ArHi OS: Every Breath You Take - Page 13

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bs1224

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Posted: 12 years ago

just came across the os and believe me its amazing
the way you showed everything was just maginfisicent. ..
arnavs guilt... him following her than the boy scene when he said he would protect her ...was just outstnding
well done
hats off...
loved itit was so beautifully described

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Luna

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Posted: 12 years ago

i really hated that ASR who blackmailed Khushi to come home. i hoped that Arnav will repent in the show. but we never got a redemption track. thanks for writing this. i totally loved the story.

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devishree

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely and beautiful and i loved it

heart rendering os

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Meera

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was really wonderful to read!👏

just wished they had shown something on similar lines on the show!😳😃

hey btw could u please give us one more shot as to how arnav would make up for all his past deeds??😳😊

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-chocoangel-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful ... if I say this to ur os it would be wrong totally wrong

This word can never be sufficient to ur os

Ur os was like a flow when I started reading it I was kinda flowing with it

Ur os truly an art every emotion nicely described

N those poetic lines god knows from where did u get this idea

When ur os ended I wanted to read more when it ended I didnt even realised

I wanted something more but still I m satisfied u ended the story with the new beginning awsum

Loved it to core

Ps: find urself a word appropriate for u plz tell me also

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MIT DEY

@mit0905

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Posted: 10 years ago

Such a wonderful OS...👏👏

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice OS. Ashu was so cute, when he said he will protect khushi. Arnav realized his mistake and let khushi go. I liked the ending too. Nicely written.

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