Broken Hearts at the Garage!(part#3, pg.15 2/6)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I would never agree if someone says darkness conceals everything... life had been unfair. .. or something like fate being stronger!

Such philosophical statements would only mean one had given up upon something which was truly one's!

Inserting his hands in his coat pocket he let the cold of the metal touch his fingers it was the same key chain which acted as his lifeline all this years... the one which had Our Home MG engraved on it ...or say all his dreams locked to it... tracing the outline softly he stepped into the already dark conference room!

Today was just another day for him exhausting himself with work n earning a bit more money! But her babaji unknown to him had planned something for him... maybe a new beginning or his much awaited happy ending!

Dressed in a crisp office wear hair neatly done into French she was looking stunning in the light of the projector...

Geet his beautiful n forever dream!

He didn't blink his eyes in a fear to miss those expressive eyes which were cold now as if they have faced something more worst n turned lifeless... the dark khoel of her eyes n her pink gloss were the only makeup she put on yet to managed to stand out in the room full of men who were ogling at her!

He wanted to shout n yell his frustrations out but now he knew he was the one who choose silence then when he could speak his heart out to her and now it wasn't his place to claim on something he let go!

He didn't even realize the meeting was done n he was asked for input thank god he was well prepared for the meeting so the deal was finalized!


As the meeting ended Mr.Raj Stood up n greeted me after exchanging pleasantries he turned towards her who was busy in arranging her stuff n giving directions to her junior staff I suppose...


Excuse me Geet a please he gestured her to be by his side..

So Mr.khurana meet Miss. Geet Handa our Marketing head she would be working with you from now on this project...

He just nodded his head in affirmation lost in her before she could great or respond someone barged into the conference room like a tornado wailing loudly n clung on to Maan as he immediately cocooned the little life in his arms

Papa see Vicky chachu is troubling me... she complained with tears almost ready to spill from her big brown eyes she was still sobbing n her cute chubby face was all red with her running!


Dressed in blue flared skirt n yellow over sized shirt hair tied into a pony which was all messed up she looked cute rubbing her eyes to his tie...


Excuse me Miss Khurana one more word against me I'll tell ur papa all that u have done back home...


They heard someone shout from behind... by looking at the employees giving him sympathetic looks giggling to themselves he knew the meeting was just finished n he could talk a bit freely in front of his ever serious brother!


Papa! She started wailing again... to gain his attention


Pihu!! She uttered as a whisper merely audible but it was never hard to recognize that voice n that one special person in the whole universe


All the heads suddenly turned towards her Vikrant was as shocked as Pihu herself!


Wiggling in maans arms she got herself free n hugged her tightly never letting her go... quietly picking her up in her arms she walked out of the conference room pampering the little angel leaving all the men in the room rooted in their places


Second chances are tough n hard to hold on to... they have a baggage of past...pressures of today and also uncertainties of future...

She wasn't the girl who left her life for his happiness any more nor he was the same who would give-up so easily!


If she was tough n detached he wasn't far behind! Is it just the fate or certain someone's wait n constant nagging to give them their happily ever after ... Whatever it is let's get into the life of say dream castle of our Little Pihu Khurana Merrily built around her little family!

Geet Handa a strong working women who has achieved all the success with her hard work and a past which she had buried deep


Maan Khurana who rarely speaks or say lost his will to speak owing his own past deeds


Pihu Angel of our current story


Vikrant maan's only support n strength though they drifted apart thanks to maan


Geet's brother, SIL, Maa, Baba and scooby for the rest of the characters


we also have 2 main characters who will be introduced with the flow

Hay pep!

old story it is but say after a leap😉

I know I already have a story ongoing n it is shear stupidity to post this one owing my busy schedule but its really been long n I cant ask people wait any longer so here it is..

Don't know for maan but I've surely learned a lot of things in a short lifespan of mine ... (short lifespan babaji wrong word hai na mai bhi na dialogue marne k liye kuch bhi bolti hun!)

And yes those who haven't read the first part, please do read😳 though there isn't much similarities but it will help u to understand the characters better

Silly Little Heart!!

And also this as a filler

Silly Little Heart! (#Sequel)



Next part when I know u have read this one!😊





Index

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey...!!
congrats for new story...
nice story concept...
already loving it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo 4 sequel dear hope both will find their happy ending but did pihu went with geet but she is unmarried will be waiting to read this story n i really feel bad for geet in first season
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskeeter

hey...!!

congrats for new story...
nice story concept...
already loving it...


Thank u😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drashtilove

congo 4 sequel dear hope both will find their happy ending but did pihu went with geet but she is unmarried will be waiting to read this story n i really feel bad for geet in first season


Thanks for reading😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

yes she did went with geet
clear nahi tha kya??😕
Thanks for reading😳


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Interesting start wonder why pihu went to geet what happened to her biological mother & how she knows geet for now I guess I will wait for the story to unfold
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its clear but i just wonder how they r so close so will wait to read story ahead n plz if possible make a thread of ur all stories
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya204

Interesting start wonder why pihu went to geet what happened to her biological mother & how she knows geet for now I guess I will wait for the story to unfold


Oh!
u've read it already!😃

chalo will give the next part tommorrow😊
Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thoda jyaada hi emotional lag rahi hai yaar..😭
I will get back to this when I feel I am ready because right now I cannot handle sad and emotional ones dear.. Really sorry to disappoint you..
May be after few updates where things get more clear and thoda fun aajai story mein..
Till then please excuse me..
But one thing I know is we are going to get another extraordinary story from you..
All the best..😃

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