ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 - Page 39

Originally posted by: LadyR

' The idea is to write it, so that people hear it, and it slides through the brain straight to the heart..' Maya Angelou

This is what you do with each update you present to us.. I know you'll not disappoint your readers

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower

Waves...

Khushi:

"My baby..."

I sobbed quietly... Unable to contain my happiness

It was such a blessing... I marveled at it's loveliness

I hold you lovingly... With everything turning to tenderness

It was such a joy... You took away my childlessness

Arnav:

"Il mio bambino..."

I rejoice merrily... You took away my sadness

It was such a delight...I thank this blessedness

I await impatiently... You are my guiding brightness

It was such a pleasure...I am impatient with cheerfulness

Arshi:

"We're having a baby!"

We exclaim brightly... You are our hopefulness

It is such a euphoric... We feel blessed with goodness

We adjust deftly...There is a sense of helplessness

It is such a responsibility... We accept with graciousness

Arnav:

"Il mio bambino..."

I cry brokenly... You took away my happiness

It is with tears... I say goodbye with lifelessness

I despair silently... You broke all my peacefulness

It is with sorrow... I say I am missing your presentness

Khushi:

"My baby..."

I sobbed quietly... Unable to contain my sadness

It is so sad... You wiped away my rightfulness

It is with difficulty... I must bid goodbye prettiness

It is heartbreaking... My future is clocked in darkness

Update sooon. waiting desperately for it

Hey Jigs...How is it going?

Firstly, I'm so sorry...for the prolonged absence and lack of comments. AD has been quite hectic and I've just been sleeping in all the free time I get. 😳

I have just caught up with the updates properly. They have been a couple of really emotional chapters.

Coming to the updates, if I haven't said it enough, I love the relationship Arnav-Khushi share with Aman-Lavanya and the boys. They're like family. Always there in time of need - good times and bad ones, too.

I understand Khushi's avoidance of confrontation. I guess she wants to close herself off to any more pain and hurt or finding out that her hopes were baseless. She feels she has already lost Arnav emotionally and the physical and legal separation is just going to seal the deal. And, that is what she fears most I believe.

I hope she goes with her heart and gives their marriage and Arnav another chance.

Initially I had thought that the baby issue is one of, if not the major cause of the rift between them. Personally, I don't think a child is what makes, sustains or breaks a marriage. Here too, I guess that is not THE issue. The main issue is failure to communicate properly, I think. Emotional distance and lack of communication have amplified all the problems in their life.

Your description of their pain and grief is heart-wrenching. 😭 I know that they know in their heart that the only way to get through this is together. I just hope they act on that and begin with facing their demons, as Khushi puts it.

Wonderful writing as always, Jigs! 👏 Looking forward to the next update. Hope to be around more henceforth.

Sorry for this very late comment, Jigs, AD has been extraordinarily hectic these past couple weeks.

The last two chapters were beautifully written and very evocative of the emotional turmoil these two are going through. Very heart wrenching esp because these two love each other so much and each has a void in his/her life that only the other can fill.

The description of that room and their reminiscences were so heart rending. My heart went out to both of them. These two need to build bridges, reestablish trust and communicate. Sharing always eases your soul's burden...esp when the person you're sharing your pain with is suffering just as much as you are.


Awesome update, Jigs 🤗

Looking forward to the next...and of course, I love, love, love, this blue eyed Arnav :D


Loads of love,

Jen

Originally posted by: Mirabell

Waiting for a Reveal today.

😊

Writerji?

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I have told you this many times in the past week, but I will say it again- I am so damn proud of you. It takes a hell of a lot of guts to take that devastating, unimaginable pain and write it- and write it f**king well.

This was so poignant. It was heartbreakingly beautiful, that kind of pain that just leaves you with an ache in your heart and it feels good in an odd sort of way, because it was so worth the sadness. It brought tears to my eyes and made my head clog up and my nose run and it was all just so worth it because your writing was stunning in this.

The moment when the doctor turns off the ultrasound made my stomach plunge to the floor- I knew it, I thought I had anticipated it and yet I still couldn't anticipate the overwhelming emotion I would feel as I read it, how much I would just wish... You made me feel that! The image of Khushi sitting in the dull glow, late at night is still in my mind, with Arnav slowly sitting down next to her. Their conversation had so much crippling grief - the whirl of emotions you brought forth just through words... I didn't need a picture- you wove that for me, you took me into their room and made me feel what they were feeling.

I am so proud I can say that you are my Di. Damn it, I will brag about you because you deserve it for this update.

I am just so proud of you. You broke my heart with this update- but I love you for it because it was oh, so worth it.

Love always,

Choti.