Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Intense update..feel like watching the scenes.. Jodha frustration.. Jalal confusion..thank u for updating dear author... Have nice weekend

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

It's an intriguing update. U r an amazing writer dear.

I didn't realise what jo had planned to escape the marriage until i read her one night stand proposal...

that's how good u r at keeping the readers with the story..

Thank you so much for updating regularly dear

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@Zayn_1Dholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Awesme chapter..hatred nd love..mixing..just fabuolous...update sn nd pm me..thankz fa d pre pm...love u...mujhe jo ki feelings ka ehsaas hain..nd adham mia ka kya hoga 🤣 just want to punch him..

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Pba123

@Pba123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Fabulous update

Surely jalal has fallen for jo

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Hi Rex hope I can call u Rex .it was very nice chap dear.jalal is really very confused about his feelings .jo's ready to be jallus one night stand but don't want to marry him 😉interesting..update soon dear and thanks for pm🤗

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swriter

@swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Nice Chapter 😊but main confuse ho jodha ko lekar😕
plz solve my confusion kyuki pahale tum ne jodha indian culture se judi huyi dikhaya ab living rela. and one night stand i don't understand.😕kya sach main jodha true kah rahi ya jhoot bol rahi thi jalal se plz tell me because i am much confuse about this fact...😃

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

mixed feeling...poor jodha gets into trouble...awesome update...update soon and thakx for the pm

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zakia4

@zakia4

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

awesome update can't wait for the next chappy.you describe each and every part perfectly.please dear update soon and thanks for the pm.love your story so much.

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Neetu

@NSKay

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

a fantastic update dear...and thanks for the pm..jalal has unknowingly fallen for jodha...and poor jo doesn't understand his love...once again thanks for pm.,

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Sofia Liverpool

@._.Bubbles._.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

hey

i have to say your story is thunder
i really love the way u start and carrying us back in the flashbacks is totally awesome😳

ny heart is hurting knowing what jalal and jodha is going through😭
why the kids had to die😭
why jodha have to be going through dis 😭
i really love how jalal is there with her 😃

omg those flashbacks are captivating
love the way u put there 1st meeting and omg got to say i never expect this type of thunder and master writing it was a happy shock to me
i really love your story
sorry for late comment just busy with studies and so on😊
btw thanks for the pms
and yes chappy 4 was my favorite so far
love the way jodha lie about she and jalal
is the way jalal lift jodha and their hug and kiss
okay that enough😆
so i might not comment on ur story right away when you update but i will comment😃
xo

#with_love_bubbles❤️

Edited by ._.Bubbles._. - 10 years ago