ArHi FF: Revealed #2 | Link to Thread 3 Pg 1 - Page 10

Originally posted by: canapoem

Aaj mangal vaar hai!

Arshi moment ka intezaar hai...

Revealed se sab ko pyaar hai...

Hey..! When will you update..?? Waitinggg

Thank god it's Tuesday and its Revealed update day! I need this to brighten up my day :) waiting eagerly :)

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Oh so he saw his wife except that Alisha</font>😡

Quite 😡

Originally posted by: shyamidutt

Thank god it's Tuesday and its Revealed update day! I need this to brighten up my day :) waiting eagerly :)

Yeah! I want an update!

Okay going to res on the next page... but need more than one spot so please hold 😃

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I feel totally and utterly overwhelmed at the sheer pride Khushi has in her husband's achievement. The way you've shown her quite literally radiating it is so so touching. The joy she feels in seeing his vision realised leaves me with a sense of wonderment at the purity of this feeling. I want to wallow in it with her.

Or just stand by and watch the interaction between the four friends. The unspoken care in each gaze, the underlying consideration in each action, the respect and love evident in their banter ... this is what friendship is. I want to bask in it.

You've brought out Arnav's restlessness so well. One that changed to eager anticipation at Lavanya's assurance that his wife was coming. Alisha 😡, but with friends like Aman and Lavanya and the integrity of Arnav and Khushi, I can say Alisha who?

Arnav's mat jao had me in tears. A request, a plea reverberating in those words. For me, their embrace symbolised the essence of what's important in the din of life. Each other. Giving and taking warmth and solace to and from the other. The turmoil without can swirl around without moving them. I know they will see it eventually. They can't not. Not with the invisible threads weaving the two to each other.

And then you showed the depth of loneliness surrounding Khushi. Pain bleeding out of every word she speaks to her Lavu.

As for her encounter with that woman in red (Red?! 😲 really?!) ... all I can say is Brava Khushi!!! Sei forte!!! It was her unwavering faith in her husband's character that allowed her to stand up to that woman. Fabulously written 👏 classy and very very effective.

But it leaves behind a dispirited Khushi. Hurt ... yes it does my dear, because you care. There's too much care there to just let go.

Brilliant, brilliant just brilliant my darling 👏