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Posted: 9 years ago
that was perfect quot..
though will be waiting eagerly for the update..
but can understand your situation..
take your time dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Jigs Hope all is well
Waiting is painful.
      Forgetting is painful.
         But not knowing which to do is the worse kind of suffering.
 
   
 

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Posted: 9 years ago
Jigs, it's Thursday night. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm already loving this. I followed "Stripped" and was literally obsessed with it, so for this one to already have me hooked, I know I'm in for a treat. Can't wait for more!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

Jigs, it's Thursday night. 


Yeah baby... it certainly is, and I am here...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Here? You're here?


And not there?
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
There's something so very real about this. 

Very, very real.


There is also something undefinably sexy about an angry Arnav slamming down on his accelerator. Don't get me wrong- I feel so, so bad for him... but there is still that inherent sexiness. 


This scene, with Arnav pouring from his bottle of Award winning Scotch and Frank Sinatra in the background. Sigh. This scene plays like a movie in my mind- it's just so vivid. You can almost feel Khushi relaxing under a hot shower- in my favorite outfit: sweats, fuzzy socks.


But the scene that my favorite of this update is them dancing. It's subtle, and his "dance with me" ... I can hear it, and then the silence filling the room after... Uff. This scene is set so damn well, Di. It's a sense of intimacy and nostalgia all at once, and it's really, truly beautiful.


Their sex scene- I love the moment when he kisses her forehead. And the very last line:


"But the cold draft lingered in the background, with separation beckoning as the sun rose"


That sense of foreboding... but with a warmth. I can't bring myself to let the foreboding overshadow this- I have faith in my Arnav. I pictured this update in my head, as if I was sitting right next to you πŸ˜†



Love always,
Your Choti.
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Posted: 9 years ago
This one is so special in so many ways my darling. 
When the ehsaas you've had for so long is far surpassed by reality :)
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