ArHi OS: Every Breath You Take

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Good job! Still a bit sad though!

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

wow awsuuum os dear...really loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

jst read dis AND I LOVED IT...d part wen dey shake hands n arnav's last thot...mindblowing i tell u...thnku for pming me...plzzz continue writin n pming me d updates...thnx...luvya😃😊⭐️

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

heeheheheheheheheheheheh😆 she caught him! that was awesome and duhh, expected. i mean dude you think you're smart which u kind of are, but khushi is sooo much smarter than you! he should've figured it out that she knew when she went all thinking for some time.!

really cute! i loved the last part, and the part with the kid! things like this make me wanna have a brother 😳 awwwiee

i loved how arnav finally let her go, hoping she would return, pining for it but yet not forcing her to do something she wouldn't do it.

amazing OS! really cute i loved it :D :D

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

I discovered your writing index through your signature pics of AFR!!! What a beautiful man. I swear I imagine him in every fiction, all thanks to the Chain Series. Anyways, your fiction holds some semblance to reality. If you were to start break off a marriage such as of Arnav's and Khushi, a fresh start is very intriguing and quite refreshing and our Khushi darling is the right woman to start such a chapter :)

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FarighInsan

@FarighInsan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Oh shit... This made me cry so miserably.. It touched my heart, hit some nerves.. And oh the song... :"( it was heartbreaking reading it in this context.. :( normally i just move my head and hum along with it.. Today i felt every word and actually cried.. I love how Arnav was sensible for once and let her go to sort things out on her own but i couldnt bear his pain and Khushis lonliness.. This was a great OS, movie like and beautiful.. im glad i got pm'd for it and got to read it, thank u so much..