Broken Hearts at the Garage!(part#3, pg.15 2/6) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks😳
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Part #1

Maa n baba went to some relatives wedding n would be back only after a week even though I know if I ask her to stay with us she would agree but after what I did to her I know at least now I should stop taking decisions for her!

It always broke me when ever I heard maa talking to geet trying to convince her to get married all those calls only ended in bitter arguments!

Every passing day only showed me how much the people around me loved me n how I wronged them!

But today after all this years when she's back even though it's against her will I'll make sure she gets the happiness which she deserves!

Determined of what he has to do he walked into his office. .. the scene before him left him speechless. .. this was one such moment he dreamt of all this years where his angel would get pampered by her!

Pihu was rolling on the couch pleading her to stop as geet was tickling her...

Maa please ... maa sorry na please he he he...

Acha so soon never...

Both were lost in their own world even to realise his presence. .. shaking his head he walked to his desk n started working on his laptop!

It was after hearing someone knock the door both of them looked up sensing my presence. ..

Papa... maa is troubling me... she came running to me trying to climb on my lap biting her upper lip... giving me an innocent look!

It was vickey who entered!

Pihu come lets go out n remember we planned a ice cream party right!

He picked up pihu not even looking at geet n walked out closing the door behind... leaving us alone...

she straightening her cloths came n sat opposite to me looking directly into my eyes confidentiality!

After a bit of silence

So I'm pihu's maa! Right sir?

Which means your wife... Since we aren't married yet am I ur keep or something!

GEET!

Wow sir... u can talk. .. I'm so glad to hear from you!...

Her eyes were accusing me for the separation for all this distance I put between us... which were filled with unshed tears... I couldn't even look into her eyes anymore. ..

Don't just don't turn ur face away from me sir!

This time it would be me who decides of our future. .. walking around the table she came close to me too close for me to mask my emotions too close for me to push her away!

It's today n now u have to marry me!

Geet! I tried to touch her... trying to comfort her... But she stepped back! What is running in her mind... what is she talking!

You heard me Mr.khurana! Today u have to face ur past ... you have to face me... y sir u wanted me to move on right. .. that's y u searched for all those grooms n convinced maa too... then hear me out too... This is was n will be our story. .. possessive or mad what ever you call it!

I know This Maan Singh Khurana is only mine!

But geet please listen to me at least once...

No not anymore!

I've waited enough for u to hear a word from u... she said slumping on the near my chair breaking into tears... looking at her so defeated I let my guards down!... waking to her I got down on my knees with shivering hands I tried to touch her!

No... no... sir u can't touch me... there is more to it! U will marry me filling my mang with vermillion but it would be only between us... n don't even think I'm doing this for u... this is for my daughter. .. n my own self as I can't see myself with someone else!

We will only be professionals working on some godamn project n I'll leave with my daughter as I came... that's the end of it!

Geet how could you talk like that... n where will u go this is ur family jaan!

Sorry sir... but u ur self took away that right from me... so please...

She held out her hand which was bleeding with fresh cut in the center of the palm... which had the sacred blackbeaded chain(mangalsutra)hanging



To Be Continued. ..



Hay pep!
Haww... my thread. ..it feels so good. .. twist in the tale😈
I'm going to take full revenge on maan for what he had done to geet!

Let me know if u are with me...😊

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice update
I just finished reading the first season and I am really angry at Mann. How could he do that to Geet. I like how Geet sternly asked him to Marry her. I want her to be Pihu's mom only. And not Mann's wife. She need to teach him a lesson for doing this to her. If you plan to take revenge on Mann thn I am with u. I need him to be punished badly. Don't allow him to touch her. He dont deserve her.
Edited by ChocBrownies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intriguing Story

So Maan and Geet has a past ...something happened
but they have a little girl and were they perhaps married before but according to my understanding it seems they were not married but how come Maan has the little girl ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
geet faced a lot
loved when geet said her decision firmly
loved it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChocBrownies

Very nice update

I just finished reading the first season and I am really angry at Mann. How could he do that to Geet. I like how Geet sternly asked him to Marry her. I want her to be Pihu's mom only. And not Mann's wife. She need to teach him a lesson for doing this to her. If you plan to take revenge on Mann thn I am with u. I need him to be punished badly. Don't allow him to touch her. He dont deserve her.



Thank you😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Intriguing Story

So Maan and Geet has a past ...something happened
but they have a little girl and were they perhaps married before but according to my understanding it seems they were not married but how come Maan has the little girl ...


They were not married in the past
N about pihu wait a bit more😳

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting update! Well written! Maaneet have a past! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --mittu--

Nice update
geet faced a lot
loved when geet said her decision firmly
loved it!!


Thank you for reading! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

interesting update! Well written! Maaneet have a past! update soon


They do have one!
Thanks for reading! 😳

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