Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24 - Page 96

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A modern version of Akdha love - my second attempt - I did not save my first version, so here I go again - starting from scratch - but same concept! This time I have verified my email ID and I hope my account does not get suspended!!!

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chapter 20 thread 2

Characters -The usual with few minor changes

Jallaluddin Mohammed Akbar : A billionaire heir to the Mogul Dynasty incorporated, royalty by birth.
Age 25 -Businessman - well educated at Yale, sophisticated, looks handsome, rugged, tough and mean but has the kindest eyes with cutest the smile and is completely irresistible to women, has terrific physique that can touch a lady with the softest caress. He is brutally honest and is capable to attack and attract. He can make any women feel like a princess with his passionate charisma and drives girls crazy with a simple glimpse. A sexy man, he is confident, self-assertive and arrogant.
Jalal's famous quote " I don't believe in guilt, I believe in living life on impulse as long as I never intentionally hurt anyone. I don't judge people in my life, one should live completely free".

Views on marriage: " I don't believe in love and marriage, it is not my cup of tea, variety is my cup of tea, there are too many beautiful women in this world - I want to live life to the fullest"

Family: Mother -Ammi Jaan, step brother Mirza 21 years old a fun loving college student, Sister Baksi Banu - 17 yr old sister - Jalal's current weakness.


Jodha Kunwari Rai: Part heiress to Ameri Oil & Co and Rai IT ventures group - royalty by birth A self made entrepreneur. Founder and owner of Rai IT solutions.
Age 21 - Student, Well known in Indian media for her beauty and brains, stays out of limelight. Strong, intelligent and outspoken believes in fighting for what is right. Blessed with an hot hour glass curvy body, amazing personality and beautiful sx appeal - flawless fair radiant skin, innocent expressive eyes, big luscious pouty lips, long shiny black hair - elegant and exotic - beautiful inside and out. A senior at MIT -Cambridge - Values tradition, culture and heritage.



Views on marriage: "I am a romantic person at heart, it will be the most beautiful thing ever, I wish to fall in love with my future husband and he will love me to death"

Family: Father Bharmal and Maina Rai, adoring parents to 4 children. 2 brothers aged 10 and 12 years older than Jodha, married and settled one in Simla and one in Dubai. Sukanya - 16 yrs old high school sister - still the baby of the house.

Their paths crossed one day ...

Prologue:
Grabbing her heavy light green lengha, fully embroidered with silver and stone work, she almost runs down the hall towards the ballroom, her body hugging choli almost suffocating her, looking into the image saved on her cellphone - is annoyed and upset - every head turns in her direction as she walks by - cursing under her breath - "arrogant male, how dare he, I will teach him a lesson he'll never forget" arrives at the grand entrance - looks at the image on her phone then her eyes carefully scan the crowd - he should be here she thinks, it is his shareholders family party -she stops and talks to two women then looks directly into a pair of eyes that was watching her and starts walking towards him. Jalal was busy talking with Abdul when he in passing he catches a glimpse of her - he turns his head to get a second glimpse, this is a first for Jalal - Allah has made her perfect to my taste he thinks, his heart skips a beat and starts to race he is spellbound, an eerie feeling engulfs him, he became a prey to a host of emotions buring deep within him. Their eyes meet and he sees her walking gracefully towards him- he admires her from head to toe - she was wearing light green his favorite color, her eyes fiery - her lips full and pouty, her beautiful face visibly upset - - her royal blue netted odhani slightly displaced giving him a glimpse of her generous curves, her shiny long black hair hiding her slim waist - Jalal was not the only one trapped within the spell of her hotness but also were the eyes of others - male and females around him. A tight slap landed on his right cheek, as the sound of a slap echoed in the ballroom, a shocked Jalal was catapulted to reality, pin drop silence settled around as all heads turned towards them - he dodges the second slap, as she started to speak "how dare you" when Jalal quickly grabs by her waist, pulls her towards him angrily and covers her lip with his , biting them together, sucking out her breath - turning his back to the crowd, grabs both her hands and locks it behind her, holding it tightly with one hand while his other hand - moves inside the rim of her lengha, and runs it along her waist, then moves it up caressing her back, then stomach and moves it up over her choli grabs her bosom giving her a light squeeze - there was no passion - just fury as he angrily whispers in her ears - "bitch -you know what I am capable of now, if you say another word or attempt to strike me, there will be a repeat performance, only this time my hands will wander further and inside your choli in front of all no modesty, this time around you will be embarassed" Jodha was stunned, helpless and in a state of shock when he turned her around and announced "ladies and gentleman - I am proud to present the future Mrs Jalaluddin Mohammed Akbar - she is a little ticked off with me today, pyaar mei yeh sab hota hai" and laughs ... everyone start clapping -he whispers in her ear "you better start smiling or else..." music starts - Jalal pulls her to the dance floor, pulling her tight against his chest, his grip on her waist tightened holding her captive for a slow short dance ... she felt a shiver up her spine .everyone claps again, he briefly stops to speak with Abdul - and leads her out ...


Teaser - Chapter 1

Jalal's completely mesmerized by her, walks towards her thinking -Yey Kudha, even after 3 years of marriage I still go crazy and weak every time I see her - he back hugs her, his breath warm on her neck, "bas mere jaan, you are my boss, I can't say no to you. have l told you how cute you look when you are upset" kissing her neck and shoulders - his hands encircling her large belly - caressing her, pulling her tight against his chest - as his hands slowly wander up, passionately whispers in her ear " I love you wifey jaan" turns her around, kisses her soft pouty lips stops holds her by her shoulder - looks deep into her eyes saying "what happened, why is my love tired today??"





Going to read this one...sounds interesting.
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DAMN IT,i cant stop crying , i never cried like this on a story before , great ff😭, my heart really aching for jo and j .hope he can contain her
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