Ankahein Rishtoon Mein Andekhi Ansuni Najdikiyaan AR FF - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

superb part

chalo ar m friendship to hui or armaan has feelings towards her to
rahul musk good going musk jealouse
now who is coming
post soon


Thanks a lot
i'm glad u like it
Well they r not actually friend yet
They are just got in a plan together
u have to wait to find out who is it...

N about post
I'm extremly sorry i disappear suddenly
Acually my term final started that time n i got so busy
I didn't got even a sec to think about anything else rather than study
But as it is almost finish i think i would post once i complete the part
but it will take few time
I hope u will understand n will wait a little more time
Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: palakajenian

nice part
loved how their relationship is turning
so armaan ko kuch kuch hota h rha
really enjoyed the armaan feelings for ridhz is growing
loved how all the time he is thinking of ridhz
nd ridhz she is cutest
loved her bonding with all anjy nd atul nd bi
nd how armaan is shocked seeing her bond with
but is confused too abt ridhz behavior
continue soon
loved the part


Hey tinker bell
i'm glad that u like it
yup ab dhere dhere sab hogi just wait n watch darling
I'll try to continue soon
lv u
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Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing ff !!
Loved all parts <3
Very well written !
Loved riddhima's relation wid shanky and even rahul n sid !!
Atul bichara having tough tym due to anjie's mood swings !
Loved d holi parts !!
Padma had bhang pakodas lolzzz !!
Earlier armaan and ridz only use to fight and now dey hv become quite nice to eaxh other !!
Armaan started to feel for riddhima :))
Riddhima bonded soo well wid armaan's family !!

Waiting for next part eagerly !!
Continue soon !!

And if possible den pls do pm me !


Thanks a lot
I'm glad that u enjoy reading it
But first of all i'm extremely sorry for this much late reply
Actually i was having term final so got extremely busy n was disappear from here for few days
Though i saw ur comment but couldn't make out time to reply
n i hope u will understand n don't mind


Btw bck to ur comment
I'm glad u do like all the relation bonds n holi parts

I'll try to update soon as soon the part comp[lete
N sorry for the delay
N about pm sure y not
N if u want regular pm of updates plz like the below link..


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Posted: 10 years ago
Its alrite dear :)
Do update next part soon !!
Waiting eagerly !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Its alrite dear :)
Do update next part soon !!
Waiting eagerly !!



gonna post in a while
just editing it😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
So here goes the story...
Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..
Shukriya..


Precap:
Kuch purane masle suljhane
Kuch naye rishte pass aye..
Kuch dur karne uljhane badal sa chaye..
Yehi thi ab tak ki kahai
Kuch purane kuch naye jubani..
Part 22
Next day morning
At breakfast table
All having breakfast while riddhima whisper to shashank: Papa maine jo boli thi wo ho gayi na?
Sh: ha done bas phone ati hi hogi hospital se..(just then phone ring..)see maine bola na...
Pa(who was gone to recieve the call come bck n say): Shashank apka phone hai?
Sh(left to recieve the call):yes..(then he left with the phone n after a while come bck n say) tumhara tha..
Pa: mera but they said Dr.Shashank gupta..
Sh: nhi padma they said only Dr.Gupta n tum bhi to dr.gupta hi ho na..
Pa: yea but..
Sh: No but n if padma its emergency got ready fast mere sath nikal jana..
While padma left to get ready fast..N others also left
Riddhima nudged shashank from behind: Kya hua??????kya gadbad ki apne phirse...
While shashank give a sily smile n say that the person he asked to call padma got scared hearing padma's voice n said his name instead so he somehow tackle the situation
Then both them brust in laughing...
Sh: So wo logo ki flight kitne baje ki hai?
Ri:11baje
While on other side
A guy in grey suit n white shirt ask on his phone : ok 11 baje se pehle hi i'll reach airport..
while a girl in green maternity dress said:tum kahi ja rahe ho armaan...
[well the guy in suit is none other than armaan]
Ar: Wo anji i need to go to london for some urgent work will be bck soon..(While atul ask what happened suddenly)atul i'll talk about it on office can u be little hurry up i need to do some things done before i head to airport..Bye evryone(then hug anji,bi n gappu n head bck to outside)
Atul also go behind him instantly as soon he heard armaan call him atul he know something happen so he follow him instantly..
At airport..
A girl wearing light blue n green anarkali with hair tied in one side loose ponytail come out frm a bmw n told to the driver:vaia ap gadi ko park kardo as pass hi rehna main apko call kar dungi jab hum bahar ajayenge(n then run towards the entrenss mumbling towards herself: aj tu gayi ridz tu to late wo bhi us idiot sid k liye usko kya jarurat thi subha call karke apni ram kathaa sunaneko opps ram se yaad aya bade mumma aur bade papa ki flight a chuki hogi bhag ridz bhag..

Well guys its our fav ridz
Lets see wo airport pe kya kar rhi hai

While running riddhima suddenly hit with someone making that person's coffee fall all both n both said together: oh shoot...!!!
Hearing known voice both look up to see n shockingly shout again: tum????
Riddhima recovering frm the shock first said: tum yaha kya kar rhi hoArmaan ????
Well guys this guy is none other than armaan mallik
Ar(think in mind wow aj pehle baar usne mera asli naam liya,mere nam uske muh se kitna acha lagta hai then shaking the thoughts aside dude whats wrong with u wo basket hai basket,tera dushman..uhmm not actually dushman. but mera pyar bhi to nhi hai...dude whats wrong with u?kya soch rhi hai tu?wake up,so finally coming out of thoughts he said): yehi baat to main puch sakti hoon i mean tum yaha kahi mere picha to nhi kar rahe ho na
Ri: huh main aur tumhari picha karu in ur dreams,main to apne sapno me bhi aisa sapna na dekhu..
Ar: oh really now...!!!
Ri: yes really...
Then they keep glaring towards each other when suddenly armaan's phone started to ring taking the chance riddhima go away while after finishing his call turn only to see there is no trace of riddhima anywhere..
He shake his head thinking about riddhima n go towards his destination
Here riddhima standing near the receiving people area wait for someone's arrival...

After 2 hours
Riddhima still waiting for those but their is no sight of them
Another 1 hour passed
Riddhima tried their number when after a long try one of them's number got connected just as soon as the person received all she could hear is commotion n line got cut,here riddhima is frustrated now so she got to administration area to inquire about their plane arrival when she saw there a small gathering as she got near but she could hear is some commotion

When she got more near she saw a guy wearing grey suit with his back towards her n other side a women wearing a saree with hair in one side n with only sindoor aur mangal sutra adoring on her neck were fighting instantly she realize who they are n after shooing the gathering got near the couple who was unaware of her presence n gathering is still fighting..

Riddhima pat at the guys back when he shrugged it only n then riddhima shout:hadd hai ap dono yaha pe lad rahe ho aur waha main kab se ap dono ki wait kiye ja rhi hoon..

Hearing the shout both of them look at each other n then at her then the guy instantly put a hand around the lady's shoulder n said: hum kaha lad rahe hai hum to bas baat kar rahe the haina(nudging the lady n signal her to act along otherwise both gonna be in trouble)bolo na priya
P: ha huh mr kapoor bilkul sahi keh rahe hai hum to bas baat kar rahe the(with nurbus smile)
Ri: Oh really now...choti ma,chote papa don't lie
Well guys meet Ram n priya kapoor

They are anjali's parents n riddhima's bade mumma n bade papa
Ram kapoor is a business men while piya is a lecturer
Well their character would be more like BALH
So their banter of love is the most common thing
Inke haal kuch aisa hai..
Ek dusre ko na seh pati hai
Na ek dusre k bina reh pati hai
More about them will got to know later


Ri:Main ap dono se baat kar rhi hoon atleast look at me...(they both look up) U know main pichle 3 hour se waha entrance pe khadi ap dono k liye wait kar rhi hoon n ap dono ho ki yaha khade lad rahe ho..Pure airport ko sar pe chada diya dono ne milke..Ab yeh batane ki kasht karoge ki kyun lad rahe the..
Ram act as if he got golden chance so he started to say: u know sexy meri galti nhi hai yeh na jo priya hai na usne...

Well guys ram call riddhima sexy as a pet name n riddhima call him handsome 😉 if u guys r confused toh

Priya cut him in between: did u just say apki galti nhi thi...u really know it was ur fault only...
R: Oh hello madam meri galti nhi thi ok tumhari galti thi...
P: apki galti thi
R: Maine bola tumhari galti thi...
Ri(shout in between): Stoppp...Ab koi nhi bolega...choti ma ap bolo

Then priya explain that priya didn't let ram bring ram's medicine bag where he used to keep all kind of medicine n just bcoz of that ram left out priya's book's bag where priya bring some of her books n thats the reason they were fighting..

Ri: Had hai handsome ap vul rahe ho meri mumma papa n bhaiya doctor hai so agar apko kuch medicine ki jarurat pade they are always there so u don't need to carry medicine ki dukan(while priya smirk n riddhima turn towards priya)N chote ma Ap vul rahe ho ap vacation pe aye ho koi library kholne nhi aur humare ghar me already ek boht bara library hai if u still need to read..(this time ram smirk so riddhima turn towards him n said) N u stop smirking..

While ram pout n riddhima keep going on about how irresponsible they been..
They both stay with head hanging down while riddhima started to scold them as if she is their mother n she scolding her child's for something bad they done...while scolding when she didn't get any response she look up to see both of them standing with head hanging down n looking extremely cute n watching it a small smile come on their face n then she hugged them making them surprised n said: i so miss both of u..
While they smile too n hug her back n they all turn to go towards home...


6 days later...

Its been 6 days since ram n priya come riddhima still manage to make them busy enough to not let meet with anjali on the other hand with the help of atul she almost finish the preparation for anjali's baby shower.
Next day is the day of function so she finally tell them the reason behind calling them n they were all overjoyed when riddhima inform them its a surprise for anjali n the venue is heaven hill while atul will gonna took anjali out for checkup n will bring to home till then all work will be done..
At time of dinner everyone was so overjoyed thinking about the upcoming programme..
At night

After talking with shashank riddhima got into her room
She sat on bed wearing a white tee n red short trouser while thinking about the events going on from last few days..
In gupta family its as usual routine with little bit added flaver of ram priya
N on the other side mallik family got lot in it
In these 6days riddhima almost visit 4 day there n hill point office for anjali's baby shower function arrangement, they still manage to keep it secret but one thing is that in all these days riddhima didn't saw armaan even once
N by asking atul,she got to know armaan will be bck on the previous day of baby shower though she didn't mind but still she feel something missing..

On other side rahul n muskaan till this 6days avoid each other as much as they could...
After thinking about how hard rahul is trying to avoid muski n same goes with muski riddhima chuckle a bit,But one thing is sure that she really missed her pertner in this six days,she thought how they made plan with her partner n make muski n rahul think about their feelings n laugh thinking their face while she suddenly jerk from the thought n say to herself: riddhima kya soch rhi hai tu...tu aur us mr.ball ko miss impossible...U really need some sleep girl so ja there are lot to do tomorrow n project RMC urf rahul muskaan confession will start tomorrow so get ready girl now Good night world,keep seeing ice-cream wali dreams 😉
N then she back to sleep


Here on other side of world..

One guy wearing grey suit n trouser with white shirt was having his breakfast n thinking..
There is a huge mess is his own life also
This last 6 days gone like a hell for him, he couldn't think as straight mind whenever he close his eyes the first thought come in his mind is that girl..
With whom he fight so much, irritate too much still love..
He put a break on his thought n told: dude chill u can't love wo bhi miss basket se no way..yeh kaam ka tension hi tera dimag kharab kar diya chill ok now chal beta armaan warna u will late for the flight aur airlines wale tujhe chodke hi india chala jayega.. Phir mujhe basket se milne me eek din aur deri ho jayegi...phir basket dude get a grip n get ready to go..
Well u can see with the guy's talk that he is none other than armaan mallik n the girl he was talking about is obviously his basket...
So after having breakfast n a good chat with himself finally he got up to go to airport putting his goggles making his dashing avatar more irresistible
Next day..
At heaven hill..
Evryone is rushing here doing there work even muski,shilpa,nikki join though nikki n shilpa specialy come from kalkatta for this n other one thing is there which will be revealed soon, n for other preparation shashank,padma,ram n priya are there for main supervise n from hill point sid n otheer workers come to do the other things even rahul n maddy also join them as it was anjali's function
Sid is making food for the guests but for anjali special food items are being made by padma n priya
Return gifts are being warped by nikki n shilpa
N riddhima n shashank is supervising the decoration inside the house while rahul muskaan are being forced to complete the garden decoration which they are doing with sulking face

That time riddhima come out to see how is everything going on when rahul rush to her n took her in a sidee to to talk..

Ri: Are hua kya hai tu mujhe aise kaha leke ja rhi hai?are kuch bata to sahi(as rahul was constantly dragging her in one side without stopping so she jerk her hand from his grip n asked)rahul, ab batayegi hua kya hai...??(while look behind to see if muski could hear them n riddhima saw his direction of eyes n follow to see he is looking at muski so she tell)Wo nhi sun rhi hai ab tu kuch bolegi??
R(whinning): Riddhima yaar kuch kaar main andar jake pops k sath kaam karti hoon tu uske sath yaha pe kaam karle plzzz
Ri(naughtyly): kyun main kyun karu papa ne sabki kaam devide ki thi to tu kar waise bhi mujhe boht kaam hai andar main to chali..(she was about to go when rahul again stop her)
R: riddhima plz maan ja na yaar dekh main uske sath yaha kaam nhi kar sakti...
Ri(witth demanding voice): kyun nhi kar sakti?
R: kyun ki(little stopping then start again)kyun ki wo mujhse thik se baat tak nhi kar rhi hai dekh tu panch baar ek sawal puchti hoon to ek bar jawab deti hai mere taraf ankh tak uthati nhi, kuch toh badal gayi usme(now lost in talking about her looking at her direction watching her working)na wo pehle ki tarah hasti hai, na bate karti hai,mujhse ladti tak nhi humesha kuch soch me dubi rehti hai,kahi kho gayi meri wo pehli wali sherni..
Ri(naughtily with a smirk): meri wo pehli wali sherni wah bhai wah teri wo sherni kabse ho gayi..
R(caugh a little for getting caught n change the topic): tu yaha kaam karegi ya nhi...
Ri(hidding her smile as she notice rahul kind of get flashed): nhi
R: tujhe bolne ka to koi faydai nhi hua(then left from there mumbling something)
While riddhima with a smirk think: fayda to hui hai aur wo kya hai wo toh tujhe bhi pata chal jayega but jab pata chalega to tujhe yeh nhi malum hogi kisne wo fayda karwai tere ko bus ab to sirf raat ki der hai...
then left from there singing... "Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya
Paana Hai Kya Khona Hai Kya"



That's all for today
I'm extremmly sorry for being miss india suddenly :p
I mean gayeb hone k liye I'm sorry(without few people)
As my final was started n I didn't actually got time to inform then got busy with assignment
Lots of work was have to done so hope u guyyzz could understand..
I know little short part hai but next gonna be little big
So I hope uske hisab se u guyzz can manage with this one
As nxt part will bring lots of thingsss
Tab tak k liye
Lv u guys
Milte hai kuch hi dino me... ;)
lv u all
Khuda Hafiz
Tc
Rupkotha... ^_^
Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress...maine dekha u had cmnted he.and thr we go..an update..
ress m 1st...yiipeee
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress...1st...update dekha toh thread khola aur paya ek update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Ress...maine dekha u had cmnted he.and thr we go..an update..

ress m 1st...yiipeee



Tu to badi samajhdaar nikli..
Mujhe nhi pata thi tu itni samajhdaar hai😉😛😆
btw congrats 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
super awesome
awww both ar are missing each other
and piya or ram i loved them balh
waiting for next part post soon

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