Silly Little Heart! (#Sequel)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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When you are dead tired n still got so much to do... When u know in few minutes it's going to be an other day ... full of pressures n stressed with responsibilities ... What would one do on such a lonely night where sleep is a far of dream ?

Touching the glass frame on his side table he was trying to smile looking at her beautiful pic...

Somethings happen out of our control n few of those things are beyond any repair. .. they change the whole perspective of the way u look at things ... once u might just have captured a image just for the sake of it but u never know when it becomes ur lifeline. ...

Strolling in the gardens in the middle of the nights irrespective of the harsh weather has become one of his hobbies. ..

Life moves on they say yes it did but did it really was the question?

Today was a shocking day of course it will be a shocking one as they were again standing in front of eachother... The eyes which would shy away in his gaze held no expression neither of happiness nor of pain... as if they have lost the whole ability dream...

She was once again standing in the same place at his maa's house with a arm stretched in front of him which held her whole life in front of him again. ...

No promises made no words said ... no complaints n absolutely no explanation neeeded this was their bond once... So pure n honest... that for a moment we forget it's far from reality. ..

He failed to realise she had seen the world which he wanted to protect her from. .. she walked all alone when she was craving for some support. .. time n the people around had changed her now she's stronger... n independent! More mature n calm... Gone was the girl full of dreams. .. now she's the woman of today! The Marketing head of the famous Raj group of companies!

Now she was back!

In her crisp office wear... n hair tied in a loose bun... n little Pihu khurrana clung tightly around her legs... Not letting her move... she suddenly looked so lost n uncomfortable. ..

As I took a step ahead she forwarded her hand opening her wrist. .. which had almost stopped my heart beat for few seconds. ...

It was vermilion(kumkum) n mangalsutra!!

Looking back to her face I found a smile which was mocking me n my decisions. ..

5 years 4 months 6 days to be exact here I start my story of Silly Little Heart Again!
N this one will be called Broken Hearts at the Garage!








Hay pep!

Ek chutki sindur ki kemat!!😆

Remember that dialogue ... It somewhere reminded me of it when I was typing this ... ok prologue... intro... Trailer... Or whatever u want name it... 😛

This one was for that one reader who was back of me for the sequel of Silly Little Heart! which I promised would be coming in September...😳

No..no..noo I'm not starting it yet but this to let u all know I've not forgotten it!😈

The sequel as I already mentioned would be named Broken Hearts at the Garage!😉

(Copy paste link for silly little heart!)
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4085568




Ps: yaar jab stress bad jata h na tho padhos wale handsome bande ko line nahi marna chaye...
Khud ka popat banjata h n u r left with writing depressing stories🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i am so happy for sequel dear
actually i am waiting for it
finally started thanks dear👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i am first to comment wow😃
but wt geet married to whom🤔
waiting for more dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I m happy u start this squeal.
Waiting 4 nxt update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramahesh

i am first to comment wow😃
but wt geet married to whom🤔
waiting for more dear


Lots n lots of questions h na!!
But this time we'll meet inthe thread of Broken Hearts at the Garage! 😃
Hopefully that thread will have ur answers!😉

Thanks for waiting!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat59

I m happy u start this squeal.
Waiting 4 nxt update.

Meri pyari chahat!
Tum ne as usual mera note miss kardiya!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on the sequel! Geet married?? update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on the sequel! Geet married?? update soon


Will try!😊

Thanks for waiting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for waiting🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful start of the sequel..😃
full of impact, when they faced each other...He has spent nights in her memory and now seeing her married...
I liked that we are seeing it from his POV, and wish it will be maintained in future updates..
and though I have a little soft corner for the previous title, I liked the new title as well, broken hearts at the garage, waiting to know how they will play the role of mechanic to repair it..
so many questions, but will wait for the updates..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago

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