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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: palakajenian
resss ...
i know u r going to kill me for this but i seriously don't know main unress kab karungi [:-P] [;-)]

H@y Allah

m@in @ur tujhe m@ru

meri itni jurr@t k@h@?????????😉😛😆

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: RahilaBhojani
Hehhehehehhehe...
Ruuupppaaa darliinggg...
Pehle to idher aaa ... I want to pull ur chubby cheeksss...
*Rib crashing hug** muuuahhh...
Kia parts diyeee yr tuneee... Me to has has k lot pot ho gai...
Shilpa Sid kutte Billi ki tarha fight dishummm dishummm...
Sarey parts bht zabardast thyyy...
Yr armaan riddhima KO jaldi milao phir ye dono n fight karenge...
Majjja aa gaya ab jaldi se update kar
Loads of love
Take care

R@yyy

No m@in nhi @ungi

Ch@l h@t

oyye

Not my cheeksss

n don't u d@re touch my cheeks

Ch@ll h@t bey...😡

*hug u bck tightly*

h@yee

tujhe @chi l@gii

i'm gl@d

Tujhe ky@ p@t@ wo fight k@rengi y@ nhi

ok boss

i'll but m@y be tomorrow y@ tod@y

let's see

lv u

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: palakajenian
Unresss
finally i hope u didn't post next part
okay now coming to the part first of all hmm "kahan se shuru karu tapping finger on my chin"
chal start se start karti hun
first vo ladkiya kyn chilayi
to abhi ne revenge le hi liya from ridhz nd minni by colouring their dupata par bechara khud hi phas gya kyn phir as par padma order use undono ko shopping pe le jana pda or isi vajah se armaan se nah mil paye *pout*
BTW i love that *pouting pouting *of mini nd ridhz
loved how Shashank came first to manofy his princess
then the flashback of armaan hmm it cleared everything
loved how anjali introduced armaan nd specially gappu
aww vo gappu or ridhz ki bonding is cute loved how ridhz is making him comfortable nd how gappu introduced himself with his real name
lol gf bf bana diya anjali ne dono ko nd shanky also tease gappu
nd he shied away so cute scene
so bi also like ridhz hmm kahin yeh arranged to nah hoga let see
yaar yeh holi pe koun kaam karte h
ab is kaam ki or abhi ke prank ki vajah ar ki meet hote hote reh gyi main bhi *pout*
yaar yeh phir se hit n miss ofo agar armaan 5 min ruk jata to ridhz se mil leta na
jab yeh new entry hui to mujhe confuse ho gyi
yeh kaun ho sakta sid to definitely nah coz mini ridhz or shilpa itne khush uske ane pe impossible or phir new name rakha uska to main or confuse but u clear it that its rahul phir mujhe yaad aya ki haan vo bhi yo ane wala tha
hahaha loved how he put color on their faces nd
anji or atul how they r shocked to know see him their but finally ek mystery to khuli sab le samne
lo mystery se yaad aya sid ki entry wah maza agaya
poor sid sab bechare ke peeche pade rehte h
ok again ab main thuk gyi or mujhe jana h so agar kuch reh gya ho to ab main kuch nah kar sakti kynki mujhe jana h
bye tc
luv u so much
muahhh

Nope i didn't post yet so chill

M@in soch rhi thi post k@rungi but i don't think @b k@r p@ungi

Gh@r me guest h@i n k@l ex@m

ok boss @s ur kh@hish

@ww pout n@ k@r @ise

mil j@yegi dono

B@s w@it for the dh@m@k@

I'm gl@d th@t u liked the p@rt of g@ppu

But m@in kyun bolu k@isi hogii me@n meri m@rji kuch bhi k@r s@kti hoon

d@rling u r forgetting @rm@@n's profession he is @n photogr@pher y@@r

n photo rel@ted with occ@ssion

N holi is one of the big occ@ssion

Tujhe sid pe b@ri t@r@s @ rhi h@i

@be usne bhi to r@ng l@g@i thi n@

Ch@l mujhe bhi bh@gn@ h@i

lv u

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Hey everyone 😃

I'm bck with another update😳

Last Friday I was having exams so can't post😒

Sorry for that*without few people*

Now aur bore nhi karte let's come bck to the part...

So here goes the story...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..Shukriya..

Precap:

Mulakat phir dhuri reh gayi

Milte milte nazar aghuri reh gayi

Jane kab hogi phir mulakat inka

Baki sab to mil gaye ginke waqt tinka tinka

Aur masti bhari paal baki hai

Janne k liye part padna jaruri hai

Part 16

Mu(with shock): tu yaha kya kar rhi hai?

The other person (with shock): Tu yaha kya kar rhi hai?

Mu: sawal pe sawal na kar jawab diya kar?

Other person(imitating her): Badi ayi "jawab diya kar" tu yaha kar kya rhi hai meri friend k ghar pe?

Mu: kya bola tune tere friend yeh mere friend k ghar hai infect yeh mere badi mumman bade paapa ka ghar hai aur main yaha kuch bhi karu tujhse matlab?Tujhe andar ghusne kisne diya..

Other person (with shock): What???????

While Ridz watching them talking from far comes towards n said: Muski u meet rahul..N rahool its muski our another friend

Muski n rahul said together actually shout together: no way

Scene faded in their shocked face

Few moments later

Padma n Shashank was were checking on guests n greeting them at standing on the gate,Anji n bi was sitting in a side resting while minnie n gappu was playing holi in one side on their own while fighting n coloring each other, riddhima n shilpa was missing while others were standing here n there talking n enjoying drinks some playing holi also..

Here after doing up something shilpa n riddhima also come back while chatting join the other girls who are now sitting with anji n bi...

Maddy: hey muski sun..

Muski: Oy tujhe kitni bar bolu main tujhse badi hoon so di bulaya kar

Maddy (with fake laugh): Sirf adhe min ki badi hone se kuch nhi hoti

Muski: adhi nhi puri ki puri 50sec ki badi hoon

Maddy: Ha to 50sec me konsa World war khatam hojata hai...

Muski (turning fully towards her): Oye tujhe pata nhi 50sec me kya kya hoti hai?

Maddy: Nhi pata bol kya hoti hai(with damn care attitude knowing her idiot sister can't come up any logical point)

Muski: 50 sec me ...umm 50 sec me..

Maddy: Kya hua Cd player attak gayi kya behna ?

Muski: shut up maddy...tu kya bolne wali thi wo bol

Maddy: Well main to bas yeh bol rhi thi tune to boli thi badi hi happening party hai but it seems so much boring...

Shilpa (Who just join her with riddhima said): Koi nhi maddy let find popps, mohol apne ap rangin ho jayegi hum bas unke hi wait kar rahe hai..

Before they could say further Riddhima's cell ring n she talk in a while n after cutting it said: Guys i need to check on papa he said urgent hai u guys carry on once all guest will be arrived we will freely do some dhamaal tab tak u guys make urself comfortable..

Riddhima run to reach towards entrance suddenly her eyes go on in food stalls n next sec she know why shashank call him n what she need to do..

Riddhima reach to see shashank passing though in the entrance road while rubbing his forehead then stop then again walk from up to back n watching riddhima coming to him he started to go to tell the problem before that she said: papa i know u don't need to tell anything about that (pointing towards food stalls) n now i have a plan..but uske liye we need to keep mumma away from that area...n for that...(turning to face him then taking him along go towards other) n says guysss come up we have problem running up..

Anji: kya hua ridz...

Then she describe the problem n shilpa said: Shoot...Ab mamoni ko wo area se dur rakhni hogi kya kare...

Ridz describe her plan n everyone said it would be the only way right now n go to their own work as per plan..

Actually hua yun nobody knows about the food arrangement without shashank n as getting the chance he order all sort of food making it huge order double then the people invited n suddenly once while greeting people padma mention about food n the person how much gonna come for today's event its then stuck in his mind that if padma got to know about it she would literally took the whole house in her head..so as soon the thought stuck in him he just got frightened n call riddhima to found a solution before padma found out...

So riddhima made up a plan let's see it's working or not..

After a while...

All guest has arrived so padma thought finally she got some time she would check on the other arrangements as she didn't got time before to check on..

While all the gang was busy in packing extra foods on small packets which has been brought by abhi n shashank from nearby shop as much as they got so that they can put on that while some temporary servants also join in with them whom riddhima requested asking to help in promise of bonus money...While some of them gone to bring more packets..

While all were so busy they carry on with work even bi n anji helping while paces boxes n keeping filled box on a container box

But here padma coming towards the stalls the first one to notice it was gappu he run give signal to minnie by throwing a laddu towards minnie which hit her head n she was about to bark in while she notice padma n with shock turn to see who near her from gang n watch rahul she whistle towards him he look back n minnie gesture towards padma while rahul saw muskan was the nearest person to him so he found a flower n just hit it towards muskaan while muskaan bend n it hit right on her lower back part in he bum...

Mu(with shock n anger who have the courage to hit her on her back look back n watching rahul holding another flower): Rahul k bache..

But before she could say more she notice rahul signal her towards padma n in shock she look towards other to see sid was the nearest person from her she called him n watching it sid look forward to see who near her n watching shilpa he call her several time but when she didn't turn she took a water balloon n hit it towards her making it hit her face as right that time she turn around n she got wet over face n with anger look at sid but before she could blast she saw padma was coming towards her while someone stop her talking looking it she search for others then saw atul n signal him n Atul signal anji who signal bi n bi signal madiha who signal riddhima n as riddhima look back she was shocked n all were that time looking towards her to what to do next riddhima look at abhi who was standing near her n nudged him making him realize of the fact that something wrong this time all gather together when they saw Shashank was far away from them getting all freaked up already didn't notice padma so they plan something n got spreaded again...

Bg music start...

Ab:Dekho aai holi rang layi holi, [Scene Shows Abhi go towards padma coloring her n taking her in opposite of food stall]

Chalee picthkaree uda hain gulal [Scene Shows minnie join them with pichkari coloring padma while padma just stood covering face so not to let it on eyes n abhi put color up on sky]

Ri:Banke hain ghata mann jhum utha, [Scene Shows Riddhima while singing join them while dancing around them]

ang chalke hain nile hare lal [Scene Shows riddhima held padma's hand n minnie while dancing like holding hand spinning in round while other persons from party also join them in dancing]

Rang reli me rang khelungee, rang jaungee [Scene Shows here they are dancing while others putting the extra food in boxes was packing]

Rang gehre hain, abake saal [Scene Shows While padma about to turn towards that food stall side riddhima make her turn holding shoulder while abhi stand behind padma n riddhima show colors while singing the lines]

Sh:Abb hame koi roke nahee, [Scene Shows shashank join in while putting color on padma]

Abb hame koi toke nahee [Scene Shows Padma about to complain about so lot color while riddhima,minnie n abhi join them]

Abb hone do ho jo bhee hal, [Scene Shows riddhima skip from there n run towards the other where others were n help them putting in all the food boxes]

Dekho aai holi rang layee holi [Scene Shows other guests n all dancing around them not letting padma cove out from there not even have a look at food corner almost making her forgetting about that while Riddhima n others put foods on boxes while after a while abhi also join in]

Chalee picthkaree uda hain gulal

Banke hain ghata mann jhum utha

Rang chalke hain nile hare lal

Music playing on background...

While all food were putted on boxes was done riddhima n all look smiling towards each other then suddenly remembering something said: Shoot,Bhaiya in sabko chupana bhi hoga mumma ne box dekhliya to u know...

Ab: hmm but kaha chupay inko?

An: Par itna khana kaise i mean kaha rakhe?aise waise jagah pe rakha to kharab bhi ho sakti hai..

Mu: Idea..

Ra: tu toh na chup hi reh tere idea hai matlab bekar hi hogi

Mu: Tu bada acha khasa idea dete phirti hai phir de better idea..

Maddy: Guyss stop now muski go on tell tera kya idea hai..

Mu: Hum na ise table k niche rakh dete hai mamoni ko nazar bhi nhi ayegi..

An: Nhi yaar muski badi mumma ko nazar a jayegi hum risk nhi le sakte..

Ra: Dekha maine kaha tha na bekar hi idea hogi tere wali...

Si: True yaar,..in ladkiyoon me to dimag hi nhi hoti na..

Shi: Oh! Hello mr. i know everything phir tu hi de na idea itna jayada dimag leke ghumta hai to aur waise bhi food pack karne ka idea ridz ka thi jo tum logo ne hi appreciate ki thi n not to forget wo bhi ladki hi hai so better ladkiyon k bare me kuch na hi bolo..

Maddy: Are yaar shant ho jao sab abhi socho kya karna hai ?girls vs boys baad me khel lena..

Bi: Ha sahi kaha isne now socho kya karna hai...

G: Main kuch bolu...

Everyone ignore while ridz bend down on her knees n said: boyfriend we will solve it tension na lo waise thanks for the help before

G: But i have an idea

Ri:ok bf bolo...

G: Ap log ek kaam kyun nhi karte put them on car she will not gonna check there...n jab u guys free u can think what can do with it..

Ri: Wow that's an excellent idea thanks bf..Tumne sabit kardiya maine bilkul sahi ladka chuna mere liye(then she give a kiss at his cheek n got up)

Riddhima then tell the plan n said: Now put the food box's on car's seat baki we will see later..

Shi: But ridz itni sari box ek car me nhi hogi

Maddy: Don't worry mere car me bhi rakh sakte ho aplog..

Everyone smile at her then boys got started with picking up all this n put on car n only riddhima n bi stay back while others join padma so she don't get suspicious..

Music continue...

Shi:Ho o... [Scene Shows shilpa while singing go near shashank n padma n color them]

Mu:Bhigee cholee chunaree bhee gilee hui, [Scene Shows muski join shilpa in dance while pointing at padma's wet dress as a while ago minnie with pichkri make her wet]

An:sajnajee dekho mai nilee hui [Scene Shows anji sing while atul come join them while other boys was got busy with their work n watching all boys missing padma was about to go when atul join in making her stop n smile towards them]

Sha:Thodee thodee too jo nashilee hui, patlee kamar lachkilee hui [Scene Shows shashank sing n here there box's replaces was almost done]

Ri:Mann kyon na behke, tan kyon na dehke [Scene Shows while singing riddhima join others putting colors on each other while one by one others also join as all work are done]

Ma:Tum reh reh ke, mat pheko yeh najaro ka jal [Scene Shows madiha join with riddhima while singing n dancing]

Si:Abb hame koi roke nahee, [Scene shows sid sing n take color on hand making it throw upwards then take pichkari standing opposite of shilpa]

Ra:Abb hame koi toke nahee [Scene shows rahul also join in with another pichkari so it's like opposite muskaan while singing with sid]

Ab:Abb hone do ho jo bhee hal,[Scene Shows abhi also took another pichkari standing beside rahul standing just opposite of madiha n all run just on the direction of the girls opposite them]

All:Dekho aai holi rang layi holi [Scene shows sid,rahul,abhi,gappu running with pichkari after Shilpa,muskaan,madiha,minnie]

Aaj hua ek sa kamal [Scene shows Everyone playing holi while they were running one after another]

Rang aaise ude dekhane me lage, koi range hawao ke bal [Scene shows others on the party throwing color on each other n enjoying the party]

Sha:Chandee kee thal se leke gulal, abb radha se khelenge holi muraree[Scene shows riddhima whisper something on shashank ear n vanish while shashank sing n with color again color padma]

BG playing:Radha bhee natkhat hain, [Scene shows girl stops in front of a corner while voice smirk n started to color them with pichkari]

paltee woh jhatpat hain [Scene shows girls also look around n started to throw color balloon towards them]

Maree kanhaiya ko hain pitchkariee [Scene shows boys left the pichkari to save themselves from balloons n girls took the opportunity n started to color them with pichkari]

Dekhane wale toh dang hue hain, [Scene shows while saving them boys were near the girls when suddenly sid pull shilpa's hand backward top stop him from throwing color but instead both got so close they stoip moving n look into just each other without blinking eyes]

Ke holi me dono ho sang hue hai [Scene shows While rahul try to hold muskaan's hand to stop instead fall upon muskaan n both land on grasses as abhi who run to save himself from madiha was started to run n got collided with rahul making him fall]

Toh radha kanha ek rang hue hain, [Scene shows As muskaan fall n rahul fall upon her first muskaan close her eyes with pain as she fall on her back but as soon she realized some weight fall on her she look back to see rahul was lost in her watching it muskaan also lost in Rahul's eyes]

Kaun hain radha kaun hain kanha [Scene shows as Minnie n gappu was still running here n there when gappu got collide with rahul's leg n fall on him making him shout]

Kaun yeh samjha kaun yeh jana [Scene shows Rahul's shout brought back muski to also sense n she wriggle n his shout make sid n shilpa also brought back to world while shilpa push sid n go towards rahul n muskaan while sid just stood there looking blankly thinking about what just happened but unknown to them two pair of eyes watch these scene n both person smile looking at them though they were in different side but both notice the sudden change of their all emotion]

Ho o o...

Music Stop..

Mu(straggling to got up): Oye rahul k bache uth mere upar se...(While shilpa pull both gappu n rahul up n while closing eyes muski keep her one hand on back waist cursing rahul for making her fall that too on her)

Then as she open her eyes she look two hand was forward to help her got up one was from shilpa but watching the other hand she was literally shocked but watching her expression he took back his hand while muski got up watching rahul who was shifted his gaze from her while who was fridging with his hands palm which he just took back from in front of muski...

Shilpa asked her is she alright then go back to bring some water for her

Here the situation got little bit awkward...

While suddenly gappu come n holding muski's hand take her away while rahul kept looking at her way...

While suddenly someone kept elbow in his shoulder n said: Yeh wahi hai na?

Ra(startled look towards her): oh ridz tu yaha kya kar rhi hai chal waha...(then walk towards others who are little far from them but hearing her next word he stop in his way)

Ri: Mujhse chupa rahi hai rahul...

Ra: Tu kya bol rahi hai mujhe kuch samajh nhi a raha hai chal waha sabke pass..(Telling this he started to walk again but before he go 2 step he again stop listening her n this time turn around)

Ri: Sachai se kab tak dur bhagega rahul..it's the truth dikhta hai teri chehre pe saaf saaf with bold letter (while showing her face ) that u love her waise itna pyar karti hai to bol kyun nhi deti..

Ra: kya fayda bolke she don't na..

Ri: But bolne se kya problem..Ek bar try to kar hi sakti hai tu..

Ra: Nhi yaar ise aise hi rehne de warna meri feelings k wajah se humari rishta aur kharab ho jayegi waise bhi wo mujhe pasand to karti hai nhi..so it's best to keep quite...

Saying this rahul left from there when riddhima smirk n think: "let's see wo to waqt hi batayegi kaun kise pasand karti hai aur koun nhi"

After few moment...

Sid was going towards somewhere near food when suddenly bumped with someone on head n holding it without saying he bumped it again n this time purposely but as soon as he look at the person he regret his deed..

Shi: Teri itni himmat..ek to takraya upar se phir se...

Si(cutting her in between): Wo to main bas wo thron na uth jay isliye dubara..wo ..wo bachpan me mummy kehti thi..to main wo...

Shi: Isliye tu dubara takra diya gadhe kahike wo kahawat hai sach nhi hai..

Si: Mujhe kya pata agar sach ho gayi to meri itni khubsurat chehre k sath thron suit nhi karegi na teri to perfect match hogi but mujhe apna chehra...

Shi(hearing him cutting him in between said): Sale bandar meri chehre k sath suit karegi... Tujhe na main..

Before she could approach muski hold her up n said: Are are shilpa kya kar rhi hai yaar bechara hai wo chod de na use..waise bhi galti kiya usne maaf karde..chal sid sorry bol

Before shlpa could react Rahul join: Wo kyun sorry bole shilpa ne bhi to takraya na...

Mu: Abe dekh chachundar tu bich me na bol...

Ra: aur jo tu bich me bol rahi hai uska kya???

Mu: Main bol sakti hoon hak hai mera dost hoon inka..

Ra: Ha to main konsa dushman hoon inka..

Ab (Before they could say something abhi join them): Are kya hua?

Ra: Hona kya hai yeh ladkiyaan aur inke nakhreee..

Mu: Oye yaha ladkiyaan aur unke nakhroon k baat kaha se ayi...

Ra: Ha to itni si baat k itna batangaar banana aur nakhre dikhana ek hi baat hai na...

Mu: Oy baaton ko ghuma mat...

Ab: Sach hi to bol raha hai rahul...tum log manna kyun nhi chahte tum ladkiyaan nakhre hi karte rehte ho humesha...uske lawa tumhe aur karna kya ata hai...

Ri(join them): bhaiya kuch bhi na bbolo hum nakhre nhi karte hai ap log hi stupid harkate karte rehte ho bas...

Ga: aisa nhi hai har ladka stupid nhi hota main boht intelligent hoon na..

Mi: Bada aya intelligent tu na bahar se bhi gol hai upar me bhi sab khali aur sare ladke idiot hi hote hai...

Sha: Asie nhi bolte minnie sab idiot thodi na hote hai wo to ladkiyoon ki nakhre...

Ri: hawww papa ap bhi..

Sha: Main bhi kya riddhima yeh baat sach hai tum log man loge to kuch nhi hogi...

Pa: Kya manna hai??

Sha: Wo wo wo wo kuch bhi to nhi...kuch nhi...

Pa: Ap na jayada bano mat ap bhi bachon k sath huh...

Padma turn around n shashank go behind her while anjali who comes with padma also turn to go...n atul said: Anjali suno to meri aisa ray bilkul bhi nhi hai..

An: Shut up atul...

Like this all girls n boys turn in two ways...

While shashank come to boys after a while convince them to go with him to convince the girls..

Ab: But papa they are wrong..

Sha: beta tujhe aj raat ghar me hi sona hai na (abhi nod his head) then wohi kar jo main bol rahi hoon aur tumlog (turning towards other guys) wo log naraz hogayi na to sabse jayada pareshani tumhe hi hogi so kuch karo

Then all agree thinking akhir unko ghar me bhi to rehna hai...😉 aur din k baad akhir jana hai to usi ke pass as unknowingly all have connections 😉 n the others who don't have connections still agree looking at atul n shashank's face..😛😉

Ab: Lekin ab kare bhi to kya kare...

Suddenly tweety comes n siting on shashank's shoulder started to sing: Ang laga de re mohe rang laga de re

Main toh teri joganiya tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re prem ka rog laga de re

Main toh teri joganiyaan tu jog laga de re

Sha: wah meri bolly miya kya idea diya tune...

Ab: Par idea kya hai papa?

Sha: follow me..

They got first near girls but they ignore them walk away then

Background music start..

Sha:Hey hey hey hey hey ho ho ho ho ho... [Scene shows Shashank playing a dafli walk towards them while abhi with a dhol, Rahul with a Banjo n atul n other boys from behind come with them]

Soni soni akhiyon waali, [Scene shows shashank pointing towards padma n sing while throwing the dafli at a side while dancing like srk done on the song]

At:Dil de ja [Scene shows Atul sing looking towards anji wo was now standing with the other girls n dance with other boys]

Ra:yaa de ja tu gaali [Scene shows Rahul sing looking towards muskaan]

Sha:Hum tere deewaane hain, [Scene shows shashank sing n do bhangra dance while rounding towards padma then towards riddhima]

At:Hum aashiq mastaane hain [Scene shows atul same as shashank but he dance around anji first then around madiha]

Pa:Jhuti jhuti batiyon waale, [Scene shows padma sing n dance like Archana Puran Singh who dancing the song]

Shi:Bholi surat [Scene shows shilpa indicate towards sid while with hand show face]

Mu:Dil ke hai kaale [Scene shows muski dance indicating rahul n keeping hand towards heart singing the song]

Ma:Yeh aashiq lut jaane hain, [Scene shows madiha sing n dance while joining the girls]

Ri:Dil sab de tut jaane hain [Scene shows riddhima also join others while dancing the way girls dance in the song while boys do the same dance]

In between music boys started to plead while say sorry though girls almost got agree but thought to play along while in between riddhima skip from there..No one notice that...

Where riddhima skip from there n got near a side of tree n climb the tree n sit in a widen brunch n took out her secret weapon urf slingshot urf gulel n look at the bucket which is tied there where there are lots of small water balloon which she n shilpa attach there for this holi special.. [Remember everyone shilpa n ridz gone for special holi arrangement this is it]

Si:Jaa kudiye jo kar le, [Scene shows sid color shilpa forcefully while a water balloon hit him over the head he try to look who it is but don't saw anyone as it was riddhima who from over the tree was hitting it]

Ra:Gora badan tera rang diya [Scene shows Rahul also color muski, while riddhima target on rahul head but sid comes in between n the next water balloon hit on sid's face while sid make a sulking face]

Mu:Oye mundiya waada raha, [Scene shows muski put one whole ball of color water on rahul]

Shi:Suli pe jo na tujhe tang diya [Scene shows shilpa dance like Shamita Shetty while singing n same step as her]

Ra:Main suli pe chadh jaanwa, [Scene shows rahul dance like uday shetty same step like him]

At:Tu bol abhi mar jaanwa [Scene shows atul join rahul in dance n dance same as the way in main song uday dance while sid who was searching who is hitting him with water balloon was again got hit by another one which was aimed for rahul again]

Shi:Main tujhase agar darr jaanwa, [Scene shows Shilpa dance while pointing towards boys]

An:woh dil naam tere kar jaanwa [Scene shows atul go towards anjali n started to do uthak beithak while holding ear so anji stop him n sing]

Ri:Yaad rakhna mera kehna, [Scene shows riddhima got down n hiding her secret weapon run towards other so no one have any doubt n then sing in rahul's ear]

Yeh dil ek din mil jaane hain [Scene shows riddhima whisper the line towards rahul while pointing muski secretly]

All boys:Hum tere deewaane hain, hum aashiq mastaane hain. [Scene shows every boys now dance as srk dance in end of the song while sid got in side ws about to join the boy but the side he was going wo ek rasi se takra gayi n there ws tied colored water with it on tree which fall on him again making him wet but this time he run from there thinking bhoot is doing all this n go near the boys]

All girls:Yeh aashiq lut jaane hain, dil sab de tut jaane hain [Scene shows dance with the boys]

All boys again appolize n girls also said its ok..

While sid after a while said: But mujhe water balloon koun mara... wo bhi 3 bar..n wo rassi yaha bhoot hai...

Hearing water balloon shilpa look towards riddhima to see she is looking anywhere but not towards them, While others said it might be hit him accidently while any kid might hit it..n may be workers might be left the rassi there...there is nothing like bhoot that too in day time...

While shilpa took riddhima at side n both share the hit story oops i means balloon story n laughed..😆

It's been two hours till the party started all have food n now sitting in chairs thinking to play holi but after half an hour while padma go inside to help anjali to take some rest n bi also while kids still playing..

Sha: princess (looking towards inside home) wo khana ka kya karna hai?

Ri: Papa main soch rahi thi kya it will be still fresh till night...

Sha: i think so hona to chahiye as u all put it on fresh carrier..

Before riddhima could say something abhi's cell ring up n after he spoke they sense there is an problem about something n riddhima asked about it

Ab: there is a problem..i need to go to sanjeevni's treasure of heaven

Then after he tell the problem n describe its, 'treasure of heaven" is sanjeevni's orphanage

Then abhi was going to left for there when suddenly riddhima screamed saying: bhaiya wait i have a fantastic Idea...!! isse ek teera se do nishane ho jayega..

Si: Par hume nishana thodi hi lagani thi..hume to khane ka kya kare wo sochna tha...

Shi: Are yaar koi iska muh bandh do...Tu na life me ek hi kaam sahi kiya dhang ka carrior choose kiya ab har waqt kitchen k andar hi rehta hai warna kitchen k bahar kuch kar rhi hoti to pata nhi bahar ka log tujhe kaise bardast karte??

Ri: Rapunzel not again yaar...And listen up the idea first isse humari n treasure of heaven ki dono ki problem solve ho jayegi...

Sha: Wo kaise????

Scene faded at everyone's expecting eyes towards riddhima..n riddhima smirking towards them..

That's all for today..

Dekho ek aur holi special gaya

Ap sab soch rahe honge yeh ladki pagal hai

Log ek holi special rakhte hai aur iski holi special hi khatam nhi ho rhi hai..

Well in that case i'm mad n thanks for the compliment u thought about me

nhi bhi socha koi gal nhi ab soch lo :p

Btw holi abhi khatam nhi hui

So keep in touch n do enjoy...

n jate jate 3 person Bubble girl, rj n ayu lv u girls

For what i don't think i need to say

But still keh hi deti hoon as without u guys i can't complete it

milte hai kuch dino baad

Lv u :*

khuda hafiz

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

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Hiyyyaaa BabyGirl...

Sabse pehle reserved karke dekho toh sahi mujhe time nehi mila unreserved karne ke liyeh...

Actually main pehle bhi kar sakti ti, but maine socha araaam se karti hoon toh hi acche aur mast comment karpaungi na ;)

Waise jaldi jaldi karti toh long comment bhi toh nehi kar sakti na...

Aur mujhe pata hai tumhe meri long comment kitni pasand hai :D hainaaa????

Chalo ab idar udar ke baate toh hamesha hoti rehti hai...

Part ke baare mein tohde baate hojae...

Waise tumne toh pehle kehdiya bohot maza aane wala hai har part mein as ur HOLI special is going on hehehe...

I must agree, u r keeping ur words babygirl...

Seriously bohottt maza aa rahi hai, has has ke meri cheeks mein dard ho rahi hai aur stomach mein bhi...

I love every single thing about it... I love you more babygirl for giving such an awesome update and ff :)

Now lets start from the beginning...

Previous part was end when Muski bumped to someone and maine kaha ta its Rahul...

yeyyy, I guess it righttt... Rahul hi ta, ab tu mat poochna mujhe kaise pata chala...

Of course Muski ki expression dekh ke pata chaljaati hai woh Rahul koh dekh ke aise react karte hai hahahha...

Hahaha MuskiRahul and their bickering... When Riddhima introduce them, hahahha dono ne chillaya...

Then scene change, u describe what was everyone doing around...

Muski and Maddy, conversation was super fun and awesome...

Hahahah dono baar baar yehi baat pe jhagadte hai when Maddy call Muski by her name and Muski wants her to call Di hahaha...

Awww Maddy was getting worry...

Accha huva Shilpu aagayi hehehe,aur nehi toh kya...

Sabar nehi hoti yeh Maddy koh, tohdi der aur rukh jati toh kiya ho jaenge...

When Riddhima got Shashank msg, I was wondering why Shashank need her help...

Aur food stall mein dekh ke Riddhima smajh gayi... Maine socha Shashank koh kuch khana ta haahahaha...

But yaha toh Shashank ne bohot saara food order kardi issiliyeh woh tension mein hai...

Padma se darte toh bohot hai yeh Shashank hahhaha...

issiliyeh Riddhima se help maang raha ta Padma koh pata chalne se pehle usne bohot saara food order kardi...

Phir Riddhima ke dhimag mein aaya idea... Sab milke karne lagi Shashank ke madat...

Wah wahhh... Waise When u show each and everyone part when they saw Padma was coming towards the food stall hahaha...

It was super awesome description...

Pehle Gappu ne dekha... Uske Minnie koh alert kardi...

Phir Minnie ne Rahul koh alert ki, Rahul ne Muski koh hahahha...

Muski toh shuru hone wali ti Rahul pe barasne ke liyeh... But Padma koh dekhte hi usne jaldi se Sid koh alert kardi...

Waha Rahul koh Muski koh alert karna pada aur yaha Sid koh Shilpu koh... Wah kya connection hai hehehe...

Ooppps balloon se maara Shilpu koh, phir toh gussa aane koh hi hehehhe...

Accha huva Sid ke achaar bana ne se pehle Shilpa ne Padma koh dekhliya hehehe...

Phir Shilpu ne Atul koh alert ki, Atul ne apne Anjali koh, Anjali alert Bi and Bi Signal Riddhima...

Last mein Abhi koh alert ki Riddhima ne as Padma was coming...

Haahaha poor Shashank was freaking out and suddenly song start wah wah...

Padma koh food stall se dur rakhne ke liyeh gana gaya sabne...

Aise idea's toh sirf tumhe aa sakti hai Babygirl...

Abhi start, Riddhima joins him and others follow them to keep Padma away till their work isn't finished...

Song was nice, description was superbbb...

I enjoy the description a lottt, bohottt maza aaya...

Finally their work was complete but yeh log ne socha nehi woh sab kaha chupaenge hehehe...

Oh ho, phir hogayi shuru yeh log...

Uff girl's vs boy's nehi hote toh maza kaise aati right...

But Maddy ne sabko rokhdiya aur yeh sochne laga kare toh kya kare...

Wah wah Gappu the bf of Riddhima ne kiya idea diya hai...

Waise sahi toh kaha hai, bohot sochke bf chuna hai Riddhima ne hehehe

Gappu ke gf riddhima ne pehle pack karne ke idea diya aur ab gappu ne woh sab kaha chupane ke idea's diya hai :)

Gang saat ho aur uske kaam puri tarah cmplete na ho, woh toh ho hi nehi sakte...

Aur kitna bhi lade, saat toh hamesha dete hai ek dusre ke...

Again the song continue...

Waise toh maine kaha how superbly u describe the scene...

Ayye hayye, Rahul and Muski share close moment where else Shilpu and Sid also was lost in each other hehehe...

I m sure kuch chakkar chalne wali hai Sid and Shilpu ke beech.. But as u say, u never know what goes in ur mind hehehe...

Yeh sab hote huve kissi ne dekhliya...

Ek minute ke liyeh mujhe laga shayad Armaan waapas aaya hoga...

Phir socha nehi woh toh nehi ho sakte, phir socha Ridz hi hoga...

MuskiRahul and ShilpuSid moment was break due to Gappu shout hahaha...

dream land mein rahe toh yeh log accha hai...

real world mein aate hi barasne lage ek dusre koh hahahha...

Shilpu help Muski to stand, wah wah Rahul ne bhi haat badaya...

yeyyy, I was so right... woh Ridz hi ti jo sabko dekh rahi ti hehehe...

Ridz confront Rahul but he deny first but at last agree why he can't tell Muski that he loves him...

Waise Muski ke dil mein bhi Rahul ke liyeh kuch kuch ho raha hai, but she is not aware with that but Ridz is aware of the silent talks between them...

Yeh Ridz toh badi smart hai hahahha... Kyun nehi, prank master ke saat saat smartness bhi hai...

Dekho dekho yeh dono bohot takra rahi hai...

Aise takra ti rahi hai, pyar bhi hojaenge ek dinnn...

Uff yeh log bhi na, baat baat pe shuru hojate hai...

Waise mast hai, maza toh bohot aate hai in logo koh aise jhagda karte hhuve hehehe...

Shilpu and Sid ke jhagde mein Muski bhi aagayi hahaha, Phir toh Rahul koh aana hi ta...

Phir Abhi and then Riddhima hahaha...

Lolz, Gappu and Minnie bhi shuru hogayaaa hahahaha...

badon toh hai hi crazy, aur chote log bhi shuru hogayiii...

Itna nehi, Shashank and Padma bhi joins girls vs boys fight... Wah wahhh...

Pehle jhagda kiya, phir Shashank and Atul apne apne wife koh aur baaki sab apne apne girls koh mana ne laga hahaha...

Waise Shashank ne toh mast baat bola, ghar mein sona hai toh Padma koh mana na padega hahaha...

Wah Shashank ne kuch socha haiii... Kya baat hai, Aur woh idea Tweety ne diya hehehe...

Tweety toh hamesha aati hai sabko idea's dene apne songs se...

Then the song startsss...

Boys girls ke peeche peeche...

Again description was superbbb Baby girl...

Hahaha jab sab busy hogayi, Ridz ne tree pe chad gayiii...

Ahaaan, toh yehi ta jo Ridz and Shilpu ne plan kar rahi ti starting se...

Hahaha Poor Sid, Ridz ne Rahul pe target ki but har baar Sid koh laga...

Kissi aur koh bhi target karte toh bechare saamne aajate hai hahaha...

Ahaan, finally Girls ne maaf ki boys koh...

Lolz, Sid koh laga bhoot hai... bechare ke upar sab balloons ghir gaya...

Aur Sid ke baat sunke Shilpu samajh gayi Ridz ne apni plan koh anjaam de diya hehehe...

Dono ladki has rahi ti jab Ridz ne bataya Shilpu koh kiya huva hehehe...

Hmmm phirse Shashank ne Riddhima se poocha khana ka kya kare...

Tab Abhi koh call aaya woh usko jaana pada...

Yeh sunke woh kaha jaa rahi hai , Ridz koh phirse idea aayi wahhh...

Hahahah ridz ke baat sunke Sid ne bola aur Shilpu baras gayi uspe...

Woh toh kahawat ta but Sid koh samajh hi nehi aaya ufff...

Accha huva Ridz ne Shiplu koh chup karwa diyaaa...

Hmmm Kuch toh naughty idea hai Ridz ke dhimag mein, issiliyeh toh woh smirkkar rahi ti hehehe...

Ab idea kiya hai, uske liyeh wait karna paddega???? hayye... kitni din ????

It was awesome and fun part BabyGirl...

Enjoy it to the coreee, in song sequence I was dancing beite beite hehehe...

Hayye, still the Holi continue...

Wahhh bada maza aane wala hainaaa...

Waise mujhe pehle se pata hai meri babygirl crazy hai... hehehe...

Issiliyeh toh HOLI ek part se zyada parts mein dikha rahi hooo...

Maza toh mujhe aa rahi hai bohot, so no complain ;)

Continue super soon...

Muwaahhh :*

Love u lots, more, most, eternity, internity and over internity...

Take care <3

Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

heyyya pikachuuu
i m back with my comment
shocked to see me so soon
ab adat daal le as mere exam finish nd now i m free so comment bhi jaldi jaldi milengi
u know aj exam khatam karke sabse pehle tera part pdha nd comment bhi kar rhi hun

now coming to this part
see i told u its was rahul nd muskaan nd my guess is r8
to mera prize kya h??????

hmm loved how rahul nd muskaan is shocked to to know that ridhz is their common friend hahaha
it was funny scene
then vo shanky ki problem hmm
omg shashank is a kid every time
lol
i mean how can he arranged almost double or triple food
uff hahaha

loved how everyone support nd help shashank nd is handling padma too
i loved the scene when gappu see padma nd to give hint to every one he throws laddo to miini which landed on her head hahaha nd same goes with rahul he to give muskaan hint throw flower in her direction with hit bum is scene ko padhkar mujhe hum apke h kaun salman nd maduri yaad aye
vo didi tera devar deewana wala lol so funny but muskan ko to gussa chad isse pehle vo rahul par attack kare she also see padma nd signal sid jiski kismat bohot kharab h as usual he hit shilpa wid ballon but turned at the same time and it hit her face lol
loved that scene
then song sequence nd the hide nd seek from padma in it
then loved how rahul nd sid ka eyelock with shilpa nd muskaan hmm
to love story atart ho rhi h
finally kahin to romance dekhne ko mila hayye
loved gappu nd ridhz bonding when ridhz n all is confuse where to hide the food gappu give idea nd ridhz appreciate her bf with a kiss lol
nd vo maddy or vo muskkaan ka arguement haha its so funny muskaan 50 sec badi h hahaha
hmm or vo wala scene when in the middle of the song ridhz climb the tree nd is throwing water balloon from above or har baar vo bechara sid ko lagta hahaha
or sid pagal bhoot he think it was a ghost hahahaha
yaar seriously pure part mein main paglon ki tarah pet pakad ke has rhi thi main
uff pet dukh rha h mera
but am angry with u
yaar phirse ar meet nah dekhayi tune had h main har part ki starting mein sochti hun ki ab ar milenge but tu har bar dreams tod deti h *pout*
but now i will not tolerate this
ab main koi comment nahi dungi until i get a part of ar meet bas humppp
now bye
love u
tc
see u

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
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Hiyyyaaa BabyGirl...
Sabse pehle reserved karke dekho toh sahi mujhe time nehi mila unreserved karne ke liyeh...
Actually main pehle bhi kar sakti ti, but maine socha araaam se karti hoon toh hi acche aur mast comment karpaungi na ;)
Waise jaldi jaldi karti toh long comment bhi toh nehi kar sakti na...
Aur mujhe pata hai tumhe meri long comment kitni pasand hai :D hainaaa????

Chalo ab idar udar ke baate toh hamesha hoti rehti hai...
Part ke baare mein tohde baate hojae...
Waise tumne toh pehle kehdiya bohot maza aane wala hai har part mein as ur HOLI special is going on hehehe...
I must agree, u r keeping ur words babygirl...
Seriously bohottt maza aa rahi hai, has has ke meri cheeks mein dard ho rahi hai aur stomach mein bhi...
I love every single thing about it... I love you more babygirl for giving such an awesome update and ff :)

Now lets start from the beginning...
Previous part was end when Muski bumped to someone and maine kaha ta its Rahul...
yeyyy, I guess it righttt... Rahul hi ta, ab tu mat poochna mujhe kaise pata chala...
Of course Muski ki expression dekh ke pata chaljaati hai woh Rahul koh dekh ke aise react karte hai hahahha...
Hahaha MuskiRahul and their bickering... When Riddhima introduce them, hahahha dono ne chillaya...

Then scene change, u describe what was everyone doing around...
Muski and Maddy, conversation was super fun and awesome...
Hahahah dono baar baar yehi baat pe jhagadte hai when Maddy call Muski by her name and Muski wants her to call Di hahaha...
Awww Maddy was getting worry...
Accha huva Shilpu aagayi hehehe,aur nehi toh kya...
Sabar nehi hoti yeh Maddy koh, tohdi der aur rukh jati toh kiya ho jaenge...

When Riddhima got Shashank msg, I was wondering why Shashank need her help...
Aur food stall mein dekh ke Riddhima smajh gayi... Maine socha Shashank koh kuch khana ta haahahaha...
But yaha toh Shashank ne bohot saara food order kardi issiliyeh woh tension mein hai...
Padma se darte toh bohot hai yeh Shashank hahhaha...
issiliyeh Riddhima se help maang raha ta Padma koh pata chalne se pehle usne bohot saara food order kardi...

Phir Riddhima ke dhimag mein aaya idea... Sab milke karne lagi Shashank ke madat...
Wah wahhh... Waise When u show each and everyone part when they saw Padma was coming towards the food stall hahaha...
It was super awesome description...
Pehle Gappu ne dekha... Uske Minnie koh alert kardi...
Phir Minnie ne Rahul koh alert ki, Rahul ne Muski koh hahahha...
Muski toh shuru hone wali ti Rahul pe barasne ke liyeh... But Padma koh dekhte hi usne jaldi se Sid koh alert kardi...
Waha Rahul koh Muski koh alert karna pada aur yaha Sid koh Shilpu koh... Wah kya connection hai hehehe...
Ooppps balloon se maara Shilpu koh, phir toh gussa aane koh hi hehehhe...
Accha huva Sid ke achaar bana ne se pehle Shilpa ne Padma koh dekhliya hehehe...
Phir Shilpu ne Atul koh alert ki, Atul ne apne Anjali koh, Anjali alert Bi and Bi Signal Riddhima...
Last mein Abhi koh alert ki Riddhima ne as Padma was coming...
Haahaha poor Shashank was freaking out and suddenly song start wah wah...

Padma koh food stall se dur rakhne ke liyeh gana gaya sabne...
Aise idea's toh sirf tumhe aa sakti hai Babygirl...
Abhi start, Riddhima joins him and others follow them to keep Padma away till their work isn't finished...
Song was nice, description was superbbb...
I enjoy the description a lottt, bohottt maza aaya...

Finally their work was complete but yeh log ne socha nehi woh sab kaha chupaenge hehehe...
Oh ho, phir hogayi shuru yeh log...
Uff girl's vs boy's nehi hote toh maza kaise aati right...
But Maddy ne sabko rokhdiya aur yeh sochne laga kare toh kya kare...

Wah wah Gappu the bf of Riddhima ne kiya idea diya hai...
Waise sahi toh kaha hai, bohot sochke bf chuna hai Riddhima ne hehehe
Gappu ke gf riddhima ne pehle pack karne ke idea diya aur ab gappu ne woh sab kaha chupane ke idea's diya hai :)
Gang saat ho aur uske kaam puri tarah cmplete na ho, woh toh ho hi nehi sakte...
Aur kitna bhi lade, saat toh hamesha dete hai ek dusre ke...

Again the song continue...
Waise toh maine kaha how superbly u describe the scene...
Ayye hayye, Rahul and Muski share close moment where else Shilpu and Sid also was lost in each other hehehe...
I m sure kuch chakkar chalne wali hai Sid and Shilpu ke beech.. But as u say, u never know what goes in ur mind hehehe...
Yeh sab hote huve kissi ne dekhliya...
Ek minute ke liyeh mujhe laga shayad Armaan waapas aaya hoga...
Phir socha nehi woh toh nehi ho sakte, phir socha Ridz hi hoga...
MuskiRahul and ShilpuSid moment was break due to Gappu shout hahaha...

dream land mein rahe toh yeh log accha hai...
real world mein aate hi barasne lage ek dusre koh hahahha...
Shilpu help Muski to stand, wah wah Rahul ne bhi haat badaya...

yeyyy, I was so right... woh Ridz hi ti jo sabko dekh rahi ti hehehe...
Ridz confront Rahul but he deny first but at last agree why he can't tell Muski that he loves him...
Waise Muski ke dil mein bhi Rahul ke liyeh kuch kuch ho raha hai, but she is not aware with that but Ridz is aware of the silent talks between them...
Yeh Ridz toh badi smart hai hahahha... Kyun nehi, prank master ke saat saat smartness bhi hai...

Dekho dekho yeh dono bohot takra rahi hai...
Aise takra ti rahi hai, pyar bhi hojaenge ek dinnn...
Uff yeh log bhi na, baat baat pe shuru hojate hai...
Waise mast hai, maza toh bohot aate hai in logo koh aise jhagda karte hhuve hehehe...
Shilpu and Sid ke jhagde mein Muski bhi aagayi hahaha, Phir toh Rahul koh aana hi ta...
Phir Abhi and then Riddhima hahaha...
Lolz, Gappu and Minnie bhi shuru hogayaaa hahahaha...
badon toh hai hi crazy, aur chote log bhi shuru hogayiii...
Itna nehi, Shashank and Padma bhi joins girls vs boys fight... Wah wahhh...

Pehle jhagda kiya, phir Shashank and Atul apne apne wife koh aur baaki sab apne apne girls koh mana ne laga hahaha...
Waise Shashank ne toh mast baat bola, ghar mein sona hai toh Padma koh mana na padega hahaha...
Wah Shashank ne kuch socha haiii... Kya baat hai, Aur woh idea Tweety ne diya hehehe...
Tweety toh hamesha aati hai sabko idea's dene apne songs se...

Then the song startsss...
Boys girls ke peeche peeche...
Again description was superbbb Baby girl...
Hahaha jab sab busy hogayi, Ridz ne tree pe chad gayiii...
Ahaaan, toh yehi ta jo Ridz and Shilpu ne plan kar rahi ti starting se...
Hahaha Poor Sid, Ridz ne Rahul pe target ki but har baar Sid koh laga...
Kissi aur koh bhi target karte toh bechare saamne aajate hai hahaha...

Ahaan, finally Girls ne maaf ki boys koh...
Lolz, Sid koh laga bhoot hai... bechare ke upar sab balloons ghir gaya...
Aur Sid ke baat sunke Shilpu samajh gayi Ridz ne apni plan koh anjaam de diya hehehe...
Dono ladki has rahi ti jab Ridz ne bataya Shilpu koh kiya huva hehehe...

Hmmm phirse Shashank ne Riddhima se poocha khana ka kya kare...
Tab Abhi koh call aaya woh usko jaana pada...
Yeh sunke woh kaha jaa rahi hai , Ridz koh phirse idea aayi wahhh...
Hahahah ridz ke baat sunke Sid ne bola aur Shilpu baras gayi uspe...
Woh toh kahawat ta but Sid koh samajh hi nehi aaya ufff...
Accha huva Ridz ne Shiplu koh chup karwa diyaaa...
Hmmm Kuch toh naughty idea hai Ridz ke dhimag mein, issiliyeh toh woh smirkkar rahi ti hehehe...
Ab idea kiya hai, uske liyeh wait karna paddega???? hayye... kitni din ????

It was awesome and fun part BabyGirl...
Enjoy it to the coreee, in song sequence I was dancing beite beite hehehe...
Hayye, still the Holi continue...
Wahhh bada maza aane wala hainaaa...
Waise mujhe pehle se pata hai meri babygirl crazy hai... hehehe...
Issiliyeh toh HOLI ek part se zyada parts mein dikha rahi hooo...
Maza toh mujhe aa rahi hai bohot, so no complain ;)

Continue super soon...
Muwaahhh :*
Love u lots, more, most, eternity, internity and over internity...
Take care <3

Heyya jiji
Kaha apu yeh to unres kar diya na
N btw do u know one thing
Till now in most of the part of armaan
U r the 1st commentor
So congrats

Yea i lv u
N ur comments also
That too long wala😳
N koi nhi u r not late ok
Maine next part abhi tak update nhi kiya

Ha hojay
Main mana thodi hi kiya

Well i try to make u all laugh don't know
How much i succeed
But all in all i try my best to keep my word
N if u like thats thats my pleasure

That means mission complete
I make u laugh
Yohooo

Aww
I lv u also apu
N i'm glad u love it

Yup u guessed it right
Congrats
I knew it
Apne kaise guess ki hogi

I'm glad u like muski n maddy part
Though i ws little unsure about that part will go good or not

Are wo rukh kaise jayegi
U know jaisa bhi hai behen to muski ki hi hai na
Toh sabar kaise rahe usko
N holi party me aye hai so boring acha thodi hi lagti hai
Party me dhoom to machni chahiye na
Warna wo party kaisa

As i said before apu
U never know whats going on in my mind 😉😛😆

Ab biwi se koan nhi darta bolo
Maine bas wohi effect dikhayi
Waise ek baat bolu
Secret hai
Main apko abhi wa pe batati hoon

Wo kya hai na
Actually i ws imagining all this
I mean kisne kisko kaise alert ki
Aur kisne kaise react ki
So wohi i try to show

Ab dekho meri holi special part hai
To aisa thodi hi ho sakti hai isme gana na ho
I'm glad u enjoy the song description

Ha wo to hai
See gappu is so intelligent na
Ha wo to hai
Akhir inke liye wo kahawat badi sachi hai

Teda hai par mera hai

Ab har ek frnd jaruri hoti hai
So itna to karegi hi na

Maine kyun bolu
Kya chakkar chalegi ya nhi
As i say u never know 😛😉

Apne bhi yehi line boli jo main bola 😛

Jiji wo hero hai aise thodi hi bina dhamake ki entry legi 😉

Ab jab dil me kuch kuch ho to wo to dikhai degi hi na chahe lakh chupay
Dil ki bate chupai thodi hi chupte hai

Ab kya kare banda chahe kitni bhi dikhawa karle but pyar to karti hai na usse
To jaha pyar hai waha parwa bhi hai
Aur jaha parwa hai waha hat to age ana hi tha

Wo to hai
Ridhima to hai hi all in one

Ab jaha girls vs boys ki ladai hai
Waha sare ladke n ladkiyoon ka to honi hi thi
Ab gappu n minnie bache hai but hai to boy n girl hi na
To kaise nhi ate

Ab hai to wo sach hi na
Akhir ghar ki malkeen hai wo to thodi si khawf to unki honi hi chahiye
Yup tweety is so smart na 😉😆

Yup yehi thi
Ab kya kare sid ka
Bechare ki bad luck ki luck hi itni phuti hai ki sabki prank ka shikar bas wohi bante hai

Hmm
But Abhi abhi tak gaya nhi
He ws just went to receive the call

Ab kya kare bolo
Sid hindi me thodi kacha hai na
To samajhne me time lagti hai na

Jayada din nhi
Bas two more days
As thursday n8 if all things got good i may give an update
Wohi holi ki last part hogi so u see there have to be some spark n twist
N more fun waiting...
I guess that one gonna be u alls fav.
Now lets see
Lv u also lots lots lots
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: palakajenian
heyyya pikachuuu
i m back with my comment
shocked to see me so soon
ab adat daal le as mere exam finish nd now i m free so comment bhi jaldi jaldi milengi
u know aj exam khatam karke sabse pehle tera part pdha nd comment bhi kar rhi hun

now coming to this part
see i told u its was rahul nd muskaan nd my guess is r8
to mera prize kya h??????

hmm loved how rahul nd muskaan is shocked to to know that ridhz is their common friend hahaha
it was funny scene
then vo shanky ki problem hmm
omg shashank is a kid every time
lol
i mean how can he arranged almost double or triple food
uff hahaha

loved how everyone support nd help shashank nd is handling padma too
i loved the scene when gappu see padma nd to give hint to every one he throws laddo to miini which landed on her head hahaha nd same goes with rahul he to give muskaan hint throw flower in her direction with hit bum is scene ko padhkar mujhe hum apke h kaun salman nd maduri yaad aye
vo didi tera devar deewana wala lol so funny but muskan ko to gussa chad isse pehle vo rahul par attack kare she also see padma nd signal sid jiski kismat bohot kharab h as usual he hit shilpa wid ballon but turned at the same time and it hit her face lol
loved that scene
then song sequence nd the hide nd seek from padma in it
then loved how rahul nd sid ka eyelock with shilpa nd muskaan hmm
to love story atart ho rhi h
finally kahin to romance dekhne ko mila hayye
loved gappu nd ridhz bonding when ridhz n all is confuse where to hide the food gappu give idea nd ridhz appreciate her bf with a kiss lol
nd vo maddy or vo muskkaan ka arguement haha its so funny muskaan 50 sec badi h hahaha
hmm or vo wala scene when in the middle of the song ridhz climb the tree nd is throwing water balloon from above or har baar vo bechara sid ko lagta hahaha
or sid pagal bhoot he think it was a ghost hahahaha
yaar seriously pure part mein main paglon ki tarah pet pakad ke has rhi thi main
uff pet dukh rha h mera
but am angry with u
yaar phirse ar meet nah dekhayi tune had h main har part ki starting mein sochti hun ki ab ar milenge but tu har bar dreams tod deti h *pout*
but now i will not tolerate this
ab main koi comment nahi dungi until i get a part of ar meet bas humppp
now bye
love u
tc
see u

Hey tinker bell
Nope
Main to shocked nhi hui
Yohooo
Means tinker bell bck to action

Wow
Really
I mean seriously u were reading my part 1st
Thats my pleasure yaar

Hmm u guess r8
So congrats
Btw abhi to quiz nhi chal rhi hai so no prize
N chinta na kar i ws thinking main phir se quiz start karungi
Tab guess karna tab dekhungi n point count karke best point ko prize

Its my ff u r talking about
Yaha kuch bhi ho sakti hai

Main bhi jab wo scene likh rhi thi to mujhe hum apke hai koun hi yaad aya
I'm glad u like the scene

Tch tch
Bechari to tu romance ki talash me thi
Par kya kare yaar i'm not much romatic type so mujhe jayada romance ki bate likhna ati nhi na

Ab kya kare yaar sid ka bad luck hi itna kharab hai ki wo hi har prank ki shikar ban jate hai
I'm glad this part make u laugh

Hawww
Par kyun
Aww
Darling gussa na ho
Wo kya hai na
Intezar ka phal mitha hota hai so
Aur mere pass to tujhe har flavour milegi
Meethi,teekhi,khati, tu chahe to combine bhi mil jayegi

Aur hero heroine ki milna itni rukhi sukhi bhi nhi ho sakti hai na
So its pending
Aur waise bhi main tujhe nirash nhi karungi
But uske liye u have to read the parts na
N about comment i think u will do in next part also
Lv u
:*
Tc

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Hey tinker bell
Nope
Main to shocked nhi hui
Yohooo
Means tinker bell bck to action
 Wow
Really
I mean seriously u were reading my part 1st
Thats my pleasure yaar
 Hmm u guess r8
So congrats
Btw abhi to quiz nhi chal rhi hai so no prize
N chinta na kar i ws thinking main phir se quiz start karungi
Tab guess karna tab dekhungi n point count karke best point ko prize
 Its my ff u r talking about
Yaha kuch bhi ho sakti hai
 Main bhi jab wo scene likh rhi thi to mujhe hum apke hai koun hi yaad aya
I'm glad u like the scene
 Tch tch
Bechari to tu romance ki talash me thi
Par kya kare yaar i'm not much romatic type so mujhe jayada romance ki bate likhna ati nhi na
 Ab kya kare yaar sid ka bad luck hi itna kharab hai ki wo hi har prank ki shikar ban jate hai
I'm glad this part make u laugh
 Hawww
Par kyun
Aww
Darling gussa na ho
Wo kya hai na
Intezar ka phal mitha hota hai so
Aur mere pass to tujhe har flavour milegi
Meethi,teekhi,khati, tu chahe to combine bhi mil jayegi
 Aur hero heroine ki milna itni rukhi sukhi bhi nhi ho sakti hai na
So its pending
Aur waise bhi main tujhe nirash nhi karungi
But uske liye u have to read the parts na
N about comment i think u will do in next part also
Lv u
 :*
Tc

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