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Posted: 9 years ago

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Heyyy Everyone

How's u all

Sab changa hai na..

Today I want to say something to u all

U know just one year pehle ki baat hai

I never in my dreams thought that I would write

I mean this is so not my cup of it

But...but..but..

There is twist in story as I do start to write

But kya pata tha wohi bachpani me ki hui choti si mazak aj itni lambi kahani me badal rhi hai

Sach bolu to I still don't consider myself as writer

But I lv the lv u all spread on me by commenting n liking n giving ur own view about this story

I simply adore that a lot..

U know I would have stop writing long ago if u guys wouldn't give this much love towards it..

N it completed one whole year today

I mean 1st December was the day when I first posted it's first year

Never realize time goes so fast

But thanks to all of u from bottom of my heart

For being with this ff

N for tolerating my nonsense bakwass... :p

So this part is a gift from me again to all of u...

From my behalf n from behalf of this ff..

Lv u all guys

Thanks a lot again n again for being with me n this story

Oh main to vul hi gayi

Meri style me bhi to kuch bolu...

Kaise kahu mein

Tere kitni shukarguzar hu main

Rehne k liye sath

Dedicate karu yeh part tere liye main

Tere is kadar comment k liye

Mere rehnuma shukriya huuu

Main jo likh raha hu...

Wajah tum hooo[can't resist to sing this song but plz forgive me for making it parody]

Lv u all

Enjoy

So here goes the story...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..

Shukriya..

Precap:

Ek aur nayi chehra

Kya lane wali wo khushi o ka sehra?

Mann hi man me kuch ehsas hai...

Kya ishq ka rang hawwa o pe lagi...

Part 28

Ri(almost crying): papaaa aaa aaa..

Well let's see what happened

Actually as the girls kick boys out last n8 so as a revenge boys also planned something..

Actually it was armaan's idea to make them scare put toy cockroach in front of girl's room in such a way that anyone who open the door the cockroach would be fall on them

So when riddhima knock n someone open it from inside the cockroach fall on riddhima first she didn't recognise it but the moment she did, she started to shout with all her strength as she thought it real n for a matter of fact she is totally freaked out about cockroach n both rahul n sid knows that so that's the reason they were trying to stop her but all gone in vain...

Lets see what happened now..

Hearing her scream all elders come towards her from their rooms n riddhima almost run n hug shashank while shashank keep asking what happened

N here watching elders coming the boys tried to move away but when they just turn to go they saw minnie is looking at them with suspicious eye so they immediately turn n behave as if they don't know anything

N after numerous time of asking finally riddhima utter:cockroach.. (n point towards the door)

While shashank just tame her darling daughter when ram go to see n found out it's a toy only not a real cockroach..

That's when only riddhima clamed a bit

N here on the other side boys were thinking what going to happen now

As shashank was just about to turn to ask who did this riddhima somehow make it skip

Later when everyone were going to take breakfast girls stop riddhima

Mu(holding her hand ): oye tune bade papa ko toka kyun ...bolne dena chahiye tha na..tabhi to us boys ka sara bhanda phud jata...unlogo ki itni himmat ki hume darane ki koushish kar rhi thi...(she did something as if only now she gonna go to the boys n beat them all black n blue but maddy n ritu hold her back)

While ritu said: kya kar rhi hai muski shant ho ja us waqt bhi tujhe kamre k andar rakhna pada tere is hat pair chalane ki wajah se tu ab phir shuru hogayi...

Mu (shake n making both girls leave her turn towards ritu n said):abe phir roka hi kyun? Agar tum dono ne na pakre hote to main to muh hi tod deti do chaar ka...itni himmat mujhe darane aye hai..

Ri: calm down muski dekh maine papa ko isliye roka taki papa ko tum sabki fight ki bare me pata na chale..

Mu: par tune..

Ri: are let me finish... actually u guys know na maine khud kahi thi tumhe to say sorry to boys as warna shayed mumma na mana karde shadi se but see now..i think by watching their steps that guyss were definitely right n if papa would have know this he might even do something but that would be so unfair don't u think so..

Mu(muski who was happy hearing riddhima agree hearing that unfair got shocked n said): tu kya bol rhi hai ridzi...

When riddhima just smirk n giving a satisfactory smile towards muski turn towards shilpa n nikki who already got the inner meaning of her talk, n look at them as if saying explain...

Shi n ni (coming forward muski both said together): Main batati hoon..

Shi (requesting as if her life depends on her): di plzzz main bolu...

Ni(as always bend at her sisterly love): chal tu hi bata de..

Shi(running towards her n hugging her): thank u di u know u r the best...ap jaise behen to hazaro me ek hai...

Here others were looking at them with confusing eyes as none of them by now disclosed what actually the meaning of riddhima's words so ritu spoked: oye band kar apna ek hazaro mein meri behna hai (singing the ek hazaro me meri behna hai in the serial tone) n shuru kar is madhubala ki (pointing riddhima) bato ka tatparjya..i mean inner meaning...

Sh: acha to sun riddhima ki kehne ka yeh matlab hai that agar pops hold them he might give punishment but hum thodi hi de pate..n agar khud iski revenge na lo to kaisi maja...

Ma (coming in between): matlab...

Shilpa n nikki together: matlab now its our time to show up the next scene baby..

While they give a daring smirk n riddhima alao join them while some understand the point n some left in confusion

Scene faded at their smirking faces..

Scene move to living room

All girls one by one hid behind pillar n at first riddhima bring out her when n above of her head one by one all move their head out..

In first they check n saw boys didn't left to have breakfast yet...

So riddhima almost tell shilpa n nikki to go on..

When boys were about to wear their shoes for going out in garden

Nikki n shilpa who was acting as if they were talking saw saran taking out a tray of juice just in front of boys, shilpa called saran loudly n asked: saran bhaiya time kitna hua hai..

N saran was about to see his watch left the tray n make his hand forward making all tray of juice fallen on boy's shoes n making it sticky..

So as a result all boys were thinking how they can go out in garden...

When nikki call laila who was actually sent by riddhima only n told her to give them some pair of shoes

When after a while she come back with sneakers only which belong to abhi only

N boys even don't get suspicious as they didn't notice properly shilpa's act

Then both girls move to other girls n shilpa said: first portion done... now...

Ri: now let's move to our nxt portion

Scene shift to breakfast table...

All boys n elders were at table when all girls comes together n smile sweetly at boys..

N here boys who thought they gonna be angry but they were smiling all sweetly...

They feel there is something fishy but didn't actually got what exactly that is...

Here girls with 420bolt bulb smile keep looking at boys n talking in between in whispering if anyone don't notice carefully couldn't pin point that they are talking as their lips were barely moving

Ri (with full smile): so girls ready...

Sh: anytime...partner

N they look towards each other n wink n got divided

Ritu to chirag

Naina to yuvi

Riddhima to sid

Shilpa to rahul

Muski to armaan

N other girls were left to tackle others when they start with their plan..

Firstly they be extra sweet towards boys n almost make them eat thrice then they usually eat making sure they definitely finish all n in between they keep bringing food where elders were asking what happened when they make excuse saying its their wish to serve them properly as they help the girls a lot so now they just returning that fever only..(though this sentence defer meaning person by person ;) )

Here in between riddhima was gone to bring more food when shilpa join her n while laughing said: dekh dekh kaise hal ho rhi hai ek ek ki...kha kha ke dhol bn rhi hai..aise lag rhi hai jaise khana nhi kha rhi hai balki thus rhi hai..

Ri: wo to hai but I think hume ab rukna chahiye ab dekh agar yeh logo ko jayada problem hogayi to musibat a jayegi...

Shi: ha yaar sahi bola agar inko kuch hogaya phir yeh shadi k ghar me itna kaam koan karega...

Ri (laugh hearing her): tu bhi na chal now let's move on to our main plan...(wink at her n both high five n smirk looking towards boys)

Shilpa call minnie n give her some chocolates n make her understand everything

N then scene shows minnie quietly go under the dinning table without anyone's notice n come back after doing her part of work n come back n give a done sign to shilpa while shilpa got happy n Sign to riddhima while riddhima smirk n suddenly make some water fall on sid's trouser

While all girls look towards shilpa n watching her smile they instantly know plan is done now its time for melodrama ;)

N here after with intention making the water fall riddhima started to act first keeping her both hand palm in her mouth then said: I'm so so so sorry ("not at all I'm sorry "saying in mind) maine bilkul nhi dekhi sachi me ( in mind "dekhi hai isiliye to girayi")

N she started to clear the table water with napkin making it all wet n again making more water fall on his trouser

Ri (smirking in mind n giving a praising pat on her own back n making a sad face): sorry sorry sorry...

Where by now everyone's attention was shifted towards them...

Pa: riddhima dekho to...

Sha (looking at her lovely daughter's face totally got deceived n cutting in between padma's talk said): are sid tu ek kaam kar beta andar ja ke change karle fatafat...

N he got up n go inside with other elders leaving rymsha behind only with youngers..

N here As soon as shashank said that a hidden smirk was happened to be appear in all the girl's face

But as because it's hidden no one actually saw it ;p

As soon sid just took a step he just fall on his face just on the grasses

Watching him falling all boys stood up to go but as soon as they take one step all fall without armaan n atul only..

Let's see what was actually done by girls that actually make boys fall on their faces..

So let's take u all in little flashback...

Actually that shoes pe juice girna is all girls idea so that boys have to wear snickers n later that extra sweet behavior also a preoperational process of their master plan

So let's move on to what exactly was their plan...

Actually when shilpa called minnie that was for a reason

She actually convinced her to do something for them by giving chocolate as bribe...

Let's see what exactly she was said..

Shilpa giving sign to minnie called her inside n said: minnie tu kitna pyari lag rhi hai aj,tune thik se breakfast to ki na...kitne din ho gaye tujhse thik se baat tak nhi hui...

Minnie makes a face n said: main thik hu n har din ki tarah hi lag rhi hoon bekar me jhooti tareef karni band karo n tell me karni kya hai n badle me mujhe kya milegi...

Shilpa patting at her back as if appreciated so much: wah badi samajhdar hai tu to (when minnie just give a look) acha acha bata rhi hoon tum dono behne bhi na aise ghurte ho jaise ki (minnie make one brow up) matlab acha hai u see boht cute ho dono k dono.acha sun tujhe na ek kaam karni hogi...

Mi: bolo...

Shi: wo na breakfast table k niche ghus k har boys except pops,chote papa n jiju ko chodke sabke shoe laces kholke aise bandhne hoge that when they took a step ahead they will fall on their face ... tu samajh gayi na..

Mi:par isse mujhe kya milegi...

Shi: tu bhi na ruk (she took out a dairy milk bubble n forward it towards minnie but before minnie catch she hide it n said)pehle kaam...

Mi: business ka pehla rule hai trust u have to trust me pehle na..

Shi:oye badi badi bate karna band kar jake jitna bola hai utna kar warna we have more way too..

Mi (showing attitude): thik hai thik hai ja rhi hoon..

Then she was run to her room n when shilpa call her n said:oye tu andar kya karne gayi thi...

Mi (cooly): are I'm going for a mission kuch instrument to honi chahiye na sath me..

Shi (confusedly): instrument???

Minnie show a small torch n some thread also which she kept if needed..

While shilpa give a weird look but minnie show attitude n walk away while entering inside table quitely without noise

Here riddhima join her n said:kya hua tu aise kyun khadi hai..

Shilpa stunned said: wo sach me teri behen hi hai na

Ri (confused): ha kyun...??

Shi: nhi bas confirm kar rhi thi..

Ri: tu bhi na rupanzel chal...

N here minnie did her work perfectly without one person as that person was not wearing any footwear

It was none other than arman who didn't wear any footwear do Minnie couldn't tie his lace twistedly...

So when minnie thought she would tell this to shilla but shilpa was too excited for hearing out n give signal to riddhima about work is done so riddhima did the next portion making them get up to walk n next... Booouuummmppp

So back to present again..

Here watching all fall atul n armaan got little bit confused

When girls also come forward n shilpa with fake concern said: kya hua...gir gayi..kahi chot to nhi ayi...waise gira kaise.. (as if examining them) oh hooo itne bade ho gaye abho tak sho laces bandhni nhi ayi tch..tch.. kya hogi tum logo ka...

Saying this much she turn n look towards girls with silent laugh which only noticed by girls only

N here boys hearing shilpa was little bit confused but as soon they looked at their leg

They saw their left shoe laces are tied with right leg shoes laces as they clearly remember they tied it properly...

Rymsha also get up n watching them slowly stand beside riddhima n whispered: yeh sare tere plans hai na..

Riddhima at once got startled but nxt second composing herself n making all innocent face said: main nhi toh..

Ry (with I knew it u would deny look): don't I know I well darling btw us airport wale dude k upar hi itni meherban kyun baki sabko to gira diya..

Ri (as she also noticed armaan barefoot she got y minnie couldn't tie his footwear laces so in a defeated voice she said): us idiot ne jhute hi nhi pehne toh kya karu.. ( then suddenly she realised she actually accept her plan was it n bit her tong n look towards rymsha with pitiful eyes n said slowly) who actually bui..woh..

Ry (laughing then holding her ear): after watching morning scene I was expecting nothing less from u...but I think right now, someone else need our attention(n point towards the boys who get up by now n fighting with girls for making them fall)

Rymsha got in between them while making them leave each other n riddhima just help her while they were not stopping rymsha shout: Stoooppp

That's it all fall quite in a second

Ry (scolding): kya bachoon jaisi harkat kar rahe ho..ek ek to shadi ki umar ki ho aur behave dekho school ki bache bhi tumlogo se jayada samajhdaar hai..

Ra (was about to explain): rym..

Ry: don't rym me rahul dekh rhi hoon pehle kal tumlogo ne start ki ladn phir girls ne jawab di toh phir raat ko jhagda (all surprised knowing she knows about night ki jhagda) itna hairan hone ki jarurat nhi hai mere bhi ankh hain main bhi dekh sakti hoon n jitna I know main sun bhi sakti hoon behri nhi hui abhi tak..

Ri: but bui apko yeh sab kisne batai..

Ry: huh batane ki kya jarurat jab sab kuch maine apne ankhon se dekhi ho n kano se suni ho..n btw back to topic n u guys (pointing girls) kya kiya tum logo ne inse ladogi bina wajah toh yeh bhi badla lenge na.. (while guys smirk watching her scolding girls when she turn towards boys n said) n tum log apna batterisi dikhana band karo itni si bato ka batangar bana di tumlogo ne I mean jhagda hua to darane lagogi kya n phir yeh log obviously tum logo k darane k baad aise thosi hi chod deta..

Btw jo hua so hua yeh shadi ka ghar hai koi rohit shetty ka film ka set ya bond series ka new movie nhi hai jaha har do min me action nazar ayegi got that..(By now everyone was standing with head hang down)n now listen to me very very carefully ab mujhe aisa koi tamasha nhi chahiye..aj boht sare functions ki tayariyaan karni hai so abhi tum log jaoge apne apne ghar n will come back with ur belongings n tab I will assign everyone to their work n uske pehle go n apna yeh thobra thik karo jake..

While all werw still standing she shout: leave..

N others run to go when rymsha called out riddhima n armaan to hold back a while..

When everyone leave she turn towards them n said: u two.. make this note seriously on head that if I saw u two fight na that would be so worst for both of u..(when both were surprised y she is specially saying this to them) ab aise innocently dekhne ki jarurat nhi hai suit nhi karta tum dono ko itna innocence..

Ri: par bui maine kiya kya hai..

Ry: oh ho u guys don't know what u done so innocent of u...tumdono ko kya lagta hai I don't know wo subah wali cockroach n abhi wali shoe lacea bandhna kiska ya bolu kiski ideas thi..

Both stood their silently this time not uttering a word n rymsha smirk n said: so listen to me carefully shadi hone tak agar maine tum logo ko jara si bhi ladte hue dekha na toh phir bas dekhna I will lock u both up in a room for long time n wouldn't leave u till u be friends with each other..

Both literally shocked hearing her words when she again start: ok now armaan tum to ghar ja hi rahe ho to jate waqt ridzi ko mandir chod dena..

Ri: par bui..

Ry: meri baat khatam nhi hui ab tak..(riddhima nod n rymsha said)n tu saran ko sath me leke ja n list lete jana priyu di (priya kappoor) se god tika k liye jo saman bachi hai lane k liye who le lena n pandit ji ko bhi sath lete ana(n turning towards armaan) n tum yaha ate waqt tino ko pick karke lekw ana ok..

Ri (complaining): par iske sath kyun main akele hi ja sakti hoon na bui...

Ry: jitna bola jay utni kar..ja..

Ri (pout n said): u r so turning villan this time bui..

Ry (giving a final look): ridzi..

Ri (huffed): fine I'm going to get ready...(leave)

This whole time armaan was little confused that he couldn't utter a single word so rym asked: do u have any problem?

Ar(blankly): huh.. no.. I mean nhi I don't have any problem..i just bring the car out(leave)

Here rymsha smirk when someone pat her from back she look back to see minnie only..

Mi: sachi sachi ek baat batao kya tumhe sach me sab pata thi...

Ry (giving a silly grin to her said): bachi hai bachi hi reh beta..(n in mind said wah beta kya guessing power hai teri main to sirf andaze laga rahi thi n this idiots sare bate khud hi jaheer kardi apni expression se..ab maza ayega is shadi me..let's see age kya hoti hai..)

Scene shift at mandir

As after leaving riddhima here armaan was gone to get fresh up n bring his belongings n reached the same mandir but riddhima was still not there n he also didn't have her number so he call atul n getting her number he first call n when she didn't receive he started to give miscalls as much as possible..so that she get irritated n how can he forget the morning incident after all.. ;)

N here riddhima after taking everything send saran to bring one more thing when she was sitting waiting for him n talking with pandit while suddenly she heard "take sip from my secret potion I will make u fall in love for a spell that can't be broken one drop should be enough boy u belong to me I got the recipe n its call black magic..." first she started to think who is playing song in here but suddenly she remembered it was none other than her own phone which is ringing but before she could receive it hot cut but the most irritating thing started after wards that is miscalls..

The miscalls were coming this much frequently that she couldn't even able to silent the phone but with much difficulty she done it but she don't know this number...don't know y she have a gut feeling that whoever it is someone from boys..

But now what can she do she is talking with the pandit so she can't check on it..

Soon she while talking with pandit come down as saran isn't back yet...

Here on the other side armaan who was sitting above his car's bonnet suddenly feel a gush of wind touch his face, he look up from his mobile screen to only being lost in the feature coming down from stairs of mandir cladding in a white salwar suit with hair almost flying making her veil falling n hiding her eyes while she just holding her veil properly in place n moving her hand to move the hairs from her face..

Here armaan was trying hard to see her face as sometimes because of veil n sometimes because of hair all he could see is her smile nothing much..

Finally the girl succeed to hold her hair n veil in place making her face visible but as soon as armaan saw the face he immediately scold himself for loosing himself n look anywhere but her..

Here riddhima suddenly feel wind so hard that she was having problem to handle her hairs n veil together n finally when she properly handle it she look forward to only get surprised watching that armaan there who was looking at her with something much different in his eyes but as soon as their eyes meet with each other armaan remove his gaze which seems little odd to her but she ignore the fact..

Riddhima bid bye to pandit as he said he will come by himself as he need to do some work before the function start,so after that he promised to be reach in time n leave

As soon as riddhima reach near armaan she saw armaan get down from the bonnet so she asked to wait as saran is to come n after that she took out her phone to be shocked...

101 miscall from that unknown number

She frowned n thought to make a call before saran come

As soon as she hear the call ringing she heard a ringtone from just behind her n look back to see the phone was in armaan's hand she go forward n snatched the phone to see the number n now she was just about to brust on him when saran come back

So she just sit in car angrily not uttering a word in back seat so saran had to sit on passenger seat..

N here as soon armaan's phone ring n armaan watch the number even before he could react riddhima snatch it,he was about to protest but watching her angry face he just shut his mouth..n when he was preparing for riddhima's shouting saran save him from it by coming

N later riddhima gone to sit in back seat n he couldn't say anything about it but he did notice n keep stealing glances In whole ride though riddhima barely even look at him...

On the other side riddhima did notice armaan glancing at her but she just hold the anger n thought of what would be her next step but one thing is decided that it will be done after the god tika as she is going to be very busy aftrr she reach home..

After they reach home the god tila preparation start n soon it's done perfectly with rymsha n riddhima's observation

N all then start to prepare for nxt function which is mehendi

At afternoon in rangin ashiyana

The whole building is glittering with colorful fairy lights n lanterns

In garden there is a huge open tent which is decorated with green n off white color curtains with crystal curtains n the full roof is covered with marigold garlands giving it a excellent view to watch..

There is setting of four huge sitting space where the mehendi ladies were sotting on one side n in other side some ladies singing songs with dholak n all n in other two the girls sitting as some mehendi ladies applying mehendi at bride's hand..

Every girl was there wearing light green n bright yellow mixed duppatta with dark green lahenga choli n all have same hair style except riddhima n minnie

Minnie is just having ponytail n riddhima couldn't done anything as she n shilpa had to do everyone's makeup as shilpa got ready first but due to all work riddhima couldn't

As it's a girl function so boys are not allowed here

But suddenly we saw riddhima stealing go inside the house n he saw all boys are in pool room she stealingly go there n hide herself n started searching something without being noticed n finally she found it n was about to take it when she saw someone come n sit just beside her hiding spot that someone is nobe other than armaan mallik

He was with boys when suddenly he remember something n come to check on his mobile but as soon as he reached near the sofa where just behind it riddhima is sitting, he feel some unknown feeling awake though he couldn't justify it but ignore it thinking its just her infatuation...

After that he go back again leaving his mobile on side table

Riddhima smirk n did her plan complete n think with a smirk: ab ayega maza.. ab armaan mallik ap kabhi bhi kisi ko misscall nhi dene ka baat sapno me bhi nhi sochoge... *smirk*

After that she leave without making anyone notice her inside..

At garden...

Riddhima was helping to serve some juices when rymsha said : tu bhi aja mehendi laga le..

Ri: nhi bui ap log laga lo main raat ko lagaungi sone se pehle abhi main bhi mehendi laga k beith gayi to itna sara kaam hai kaise khatam hogi..

Ry: are tu aja twnsion na le kaam to hote rahegi..

N with that she force her so she just put finger cap style mehendi but she said baki ka she will apply at n8..

Inside the house

All boys were playing when armaan got a misscall, he got up to check when he got another 3 misscall on a row..

Like this this miscall thing keep going on..

N this keeps going on...

It's not a single number several number are keep coming on as misscall

All started to ask what happened

When he himself was so much confused about what's happening

He was not even getting a chance to even call back..n even the miscalls were so short that he couldn't even pick it up..he keep trying to pick up but it's like all caller are having a competition about who can give the shorter miscall..

This keeps going on while all boys later make it a topic of laugh..

While armaan got so frustrated that this keep going on suddenly for a second it stop n he immediately made a call from recent misscall

Ar: hello..

A girl: hi

Ar: excuse me mem ap mujhe bata sakti hai is number pe kisne misscall di thi n kyun di thi?

N the next second the thing he heard he almost as if fall from sky..

Ar: whaaattt

That's all for today

I hope jayada bore nhi ki maine

But wo kya hai na I was thinking to post one more part today

I don't know I would able to or not as its not written yet

N exams hai so jayada likh bhi nhi sakti

Well let's see

Tab tak k liye

Lv u all

Sayonara

Asta la vista

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

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Hey Babygirl...

Pehle toh maine Part 27C ki comment karungi...

As maine na res ki na comment :P abhi tak hehehe...

Actually mujhe laga main comment already kardi...

Phir yaad aayi maine comment baad mein karne ke liyeh chod diya aur bhul gayi heehee...

So now about the part, u know it was hilarious...

Ridz was waiting for Armaan to unlock the door but woh bas khud beit gaya lekin Ridz ke liyeh door kholna bhul gaye...

Abhi toh journey start bhi nehi huvi, pehle se hi Armaan shuru hogaye usko thang karna...

Unknowingly sahi, Armaan ne toh thang ki na hahaha...

Ridz was boiling angry...

Hahah Armaan can do anything to irritate and angry Ridz na...

Jab dono airport pe nikal gaye and when Armaan started to drive fast...

Ridz ne slow chalne koh kaha...

Phir hogaye Armaan ke dhimag ka light on...

Irritate karne ka moka jaise chod sakta hai yeh ladka...

Lolz, I was laughing so much when people walk ahead leaving their car behind...

Hadd hai yeh Armaan bhi hehehe...

Ridz ne kitna control kiya...

OMG, in dono koh toh traffic police ne bhi rokh diya...

hahaha Ridz started to curse Armaan for it...

Lolz, traffic police ne socha woh Armaan ka biwi hai hahaa...

Fine bhi nhi kiya for parking in none parking area... Kiya baat hai...

Accha huva jaane diya, nehi toh Ridz Armaan koh khajate :P

Oppps, Ridz ki bua bhi call karke shuru hogaye hahaha...

Bechari Ridz, koi uski baat hi nehi sunte...

I mean Armaan bhi usko itni irritate kar raha hai...

Aur bua bhi bas ek baat pooch rahi hai...

Finally they reach airport.. Ridz toh bhaag gaye andar Armaan koh chod ke...

Hahah I had a feeling yeh dono ek dusre se takra jaenge...

Jab AR ek jhaga ho, na takra ey, aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte na...

Ufff phir hogaye dono shuru, yeh log toh jhagda karna kahin pe bhi shuru karte hai...

Phir finally migaye bua...

Love Bua and Ridz moment...

Hahaha aur Armaan ofcourse...

As usual bua ke saat bhi flirting shuru kardi...

Oh so magic karke flower diya Armaan ne bua koh...

Not bad, bua koh set kar rahi hai yeh ladka before he set Ridz, i mean in future heheh...

Ridz was burning again, with jealousy ya anger woh samajh nehi aayi abhi :P

So Armaan is getting along with Bua...

hahah ab toh pakka Ridz jealous ho rahi hai, seeing her aunt giving more attention to him...

So thats what happen...

Maza aagaya :D sacchi mein hahaa..

Armaan toh hadd karte hai lolzzz...

Now back to present...

So love Ridz moment with Anjali...

When she was talking Anjali baby, hehehe...

It was the cutest moment in this part so far...

Oh ho, yeh log toh jhagda kar beite hai boys vs girls...

Accha huva Ridz ne mana liya girls koh sorry bolne ke liyeh...

Lekin yeh log kuch na kare for revenge... Aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte...

See see, jab Ridz was going back to girls after walking boys and seeing about breakfast...

I knew kuch toh karke rakka hai in boys ne...

Issiliyeh toh Rahul and Sid Ridz koh itni rokhne ki koshish kar raha ta...

Aur Ridz ke cheekh ne ki awaz se toh pakka yakeen hogaya...

This is not fair, aise moment par tohdina rokhte hai Babygirl...

Lekin no worries, mujhe ab pata chalgayi kyun chillayi Ridz ne hehehe...

Chalo ab next part ke comment continue karte haiii...

Muwaahhh

Love u <3

Love this part a lot, it was hilarious and super cute...

Comment to Part 28

Hiyyaaa babygirl...

So here I come with next part comment...

Wouldn't start with my boring talks..

Part ke baare mein bolte hai hehehe...

Lekin usse pehle, I want to congratulate for completing one year...

Yeyyy, tussi ek year complete kardiyaaa...

Wohooo, ab toh double party bante haina :D

Many many congratulation and happy belated birthday...

Main kal raat comment karne wali ti but u know i got tire and was not too well...

So happy that u r continuing with ur story...

And hope u complete many more years :D because ur writing piece is something unique :D

Jaise tu dhuniyamein ek piece ho hahahaha...

Now back to the part comment...

Ahaan, so yeh kiya hai boys ne...

Cockroash ewww... I so hate it...

Mujhe dar nehi lagti but I feel so yuckkk about it hehee...

Hayye, bechari Ridz, kitna dar gayiii...

Waise toh jhansi ki rani banke ghumte hai... yh kiya hogaya hehhe...

Chal sab kissi na kissi cheez se toh darte hoge...

So Rahul and Sid issiliyeh rokh raha ta usko...

Ahaan, i m not really surprise to know yeh idea Armaan ka hai hehehe...

Shashank se toh bacha diya Ridz ne boys koh...

Lekin woh itni aasani se chodenge nehi yeh toh 100% sure hai...

Love girls moment where Shilpa and Niks tell others why Ridz save boys from Shashank...

Shashank usko punish karenge toh maza tohdina aayenge hehe...

Sure they are gonna do something fun...

hahha, omg, yeh girls bhi kissi se kam nehi hai...

Pehle sabke shoes mein juice ghira diya...

Phir khud hi shoes bhej diya...

Hahahaha sabne milke un logo koh bohot zyada khana khila diya...

Boys didn't suspense them doing all this and being extra care...

Phir main plan pe toh Minnie koh bhi shaamil kardiya yeh log...

Hahahah Sid bechare toh pehle target pe hai...

Uske upar juice ghira diya...

Phir boommm...

Ek ek karke ghir gaye hahahaha...

So Minnie tie their shoe lace... Hahahah Armaan ne toh kuch pehna nehi hai barefoot beita ta...

Oh ho so Rym knows everything ya was she guessing...

I think seeing them all from one night, she was just guessing...

Aur woh toh Ridz koh itni acchi se jaante hai, she knows yeh sab Ridz ki plan hai...

When Rym stop them and started to give lecture hahaha...

Sab good students banke khade rehgaye...

Ahaan, so Rym is going to play cubid to bring AR together...

Hahah dono koh warning bhi de diya Rym ne...

Aur saat mein kaam karne ke liyeh bhej diya...

AR saat ho aur Ridz koh Armaan irritate na kare, aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte...

Haha Ridz baat kar rahi ti pandit se issiliyeh phone nhi uta paaye toh Armaan ne usko miss call dena shuru kiya...

Lolz, Ridz expression was worth to see when she get to know it was Armaan...

She had already guess boys mein koi hoga hahaha...

Armaan toh Saran ke wajahse bachgaya, nehi toh wh bohot dar gaye ta Ridz se hahaha...

Back to home, sab kaam mein busy hogaye...

Lekin Ridz ke dhimag mein kuch chal raha hai...

Hahahahah Ridz ne aisa kiya kardiya itne log Armaan koh miss call de raha hai...

Armaan toh irritate and super confused hogaye...

Jaise Ridz koh tang kiya, ulta use bhi koi tang kar raha hai hahaha...

Bechara Armaan, sabke saamne uska mazak ud gaye...

Ahaan, finally Armaan call back one number to check why they were giving so many miss call to him...

Ab kiya kehdiya us ladki ne yeh Armaan aankhen itna bada kardiya...

It was hilarious part again babygirl...

I love it a lottt... and enjoy to the coreee...

Love u Muwaahhh <3

take care...

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gauri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#403

awesome part

hahaha yeh boys vs girls fight kabhi khtm ni hogi

ewww i hate cockraches

minni is too smart for her age

rymsha m just loving her

ab kya sun liya ne armaan ne miss call ke chakkar mein

happy birthday to ARMAAAN

my u live long haha

post soon next part

all he best for your exams

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palak sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

heyya pikachu happy birthday sweetie to u too n this story too god bless u may u get everything u want

now coming to the story its really cool n hilarious
it was so much fun too read it
ong ridhz ki shout sunke to main dar gyi ki hua kya yahan or kya plan kiya tha boys ne fake cockroach old technique ridhz bhi na hahaha bechari hahaha
oh oh shanky ko gussa agaya ab to gye boys but ye kya ridhz ne bacha liya unhe but kyn????? strange!!!!!
oh to ye baat h revenge drama start hihihi i m loving this ab ye girl kya plan kar rhi h kuch btate nah h sab silently karte h *pout*

yeh ho kya rha h boys ke shoes me juice giraya phir khud hi unhe abhi ke Snickers diye kuch samajh nah aya??? or minnie ko table ke neeche kyn bheja kya chal rha h inke dimag me??
omg ye hahahahahahahahaha kya plan tha hahahahaha or lo panga girls se yehi hoga inke saath haahahaha

but ek baat samajh nah ayi ye sab gire but armaan or atul kyn nah gire???

oh to isilye armaan bach gya jo shoes nah pehle lucky guy varna vo bhi
not again phir shuru hogye awwe i loved how ryshm tease ridhz cute scene
ohk world war shuru hua fir but thank God ryshm bui ne rok liya varna puri shaadi me ye log ladte rehte to mxa kya ata very good bui i m with u

sabko seedha kardiya 2 min me she is very strict yaar hihi it looks like she is principal n all them r student
specially vo ar ko jo daanta h

ohho vo missed call wala game mast tha hahaha omg 101 missed call r he serious??? idiot ab ridhz chodegi nah use
or vohi hua gussa hogyi
ab gya armaan
n yes but ye kya kiya ridhz ne hihihi le liya badla tit for tat hahaha but ye kiye kaise???
tch again wrong timing to end the part

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
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Hey Babygirl...
Pehle toh maine Part 27C ki comment karungi...
As maine na res ki na comment :P abhi tak hehehe...
Actually mujhe laga main comment already kardi...
Phir yaad aayi maine comment baad mein karne ke liyeh chod diya aur bhul gayi heehee...

So now about the part, u know it was hilarious...
Ridz was waiting for Armaan to unlock the door but woh bas khud beit gaya lekin Ridz ke liyeh door kholna bhul gaye...
Abhi toh journey start bhi nehi huvi, pehle se hi Armaan shuru hogaye usko thang karna...
Unknowingly sahi, Armaan ne toh thang ki na hahaha...
Ridz was boiling angry...

Hahah Armaan can do anything to irritate and angry Ridz na...
Jab dono airport pe nikal gaye and when Armaan started to drive fast...
Ridz ne slow chalne koh kaha...
Phir hogaye Armaan ke dhimag ka light on...
Irritate karne ka moka jaise chod sakta hai yeh ladka...

Lolz, I was laughing so much when people walk ahead leaving their car behind...
Hadd hai yeh Armaan bhi hehehe...
Ridz ne kitna control kiya...

OMG, in dono koh toh traffic police ne bhi rokh diya...
hahaha Ridz started to curse Armaan for it...
Lolz, traffic police ne socha woh Armaan ka biwi hai hahaa...
Fine bhi nhi kiya for parking in none parking area... Kiya baat hai...
Accha huva jaane diya, nehi toh Ridz Armaan koh khajate :P

Oppps, Ridz ki bua bhi call karke shuru hogaye hahaha...
Bechari Ridz, koi uski baat hi nehi sunte...
I mean Armaan bhi usko itni irritate kar raha hai...
Aur bua bhi bas ek baat pooch rahi hai...

Finally they reach airport.. Ridz toh bhaag gaye andar Armaan koh chod ke...
Hahah I had a feeling yeh dono ek dusre se takra jaenge...
Jab AR ek jhaga ho, na takra ey, aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte na...
Ufff phir hogaye dono shuru, yeh log toh jhagda karna kahin pe bhi shuru karte hai...

Phir finally migaye bua...
Love Bua and Ridz moment...
Hahaha aur Armaan ofcourse...
As usual bua ke saat bhi flirting shuru kardi...

Oh so magic karke flower diya Armaan ne bua koh...
Not bad, bua koh set kar rahi hai yeh ladka before he set Ridz, i mean in future heheh...
Ridz was burning again, with jealousy ya anger woh samajh nehi aayi abhi :P
So Armaan is getting along with Bua...
hahah ab toh pakka Ridz jealous ho rahi hai, seeing her aunt giving more attention to him...

So thats what happen...
Maza aagaya :D sacchi mein hahaa..
Armaan toh hadd karte hai lolzzz...

Now back to present...
So love Ridz moment with Anjali...
When she was talking Anjali baby, hehehe...
It was the cutest moment in this part so far...

Oh ho, yeh log toh jhagda kar beite hai boys vs girls...
Accha huva Ridz ne mana liya girls koh sorry bolne ke liyeh...
Lekin yeh log kuch na kare for revenge... Aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte...

See see, jab Ridz was going back to girls after walking boys and seeing about breakfast...
I knew kuch toh karke rakka hai in boys ne...
Issiliyeh toh Rahul and Sid Ridz koh itni rokhne ki koshish kar raha ta...
Aur Ridz ke cheekh ne ki awaz se toh pakka yakeen hogaya...

This is not fair, aise moment par tohdina rokhte hai Babygirl...
Lekin no worries, mujhe ab pata chalgayi kyun chillayi Ridz ne hehehe...
Chalo ab next part ke comment continue karte haiii...
Muwaahhh
Love u <3
Love this part a lot, it was hilarious and super cute...

Comment to Part 28

Hiyyaaa babygirl...
So here I come with next part comment...
Wouldn't start with my boring talks..
Part ke baare mein bolte hai hehehe...

Lekin usse pehle, I want to congratulate for completing one year...
Yeyyy, tussi ek year complete kardiyaaa...
Wohooo, ab toh double party bante haina :D
Many many congratulation and happy belated birthday...
Main kal raat comment karne wali ti but u know i got tire and was not too well...
So happy that u r continuing with ur story...
And hope u complete many more years :D because ur writing piece is something unique :D
Jaise tu dhuniyamein ek piece ho hahahaha...

Now back to the part comment...

Ahaan, so yeh kiya hai boys ne...
Cockroash ewww... I so hate it...
Mujhe dar nehi lagti but I feel so yuckkk about it hehee...
Hayye, bechari Ridz, kitna dar gayiii...
Waise toh jhansi ki rani banke ghumte hai... yh kiya hogaya hehhe...
Chal sab kissi na kissi cheez se toh darte hoge...

So Rahul and Sid issiliyeh rokh raha ta usko...
Ahaan, i m not really surprise to know yeh idea Armaan ka hai hehehe...
Shashank se toh bacha diya Ridz ne boys koh...
Lekin woh itni aasani se chodenge nehi yeh toh 100% sure hai...

Love girls moment where Shilpa and Niks tell others why Ridz save boys from Shashank...
Shashank usko punish karenge toh maza tohdina aayenge hehe...
Sure they are gonna do something fun...

hahha, omg, yeh girls bhi kissi se kam nehi hai...
Pehle sabke shoes mein juice ghira diya...
Phir khud hi shoes bhej diya...
Hahahaha sabne milke un logo koh bohot zyada khana khila diya...
Boys didn't suspense them doing all this and being extra care...

Phir main plan pe toh Minnie koh bhi shaamil kardiya yeh log...
Hahahah Sid bechare toh pehle target pe hai...
Uske upar juice ghira diya...
Phir boommm...
Ek ek karke ghir gaye hahahaha...
So Minnie tie their shoe lace... Hahahah Armaan ne toh kuch pehna nehi hai barefoot beita ta...

Oh ho so Rym knows everything ya was she guessing...
I think seeing them all from one night, she was just guessing...
Aur woh toh Ridz koh itni acchi se jaante hai, she knows yeh sab Ridz ki plan hai...

When Rym stop them and started to give lecture hahaha...
Sab good students banke khade rehgaye...
Ahaan, so Rym is going to play cubid to bring AR together...
Hahah dono koh warning bhi de diya Rym ne...
Aur saat mein kaam karne ke liyeh bhej diya...

AR saat ho aur Ridz koh Armaan irritate na kare, aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte...
Haha Ridz baat kar rahi ti pandit se issiliyeh phone nhi uta paaye toh Armaan ne usko miss call dena shuru kiya...
Lolz, Ridz expression was worth to see when she get to know it was Armaan...
She had already guess boys mein koi hoga hahaha...
Armaan toh Saran ke wajahse bachgaya, nehi toh wh bohot dar gaye ta Ridz se hahaha...

Back to home, sab kaam mein busy hogaye...
Lekin Ridz ke dhimag mein kuch chal raha hai...
Hahahahah Ridz ne aisa kiya kardiya itne log Armaan koh miss call de raha hai...
Armaan toh irritate and super confused hogaye...

Jaise Ridz koh tang kiya, ulta use bhi koi tang kar raha hai hahaha...
Bechara Armaan, sabke saamne uska mazak ud gaye...
Ahaan, finally Armaan call back one number to check why they were giving so many miss call to him...
Ab kiya kehdiya us ladki ne yeh Armaan aankhen itna bada kardiya...

It was hilarious part again babygirl...
I love it a lottt... and enjoy to the coreee...
Love u Muwaahhh <3
take care...

Hey jiji
Wow
So much comments
Its lucky day for me right
I guess so..

I m glad u like tge part
Dono ek sath ho n aisa na ho
Aisa ho sakti hai kya

Ab koi aisa karegi to irritated to hogi hi
Ridzi to atleadt sit inside
Main hoti toh car k door kholke bahar nikal jati
N u know would hv took a cab n left him
*well just kidding*
Don't u know me ;) :p

Yea
Armaan n flirting na kare kaise ho sakti hai
U see ;)

U so intelligent jiji :p

I m glad u like it
N riddhima's talk with anjali's baby

Ha toh toh pata chalegi hi na
U already read it na*wicked smile*

Comment reply for prt 28

Hawww
Apke talk n boring
How cm
I never realized

Kya jiji
Kis baat pe congo bol rhi ho
Thik se update nhi de pati
Kaise khatam hogi yeh..
Huh
Seriously jiji many years no way
If i could then by end of this year it will end
Insha Allah

Mujhe lagti hai dar
I so hate cockroach
U know ek bar cockroach bite on my finger tips almost make it bleed n thodi deep cut
Mumma nxt morning told its by cockroach
Ususally when cockroach bite this happen
I so hate it

Wahh
U got it :p

Just wait jiji
Will update in a while u will got to know

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: gaurijw
awesome part
hahaha yeh boys vs girls fight kabhi khtm ni hogi
ewww i hate cockraches
minni is too smart for her age
rymsha m just loving her
ab kya sun liya ne armaan ne miss call ke chakkar mein

happy birthday to ARMAAAN
my u live long haha
post soon next part
all he best for your exams

Heyy

Thanks a lot

Glad u like it

Oh same pinch

I hate cockroach tooo

Well

Thanks for wishes

N btw sorry for getting vanished

Actually i was pretty much busy this semester

Couldn't even got time to cm online properly

Writing was just out of question

I hope u don't mind

Thanks again

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: lashyyy
heyya pikachu happy birthday sweetie to u too n this story too god bless u may u get everything u want

now coming to the story its really cool n hilarious
it was so much fun too read it
ong ridhz ki shout sunke to main dar gyi ki hua kya yahan or kya plan kiya tha boys ne fake cockroach old technique ridhz bhi na hahaha bechari hahaha
oh oh shanky ko gussa agaya ab to gye boys but ye kya ridhz ne bacha liya unhe but kyn????? strange!!!!!
oh to ye baat h revenge drama start hihihi i m loving this ab ye girl kya plan kar rhi h kuch btate nah h sab silently karte h *pout*

yeh ho kya rha h boys ke shoes me juice giraya phir khud hi unhe abhi ke Snickers diye kuch samajh nah aya??? or minnie ko table ke neeche kyn bheja kya chal rha h inke dimag me??
omg ye hahahahahahahahaha kya plan tha hahahahaha or lo panga girls se yehi hoga inke saath haahahaha

but ek baat samajh nah ayi ye sab gire but armaan or atul kyn nah gire???

oh to isilye armaan bach gya jo shoes nah pehle lucky guy varna vo bhi
not again phir shuru hogye awwe i loved how ryshm tease ridhz cute scene
ohk world war shuru hua fir but thank God ryshm bui ne rok liya varna puri shaadi me ye log ladte rehte to mxa kya ata very good bui i m with u

sabko seedha kardiya 2 min me she is very strict yaar hihi it looks like she is principal n all them r student
specially vo ar ko jo daanta h

ohho vo missed call wala game mast tha hahaha omg 101 missed call r he serious??? idiot ab ridhz chodegi nah use
or vohi hua gussa hogyi
ab gya armaan
n yes but ye kya kiya ridhz ne hihihi le liya badla tit for tat hahaha but ye kiye kaise???
tch again wrong timing to end the part

Hey tinker bell
Lv u for wishes

I'm so glad u like it
Are age pad sab pata chal jayegi
Pehle se chillane band kar :p

I m glad u like rymsha part

Ab aise harkat ki toh kaise chodegi

Don't worry
Will update sooon
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: Roeamee
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Thanks for reading

N giving comment

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#409

Heyyy

Alll*weaving handss*

Won't talk to me*sad face sit*

I know I vanished all of a sudden without warning but believe me plz

I was so busy I couldn't even got time to cm online

This semester was hell of a pressure

We nearly made 4dresses 2out of it is gown that too for show

N I was so occupied with all this

N u know I even shift in hostel

N I don't hv a laptop

So ...

I know I give too much excuses

But what to do

I was really busy*look with puppy face*

Plz forgive me

I almost forget how to write

Plz bear it

Lv u alll lots lots lotsss

So here goes the story...

Shukriya..

Precap:

Boht sari uljhane n natkhat hai rahe

Ladte ladte hui karib wo bahe

Kabhi gussa nak pe

To kabhi dimag pe chadaw

Dekhte hai kab tak chalengi inki gusse ki paraw

Part 29

He can't believe the thing which other person said

He cut the call n thought to check when again this miscall thing start so he thought to check from his laptop

But when he check that to he couldn't found the battery of it

He got so frustrated so then he just borrow atul's mobile n opening web browser type"www.olx.com"

N when after searching a while he got what he was finding he just looked towards the screen unbelievably...

There it is...

Let's show u guys what it is...

There is a pic of some super sports bike n below it in bold letter it's written..

Excellent offer ...

Don't miss it...

I want to give away this bike as a gift to one person who could give the shortest miscall

Anyone could think y I'm gonna do so

Actually I don't like this bike much so I just want to give it to someone

So here is ur offers...

************ [obviously none other than armaan's number it is ;) 3:)]

Give as much as miscall in this number

The person who would able to give the shortest miscall I will call him or her n will send this vike at ur doorstep

Conditions

Don't make a whole call

Coz if u do so then this offer would not ve available for you then...

So enjoy..

N be the best one won..

Bck to story

Armaan started to think who could do this so he first call one of his frnd who do job in IT department n ask him to see from which number or from where this ad has been posted

But the thing most surprised is when he got to know is the number from where it's posted is none other than his own number

He started to think who could do this when suddenly something click in his mind n he go towards out...

Let's see now what's happening outside..

All ladies were by now applied mehendi in their hands

Though riddhima did apply a very less saying she gonna apply at n8 so she only put on her finger tips

When the guys without armaan come to the garden ..

They were thinking to do something in revenge but was little bit scared too that if rym caught them this time they will be in serious trouble and rahul n sid totally aware of it did warn the other boys so they thought to drop the topic for a while n enjoy..

But they were not allowed in mehndi but the elders one(ram,shashank) encourage them to come out..

So here they are...

But now all were thinking how to go inside when suddenly someone tap on ram's behind

He look back but before even he can see the man hug him tightly when others smiked n shashank said: abhi tu to kal ane wala tha na...

Ab: ji papa wo chutki ko surprise karni thi toh bas agayi...

While all smile thinking how much this siblings are close to each other..

Here after abhi meet all n specially ram as he saw him after a long time but he is so close to him..abhi asked: waise aplog yaha kya kar thi ho..?

They all said about it ..

N abhi said:oh itni si baat I know how to broke in there let's go...

Nxt we know music start...

All girls who were busy putting mehndi n watching others mehndi design look at the source of music n saw A boy with his back playing guitar n other boys also around him but facing towards the girl..

Girl were at once stand all ready to beat them up n throw out but riddhima stop them saying: are ruk dekhne to de yeh guitar koan baja rahe hai n yeh log karne kya wale hai..

When muski said: abe dekhna bhekhna kuch nhi hai yeh armaan hi hoga n inko to bas yaha bagawat karni hai..

Ri: par mujhe kyun lagti hai it's not armaan..

Rym:tujhe badi achi se pata hai yeh armaan nhi hai how can be u so sure..(with suspicious look outside but smirk from inside)

Ri:bui..

Shi(before riddhima could say shilpa cut in): guys just see na..

O o o o o [Scene shows Shashank come out singing ,ram also join him]

Mehndi Laga Ke Rakhna [Scene shows abhi turn n sing]

Doli Saja Ke Rakhna [Scene shows riddhima n minnie jump like a small kid watching him]

Lene Tujhe O Gori [Scene shows other boys also come forward n sing]

Aayenge Tere Sajna [Scene shows abhi goes towards Padma n point towards her n sing]

music stop

As soon as he finish the line he got engulfed in a bare hug from both left n right side n both ladies who supposed to be none other than our very own riddhima n minnie they stay in hug till abhi shout to at least leave him so he could breathe ..

Ri(shouting in joy nearly making in front of his eardrums): bhaiyaa app wo bhi itni jaldi..ap to kal ane wale the na..

Ab: chutki clam down first,wo kya hai na,ana toh mujhe kal hi tha but maine socha kyun na ek din pehle ajau apne pyare behno k khatir...

Ri: aww bhaiyaaa we lvs u a lottt...(she hugs him when from behind minnie said)

Mi: yaha tak to thik hai bhaiya but ap 90's k jamane gana kyun ga rahe the kitna boring hai na wo songs..

Ri: oye tu kisse 90's bata rhi hai be srk is the best uske gane kabhi boring nhi hoti...

Then just this siblings start fight over who is the best n riddhima being a loyal fan of srk didn't leave it where minnie is just too stubborn to say that srk is just waste of time...

Suddenly they both drugged in two sides by two pair of strong arms..

Which belongs to none other than shashank n ram

Bg music start

Sha:Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull

(chull chull...) [Scene shows shashank holding riddhima turn her n start singing while all look at him with wide eyes hearing the lyrics specially while ram also join singing while holding minnie n with hands start to make her dance while she was not dancing]

Yeah..[scene shows shashank singnal the boys n girls to cut in while they gladly do]

Ab:Dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla[ Scene shows abhi took hold of riddhima's hands from shashank's grip n making her turn sing]

Ladki nahi hai tu hai garam maamla [ Scene shows abhi then turn n repeat the same action with minnie n sing]

Bolti bandh meri, kahun kya bhala[ Scene shows all the boys n girls keep dancing around them]

Kuchh bhi kahaa nahi jaaye [Scene shows both girls go n sit beside both side of padma n complain that all r irritating them while padma smile at them n show hand to others n both girl hug her showing toung to others n then all make face so padma push riddhima to go dance with them]

Ab:Kya naache tu Dilli, hile hai London [Scene shows abhi push rymsha n priya,n riddhima in middle while rymsha n priya do the steps of alia bhat n riddhima taking abhi's turban wear n start to do sidharnt's steps from song]

Matak matak jaise Raveena Tandon [Scene shows priya got aside while rymsha n riddhima both does the steps]

Aag lagaane aayi hai ban-than [Scene shows rymsha saw armaan coming towards so suddenly she got an idea n she got aside n push abhi n rahul to dance with riddhima]

Goli chal gayi dhaayn [Scene shows as abhi n riddhima got aside both start to attack towards rahul making others laugh]

Nakhre vilayti [Scene show atul also join them doing crazy dance]

Ego mein rehti [Scene shows like atul all boys join n pointing towards girls start to dance whioe all girls were fuming rather then riddhima as she was laughing as abhi put minnie on his neck n riddhima run n jump on his back n that makes three siblings fall n now both abhi n riddhima make minnie at target of their tickling]

Tashan dikhati full [Scene shows minnie got up n somehow tun frm them towards n both just saw her run then laughing join other]

Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull

(chull chull...) [Scene shows ram n shashank cm behind of girls n sing n push them to dance floor while boys apologize]

Arey daayein, baayein

Kaise kamar tu jhulaaye

Physics samajh nahi aaye

Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull [Scene shows minnie running bump with armaan who was standing at door step totally stuned watching riddhima dance like this n the clossness between the siblings throug he don't know the are siblings n minnie after a while took armaan towards all n here all boys dance making a circle round while girls stand in between]

Arey daayein, baayein

Kaise kamar tu jhulaaye

Physics samajh nahi aaye [Scene shows boys got a side n dance sidharnt's steps frm song n girls did alia's steps]

Sandal mere cham cham karde [Scene shows all boys stand infront of girls like abhi infront of riddhima,rahul infront muskaan,sid infront shilpa n others infront of their own jodi der with out the bride n groom n ram priya rymsha n nani n armaan n minnie too and do steps like first push on their chest making them backward n then did alia's step]

Hege high brand de [Scene shows boys follow them n did sidharnt's steps]

Airplane mundeyan de [Scene shows girls step aside n did alia's step pushing boys n making them stand]

Mere heel pe honde land ve [Scene shows girl dances as alia in song]

Saari kudiyan haaye desi chidiyan

Saari kudiyan desi chidiyan

Club ki main bulbul... [Scene shows one by one all come forward n dance while at last ridhhima come n does a little belly dance step while sid make a whistle which make too small sound only to be get smacked by abhi n next second abhi did a huge long whistle while riddhima wink at him this scene didn't got unnoticed by two pair of eyes ,one which was confused other one is observing]

Main ladki beautiful kar gayi chull

(chull chull...) [Scene shows all girls stand in line doing dhumkas n shilpa riddhima n muskaan run towards boys to pull towards dance floor riddhima only pull shashank n ram then taking hold of abhi's hand jump on his back while abhi hold her legs n run while riddhima dance with one hand n other holding abhi's shoulder]

Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull

Arey daayein, baayein

Kaise kamar tu jhulaaye

Physics samajh nahi aaye

Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull

Kar Gayi Chull [Scene shows all join the dance even armaan with minnie join but he was not in total attention on dance while all were doing crazy steps n riddhima was still on abhi's back]

Music end

As the song end all hoot n hug each other laughing while abhi was giving piggy back to riddhima while she n rymsha was busy laughing on one of sid's poor joke that's when minnie come there pulling armaan with her...

Mi(making armaan stand n then facing other cough a little to grab attention but when no one was looking she cough louder still no one notice so she shout); are meri bhi toh sunooo...

That's when all turn around to see armaan n minnie

Mi:boyfriend inse milo yeh hai meri bhaiya n bhaiya yeh hai mere boyfriend

Hearing minnie abhi like got a small shock as he look at armaan n in shock he loose the grip making riddhima fall on ground n shout: Whattt

While riddhima whinnied: Bhaiyaaa

As soon abhi hear it he turn around n help riddhima up while saying: sorry chutki

While armaan who was confused by now got more confused n said: bhaiyaaa!!!!!chutki!!!!

Mi: ha..yeh hai humari bhaiyaa n bhaiyaa jiji ko pyar se chutki bulate hai na..

Ry: n abhi yeh anji k brothers in-law hai

Abhi n armaan both sighed in relief; abhi as he thought minnie make a bf n armaan voz he thought abhi is riddhima's bf :p

As they come out from their bf chakraview they greet each other n talk n in a small time they got like unrepeatable buddy where armaan also almost fogot for y he was here which makes riddhima frown slightly but later she gone bck to her own work later..

Later around evening

By now all girls were go to get ready n rymsha specially taking care of to make padma ready

While outside all mehndi decoration removed n now sangeet decoration is going on where boys were all running here n there to get everything perfect

They make a low huge set but whole area is decorated with sky blue, white n deep blue curtains n fairy lights n many lanterns on side n whole set is decorated with small diya bati at back stage there two change room made one for girls n other for boys ,light are all set even the music system

Now lets see what happening there

All workers were busy to set food n chair setting while only abhi,sid,rahul n armaan were there with armaan's frnds

In last minute after checking all stuff all settle down a while to take breath n check others work r done or not

Ar(looking at sid who is sitting in-between rahul n abhi as armaan is sitting in between as they sit in chairs in half circle and infront of them is a table): food?

Si: done

Ar(looking at rahul): chairs n props?

Ra: done

Ar(looking at abhi): backstage setup?

Ab: done

Ar(marking on the notepad putting done on list): ok decoration,light,music also I checked...n..ummm other things...done..(then putting down the list on table lean backwards with eyes close) finallyyy all done...

Before he could say more he suddenly feel something heavy fall over table he looks up to see riddhima just sit on table in her jeans n top with deep blue scarf holding her hair falling on her front eating apple which make him frown..

Si(looking at riddhima): tu yaha thi abhi tak taiyar nhi hone gayi?sab ate honge aur tu..

Ri(before sid could finish riddhima put a laddu on his mouth taking it frm nearby table): abe gadhe teri tarah do ghante nhi lagte mujhe ready hone bas 15minitue me ready ho jaungi,so...

Tweety(which fly in from nowhere n sitting on riddhima's shoulder): awaaazzz nicheee

While armaan said : impossible ek larki who bhi bas 15minitue me ready absolutely impossible talk, are tum ladkiyon ko toh bas hair thik karne me hi do ghante lag jati hai..(he suddenly remember the call thing but thought will talk about it letter when he got hold of her alone)

Ri(turning her attention towards armaan): u don't know me..so better not challenge my skills

Ar:pfft wht rubbish this is a simple thing no one need to do PhD to know this that girls took ages to get ready..(for confirmation he look at other boys to only see they hv that I'm agree with ridz' look which make him confused)

Ri(getting up totally on her feet now putting both her hand on waist): r u challenging me MR. MALLIK?

Ar: oh yea count on it I know I'm going to win in it..

Ri(smirking): not even in ur dreams ..count on it dude the loser one have to do anything the winner want for 1 whole day..what's say?

By now all boys were sitting straight n looking up at both persons while armaan was about to say yes sid come forward n whisper: armaan mat sun iski baat tu hi musibaat me pad jayegi

Rahul also come forward n whisper: armaan sid sahi keh rhi mat kar challenge

Armaan(whisper bck): kya yaar tum log ek ladki se darti ho no way in hell she can win..no girl can get ready in just 15min that too for an function..(while other were keep saying not to armaan totally ignored n said) mujhe manzoor hai..

Here rahul whisper in sid's ear: bet 100rupee/ yeh harega..

Sid(whisper bck): are tu kya 100 rupee bet lagayega main lagati hu pure pure 50rupee riddhima jitegi

Ra(giving him a irritating look): ha toh main bhi yehi boli na armaan harega..

Si: but maine toh boldi riddhima jitegi

Rahul smack in bck of his head n said: abe gadhe dono ek hi baat hai

While sid said a small oh while straching hand on head

While riddhima said: ok (then taking armaan's mobile put an alarm after 15min n said) so count on it from now.. Best of luck by the way( n wink n walk way while singing bachke rehna re baba bachke rehna re' that's when tweety fly n sit on armaan's head singing the same song n armaan just shook head n tweety fly n sit on riddhima's shoulder singing along with her while armaan n boys look at that way. that's when one by one rahul n sid go patting at his back telling how bad decision he took by letting this challenge to b made

While armaan said: are yaar kaise dost ho tum log tum logo ko mere side hona chahiye naki usko support I know I will win mujhe pura yakeen hain

Rahul(putting 100rupee on table): bet on it u will loose

Si(jumping on it n keeping 50rupee on above rahul): no riddhima will win(while rahul roll eyes n abhi just laungh when armaan look at abhi with questioning eyes)

abhi keep his hand on his shoulder n said: get urself prepare for do something crazy bud coz as I know my chutki u gonna loose miserably n as u already bet for it u gonna loose some from pocket also

Saying that all boys leave living armaan stare at their back..

After 15min

Armaan was getting ready on guest room when he heard knock as he was just come out form taking a shower

He goes to open the door n see there standing riddhima in a baby pink n silver lehenga choli with a multicolored dupatta n hair left in a loose bun with small glittery n flower add on it with less amount of makeup smirking at him..before armaan could say a word he heard his phone alarm goes off to let him know 15min just got over..

Ri(looking at armaan with a smirk): I was going out thought to let u know that u just loose the challenge.(then start to go out of house suddenly come backwards n said) oh yes ready for tomorrow to take my DEMANDS n now plz now get ready rather than just stood here opening ur mouth on just towel

Saying this riddhima left with a smirk when armaan just shocked thinking how is it possible n that's when he realize he was just on towel n realized riddhima might b the only one who doesn't drool watching him shirtless :p

Even she doesn't even give a damn about it where on the other hand he was just blown away by her sweet yet simple look

Scene faded at armaan's confused yet amazed face...

At outside

Riddhima call everyone who was supposed to perform on backstage so she could at least give everyone proper direction

Ry: darling everything ok na?all preparation done ?

Ri: yes bui bas ab sid a jay then we can start our play u know na he is on the main role as me..

Suddenly rymsha think of something n go away after a while she come back with all smiling

All saw sid was coming towards back stage when he suddenly fall out of nothing

All run to him while muskaan inspect his leg n said he got a cramp all were just too much got in tension now as all sit on stairs to think what to do now ..that's when nani come with armaan n said: are bacho tumlog aise kyun beithe ho padma n shashank ati hi hogi..chalo jaldi function shuru ki tayari karo..

Shi(with worry in voice): kaisa taiyari nani is sid k bache(slapping on his cramped leg) ne sari tayari ka sattya nash kardi..kamena function khatam hone k bad nhi gir sakta tha(again slapped on his cramped leg when he whined)

Ri(holding bck shilpa): rupanzel kya kar rhi hai yaar uski kya galti..

Shi(cutting her in): nhi ridz janti nhi tu is kamene ko jaan bujhke karta hai yeh gadhe last time bhi yaad hai na humari uni me kitna bakhera khada kar di thi main bol hi rhi thi tujhe isko main character me mat de nhi tu to tu hai nhi suni na meri baat ab bhugat..

Ry: shhh..tum log apas me ladna band karo n socho ab kya kare..

Na: are ab itni time me kya kia ja sakta hai..koi aisa dhundo jisko sid ki steps pata ho..

Si: aisa to sirf ek hi hai yaha(saying this he looked up to see all looking at him)

All: koun??

Si(without even thinking just blurted out): armaan..

Ry: tab to sirf ek hi rasta baki hai ridz n armaan tum dono ek sath...

Even before rymsha could end the line both shout together: No Way

Scene faded at their glaring at each other face

That's all for today

I hope jayada bore nhi ki maine

N extremely sorry for such late(without some people)

I was too much occupied with uni work

Couldn't even able to get time to reply u all or inform u

I hope u guys will understand

N now as I got few time I will definitely try to post more regularly

Tab tak k liye

Lv u all

Sayonara

Asta la vista

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hailaaa...

yeh koan aayi haiii...

*Took the spec, cleaning it and putting it back...*

Arey wah, yeh toh meri babygirl haiii...

*Waving both hands* Hiii Babygirl...

I know I know tu kyun gayab hogayi ti...

So u don't need to say sorry...

Kyunki main toh teri sorry lungi nehi :P

Chalo chalo, ab story koh lekar aage padte hai...

Part was awesome like usual...

Maine toh bohottt enjoy ki...

Aisa nehi laga, tum itni din baad likh rahe ho...

Wohi masti mazak, suspense... Superbbb...

hahahaha Ridz ne Armaan ke bike koh sell karne ke liyeh add daala...

By god, issiliyeh sab milkar itna miss call maar rahi hai Armaan koh...

bechara, jo apne bike ke liyeh itna deewana hai... Uske naam pe bike koh sell karne ke liyeh add dalwa diya...

Hahaha Armaan ka shock hona toh banta hai...

Ahaan, usko samajh aagaya kisne kiya hoga yeh hehehe...

Wah wah, Abhi aagaya...

hahaha kiya entry maara hai Abhi ne sabke saath...

Uske aane se pehle, sab soch raha ta kaise andar jaae...

Abhi toh bohot smart nikla hahaha...

Aur ghar ke andar, sab unko bhagane ki tayyar kar rahi ti...

lekin Ridz ne rokha, kyunki usko shak hogayi woh Armaan nehi koi aur hai...

Abhi ka wait kar rahi ti, kaise chance chod de dekhne ke liyeh kiski himmat huva aise andar aane ki jab ki ladies function chal rahi ti...

hahaha Ridz and Minnie excitement was super awesome...

Dono kitni khush hogaye apne bade bhai koh dekh ke...

Mast song hai Babygirl... description was super awesome...

hahaha Armaan jo Ridz se baat karne aaya hai, woh Ridz koh dance karte huve dekh ke kho gaya...

Aur Rym was watching Armaan expression, not bad...

Yeh toh bohot smart hai, ab cubic ke role play kar rahi hai toh clever and smart toh hona hi haina...

maine bhi bohottt enjoy ki song koh :D

Hahahah when Minnie introduce Armaan to Abhi...

Abhi ne Ridz koh ghira diya hahaha...

Armaan soch raha ta woh Ridz ki bf hai aur Abhi ne :P hahaha same same socha but for Minnie...

Dono ke expression dekhne layak ta...

Chalo ab toh introduction hogaye acche se, aur Abhi and Armaan become buddies too...

Wah wah, kitni jaldi dono buddies bangaye... Accha hai...

Behen pe line maarne ke liyeh bhai koh set karna padega pehle...

As Abhi is very much possessive about his sisters...

Chalo sangeet ke liyeh saari tayyar bhi hogaye...

Armaan is head, sabse kaam pooch ke note bhi karliya...

hahaha Armaan and Ridz challenging...

Aise kaise Armaan challenge nehi karte, woh Ridz se tohdina haar maanenge...

Lekin Rahul and Sid ke baat maanna chahiyeh ta Armaan koh...

Ab pata nehi Ridz kiya kiya karwaenge Armaan se...

Love AR and others conversation...

hahahah When Armaan saw Ridz ready before the timing, woh toh kho hi gayye...

Usko already kuch kuch ho raha hai Ridz koh normally dekh ke, Ab toh bohot kuch hone wala hai...

Dil mein ganti nehi, guitar, voilin aur bohot kuch bhajenge heheh...

hahaha Rym toh apni kaam bohot accha kar rahi hai...

Usne Sid koh jaan bhujkar ghira diya...

Taaki Ridz Armaan ke saath dance kare heheheh...

Well done Rym, aapne toh bohot accha kaam kiya hai...

Kyun nehi, after all bua haina Ridz ki...

Ridz ke dhimag se zyada Rym ke dhimag chalti hai...

Lolz Shilpa ne kitna maara Sid ke peir pe...

Poor him, already was in pain aur yeh Shilpa ne saara gussa uske peir pe nikal diya...

Ab kiya karenge AR???

Of course dance karna hi padega...

Hmmm Ab Armaan ka kiya hoga...

I mean woh toh already apne dil koh control nehi karpa raha hai Ridz koh dekhke...

Itni close hokar dance karna padega toh, uske dil toh baahar aajanege nehi???

Heheh chalo next part pe dekhte hai...

Dono toh bohot zyada bahane banane wala hai...

Lekin I m sure, Rym mana lenge hehehe...

Continue soon...

Waiting for the next part eagerly...

Muwaahhh

Love it and love u more...

take care <3

Yes yes, my comment is on first :P

toh kiya huva I took a little time to unres hahaha...

res toh pehle maine hi ki na...

toh jab log dekhenge meri hi comment hogi sabse pehle :D

Muwaahhh

love u loadsss... <3

Edited by RihooHaws - 9 years ago

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