Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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A modern version of Akdha love - my second attempt - I did not save my first version, so here I go again - starting from scratch - but same concept! This time I have verified my email ID and I hope my account does not get suspended!!!

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Chapter 15 Page 118 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4298521&TPN=118

chapter 20 thread 2

Characters -The usual with few minor changes

Jallaluddin Mohammed Akbar : A billionaire heir to the Mogul Dynasty incorporated, royalty by birth.
Age 25 -Businessman - well educated at Yale, sophisticated, looks handsome, rugged, tough and mean but has the kindest eyes with cutest the smile and is completely irresistible to women, has terrific physique that can touch a lady with the softest caress. He is brutally honest and is capable to attack and attract. He can make any women feel like a princess with his passionate charisma and drives girls crazy with a simple glimpse. A sexy man, he is confident, self-assertive and arrogant.
Jalal's famous quote " I don't believe in guilt, I believe in living life on impulse as long as I never intentionally hurt anyone. I don't judge people in my life, one should live completely free".

Views on marriage: " I don't believe in love and marriage, it is not my cup of tea, variety is my cup of tea, there are too many beautiful women in this world - I want to live life to the fullest"

Family: Mother -Ammi Jaan, step brother Mirza 21 years old a fun loving college student, Sister Baksi Banu - 17 yr old sister - Jalal's current weakness.


Jodha Kunwari Rai: Part heiress to Ameri Oil & Co and Rai IT ventures group - royalty by birth A self made entrepreneur. Founder and owner of Rai IT solutions.
Age 21 - Student, Well known in Indian media for her beauty and brains, stays out of limelight. Strong, intelligent and outspoken believes in fighting for what is right. Blessed with an hot hour glass curvy body, amazing personality and beautiful sx appeal - flawless fair radiant skin, innocent expressive eyes, big luscious pouty lips, long shiny black hair - elegant and exotic - beautiful inside and out. A senior at MIT -Cambridge - Values tradition, culture and heritage.



Views on marriage: "I am a romantic person at heart, it will be the most beautiful thing ever, I wish to fall in love with my future husband and he will love me to death"

Family: Father Bharmal and Maina Rai, adoring parents to 4 children. 2 brothers aged 10 and 12 years older than Jodha, married and settled one in Simla and one in Dubai. Sukanya - 16 yrs old high school sister - still the baby of the house.

Their paths crossed one day ...

Prologue:
Grabbing her heavy light green lengha, fully embroidered with silver and stone work, she almost runs down the hall towards the ballroom, her body hugging choli almost suffocating her, looking into the image saved on her cellphone - is annoyed and upset - every head turns in her direction as she walks by - cursing under her breath - "arrogant male, how dare he, I will teach him a lesson he'll never forget" arrives at the grand entrance - looks at the image on her phone then her eyes carefully scan the crowd - he should be here she thinks, it is his shareholders family party -she stops and talks to two women then looks directly into a pair of eyes that was watching her and starts walking towards him. Jalal was busy talking with Abdul when he in passing he catches a glimpse of her - he turns his head to get a second glimpse, this is a first for Jalal - Allah has made her perfect to my taste he thinks, his heart skips a beat and starts to race he is spellbound, an eerie feeling engulfs him, he became a prey to a host of emotions buring deep within him. Their eyes meet and he sees her walking gracefully towards him- he admires her from head to toe - she was wearing light green his favorite color, her eyes fiery - her lips full and pouty, her beautiful face visibly upset - - her royal blue netted odhani slightly displaced giving him a glimpse of her generous curves, her shiny long black hair hiding her slim waist - Jalal was not the only one trapped within the spell of her hotness but also were the eyes of others - male and females around him. A tight slap landed on his right cheek, as the sound of a slap echoed in the ballroom, a shocked Jalal was catapulted to reality, pin drop silence settled around as all heads turned towards them - he dodges the second slap, as she started to speak "how dare you" when Jalal quickly grabs by her waist, pulls her towards him angrily and covers her lip with his , biting them together, sucking out her breath - turning his back to the crowd, grabs both her hands and locks it behind her, holding it tightly with one hand while his other hand - moves inside the rim of her lengha, and runs it along her waist, then moves it up caressing her back, then stomach and moves it up over her choli grabs her bosom giving her a light squeeze - there was no passion - just fury as he angrily whispers in her ears - "bitch -you know what I am capable of now, if you say another word or attempt to strike me, there will be a repeat performance, only this time my hands will wander further and inside your choli in front of all no modesty, this time around you will be embarassed" Jodha was stunned, helpless and in a state of shock when he turned her around and announced "ladies and gentleman - I am proud to present the future Mrs Jalaluddin Mohammed Akbar - she is a little ticked off with me today, pyaar mei yeh sab hota hai" and laughs ... everyone start clapping -he whispers in her ear "you better start smiling or else..." music starts - Jalal pulls her to the dance floor, pulling her tight against his chest, his grip on her waist tightened holding her captive for a slow short dance ... she felt a shiver up her spine .everyone claps again, he briefly stops to speak with Abdul - and leads her out ...


Teaser - Chapter 1

Jalal's completely mesmerized by her, walks towards her thinking -Yey Kudha, even after 3 years of marriage I still go crazy and weak every time I see her - he back hugs her, his breath warm on her neck, "bas mere jaan, you are my boss, I can't say no to you. have l told you how cute you look when you are upset" kissing her neck and shoulders - his hands encircling her large belly - caressing her, pulling her tight against his chest - as his hands slowly wander up, passionately whispers in her ear " I love you wifey jaan" turns her around, kisses her soft pouty lips stops holds her by her shoulder - looks deep into her eyes saying "what happened, why is my love tired today??"





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Posted: 10 years ago
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prologue is amazing..their 1st meeting n jodha gave slap to jalal but y,...??what happened,,
what did jalal do to jodha..??😕😕jalal is betraying jodha..??
and teaser is interesting but is jodha pregnant..?😕😕😕😕
plz update ASAP waiting impatiently😳
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Interesting interesting! Omg!!what happnd in a time???!Gawdd!!nd teaser for chapter 1 is hell interesting...update sn...thankz fr being my buddy..
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so much confusion
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Prologue is a flash back - that will come along in chapter 3/4 - the story starts off 3 yrs after their first meeting and progresses forward with flashbacks --- ideas and suggestions welcome!! PM me - thanks for the comments
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Gosh the prologue nd teaser was just so awesome uff
Please update soon ND pm me
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Wow ,nice story,
interesting teaser
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Please update na of can't wait mote
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Nice start
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Chapter 1

"Ladies and Gentleman, Captain Katz here we have been cleared to Land at Chennai International Airport as we start our descent, please make sure your seat backs and tray tables are in their full upright position..." Jalal wakes up- looks at his watch 1230 am - I have slept 8 hrs straight thanks to the luxury of first class - he thinks, brings his seat to upright position - stows away his gadgets - picks up his cell phone and begins to unlock it when the stewardess passes by and asks him to turn it off for landing - he waits for her to pass by and continues to unlock the phone and looks the screen saver image - a selfie of his wife, he smiles and thinks she must be fast asleep, that is if they let her sleep, a smug conceited smile curls his lip as he recalls the night before his trip to Canada -

Flashback: 10 pm at Mohammed residence : 4 days ago

Jalal walks into the bedroom sipping red wine, watches Jo reviewing files, and packing them in his briefcase - "there you go " she said - "all done - proof read and finalized - now your job is simplifed, one more signature, it will be a done deal" A visibly upset Jalal walks towards her saying " but I don't want to go, I don't want to leave you in this stage, I have asked Abdul to complete the task" she slowly waddles towards him saying "but this is a security breach issue - we can't have others involved - just imagine if it leaks to the press, ... shaking her head she starts off with her explanation ... ending with "that's why"
Jalal's completely mesmerized by her, walks towards her thinking -Yeh Kudha, even after 3 years of marriage I still go crazy and weak every time I see her - he back hugs her, his breath warm on her neck, "bas mere jaan, you are my boss, I can't say no to you. have l told you how cute you look when you are upset" kissing her neck and shoulders - his hands encircling her large belly - caressing her, pulling her tight against his chest - as his hands slowly wander up, passionately whispers in her ear " I love you wifey jaan" turns her around, kisses her soft pouty lips stops holds her by her shoulder - looks deep into her eyes saying "what happened, why is my love tired today??" she leans her head on his chest - pouts saying "because of you I am in this state and your babies are just like you they become extra active at nights moving around all night" -she turns around grabs his hands and places them on her belly - he literally feels them move from left to right - his eyes gets teary with emotions -slowly sits down and places soft kisses on her rotund belly - saying "rest little ones, don't trouble my wife, your ammi blames me for all mischief you guys do...we are waiting for your arrival" then looking up at Jodha, smirks and says "I am also having difficult time na, I can't hug and love my wife properly, I can't sleep because she keeps tossing in bed, she gets really moody - wakes me up at 3 am saying she is hungry, makes me drive around town wanting to eat vada paav..." pushing him lightly says, " I am not talking to you" making a angry face starts walking away when jalal grabs her in a tight hug, kissing her neck, slowly his lips start pushing her night gown down her shoulder, scoops her up and carries her to bed saying "stop fighting with me and give me love to carry me through the the next 4 days I have already started missing you"

... a sudden jerk forward and screeching tires bring him back to reality ... Landed safely-he feels a deep ache in his chest - I miss her terribly, I need to get back home, no more spontaneous travel till my babies are born -closing his eyes he continues to recall the passionate time spent with his pregnant wife.

Cleared customs quickly and looks around for his staff, no one was around, takes his phone to call Abdul when he realized his phone was still on aeroplane mode. Switches it back - hears multiple pings- sounding like church bells - as his phone updated the texts/emails - about 20 texts that read "Critical emergency need of universal blood donor for two infant babies - please call - Apollo children's hospital -as soon as possible" his phone was bombarded with the same message over 20 times - he checks the time 0200 am - she will be sleeping - but that Abdul where the hell is he that idiot - -- he calls and texts Abdul and is unable to reach him, must be drunk and passed out thinks as he leaves a voice mail saying - "Abdul idiot, where in hell are you man, arrange for a jet to pick me up from Chennai International at 530am today"

A frustrated Jalal is stuck in Chennai at least till the morning he did not want to disturb any of his local staff, decides to go ahead to the hospital to donate blood. He calls the hospital and gives them a heads up, hails a taxi and leaves the airport - Jalal is a registered universal blood donor and has donated blood on multiple occasions - saved many lives - A facet of Jalal that no one except Abdul knows. Suddenly Jalal remembers his Ammijaan was in Chennai as well - she had come for her nephew's wedding - jalal hates his mother's brother and family as he had grown up witnessing the way they ill treated his mother and did not want to have anything to do with them - Ammijaan has a very kind forgiving heart , not me- thinks to himself "i should call her before I leave"


Reaches the hospital, walks towards the reception desk when a young doctor comes running toward him saying "thanks sir for coming at this unearthly hour - the babies are in dire need of blood - they were born prematurely" - They quickly walk towards the NICU - the doctor continues to explain " your blood type is in the system already and is a 100 % match - they are lucky babies" Jalal says " Lucky no, Allah ne marzi, yes, my flight to Mumbai was cancelled last minute and in 15 minutes forced myself on the last flight of the day leaving for India, thus Chennai happened " he smirks and recall all the tactics he used to be able to get on the flight- the doctor agrees -

They walk towards the incubator - Jalal hears weak cries, looks and sees two tiny babies lying facing each in one incubator, amongst wires, - Jalal is surprised - the doctor explains, "they are twins almost 3 hrs old, the wires monitor their heart and breathing, we have them together as they start bonding in their mothers womb and rely on each other, we are trying to make a near womb experience for them" Jalal is humbled, he reaches into the incubator touching them, they stop crying - and one baby reaches out grabbing his pinky finger tightly - while the other baby opens his eyes and looks directly at jalal - this stirs in Jalal a new emotion, he felt like he was looking into familiar eyes, slowly withdraws his hands, he had to use his other hand to unclasp the little baby's fingers" with tears in his eyes tells " quite strong for being this tiny" smiles and continues " my wife is pregnant with twins too, just completed her 7 month - we do not want to know their sex, we'll take what Allah gives, this is a touching experience, I am even more eager and am looking forward to my own"

The doctor continues saying "unfortunately, their mother was involved in a traumatic accident is unconscious and fighting for her life, your hands are the first non hospital hands to touch them, we don't have any information about their father or family, one nurse heard her say "Mohammed" so we call them the Mohammed twins -but one thing we know for sure, they do not share the same blood type with her..." the doctor continues talking, -Jalal goes blank he could not hear a word of what the doctor was -saying as his mind reflects back - Jo always addresses herself as Mrs Mohammed -- an eerie feelings shoots up his spine, he breaks into a sweat - doctor sees this, pats him on his shoulders saying - "Sir, its ok, your wife is in Mumbai and this is Chennai, there are over 20000 Mohammeds in Chennai alone". Masking his concerns Jalal quickly moves away and says - "Yeah, I spoke to her before my flight took off" lets get this blood thing going as quick as possible - it is almost 3, I have an early flight to catch, will have to leave by 430AM, I can't miss this flight , I need to get back to my wife" rolling up his sleeves - he lays on the hospital bed, closes his eyes ready to donate blood.

Jalal feels an unaccountable sense of fear as the car pulls out from the hospital - sitting in the back of the vehicle, breaks into a sweat again, his hands and feet get cold, looks at the watch showed 0500 am, attempts to reach Abdul again, is unable to - then decides to call the Executive Director for Chennai Division - Mr Satyam, explains the situation who assures him "Sir, you go ahead to the airport and all necessary arrangements will be made" - heaves a sigh of relief , decides to text Jo as it was not like Abdul to ignore his calls and thinks, if she is awake, she will call me- - he pulls up her name to text her when he notices the texts she had sent that he missed reading in the slew of emergency texts he received regarding the critical donor need - Jo's text got buried and he missed reading it ...

first text : @ 4pm Hon, Ammijaan just called from Chennai, there seems to be a lot of family drama going on there - I should have gone with her for moral support"

Second text: @ 545pm "Just got a call from her brother - Ammi collapsed and has been taken to Apollo Cardiac Center in Chennai, is admitted to ICU - she is having a heart attack, she is all alone -I am trying to get there - when you reach Chennai, please call me"

Third text: @630pm - I am leaving to the airport to catch the 8pm flight to Chennai, sent the Jet to pick up Bakshi from Simla and bring her Chennai they will be there tomorrow - Please call me when you reach chennai - no matter what time, I will be waiting for your call - luv you lots and missing you, your babyjaans missing you too"

Fourth text: @830pm, Flight delay - will reach Chennai by 930pm, I know you will be fuming mad - don't worry, Dr Sneha cleared me - she asked me to be extra careful - Hon, don't be upset, not good for health, I have no choice - poor Ammijaan is sick and all alone there -will meet you at Apollo Cardiac center - call me as soon as you land -XOXOXOXO Luv Jo...

Jalal quickly calls Jo's cell - goes directly to voice mail- he prays quickly "Allah keep them safe" - he asks the taxi driver to take him to Apollo cardiac center - his mind is going crazy - he can't understand why Jo takes such risks on her own, attempts to call Abdul again, no answer, Jalal then realizes he has not checked his email since he landed, quickly opens he emails - over 100 emails in his inbox - Abdul had sent him one that read -Jalal, I have to leave for a family emergency - will explain when I get back, you know in the village, I don't get any cell coverage -will call as soon as possible" the email was sent around 2pm







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