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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis


Thanks JJ for your comment.
Love you! 🤗





@Red 1 I know the second conclusion as well 😉

@Red 2 I love you too 😆🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update soon, waiting 😃
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A lovely update once again Maria, you never fail to deliver, I liked the dynamics, the new building equations between characters and we can clearly see that things are changing and characters are either trying to bring a change or are at least accepting it (Rudra trying to catch Shaurya, Rishaan helping, Bittuji trying to take a drastic step to help his daughter by asking help from Rudra, Meera being on cordial terms with Maya, Maya accepting that it's not all bad, she unwillingly fulfilled one of her dreams and she should maybe be change and open up more)


Now let me start with the first scene, Shaurya's nightmare and Maya's bitter traumatic reality!!! Poor Maya, all what she has gone through because of that creep! but obviously Rk/Rudra will avenge her and will be the end of Shaurya, glad at least she had that thought, though in a trance, that she will be avenged by her Rk! We rarely see Maya remembering Rk, but she did then, in her toughest time she did! I had a sadistic pleasure seeing Shaurya's panic, this is the least he deserves, waiting for Rudra to punish him though whatever punishment he gets won't be enough for the lifes he destroyed! I know he has a past too, but nothing justifies wreaking havoc in others' lifes and the mask he has! indeed a very shrewd monster!


Bittuji and Rudra's scene was really a nice one, I liked the sincerity with which Bittuji explained things to Rudra even given the sensitivity of the fact that Rishaan is Rudra's brother, but Bittuji had to do it for his daughter, Rudra though uncomfortable understood Bittuji's stance. Was Rudra nurturing hopes that somehow things might work between Meera and Rishaan, but Bittuji made it clear that even if Rishaan falls for Meera, he will still be a danger, it's not only about Rishaan reciprocating Meera or not, it's about who is Nishaan! a question that even Rudra can't answer clearly now, he himself is fighting to break through the wall that is keeping him away from his brother!!


I liked Rudra and Maya's scene, she seems less irritated with him, at least she listens even when she is infuriated, he told her once again that she should try and see them as friends, but I also loved the fact that she once again explained why she can't be dependent on others, because she knows it never comes without a price!


About Meera, I just hope she becomes stronger, Rishaan is kind of taking her for granted, I know he never asked her to love him, but we know very well that he asks her for things which are out of her duty at some weird times and he knows it, it's not like he is a fool!! though he doesn't do it particularly on purpose but she is exploited!! it's not nice at all!! she should lash out at him someday, one who can't appreciate love doesn't deserve it!! !!


The brothers!, what I liked most about their scenes is the moments where Rudra caught the glimpse of his original lost brother and also the moment where Rishaan told him that he is the true Kapoor maybe these two moments are the moments where guard was low!

The new character seems nice, he brought freshness to the dull life of the girls 😆

I didn't expect the last scene, though you kept bringing up the omnious wala thing, I thought maybe the omnious part is only about Shaurya, maybe it still is! but I liked the last scene, it was dhamakdar!! what will happen next?!!😲😃


Other things I liked : Maya's monologue about her resolutions, she is discovering that she should enjoy her life, it shouldn't be only about survival, and I enjoyed the fact that she remembered what Rudra said, and is actually willing to act on it, so already remembering what he says is a good sign, starting to trust him is even better! 😃

Waiting for you next updates 😃

Ignore typos, lazy to re-read my own comment😆 let's hope from tomorrow on, I'll be less lazy 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Meera should spend time with Vijay n rishaan should b jealous will love to see him jealous
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WOW!!wonderful update...loved it...already liking the character of viraj...the last part was confusing for me...what's just happened?
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@sanghita0000
The brothers' car crashed into the lake.
Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
happy new year maria
marvelous update
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Amazing update again.Shaurya has nightmares ,he should be.what a monster he is.Maya is trying to live.Rishaan n rudra's complicated relation.Bittuji worries for meets.New character viraj is like a fresh air.U wrote everything so beautifully. Thanks for long updates but last scene made me curious. update soon.
Happy new year.
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