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WOW!! that was wonderful...I really feel bad for meera...poor girl loves rishaan too much...maya can feel that...Rishaan lied maya...that's shocking...Rudra-maya convo was good...waiting for the road trip...

Sorry for the late reply Maria, well u know why I didn't comment earlier

Anyways a good update as usual, now that I re-read it once again I started to pay attention to some more details

- In the pub when Rishaan was walking towards some girl, Meera actually was nurturing hope that maybe this time it's her, she knew he could see her and he was walking in her direction, so her hopes weren't really unfounded, but yes bigger than this was her deep love and her desperation to finally see him giving her some attention, she lived in her illusion's happiness for few seconds because it gets all shattered as he walks past her as if she was invisible!!!

- Rudra also wanted to check whether Maya has really something for Rishaan, no wonder when Rishaan's PDA (L) was going on, Rudra looked at her to try to read her expressions, but she wasn't interested in Rishaan, rather in Meera whose heart was broken once again!! Maybe that will open Rudra's eyes too, to see that his best friend's daughter is suffering because of his brother!

- The scene in the car between Rishaan/Rudra and the driver, was typical of the Kapoor brothers, not easy people to live with 😆

- Maya was empathic, she could feel Meera's pain, the latter didn't want to show it or get into personal conversations with Maya, but Maya could understand that what Meera is doing isn't for her job rather for Rishaan, Meera simply just can't say No to him, the helplessness love can put you in, Meera is helpless because of her unconditional love, but it's not a healthy situation, and Maya tried to explain that but she backed off as she knew that would hurt Meera and Meera made it clear she doesn't want any interference in her life but again was astonished to see how much Maya understands Rishaan!! Definitely knowing this doesn't make things easier for her!!!

- The restaurant scene between the brothers was mainly business, though Rudra wished he would someday have a normal dinner and some bromance with his bro alas now they have a psycho criminal to chase, they need to get Maya out of the mess. I'm astonished at how Rishaan can switch from sobriety to inebriated state and vice versa according to his convenience!! he was analysing things quite logically during that conversation! While both brothers are intelligent, Rishaan was cooler while Rudra was imaptient, he just needed to get Shaurya out of their lives!! Rishaan suggested that it would be wiser to have a back up plan. Obviously Rishaan knew that there is more to it that meets the eyes, he knew there is some big reason for his brother's impatience and eagerness to catch Shaurya little does he know that Rudra is doing it for his soulmate, I don't think it would take time for Rishaan to discover this on his own, he is very perceptive!!

- Bittuji and Maya's scene was nice, he is a father and he is worried for his daughter for good reasons too! it's not about her coming late at night obviously more than this, it's about wasting her life and energy for a person who doesn't love her!! He will obviously try to take some drastic steps now, he will talk to Rudra!!

- Last scene between Rudra and Maya, I'll like it obviously even if there isn't big progress in their relationship but still "slowly but steadily" would be the sentence to describe them, I liked what he told her that she doesn't have to give anything back for the care and the help they give her, in life it's not always this way even if she lived for many years this way!! he told her that it's up to her now and that she has the control on her life, if she wants to get out of the mess, she needs to want it and believe it!

Now a small doubt what did Rudra make of what Maya told him about Rishaan?!, I mean that Rishaan told her he was the one to tell Rudra about her secrets, what did Rudra make out of that?!! did he make that Rishaan has feelings for Maya?!!!, hence Rishaan wants to make her stay away even if she would think the worst of him?!!!!


P.S : ignore any typos!

Great update, loved it 😊

Originally posted by: Anny90

Wow m first,!

Originally posted by: manna43

Great update.like rishaan n rudra bonding. Maya is confused n meera heartbroken.

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Another fantastic update 👏 Thanks for updating fast 👍🏼

Thank you so much!

I m really feeling bad for Meera. Is she really invisible to Rishaan? Loved Maya and Meera scene. Maya did noticed the changes in Meera when Rishaan started dancing with a random girl. Rudra also feels sorry for but not Rishaan. Bittuji is worried about his daughter, who is motherless. Who is Viraaj? I know its not easy to make Rishaan jealous, but i want a J Rishaan 😈

I am glad you liked the Maya and Meera scene.You will find out about Viraj soon. And a jealous Rishaan? ummm... we will see about that.😆

Rudra and Rishhan is on a date. Loved the brothers talk with driver. Poor guy scared of twisted brothers. Their bond is adorable, but both are so twisted that i did not understand most of their talks 🤪. Hahah! I am glad you liked what you understood. 😆 Meera collected information about Shaurya. He have properties all over india. But the house in pune is different, where he goes once in a month alone and also with family some times. I guess mystery lies there. He spend most of his teenage days there only. I have a feeling that Rudra will explode badly after witnessing evidence of Mr. Creep's paagalpan . What if he find some pics of Madhubala 😆 RK will go insane. Yes one can only imagine. 😆 The brothers plans to visit the house next day.

Maya was drinking,then Rudra tells her that he and Rishaan is going after Shaurya. Maya is disappointed because they involved Meera too. According to Maya , Kapoor brothers cant do anything gainst that moron. She dont want to put them and Meera in danger. Maya is really scared of him. And she has good reasons to be afraid of him. Is he really capable of troubling these wealthy influencial brothers? Why did Bittuji wants to meet Rudra? He sound paniced, Is it about Meera? We will find out.

Rudra dont like Maya drinking. She is taking medicines and should not use alchohol. Rudra is really caring. Loved Maya's complaint about him did not buy a drink to her even after wandering a few pubs 😆

I am glad you liked it.

Shall we expect the next update soon 😛

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Excellent update, love the brothers bonding, Maya is confused and Meera is heartbroken.

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! that was wonderful...I really feel bad for meera...poor girl loves rishaan too much...maya can feel that...Rishaan lied maya...that's shocking...Rudra-maya convo was good...waiting for the road trip...

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Sorry for the late reply Maria, well u know why I didn't comment earlier

Yes, and I understand. You don't have to apologize. 😊

Anyways a good update as usual, now that I re-read it once again I started to pay attention to some more details

Thanks for reading and re-reading, and liking it. 😉

- In the pub when Rishaan was walking towards some girl, Meera actually was nurturing hope that maybe this time it's her, she knew he could see her and he was walking in her direction, so her hopes weren't really unfounded, but yes bigger than this was her deep love and her desperation to finally see him giving her some attention, she lived in her illusion's happiness for few seconds because it gets all shattered as he walks past her as if she was invisible!!!

Yes. That's true. She cannot help but hope for him to really see her.

- Rudra also wanted to check whether Maya has really something for Rishaan, no wonder when Rishaan's PDA (L) was going on, Rudra looked at her to try to read her expressions, but she wasn't interested in Rishaan, rather in Meera whose heart was broken once again!! Maybe that will open Rudra's eyes too, to see that his best friend's daughter is suffering because of his brother!
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Yes, I am glad you noticed that. Since he has already softened towards Meera, it would be interesting to see how he handles the situation, or at least I hope it will be. 😆

- The scene in the car between Rishaan/Rudra and the driver, was typical of the Kapoor brothers, not easy people to live with 😆

That is so true. 😆

- Maya was empathic, she could feel Meera's pain, the latter didn't want to show it or get into personal conversations with Maya, but Maya could understand that what Meera is doing isn't for her job rather for Rishaan, Meera simply just can't say No to him, the helplessness love can put you in, Meera is helpless because of her unconditional love, but it's not a healthy situation, and Maya tried to explain that but she backed off as she knew that would hurt Meera and Meera made it clear she doesn't want any interference in her life but again was astonished to see how much Maya understands Rishaan!! Definitely knowing this doesn't make things easier for her!!!

Spot on JJ! 😃 ... Maya understands Meera but sill somehow fails to really understand her. She wanted to say something but then she didn't. About Maya knowing Rishaan knowing better than Meera, yes it does not make things any easier for her.

- The restaurant scene between the brothers was mainly business, though Rudra wished he would someday have a normal dinner and some bromance with his bro alas now they have a psycho criminal to chase, they need to get Maya out of the mess. I'm astonished at how Rishaan can switch from sobriety to inebriated state and vice versa according to his convenience!! he was analysing things quite logically during that conversation! While both brothers are intelligent, Rishaan was cooler while Rudra was imaptient, he just needed to get Shaurya out of their lives!! Rishaan suggested that it would be wiser to have a back up plan. Obviously Rishaan knew that there is more to it that meets the eyes, he knew there is some big reason for his brother's impatience and eagerness to catch Shaurya little does he know that Rudra is doing it for his soulmate, I don't think it would take time for Rishaan to discover this on his own, he is very perceptive!!

Yes, Rudra is impatient. That is sort of the very core of his existence. He wants things done. And Rishaan basically cautious... and suspicious of Shaurya. So, he doesn't want to take any chances.

- Bittuji and Maya's scene was nice, he is a father and he is worried for his daughter for good reasons too! it's not about her coming late at night obviously more than this, it's about wasting her life and energy for a person who doesn't love her!! He will obviously try to take some drastic steps now, he will talk to Rudra!!

Yes, he is right in his place. And let's see what and how he discusses with Rudra.

- Last scene between Rudra and Maya, I'll like it obviously even if there isn't big progress in their relationship but still "slowly but steadily" would be the sentence to describe them, I liked what he told her that she doesn't have to give anything back for the care and the help they give her, in life it's not always this way even if she lived for many years this way!! he told her that it's up to her now and that she has the control on her life, if she wants to get out of the mess, she needs to want it and believe it!

I am glad you liked the scene. And yes, he tried his best to get through to her, but let's see if she got it.

Now a small doubt what did Rudra make of what Maya told him about Rishaan?!, I mean that Rishaan told her he was the one to tell Rudra about her secrets, what did Rudra make out of that?!! did he make that Rishaan has feelings for Maya?!!!, hence Rishaan wants to make her stay away even if she would think the worst of him?!!!!

I left that part open to the interpretation. Though I know how he felt, but I thought it would be fun to see how people perceive it. Anyway, Rudra drew two conclusions from that information and I will just say, you got one of them.

P.S : ignore any typos!

Originally posted by: zelja89

Great update, loved it 😊