Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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Pba123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

a very interesting chapter

Jo accident...jalal bonding with twins was so cute

Waiting to know about jalal reactions abt jo accident

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Spacexplorer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

😲😲

really liked d update😃... hope jo will be fine😊... hmmm the concept is intriguing😛... prologue as well as teaser is really... pls pm me wen u update😳... pls update soonish😉

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Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I loved the prologue to the core😊

Awesome beginning dear👏

you have written it brilliantly👏

I can imagine this story gonna be very interesting😆

plz do continue soon ... if you can then pm me😆

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ramya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

OMG jo met an accident 😭

premature babies, hope jo will be fine

can't wait for d next update

update soon and thank you for the pm.

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Ruthshalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Hey dear thank you so much for updating so soon gosh what should I say u wrote so awesome I'm love with this story everything was just so damm good awesome
Please update soon I seriously I can't wait
I want to see jalal reaction after when we'll know that those babies are his aww
Please please update soon
Thanks for the pm der

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Ruthshalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Hey der one more thing plz when ever you update your story plz edit ur topic name to like this
Akdha FF - A spontaneous Desire updated on pg bla bla date bla bla
Nd add a index so it will help the reader more
Sorry if I hurt you in this post
Need any help please do tell me I'll be happy to help you 24&7

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Sush

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Well, Rexniko is a complicated name for me.so I will be only address u as iko..😆 😆..hope u won't mind...😳 😳

Now come to the story...Awesome prologue & chapter 1...

I missed this... ...well...because of my habit to not reading PMs..around 500 Pms r unread in my inbox😆 😆...

Whatever...It's really heart wrenching.that his babies are safe..but Jodha is in life-risk...😭 😭...

Well...I really wish in the meantime show some flashbacks of their love story of 3 years...😳 😳...

How Jodha's love changed Jalal...all want to see...😳 😳

& yeah.one more thing...In PM...send the URL...otherwise it is a problem to find...😊 😊

But really love ur story.continue soon😊 😊

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zakia4

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

what an update dear awesome.I am love with this story .update the next chappy soon aap itna accha update de kar hume bechaini mein nahi rakh sakti hum sab badi besabri se intezaar kar rahe hai ki aage kya hoga please dear update soon and thanks for the pm.

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Impairlove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Ya jhuda jo met with an accident
Jalal must reach their fast as possible
And ammijan in ICU oh god
1st update that to so thriller
Love u
Pls update next chappy fast cant wait