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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thread Four... Truly amazing, thanks to you my wonderful, kind readers!

This is dedicated to all of you that continue to stay with me on this bumpy, not so easy, emotional ride. Guess I am living up to my promise about one hell of a ride, aren't I? And you have kept your promise by being by my side. So a very heartfelt thank you from this writer who will be forever grateful!

Revealed, The story...

Marriage is built on love, trust, friendship, compromise and faith... but what happens to the relationship when a couple forgets these key fundamentals?

This journey is about a couple who has been married for over nine years and have reached a crossroad. Will they work on fixing their broken marriage? Or will they choose to go their separate ways?

Updates/Alerts:

Updates will be once a week depending on my hectic AD, but I will do my best! I will send out a PM's or follow me on twitter @Chokri_ASR

Please buddy me if you wish to receive PMs when I update.

Feel free to silently read, like or comment, everyone is welcomed!

The blog is also up for Revealed, if you refer reading there. CLICK HERE

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Index:

Thread 1:

Prologue

Chapter 1

Thread 2:

Thread 3:

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13

Thread 4:

Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16

Chapter 17

Chapter 18

Thread 5

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 10 years ago

Teaser - Chapter 14

Deep blue orbs steadied on her. Challenging her, sitting directly across from her on the kitchen island. The determination to not back down was crystal clear like the ocean water, gleaming at her.

Was he declaring victory?

But Khushi Singh Raizada refused to back down. She stared fiercely back, furrowing her eyebrow like an eagle, ready to take on her prey. Her hazel eyes narrowed, making him slightly shift in his seat. She smiled inwardly in satisfaction, not giving anything away. She straightened in her seat, making him look away from her intense gaze.

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This teaser along with the pic I posted last week, below, will be in the update on Tuesday! 😃

See you then, till then have a great weekend!

Wishing a Happy Father's Day to your loved ones!

Love always,

Jigs

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 10 years ago

Many congratulations on the new thread 🥳

The gif you've posted is just how your story reads my love. A movie reel playing in front of my eyes. Emotions and relationships sensitively portrayed, be it that of Arnav and Khushi or that of Lavanya and Khushi.

Accha now are we getting an early update to celebrate the new dhaga? I think a few days bringing forward toh banta hain ... say 4 days for 4rth thread ;)

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

Heh heh.. found it

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This is one of those stories that will stay in my heart long after you finish it Writerji. It has all the elements of a stellar story - warmth, love, angst, anger and erm... heat. Yes, a lot of heat. 😉

More than the story I am enamored by the way you have me wrapped around your fingers - Your story telling is at it's best.

That teaser has all of those I just mentioned. Arnav at lethal cutest best with a little one who doesn't have to work at being cute at all. ❤️

I, for one, cannot wait for Tuesday.

Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago