Broken Hearts at the Garage!(part#3, pg.15 2/6) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ms.nautanki

Wow.. Intriguing concept..


Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: nanor

simply brilliant
loved it-

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: saro

Maan did something in the past...oh no... But nice update...

Yep he did!
Maan is the bad guy of our story

Thanks for reading! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part #2


Relationships are complicated n so was her day... After walking back to her apartment allotted by her company all she had in mind was to hit the bed n sleep all her heart's content but poor her when did things happen according to her will

Unlocking the door she found pihu n Vikrant fighting for the remote control!

Chachu plz u are bad cheater n I'll complain to maa... She said making faces trying to scare him...

Okay!

Hawww chachu... Give me or I'll cry...

She had enough for the day... walking in she picked pihu in her arms... kissing her fondly as she jumped in delight on seeing her...

Pihu chachu bad na come we'll play together. .. she made pihu settle in her bedroom n gave her the remote control winking at her... making her smile broadly!

She went to freshen up n came out to see pihu lying on the sofa all cuddled up into a small ball...

Chachu don't tell maa or else she'll send me off ...if I sleep she won't wake me na... she heard her whispering to Vikrant n quickly closing her eyes... she was such a adorable kid...that all u want to do is pamper her to no ends!

Sighing deeply she walked into the kitchen to make something for them to eat as it would get late for them to go back n have their dinner!

Geet!

Yes Vikrant!

U have changed so much. ...

Every one does Vikrant even u did ...didn't u?

He rushed to her hugging her n crying. ..

Shhh no crying... u aren't a kid anymore n men don't cry... now sit here n have some water... she said making him sit in one of the chairs of the dining table handing him a glass of water. ..

Pihu??

She dozed off while pretending. .. he chuckled

Uve grown handsome Vikrant... still no girl friends y?

Ignoring her question. .. he asked her what he wanted to for a long time now

Y did u leave us geet... y did you give up! I don't know what went wrong between u both but I'm really hurt didn't u feel atleast for one to think about me... it wasn't even a year of mom dad's accident that even u left me...

U n bhai only fake that u care for me

Vikrant!

Y bhabi u can't even bare the thought then I've lived it all this years. ... u both are selfish

Vikrant please. ..

Then come back geet to the place where u belong. .. bhai loves you a lot!

Ignoring his words she started mixing the dough ...

U know geet I've seen bhai always sitting in the lawn lost in his thoughts with one of ur saree in his hands for n no of nights. .. he always made sure all ur belongings are safe n intact.. even when ur brother n siL wished to move out of that house!

I couldn't understand anything then u suddenly disappeared bhai was more aloof n suddenly one day he came home with pihu saying he adopted her... u...

Her hands stilled in the dough n an audible gasp escaped her lips

Adopted??

Geet what's wrong geet...

Pihu was adopted?

Haan geet but y are u... OMG did u think bhai...Oh shit... I wo...

Vikrant please leave I need some time alone. ..

But..

Please..

Nodding his head in agreement he picked up pihu n walked out of the house leaving her alone to grasp and take in the new info she got from Vikrant

Y would maan adopt her if he was her biological father!

Questions which had answers buried deep in her past now the new question was was she ready to dig?

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How far did I push her that even after fulfilling their dream of getting bound together was full filled yet there wasn't any peace or atleast a bit of joy in her broken heart. ..

Yes he filled her partition n agreed on officially registering their marriage but all of it felt so mechanical like she was doing some godamn business deal!

She said she would go away from him after this project taking pihu with her... what should he do now?

He was still in his thoughts when he heard pihu wailing n sniffing dragging her yellow bunny along with her walking into his room

Papa...

She wailed trying to make her bunny climb the bed so that she could join him...

Looking at her red face n failing attempts he picked her up along with the bunny n made her sit in his lap cleaning her face with her hands...

Papa ... u are so bad u didn't tell me u get scared of sleeping alone...

Wo maa call n told me that papa gets scared n be with you ...u didn't tell me... she said pouting

pihu u called maa this late. ...

No papa I was sleeping in with maa but stupid chachu brought me back. .. n I cried so maa called she completed grinning!

Putting her to sleep he gave into his tired eyes waiting to see what the next day brings!

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Geeet!!

Meera y are you shouting the neighbours will start complaining!

U know geet I've got such a good gossip to share with you. .. u will never believe me...

Now move y are u standing at the door I'm hungry here... and yes wash your face there is something red on ur head...

Wow kya baat hai parathe nice...

Ok geet we'll talk tomorrow n I've booked tickets for the new Friday release keep your self free good night!

Shaking her head at her unpredictable friend she made her way to her bedroom to catch some sleep!

So that was meera for u guys. .. she will work with geet n stay with her she is important n how u will know about it in the next update. ..




To be continued. ...







Extremely sorry for the delay but wanted to complete my other story before moving to this one... anyway that has only a couple of updates more so please bare with me...

-spoorthi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update.. pihu was adopted.. why maan adopted her and why he dont tell geet about that.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing story...
Pihu is so cute..haven't read the first season...now I m going to read 1st season too...
Plzz add me in ur pm list..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Finally im reading the sequel
now is maan married already
how come pihu is his daghter?
so many questions r thr
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: annirogc

amazing update.. pihu was adopted.. why maan adopted her and why he dont tell geet about that.. waiting for next part


Actually I have my set of questions too for maanšŸ˜†
But I being the writer couldn't ask them so tough luck

Thanks for reading! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: diyadecember

Finally im reading the sequel
now is maan married already
how come pihu is his daghter?
so many questions r thr


Yes he is married now I think with this update even geet isšŸ˜‰

Yaar questions tho I'll ask how come you are online
Y aren't you at work

N thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: -tashuu-

Amazing story...

Pihu is so cute..haven't read the first season...now I m going to read 1st season too...
Plzz add me in ur pm list..


Thanks for reading! 😊
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