Battered Hearts|| Chapt 3 page 3 Updated 08/03

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Index

Chapter 1 - Scroll down

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Prologue is scary

I hope it's not Maan. Geet in so much pain and the guy not letting her go.

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Part-1

Geet is so sweet. She is always helping Maan rather than judging him and Maan is also somewhere attracted towards her but not letting his feelings live with himself.

It's Maan right. He is wearing jacket in this part and even in prologue Geet wore jacket before running away.

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prologue

congrats for new story

scary n interesting

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very nice update

geet is lively person

geet never corner some one if that person like to stay alone

never judge any one in bad way

geet respect maan's way of living n give her support without asked by him

maan has very difficult family surrounding making him live only life apart from others

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Great start to a intriguing story! Thank you! The prologue is so disturbing and I think I can sense what is going to come of Geet’s kindness. From Chapter 1, I feel sorry for Maan. We all know of someone like Maan in university, well I do remember some like him. Those who were a bit different and just always seemed to be on their own. Then there was always those like Geet and myself, whom always made an effort to be nice and kind. Geet has a big heart and she is making an effort to help the broody Maan. Let’s hope her kindness of this loner does not result in her regretting ever being nice to him. This world is a hard place for some and the saying that never judge anyone is so true as we don’t know everyone’s story. Being kind and loving to all, including everyone in groups especially new people, can make the world of difference to them. Thank you for the story!

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Prologue is Curious and yet holds possession

the man Geet is with is it Dev or Maan ?

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Chapter 1

Fierce and Admiral Chapter

Maan seeing the close friends Geet,Khushi,Arnav and Dev

he also notices Geet's laughter while Maan been a loner not by choice

but by fate and circumstances

Maan and Geet are partners in a project and seems like slowly Maan is warming up

to Geet .


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