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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Sorry for commenting so late Maria and Welcome back 🤗. I thought you forgot this story 😛


It's okay. I am glad to hear from you. Thank you so much. 🤗 And yes, for a long while I did forget about this story but then I remembered, so I decided to finish it.
And the update was really nice. My poor Rudra. He needs sleeping pils for a peaceful dreamless slumber. I hope Maya can give dreamless nights to him in future. He is very confused or disappointed not to find Madhu in Maya. Rudra knows that he is Rk , but Maya is still not aware of it. Maya does not even like Madhu or wants to be like her. Cant Rudra accept her as Maya Talwar? Who is very different from Madhubala. Rudra shares his anxieties with Bittuji. I liked his employees reaction when he appeared in office despite on leave. He is hurt by Maya's indifference , He is trying to be friendly with Meera. Is he trying to make Maya Jealous?

Intriguing questions, Yes, it is important to note that Rudra is very restless and so adamant to get his Madhu, not Maya. I am glad you liked the office scene. And as for Meera, Rudra is just being nice to her. She is Bittuji's daughter after all.

Rishaan is missing. Finally Meera tracks him. They reach him and witnessing his performance. He knows that he is an imposter. He is still a mystery to me. Dr Roy suggested to something in his eyes for Maya. Is that means he feels something for her ? Why cant he see Meera, poor girl!!

All in good time.. 😆 ... cannot answer questions related to Rishaan. But yes, poor Meera... 😆

Shaurya, Reading about him giving me an eerie feeling. He lead a perfect life. A perfect husband, and a perfect father to 3 kids. I have a doubt ,did he abuse some one else other than Maya? How is he related to Madhubala? Or was he just a crazy fan of her? I was suffocated to read that he woke in the middle of the night and went to watch that old audition video of Maya 🤢. Only a creep can have such a feeling for a child , and it surprises me that he is still pursuing her 🤢

Like all the important characters in here, Shaurya has a backstory as well which will be revealed sooner than later. Yes, he is creepy. Sorry about that. And I should warn you he is only going to get creepier.

Expecting the next update soon 😊😊


Updating in a bit. Thanks for you comment. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
ahaan rudra is like rk...stubborn idiot... he wants what he wants! some things Just dont change now, do they? 😆 he cant find madhu in maya...well i wonder how he would react if madhu came and said the same thing to him...he isnt all like RK either! i guess meera could do that 😆
but jokes apart a tiny part of me does has sympathy for rudra..

rishaan is missing...y ? wat happened? did he dream? did he realize he has fallen in love? dis he realize he isnt RK?
poor thing! i will kill you if u hurt my rishaan 😉

oh mr red rose man is a total sick ass! i wonder if he dreams of raping his daughter too someday! sicko! 🥱

the dr. n rudra scene is my favourite!! too damn intense! too much happening there. master stroke! 👏

chalo chalo gimme the next update abhi! i want to lisn to rishaan speak! pls i need a rishaan rudra hug! pls pls pls!

- love
tumahaari Hiyu 😛😆

Edited by war_is_peace - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

ahaan rudra is like rk...stubborn idiot... he wants what he wants! some things Just dont change now, do they? 😆 he cant find madhu in maya...well i wonder how he would react if madhu came and said the same thing to him...he isnt all like RK either! i guess meera could do that 😆

but jokes apart a tiny part of me does has sympathy for rudra..

Well, Hiyu... that was spot on! But you already know that! 😆

rishaan is missing...y ? wat happened? did he dream? did he realize he has fallen in love? dis he realize he isnt RK?
poor thing! i will kill you if u hurt my rishaan 😉

Hahah! It is difficult not to do so... I get so tempted.. 😆

oh mr red rose man is a total sick ass! i wonder if he dreams of raping his daughter too someday! sicko! 🥱

He is sick and a creep. No second thoughts on that.

the dr. n rudra scene is my favourite!! too damn intense! too much happening there. master stroke! 👏

Thank you so much, Hiyu! 🤗

chalo chalo gimme the next update abhi! i want to lisn to rishaan speak! pls i need a rishaan rudra hug! pls pls pls!

That won't happen yet... He is .. well .. you know.. still him. Difficult to crack.

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tumahaari Hiyu 😛😆


Love you, Hiyu!
-Tumhari Marie! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the delay. Update coming up now!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update.like rishaan n rudra bonding. Maya is confused n meera heartbroken.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Another fantastic update 👏 Thanks for updating fast 👍🏼
I m really feeling bad for Meera. Is she really invisible to Rishaan? Loved Maya and Meera scene. Maya did noticed the changes in Meera when Rishaan started dancing with a random girl. Rudra also feels sorry for but not Rishaan. Bittuji is worried about his daughter, who is motherless. Who is Viraaj? I know its not easy to make Rishaan jealous, but i want a J Rishaan 😈

Rudra and Rishhan is on a date. Loved the brothers talk with driver. Poor guy scared of twisted brothers. Their bond is adorable, but both are so twisted that i did not understand most of their talks 🤪. Meera collected information about Shaurya. He have properties all over india. But the house in pune is different, where he goes once in a month alone and also with family some times. I guess mystery lies there. He spend most of his teenage days there only. I have a feeling that Rudra will explode badly after witnessing evidence of Mr. Creep's paagalpan . What if he find some pics of Madhubala 😆 RK will go insane. The brothers plans to visit the house next day.

Maya was drinking,then Rudra tells her that he and Rishaan is going after Shaurya. Maya is disappointed because they involved Meera too. According to Maya , Kapoor brothers cant do anything gainst that moron. She dont want to put them and Meera in danger. Maya is really scared of him. Is he really capable of troubling these wealthy influencial brothers? Why did Bittuji wants to meet Rudra? He sound paniced, Is it about Meera?

Rudra dont like Maya drinking. She is taking medicines and should not use alchohol. Rudra is really caring. Loved Maya's complaint about him did not buy a drink to her even after wandering a few pubs 😆

Shall we expect the next update soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update, love the brothers bonding, Maya is confused and Meera is heartbroken.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maria loved the banner in the form of avi, thanks for the PM dear.

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