes iff any...😆

Pls press like button and comment!!😳😉

-Priya😛

Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This was sweet yaar!
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

This was sweet yaar!

Thanks a lot
Love u


thnku so much!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guyz.. i m really sorry for the late update!!!
i was stuck up with the college work.. hope u all will understand!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
They want to share lots of thgs but sumthg may be fear or insecurity abt wat other person will thk is holding them back
Dadi never leaves a chance to pull Maan's leg
Maan's anger vanished seeing her awesum
Dadi is gonna pull his leg more now😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

They want to share lots of thgs but sumthg may be fear or insecurity abt wat other person will thk is holding them back

Dadi never leaves a chance to pull Maan's leg
Maan's anger vanished seeing her awesum
Dadi is gonna pull his leg more now😆😆


thnku afsha for liking..........
u'll see lot more naughty things coming!!😉

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