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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1021

Superb update, Viraj is like fresh air, want to see jealous Rishaan seeing Meera and Viraj together, the car crashed in the lake, i hope Rudra and Rishaan are fine. Thanks for the long update.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1022

Maria thanks for the PM, wishing you and everyone a very very happy new year.

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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1023

Wow! Once again you rocked it.
BTW Happy New Year..
Maya is so confused about her feelings and life. Rudra is being his guide. though he has recognized his love he is waiting for Maya to realize it. Maya's thoughts are moving from negative to positive.she is ready to take chances. For making new friends, for living her life, fulfilling dreams and fighting her fear.
I just hope what ever rudra has planned, aisa hi ho. But now that accident will turn everything upside down.
This is one of my favorite stories and I am looking forward to read more of it.
Anny

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RAONE8

@RAONE8

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1024

Happy New Year

Awesome update as always!!!!!!!

liked Viraj's character...really a breath of fresh air

loved that Maya is slowly deciding to open up n live life...even remmbrng Rudras words😳

liked both brothers chats

ending is really interesting

really eager to read more...n thanks for d pm

cont sooon

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1025

Fantastic superb dear
happy new year u too maria

Thanks for the PM dear 🤗

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1026

Oh my goodness! How did I miss this story for so long????

This is one of the finest ff I've read in this forum. An amazing story n very beautifully written.😛

Read all the 23 chapters in one go. It took me about 3 hrs but I couldn't stop myself once I started reading this ff.

What a twist in the 8 th chapter 😛 never expected that. Both the brothers r twisted n sunky.😛 Even though Rudra has identified his soulmate, Maya is nowhere near it except for restless or should I say wired feelings whenever she is near Rudra.

I'm still not able to zero in on Rishaan's feelings for Maya. Let's see what u have planned.

I cried with Maya when she narrated her past. I cried with Rudra too when he broke down near the lake. Oh God! It was too painful😭

The good thing is the Kapoor bros r together in it to nail that Shaurya.😡 Maya was right . RK will bring an end to him. Madhu belongs only to RK.

Glad Maya Is ready to accept that there r ppl around her who cares for her n want her to be safe. She is willing to live her dream. This girl deserves it.

The mystery behind Kapoor bros is yet to be revealed. Maybe the latest accident will bring them closer.

But they had this accident just outside Shaurya's house n without knowing the clue Harish has found. Hope they don't get into any more trouble.

Love to write lots more about this story but then my comment will be longer than ur update. So I'll stop with this.

Thoroughly enjoyed the updatesn also ur comments below it.

Thanks!

Plz add me to ur PM list.

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mydrashti

@mydrashti

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1027

Oh wowww maria is back 😃I'm so happy welcome back mariaaa thanks for continuing the story 🤗 love the update Rudr know his connection with maya but many things in between rishan n maya 😳 nooo like him I too can't imagine 😆 internal battle is on for all of them waiting for it how Maya accept the truth of her and rudr being together the way u put bittuji to convince rudr no matter what they are meant to together is very touching I really got so emotional 😭 thanks for pm hun 😃

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#1028

Shit, another update and I have't caught up yet !

ON IT NOW ! 🤗

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1029

Originally posted by: ..Steph..
Shit, another update and I have't caught up yet !
ON IT NOW ! 🤗

Yayy!!! Finish it quick! I am waiting for your feedback! 🤗

And our first class! 😛😆 I hope you still remember... you are supposed to teach me something! 😛

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#1030

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Yayy!!! Finish it quick! I am waiting for your feedback! 🤗
And our first class! 😛😆 I hope you still remember... you are supposed to teach me something! 😛

I do ! 😆

I have plenty to learn from you though ! Going through the chapters right now !! Dude, YOU.ARE.GIFTED !