Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24 - Page 93

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful chapter...Loved Jodha for taking such a bold decision...Jalal deserves this separation even though Jo and HB pushed him towards the current situation. Enjoy your vacation and update as soon as Possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago


Chapter 20 Teaser


Jo knocked on his door and opened it when she heard a female voice huskily whispering "Jalal, Jalal...don't do this to me..." Plastering a smile on her face walks in to share her happiness with the man she loves, the man she lost herself to, the man she trusted ...and was shocked to see Asiya bent over him...her dislodged clothes left very little for imagination of their activities ...her eyes darted to Jalal who seemed spaced out, lost..."Asiya get out of her right now" she yelled coughing as the smoke hit her, grabbing her belly that had begun to show her state of pregnancy ...Asiya walks past her angrily stops and whispers "why did you come back, soon I will have him under my control soon, he will not want you or your love anymore, look at you, you have gotten fat and shapeless ...big breasts, big stomach, big butt ...Jalal lusted after your swimsuit body and now your body is far from it you should use cocaine too,it will increase you metabolism and help you stay slim and trim, you are getting old" the smell of alcohol and cigarettes on her breath nauseates her ... her first thought, she wanted to leave immediately did not want the smoke to harm her unborn child...but seeing Jalal in the state he was, she could not...it was her birthday and she wanted surprise him with her secret...she wanted to feel him feel his touch...she knew she hurt him and he was probably fighting back...her gut feelings told her he would not cheat on her love, "get out Asiya" she yelled again as the door slammed shut...she walked towards Jalal who was sitting behind his desk, leaning back in his chair smoking, looking stoned...Jo sees traces of white powder on his desk and two tiny plastic bags with white powder ..."Jalal are you doing drugs ?" Jo was shocked ...suddenly air in the room became too thick, feeling suffocated, she could not breathe...she needed to get out...she turns to leave when she feels his hands grab hers, pulling her against him ... " yes, I was doing coke,she told me it will numb my pain, the pain you got me into...where are you going my wild kitten? ...I just want to hold you" he whispered "where have you been, why did you leave me" Jo pushes him away, his breath reeked of alcohol, he was drunk ... "Jalal, I can't believe you will start doing drugs, I am sure its that bit*h Asiya?" he gave her a blank stare, his eyes were glassy...he was drunk and high, before she had time to react he begins kissing her, touching her intimately ...she tries to push him away but her body betrays her, she succumbs to his passion blaming her pregnancy harmones "Jalal, I'm pregnant, be gentle na" taking his hands she places them on her belly... "it's a boy" she whispered ... sitting him up, pulls his head against her belly and takes a picture with her phone "I want you to feel our child kick and move, I want you to talk him, kiss him Jalal" Jo was getting comfortable in his arms, too comfortable "Salim, that's the name we choose for our next boy" she continues when she feels his hands fall away from her as he falls back on the couch passes out completely ...Jo hears footsteps ...she runs and hides behind the curtains ...MIL and Asiya walk in, putting on an innocent face says... "look buaa ...your son, is drunk he is also doing drugs ... even after I told him I was pregnant he says he won't marry me but wants to use my body" shedding fake tears ... Dumbfounded, Jo slowly walks out without being seen...


An extra long TZR ...sorry guys, I will update only next week ...to much work to catch up with first...



Edited by rexniko - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb teaser dr..plz update asap..eagerly waiting..plz plz plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting teaser... am sure jodha will expose her.. update soon dear... eagerly waiting for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing tzr Prema.
Both the ladies are pregnant.. Intresting.
I know this Asiya wasn't pregnant with jaal's child...
Oh know Jo came to know about this.. Again misunderstanding.. And it may effects her health too..
Update soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser update soon eagerly waiting for the chapter pm me thanks for pm update ur both stories nest chapter soon pm me don't be late please plzz please plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting tzr
but plz try to update soon dear😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thnx for the extra long teaser.
So Jo forgave Jalal..but this Asiya 😡 ..she is like our Ruks.I guess her pregnancy is a lie.
Update whenever u r free.
Thnx for d pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I m still waiting for jalal to come up with a teda plan for Asiya😉
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Eagerly waiting your update dear..
amazing tzr.. finally Jo come back. Hope Jo will trust to Jalal. And save her Love from Devil Asiya.

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