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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: jduke

I can register only hard and guard from above 🤣👏

Not to forget lying and driving and reward, Jay! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by Chokri_ASR - 9 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
#73

How cute was that?! Absolutely adorable! You so totally got us with that teaser my love 😆 There I was thinking of my blue eyed Arnav squirming and being pinned down by the eyes he loves the most ... but the honour went to his nephew.

I'm loving how you're showing the subtle changes in their interactions. It's not a trying to get back to how things were, but a more realistic moving on by learning and accepting where they lost their way. The thing I really like is that there is no petty bitterness. Khushi takes such pride in his achievements. She admires his qualities. The part where she says he doesn't have to change what makes him intrinsically him, for her parents sake was lovely. Respect is so essential in any relationship.

Arnav's dimaag ka kya bolun! Mission accomplished and with such delightful aplomb. The Mama Bhanja pair are utterly charming. A deal with a win win for all concerned. But what I loved was how you showed Khushi wanting the closeness as well. She wants to embrace it. She's slowly opening up and allowing herself to listen to her heart.

Can't wait for the "long drive pe chal mere naal soniye" The open road with the ocean on both sides of her ...

As for that "tasting" he's won ...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i8sJHnSPMPk[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
I legitimately burst out into laughter when I realized who Khushi was facing off against. 😆 You've gotten Sid so well- when he tells her he loves her and then makes a face and says "it's yuck" and runs off... sigh, he reminded me of my little cousins back when I could still manipulate- er... convince them into doing things.

I loved this chapter for the fact that their relationship seemed to find another part of what was missing. It's like they're completing a puzzle, you know? Where they have the corner pieces and they have to fit the middle in- it's the hardest part, but it'll be so worth it when they're done. That subtle intimacy between them revealed (heh) just how far they've come from that first chapter. I loved the spontaneity in Arnav's thoughts, how unapologetically admiring he is of his wife. It's as if he's seeing her for the first time again, discovering all those little things he loves about her. I loved seeing glimpses of Khushi admiring him too- like when he's playing with Sid, how she just sits back and smiles because she loves watching him in that role. She's rediscovering him, and falling in love with him all over again. That is what was beautiful about this chapter. As a reader, you can't take your eyes off of her either, because you show Khushi through his eyes- how he sees her beauty, notices the little nuances in her expression when she sees his haircut, the gentle teasing... and with him, you see her notice what he would be like as a father, react to that sexual tension between them... uff, it was lovely to see them do this.


I loved them closing the distance just a little bit more. I love the gradual shift in their relationship. Whenever there is distance, it does take time to cross it, but that doesn't mean that it can't happen. I loved the renewed warmth between them. It was amazing to see them through each other's eyes- watch them realize the little things.


Ah, I love your updates. They bring the biggest smile to my face, just like you do.

Love you hamesha,
Your Choti.
Edited by chotidesi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
for a feel good update...

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Oh my god, don't tell me that all that teaser about orbs locking was about milk😡. Damn you and I guess that is why I love you😃. Now before I get too investigative, can you clarify if that whole setup was about the milk or the kiss?:).

Either way, I think it is a good practice for them for the days ahead where they have to take care and rely on each other. Experience always makes you better and having a common interest enhances the experience. So many couples strive for it but rarely realize the importance of it. And just in the good old tradition of tit for tat, and I am not talking about kids or the milk😊, I am talking about the age old tradition called "kiss"😉.

Coming to the story, this was the much needed feel good one in every sense. You have hit the right note from the start with the description of art of making a kid drink milk. The old adage still holds true that a thousand lies are maaf for a marriage and a thousand nakhre are maaf for a kid to make him do what you want.

And that haircut! I think this is where you differ and differentiate from the others. How can you get so detailed even with a haircut? You did not even leave the trim and tapers out. It is funny that as soon I read that, the first words came to mind were "well groomed son in-law" and it was just a matter of few line when I saw you saying the same thing. I know, I know - great minds think alike and fools seldom differ.

As for Arshi, the one line that caught my attention was "a glimpse of his old Khushi". That combined with "his vixen", now that's a combination that is worth to make a move. He already has the haircut and clean shave done so he got all the prodding he needs to "sure, lead the way".

He better sign it, seal it and deliver it big this time😃.
Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Res?
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Oh Your Evil Highness! That was Sidhu with his Khushi? 🤣
That teaser was the best teaser ever! 👏

This was such a salve to those bruised souls - your Khushi-Arnav and us your readers.

I do believe that it takes courage to take that step towards healing; tremendous amounts of trust in each other to take that journey back. I am so happy to see Khushi take those little steps and I am gratified that Arnav can allow her that space and time to do it.

You showed us what good parents they already are... and how effectively they team together, picking and choosing their battles. It was bittersweet. Sigh.

Now, those shorn locks and clean shaven look.. What are you doing? Killing us softly! ❤️

And...
Oh You Evil Highness...
You left us high and dry? Whotthe? The tease continues?
I for one LOVED IT Woman!


Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Aren't I the lucky one today?
Got a place on the FIRST PAGE!
And that too without any cheating.😆

You made a fool of us!
The blue eyed boy was Sid.
Naughty girl!

I for one am very happy Arnav got his hair cut.
God bless him and the barber!😆

Cute chapter.
Happy days are back again in their lives.
And your readers are happy!

The feeding milk to Sid part was cute.
Very smart of Arnav to think up this strategy.

Playing with kids is the best stressbuster.
Arnav and Khushi seem to have forgotten their woes and have lightened up.
Loved this chapter, Jigs.
You made me happy again with this sweet entertaining chapter.
Thankyou.
Edited by 1chilly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Wow...what a lovely update...
Finally a smiling khushi...!!!!
I love sid...!!! And I love the way both Arnav and Khushi love him too...
There always comes a point in our life where we need to stop mourning or feeling guilty of our past...!! Exceptence gives peace...!! It gives strength to lead...move on and embrace the new..!!!!
I so love this phase of them... They are trying to move on...embrace each other... which is so overwhelming to read...!!
May this little night rendezvous bring the lost spark baq in their life...!!!
Very well written dear... sooo beautiful... Waiting to read more and more... continue soon. ..tc
Edited by sweety421 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Awesome.. Teaser was really a teaser... Just love that are trying to mend
Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Loved the update Jigs.
Finally they are moving in the right direction, moving towards love and happiness.

And for me the best part was Khushi too embracing the fact that they can work their marriage out and going separate ways might not be what is needed in their marriage.

I also loved the kiss challenge and ofcourse the bonus kiss. 😉

And LOL the funny part was the teaser. It was Sid and Arnav in the teaser. 😆

I love this Sid more and more after each update.

Parenting is one skill which is probably a inherent quality in all of us irrespective of whether we are parents or not. Arnav's trick in making Sid drink his milk brought a smile on my face.

Indeed Arnav and Khushi would have made wonderful parents to Pari.

Now waiting for their long drive and their impending kiss.
Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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