Ankahein Rishtoon Mein Andekhi Ansuni Najdikiyaan AR FF

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ankahein Rishtoon Mein Andekhi Ansuni Najdikiyaan

I don't know how to start to just saying it casually about an incident that...

I'm not a writer...not even a good story teller...
As some of my friends never ask me anything in details coz they think I give unusual description even a very small thing... Like putting on safety pin... Actually they think like this
They always said me as like ek safety pin lagane k waqt boht carefully sab dekhke then remember in every details kam karni hoti hai mujhe kuch puchne par bhi main aise hi every small details with expression explain karne beith jati hu...
To it's a very bad idea for me to write...
But still I took that risk for some very special persons request for some very important persons...
Kya occasion for that I start write that I'll tell all of u laterπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
I love all of them a lot and in this occasion I want to tell they how they all mean to me that I took this dangerous dare devil task for them...
As I believe friendship me favor ki koi jagah nhi hoti to as favor ki koi jagah nhi hai to uske liye thanks k jagah kaise ho sakta hai...right...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Abhi I wanted to talk something about them...

But ha I won't take anyone's name still I know they will got to know for whom I said what...πŸ˜‰
Well in sabko to main in order nam le nhi sakti to I thought unke sath mere mulakat ki according order kar lu... :p

Starting with the person I love so so so much...My APU

Apu u know how much u help me to write this story use describe karne jaungi to story start hi nhi hogi...

Akhir apko to pata hi hai main kitna bolti hu...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Ab apne itna help kiya to ek love u song to banta hai ki nhi...

Kaate Nahi Katate Ye Din Ye Raat
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Lo Aaj Main Kehta Hoon I Love You
I Love You, I Love You

Then comes the person who encourage me & suggest me to write first...

Hey bubble girl...to ab apko pata chal gaya hai ye ap ho to..i wanted to say that u encourage me that's why I started to write & how much u help u in it wo to bolna shuru karungi to...bas itna kehna hai that I love u a lot...in my style kahu to...

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai
Jane kya kar Gaye
Jaise andheron mein tum
Chandani Bhar gaye
Kare Chand tarron ko
MAshoor Itna Kyun
Kambakht Inse bhi
khoobsurat hai tu
I love you Tu ru ru
Hmm no re yeah yeah
I love you U u yeah yeah
I love you yeah yeah yeah

Here come RJ

Tu to yeh post dekhte hi muh pe hat agayi shayed ab tak...
To thand rakh abhi se yeh halat hai to tu ff padegi kaise...
So thodi surprise ff k liye bhi bacha k rakhna janemaan...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
And wo ff likhne me tune bhi kafi help ki anjane me hi sahi who tujhe baad me pata chalegi kya help thi...To isi baat pe...


Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo
Na yakeen aaye to phir
Na yakeen aaye to phir dil badalkar dekh lo

Here my partner...

Tujhe pata to nhi hai tune kitna help kiya but ab jab main post kar rhi hu tujhe patachal hi jayegi...
Before u got all confused how u help & all
Who main baad me batungi...
Waise ek baat bata kaisa laga surprise
I know kafi unexpected surprise thi naπŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Chal isi baat pe ek song ho jaye...

Do U Wana Partner
O Partner
Love Me Love Me Say...

Now now maine sabko sab kuch keh diya ha...ek baat aur sab achi se sun lo mujhe lambi comments chahiye for every part sabse nhi mang rhi hu coz sab par itna haq nhi hai ki haq jatau but ap 4 on per to hai na...

I mean apu,bubble,rj & partner...

So ap tino sun lo ap me se kisi ek ka bhi comment miss hui to next update nhi mile.πŸ˜‰.
Agar abhi soch rhi ho koi jabardasti hai kya to batadu...
Yes jabardasti hi hai akhir itni time nikal kar ap sab k liye likha hai is bechari ki birthday gift samajh kar hi jaldi jaldi comment kar dena...plzzz
Abhi boht bate Karli aur jo bhi want to read all this bakwaas writing u all are warmly welcome...

And plz do criticize of it...
Praise ka pata nhi but criticize kar doge ap sab toh hi main khush ho jaunga...
Aur ha jate jate ek aur frnd ki baat yaad agayii...

Ayu u also include here...
Alll i want to say jate jate tere liye bhi ek song..

Aaja main hawaon pe bithake le chalu
Tu hi to Tu hi to meri dost hain


It's a treat from me for all of u ab yeh achi hai ya buri yeh ap sabko decide karni hogi...



INDEX:

Little note For those who wants pm
Part 1 :Page 1
Note Before Part 2
Part 2 :Page 3
Part 2 continues..:Page 4
Part 3 :Page 7
Part 3 continues:Page 7
Part 4 :Page 9
Part 5 :Page 11
Part 6 :Page 13
Part 7 :Page 14
Little note before Part 8:Page 16
Part 8 :Page 17
Part 9 :Page 19
Part 10:Page 24
Part 11:Page 27
Part 12:Page 29
Part 13:Page 32
Part 14:Page 35[Holi special]
Part 15:Page 36[Holi special]
Part 16:Page 38[Holi special]
Part 17:Page 39[Holi special]

Part 18:Page 40
Part 19:Page 41
Part 20:Page 42
Part 21:Page 43
Part 22:Page 45
Part 23:Page 46
Part 24:Page 47[A]
Part 24:Page 47[B]
Part 25:Page 48
Part 26:Page 49[A]
Part 26:Page 49[B]
Part 27:Page 50
Part 28:Page 53
Part 29:Page 54
1st Ever Promo😳:Page 55
Part 30:Page 57
Part 31:Page 58
Part 32:Page 60

Part 33:Page 61
Part 34:Page 61
Part 35:Page 62
Part 36:Page 64[A]
Part 36:Page 64[B]
Part 37:Page 65
Part 38:Page 65
Part 39:Page 65
Part 40:Page 66[last part]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here goes the story about to begin...
Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha ha, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai, Aur Isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahunchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain, yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhad hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga.
Iske liye authority ya ni ki writer ya ni ki main uske liye jimiddar nhi hu...
Kripa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekh lijiye...
Shukriya...
Part-1
Today I'm gonna tell u all a story...
A story where love is not limited in two lovers...
A story where love is not bounded only on lovers...
A story where love defines though family...
A story where friendship define the life...
Whose story it is...
Who toh apko pata chal hi jayega...
& one more thing thought to warn u all before.it gonna have lots of songs inside it,kabhi comentry k jagah songs...
So be prepare to read all this bakwass...
So starting is like this...
Little bit song galu then will continue...

Aao sunao pyar ki ek kahani,
Ek tha ladka ek thi ladki deewani,
Hooo, hooo, hooo


Now serious wala starting...
A very dark night
Everything is much more quite then usual...
All light of the mansion is dimed...
Background music playing...

So gaya yeh jahan, [scene shows the land and garden]
So gaya aasmaan[scene shows the black sky]
So gayi hai saari manzilen, [scene shows a very beautiful house...ab meri nazar me to house is beautiful baki ap dekho aur ap jano... ;p]
Oh saari manzilen, [scene shows inside the house...house ki description is given below]
So gaya hai rastaa... [Scene shows a rooms door and music stop]

But but but...

A story start wo bhi itni gum sum starting ho sakti hai kya...???
No way...
To usi peaceful night ki sari Peace chinne k liye...
Suddenly all hear a scream and all light goes on at in few seconds..
No no no...Don't stress from now...
Actual me kya hua who bhi sabko pata chalega..
But tab tak have patience...
Aur abhi is house ki kya halat hai who suno...
Opps...I didn't tell about the house yet...
Well then let's introduce this house first...

It named Heaven Hil
Even though there is no hill point but still...
In this house now-a-days people's happiness reaching on hill...:p
Confused na..i'll clear ur confusion but first introduce the house..
Housey darling meet all the audience
& Audience meet H squire housey darling...:)
Now the proper intro...
I mean serious wala intro...:p



A Beige colored luxurious building...
There is pool in front side and even inside and not to forget with lots of tree...
There are also some more pool inside also...
Background music playing...
Socho ke jhiilon kaa shahar ho [scene shows the pools]
Laharon pe apanaa ek ghar ho [scene shows the rooms near the pool]
Ham jo dekhein sapane pyaare [scene shows full view of house]
Sach hon saare bas aur kyaa....[scene shows the house from little far then more far then more fur finally blur and stop music and again got in to the description]
There are nearby 15 bed rooms with impressive interior in each one,
Every room have their own specialty in interior..
At the entrance there a beautiful door of engraved with various floral design..
Inside the house the thing first caught eyes is a very big portrait of two person...
In the portrait, there are a man around his 50's and a women around 40's siting posing like k3g pose
(I mean the way Big b and joya posed on the pic which hanged on SRK's house...wait wait portrait dekhte hi yeh mat sochna that their also broken family...Where sm srk hang their parents pic and don't look in it...well kya hai wo age paro pata chal jayegi ...now boht bakwass ho gayi...back to pavilion)

If u distract from watching that pic then u can see there is a big living room while entering in the house,
Where sofa kept in round basis and there is lots of space around it a round table before it and some magazines are lying on it and a big LCD kept on wall where some CD & DVD's kept near the rack. All thing kept so neatly...
If u go little before it u can see a dining space. And a bit forward a door lead u to a beautiful Kitchen area with all modern facilities and everything kept on its proper place.
In upper stair
At Right corner a library space with enriching lots of books and a study room attached with it
Just next to it a Gym with enriching different kind of exercise material and a game room attached with it where there is place for different indoor game
A small cinema hall where all family member can enjoy together.
It have two floored house and at the backward there is a big garden with different kind of trees
Nearby the garden there is a small basketball court...
& little forward it a small rest house to chill...
& for all this decor all credits for this goes to whom...main abhi nhi bataungi... ;)
The whole area in covered with lots of tree and kept so beautifully that No one can move their eyes at the first time they saw the house..
The beauty of house will be fall far back if it compared with the people lives there...
They are the person everyone adore...
More details about it u all will got to know with the story going on..😊
[Abhi sab bata diya to bad me kya pata chalega]
Now back to story...
After half an hour of that scream...
Scene is like...
We all see a door outside of which there is a space where sofa's kept like this...


And in this dark night we can saw some tensed face siting there and a person wearing a deep blue Panjabi and white pajamas was roaming around the sofa and just panicking thinking about what happened again and now what he have to do now to bring peace in the queen of his heart..
And as well as peace in house...
Coz after coming in their life she make their life beautiful and not to forget full of happiness and happenings...
Another person who was wearing a black jacket and faded blue jeans sitting on the sofa and observing his boss cum friend cum like a brother to him also thinking which might be happened this time and how to solve this new problem...
& in Background playing...
Yeh kya hua, [scene shows the tensed face of person 2 who was walking]
kaise hua, [scene shows the door closely]
Kab hua, [scene shows the clock showing its second minutes & hour pointer closely]
Kyuun hua, [scene again shows the 2nd person then turn to 1st person]
Jab hua, [scene again shows the clock]
Tab hua [scene again shows the door]
O chhodo, [scene then again got on 2nd person face again shows every bit of his face closely]
Ye naa socho, [scene shows the face of person 1]
Ye kyaa hua... [Scene again shows the person 2 and then music got stop]
Suddenly breaking the background music going to numb...
Person 1 (who is sitting on sofa): Thodi der beith ja yaar kyun itna tension le raha hai who gayi hai na use dekhne...
Person 2 (who was roaming around till now around the sofa is stop hearing his P.A cum frnd cum brother): Aise Kaise beith jau usko pata nhi kya hua hai achanak se,pata nhi aise achanak kaise nind se jag gayi & tujhe pata hai wo mujhse baat tak nhi kar rhi..pata nhi kya se kya ho gaya...[then mumbling on his own "mujhse baat nhi kar rhi hai"]
In background playing...
Iftedaey Ishq Mein Hum [2nd person ki face ki overview though the whole song]
Saari Raat Jaage
Allah Jaane Kya Hoga Aage
Oh Maula Jaane Kya Hoga Aage
Person 1 (Come near his panicking friend): Aise pareshaan hone se kuch nhi hota, by the way tune sabko inform to kiya na...
Person 2 (thinking for a while then reply in a low voice): Ha...nhi...ha...matlab nhi...
Person 1 (Getting all confused asked): Ha ya nhi...Tujhe pata hai na main kiski baat kar raha hu...
Person 2 (Finally let go this matter and looking down at mattress as if there is something very important thing happening there & tell truthfully): Nhi...maine use inform nhi ki,Wo abhi parso hi to gaya hai..Abhi yeh sab phir se... (Then looking back to his frnd) Tujhe pata hai na wo uske bare me kitna possessive hai...
Person 1 (Kept one hand on his friend's shoulder): Par tujhe pata hai na baad me pata chalega use to wo kaise react karne wala hai...Use batana to padega hi...
Person 2: Maine kab mana kia batane ko but pehle pata to chal jay iss bar kya hua hai...Dekhna yaar wo dono kitni der se andar koi bahar hi nhi a rhi...Wo thik to hai na..(Getting all more panicking)
Person 1 (Calming him): Tu pehle beith Ja...wo abhi a jayegi use check karke...
In all this they never realize one girl who was wearing a medium violet red kurta and ash color leggings and her curly hair left open and a stethoscope on her hand come out from the room and watching them talking..
But as this 2 guy realize this girl's presence they rush towards her...
Person 2: How's she now?
Girl: Chill yaar use kuch nhi hua..she is fine now...
Person 2: Ha...but use hua kya thi???
Girl (in suspicious eyes): Pehle tu yeh bata tu aj sham ko tu kisse keh raha tha that u both will love each other a lot and tu use chod ke kabhi nhi jayega...tu use apni biwi se bhi jayada pyar karega?
Person 2(with shocked face): Whattt...!!!!!! maine aisa kab kaha?????
Girl: Really tune nhi kaha...Abe to phir kya maine kaha yeh sab... [Girl getting all furious now]
The second person thought for a while and then gone on her memory lane...
He was standing near pool and thinking how happy everyone is and more than that how happy his love of life...
But no one's happiness can reach as top as his happiness
He can do anything for this new happiness of his life and thought on himself that how he gonna pamper that new member of their love...
In all this thinking he said to himself: Shona u know na how much ur papa loves u...ap bas ek bar a jao phir dekhna hum dono milke kya dhamal machete hai...
(In this while a girl cm with a cute puppy on her hand and seeing her husband go near her to listen what he is saying and whom)
Apko pata hai I love u so so so much apni biwi se bhi jayada sab se Jayda I love u & main apko chodke kabhi nhi jaungi...ek bar ap a jao phir hum dono humesha sath rahenge
(After hearing till this the girl went from there to her room and got on the bed & cry full heartedly and slept there only)
Here the guy is still talking unware of all this happenings...
Started again to talk with his upcoming sweetheart...
Not knowing what is happening inside the house...
After sometime he cm to room & saw his wife, queen of his heart sleeping peacefully on the bed lying on her stomach...
He immediately go there and change her position of sleeping
Then lied down near her...
And after nearby 3 hours he got up hearing his wife's scream...
& called up the someone immediately
Come back to present...
Here the other guy was gone to make a call after hearing about her health...
He called the other family member and some more persons and inform them about her well being except one...
After a while ending the call when he come back he saw that his friend was lost in his thought and the girl standing before her is getting all furious...
So in order to put all this thing in right place he moved forward and hold his shoulder with his right hand to gain her attention & clam her he called her...
Person 1: Muski...!!!!!!!!!!



Here u all meet our very own muskaan chadda:
Before proceed further here is little information about her not full coz baki ka ap sab ko story k sath sath pata chal hi jayegi...
Muskaan Chadda, confident, charming, beautiful...
Muskaan is a Gynecologist .Short tempered and talkative like as DMG.
But here she is not afraid of blood & all...
Ab for her kaha jay to...it's like...
Na jaane kahan se aayi hai
Na jaane kahan ko jaayegi
Deewana kise banayegi yeh ladki
Badi chhoti hai mulakaat
Bade afsos ki hai baat ru...
Kisi ke haath na aayegi yeh ladki
Ab muski k bare me baki ka details u will got to know later only...
Concluding though the story line...
Abhi k liye itni hi boht hai
Now back to story again...
As when the guy put his hand on his shoulder...
Muskaan look towards him...
Muski (still with angry expression): Dekh Chichhunder ab tu dimag mat kha...(Again transferring her gaze from person 1 to person 2) aur tu apni khayalo ki dunia se bahar a or bol kya kaha tune use...? Are yr tere biwi tere liye itni taklif utha rhi hai aur tu hai ki kisi aur se pyar...chi...Sare mard aise hi hoti hai bilkul fitte muh...kehte kuch aur hai aur karte kuch aur hai...
Meanwhile her talking was going on about how man be...
& here the first person again tried to gain her attention by saying...
Person 1(with shocked expression): Are ye sab tu kya keh rhi hai...pata hai na tujhe uski kya haal ho rhi hai...
Muski(Again diverting her attention): Oye rahul dekh ab tu phirse mat shuru hoja...
Meet our very own Rahul Garewal:



He is a young handsome, sweet and overall can be known as a person with awesome personality
Who is the P.A. Of the CEO of Hill point company ltd.
He is the person who can keep his mind cool even in very hot position
But the irony of fate cm
He fall in lv
Which made his whole coolness out in impatience
Yea he is in love and he knew that...
But afraid to confess on basis of rejection...
No one know about his secret love except one...
Now age dekhna yeh hai kab tak without that one baki ko pata chalta hai ya nhi...
Ab for him kaha jay to...uske halat ab aise ho gayi ki...
Ham Ne Vo Kyaa Dekhaa Jo Kahaa Diivaanaa
Ham Ko Nahiin Kuchh Samajh Zaraa Samajhaanaa
Pyaar Men Jab Bhii Aankh Kahiin Lad Jaaye
Tab Dhadakan Aur Bechainii Badh Jaaye
Ginataa Hai Jab Koii Raaton Ko Taare
Tab Samajho Use Pyaar Ho Gayaa Pyaare
Pyaar Hamen Kis Mod Pe Le Aayaa
Ki Dil Kare Haay
Haay
Koii To Bataaye Kyaa Hogaa
Rest about him u all will got to know later only...
Back to the story again...
mujhe pata hai mai kya keh rhi hu...aur tu aise statue banke rehne se kuch nhi hota...ab tu bolega bhi phir yhi statue banke rehna hai...aur agar tujhe statue banna hai to mai ek baat pehle se clear kardu yaha koi statue of liberty k replacement k liye audition nhi chal rhi hai to tere statue banke khade rehne ka koi fayda nhi hai...so ab mere time aur waste mat kar aur jaldi bata tune kiya kya hai...(now shaking the second person though her hand holding his shoulder)
Though all this blunter the second person didn't utter even a single word...
He really looks like become a statue of liberty...
Actually not liberty but can say as Statue of Heaven hill...: p



That's all for today...
Now I want to give u all a little quiz as u all can see I give two characters names & proper intro...
& there are many character left yet...
So the quiz is that...
U have to guess about who is the person 2?
& who is the queen of his heart?
Jab tak ap sab yeh solve karlo hum milte hai dubara...
Abhi to safar tha yehi tak
Manjil to abhi boht dur
Tab tak sab karna lambi comments jarur
Yehi thi kehna
Tab tak ap sab ache ache rehna
Laut ayenge hum phirse
Bas kuch hi dino k der se
And here for this part all galliyoon ki credit goes to apu, rj & partner ko
Mujhe galiyaan deni nhi ati to they help me in that...
So love u girlsss
One Non writer attempting dear devil act...
Rupkotha


Edited by Ruppkotha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reply to the NOTE :

Jhooti...
Tu writer nehi hai toh itna accha yeh kaise likha???
Writer ke saat saat story teller bhi ho... U know how????
Jaise tumhari story padna shuruki, aisa laga koi bohot acchi kahani suna rahi hai...
All the songs and the way of descriptions... Wow, maine toh bohot enjoy ki...
Mann toh kar rahi hai, bas padti jaun padti jaun...

Of course friendship main favor ke liye koi jhaga nehi hai...
Aur tu toh hai hi ek piece, log apne birthday ke liyeh dusron se gift maangte hai...
Aur tumne return gift de diya... Wah behena wah...

Arey wah, main toh list ki sabse upar hoon hehehe...
Hayye, me too love soo soo soo muchhh...
Oh really, yeh kaise ho gaya maine tujhe help ki :P
Wow songgg... hehehe...
Wah wah, kiya song gaya hai... I love it and I love u more :D


Now comment to THE VERY FIRST PART :

I told you, tu one piece hai...
Story start hone se pehle warning sharning de rahi ho hehehe...
Accha hai Accha hai...
Lekin main toh bore hogi nehi...
Main toh khub enjoy karne wali hoon ;)

Wow, yeh toh meri one of the favorite song hai...
Wah wah, kiya accha song se start kiya hai tumne... I love it...

Tu aur serious???
Yeh kabse hone lagi hehehe...
Phir bhi, starting was cool, love the way u describe the nite with song...
U know which songs is perfect for the situation always na... Thats really cool :D

Wow, yeh ghar toh sach main Heaven lag rahi hai...
Perfect introduction of perfect Heaven... Very nice...
Aur kitna perfectionally tumne house ka intro kardi humse hehehe...
Love u ji love u ;)

Wah, song ke saat saat, ghar ke har part bhi dikha diya...
Mast hai...
Baapre, yeh toh sacchi main heaven hai... Itna saara kamra...
Perfect intro of whole house...

Asli story toh abhi shuru huva na...
Lekin yeh kiya tu toh har jhaga pe puzzle khel rahi ho...
person 1 and 2 and now this girl hailaaa... hehehe koi nehi...
Aaage jaakar pata toh chalna hai koan koan hai yaha...
Yeh kisko kiya hogaya...
Lagta hai heroine ke liyeh hero pareshan hai... After all he said na woh kitna possessive hoti hai...
Hayye, kitna pyar karte hai hero heroine se haina...
Lekin huva kiya ta... Yeh ladki itna sawal jawab kyun kar rahi hai...
Chalo aage badte hai...

Oh ho, yeh toh misunderstanding hogayi...
Pura toh suna nehi heroine ne, ab kiya hoga... Poor Hero...
Yeh soch soch ke kitna pareshan hogaya apne heroine koh achanak kiya hogaya...

Hahaha i know woh girl Muski hi hogi...
Jaise woh Hero se baat kar rahi ti... Sawal pooch rahi ti...
Meri guess sahi hogaya :P oke okey maine naam bola nehi phir bhi I knew it was her...
Aur Hero Armaan hai aur dusra person... Hmmm aage bado hahaha...

Perfect Intro and song for Muskaan hehehe...
Itna intro se toh uske pure biography pata chal gayi...
Moving on back to story...

Baapre, Muski ki gusse aur baat koh sunte toh yeh pakka person 1 Rahul hai hehehe...
Woh itna accha accha naam aur kiske liyeh use karte hai right...
Hayye, yeh kiya hogaya...
Ek misunderstanding ki wajahse heroine toh bohot gussa hogayi aur uske saat saat yeh Muski bhi...
Poor hero uff Armaan ke toh pakka accha class le lenge yeh ladki hehehe...
See see, I was right...Woh Rahul hi hai hehehe...
Yeh dono koh toh har jhaga shuru hojate hai hehehe...

Hahaha, again perfect intro and song...
Wohoo, Rahul Love someone...
Kiya woh hai jo main soch rahi hoon...
Lolz, wohi huva toh main baad main naam bataun ;)

Baapre, yeh Muski bhi na...
Kitna bak bak karte hai...
Hero toh shock main hai yeh soch ke uske heroine ne usko apne aane wali baby ke baare main baat karke misunderstanding hogayaga...
Aur yaha yeh Muski, uska pura ka pura class le ne pe lagi hai...
Ab kiya hogaaa...
Hero toh statue of Liberty , oops liberty nehi, Statue of Heaven Hill banke khada hai hehee...


Mast part hai Baby girl...
Love from the starting to the end...
All intro and songs were superb...
Maine toh already naam bataya hehehe...
Phir bhi bata deti hoon person 2 Armaan hai aur uske queen of heart is Riddhima...
Galat huva toh bhi chalega hahaha...
Because I m not good in guessing game ;)

Baad main kyun :P
Hum toh milte rahenge din main pata nehi kitni baar hahaha...
Hailaaa, woh toh hum expert hai gaali dene main...
We too love u derrr saraaa...

Love u Baby girl...
Muwaahhh <3
take care <3
Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res πŸ˜‰
Unres:

Great start Aisha. πŸ‘
You described the story really well,

Waiting for the next parts,
Thanks for the PM.
Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyaa. . Intresting concept. . Love to read this 1ne. . . Plzzz continue soon. . .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: keenu

Heyyaa. . Intresting concept. . Love to read this 1ne. . . Plzzz continue soon. . .


Thanks a lot for ur reply
So should i pm u from next time?
If it yes then plz do inform
& thanks once again
Tc😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yep,its a big yes :p
plzzz continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jess2014

Res πŸ˜‰

Unres:

Great start Aisha. πŸ‘
You described the story really well,

Waiting for the next parts,
Thanks for the PM.



Thanks..a lot for ur response
Btw plz do answer the quiz also
& yea next part will b posted in a week...may be...πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for ur response once again

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: keenu

Yep,its a big yes :p
plzzz continue soon :)


πŸ˜ƒ
Next part..maybe in a week
Plz do take part on the quiz at last


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Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



Thanks..a lot for ur response
Btw plz do answer the quiz also
& yea next part will b posted in a week...may be...πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for ur response once again

You're welcome
hmmm...the person 2, ummm.. πŸ€” l think that it's Armaan,πŸ˜› not sure though.
But I have to wait for so long for the next part, not fair 😭😭
Update soon

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