Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#681

its beautiful ... u penned all emotions soo well. hospital part was best... i had tears while reading... continue soon nd do pm dear

U made my day@@@@@@@@@@@

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Akanksha Sinha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#682

AWWW... JALAL TAKES SO MUCH CARE OF JO... AWESOME SUPER DUPER CHAPPY... HOW MUCH HAPPY THEY WERE WHEN THEY GOT THE NEWS... 😳 BUT NOW... 😭 BECHARI JO... 😭 SHE DOESNT KNOW ANYTHING... 😭 HOW WILL JALAL HANDLE HIM... 😭
UPDATE SOON... AND THANKS FOR THE PM... 😃

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ramya

@Sricharan416

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Posted: 10 years ago

#683

Awesome dear

emotional update

what will happen to jo, when she came to know about her babies 😭

Update soon and thank you for the pm.

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#684

its a heart breaking chapt dear...i understand why jalal lie on the babies news to jo...just please help jo getting through the reality.. they getting so much through the years..(oh my i shade a tear while reading it) thanks for updating it..

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#685

Prema:)
nice update and emotional too..
continue soon!

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zakia4

@zakia4

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Posted: 10 years ago

#686

wow dear what an update loved it .chappy read kar ke mujhe ek song yaad aagaya.
Tere hone se hi mera hona.
Tujhko khona jyse khud ko khona.
Tu jo hai toh main hun yun jo hai toh main hun.thanks for the lovely update dear please update soon eagerly waiting and thanks for the pm.

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Savindi Abhisheka

@Savi.23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#687

wow dr..its a superb chapter..really loved it...good job dr..update soon the next chaper..nd plzzz plzz plzz dont take a long time to update ok..thanks for the pm dr..update asap.eagerly waiting..

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Nancy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#688

Such an emotional and heartwrenching update!. loved it. Jalal is such a darling. My heart goes out to him :* :*
your writing is fablous. You brought out the emotions so well.
Poor Jo. I am sure as long as Jalal is there, shes not gonna have a hard time.
Lovely chapter Prema. update soon.

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Sonali

@sonali96

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Posted: 10 years ago

#689

Lovely update... Poor jalal has to lie about his kids fr jo...continue soon dear

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#690

wow... prema .such a beautiful update .
love it.
nd jo ja convo in the hospital about their babies is the bst part of the chappy.i just love it.
it is so emotional nd so pure feelings.nd jalal how hardly struggling to controlling himself not to tell her about their babies death.just superb.
don't know how jo react when she comes to know about them.
bt love that how jalal taking care for jo.he really loves her lot.

nd u beautifully described their feelings .u r just superb writer.
really it is an awesum update. 👏
⭐️

nd thnx for pm.

update the nxt part soon...