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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Jess2014

You're welcome
hmmm...the person 2, ummm.. 🤔 l think that it's Armaan,😛 not sure though.
But I have to wait for so long for the next part, not fair 😭😭
Update soon



Yea will see in next part who is this two
Thanks for participating
Awww...
Don't be sad
Actually na i ws about to post it friday i mean tommorrow
But i forgot about my assignmnts which need to be submitted
& for that i need to complte it 1st
So i have to change my plan
Otherwise i haven't
As the parts are all ready...
Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
hi...
nice start...
your way of writing also so good...
so continue soon...
and pm me pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



Yea will see in next part who is this two
Thanks for participating
Awww...
Don't be sad
Actually na i ws about to post it friday i mean tommorrow
But i forgot about my assignmnts which need to be submitted
& for that i need to complte it 1st
So i have to change my plan
Otherwise i haven't
As the parts are all ready...
Tc

Waiting to see who is that person...😃
It's ok, take your time to update.

Waiting for update and do continue soon.

Take care...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: rojarathy

hi...

nice start...
your way of writing also so good...
so continue soon...
and pm me pls...



Hey
Thanks a lot for ur comment
plz do take part on quiz also
yea surely wi;ll
tc

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



Hey
Thanks a lot for ur comment
plz do take part on quiz also
yea surely wi;ll
tc

its too simple...
may be person 2 is our hero and the queen must be the heroin
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: rojarathy

its too simple...
may be person 2 is our hero and the queen must be the heroin



Well tricky one 😉😆
But mention the name plz...😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Reply to the NOTE :

Jhooti...
Tu writer nehi hai toh itna accha yeh kaise likha???
Writer ke saat saat story teller bhi ho... U know how????
Jaise tumhari story padna shuruki, aisa laga koi bohot acchi kahani suna rahi hai...
All the songs and the way of descriptions... Wow, maine toh bohot enjoy ki...
Mann toh kar rahi hai, bas padti jaun padti jaun...

Of course friendship main favor ke liye koi jhaga nehi hai...
Aur tu toh hai hi ek piece, log apne birthday ke liyeh dusron se gift maangte hai...
Aur tumne return gift de diya... Wah behena wah...

Arey wah, main toh list ki sabse upar hoon hehehe...
Hayye, me too love soo soo soo muchhh...
Oh really, yeh kaise ho gaya maine tujhe help ki :P
Wow songgg... hehehe...
Wah wah, kiya song gaya hai... I love it and I love u more :D


Now comment to THE VERY FIRST PART :

I told you, tu one piece hai...
Story start hone se pehle warning sharning de rahi ho hehehe...
Accha hai Accha hai...
Lekin main toh bore hogi nehi...
Main toh khub enjoy karne wali hoon ;)

Wow, yeh toh meri one of the favorite song hai...
Wah wah, kiya accha song se start kiya hai tumne... I love it...

Tu aur serious???
Yeh kabse hone lagi hehehe...
Phir bhi, starting was cool, love the way u describe the nite with song...
U know which songs is perfect for the situation always na... Thats really cool :D

Wow, yeh ghar toh sach main Heaven lag rahi hai...
Perfect introduction of perfect Heaven... Very nice...
Aur kitna perfectionally tumne house ka intro kardi humse hehehe...
Love u ji love u ;)

Wah, song ke saat saat, ghar ke har part bhi dikha diya...
Mast hai...
Baapre, yeh toh sacchi main heaven hai... Itna saara kamra...
Perfect intro of whole house...

Asli story toh abhi shuru huva na...
Lekin yeh kiya tu toh har jhaga pe puzzle khel rahi ho...
person 1 and 2 and now this girl hailaaa... hehehe koi nehi...
Aaage jaakar pata toh chalna hai koan koan hai yaha...
Yeh kisko kiya hogaya...
Lagta hai heroine ke liyeh hero pareshan hai... After all he said na woh kitna possessive hoti hai...
Hayye, kitna pyar karte hai hero heroine se haina...
Lekin huva kiya ta... Yeh ladki itna sawal jawab kyun kar rahi hai...
Chalo aage badte hai...

Oh ho, yeh toh misunderstanding hogayi...
Pura toh suna nehi heroine ne, ab kiya hoga... Poor Hero...
Yeh soch soch ke kitna pareshan hogaya apne heroine koh achanak kiya hogaya...

Hahaha i know woh girl Muski hi hogi...
Jaise woh Hero se baat kar rahi ti... Sawal pooch rahi ti...
Meri guess sahi hogaya :P oke okey maine naam bola nehi phir bhi I knew it was her...
Aur Hero Armaan hai aur dusra person... Hmmm aage bado hahaha...

Perfect Intro and song for Muskaan hehehe...
Itna intro se toh uske pure biography pata chal gayi...
Moving on back to story...

Baapre, Muski ki gusse aur baat koh sunte toh yeh pakka person 1 Rahul hai hehehe...
Woh itna accha accha naam aur kiske liyeh use karte hai right...
Hayye, yeh kiya hogaya...
Ek misunderstanding ki wajahse heroine toh bohot gussa hogayi aur uske saat saat yeh Muski bhi...
Poor hero uff Armaan ke toh pakka accha class le lenge yeh ladki hehehe...
See see, I was right...Woh Rahul hi hai hehehe...
Yeh dono koh toh har jhaga shuru hojate hai hehehe...

Hahaha, again perfect intro and song...
Wohoo, Rahul Love someone...
Kiya woh hai jo main soch rahi hoon...
Lolz, wohi huva toh main baad main naam bataun ;)

Baapre, yeh Muski bhi na...
Kitna bak bak karte hai...
Hero toh shock main hai yeh soch ke uske heroine ne usko apne aane wali baby ke baare main baat karke misunderstanding hogayaga...
Aur yaha yeh Muski, uska pura ka pura class le ne pe lagi hai...
Ab kiya hogaaa...
Hero toh statue of Liberty , oops liberty nehi, Statue of Heaven Hill banke khada hai hehee...


Mast part hai Baby girl...
Love from the starting to the end...
All intro and songs were superb...
Maine toh already naam bataya hehehe...
Phir bhi bata deti hoon person 2 Armaan hai aur uske queen of heart is Riddhima...
Galat huva toh bhi chalega hahaha...
Because I m not good in guessing game ;)

Baad main kyun :P
Hum toh milte rahenge din main pata nehi kitni baar hahaha...
Hailaaa, woh toh hum expert hai gaali dene main...
We too love u derrr saraaa...

Love u Baby girl...
Muwaahhh <3
take care <3



I'm flying in air...
Hayeee
Itni lambi comment wo bhi mere liye...
main to kya batau...just love u lots lots lots... :* :* :* ❤️❤️

Jhooottt
Aur mainnn
Kabji nhi...[kuch jayada ho gayi na]
To chalo thik hai kabhi kabhi keh deti hoon
But yeh jhoot nhi thi...
Main writter nhi hoon...

Aur wo maine thodi likha wo to mere hatoon ne likha..
Hayyy
Ini tarif main to ...
Sharmagayi sachi me...☺️

itni padne ki baad bhi aur padni thi apko...??????????

Are maine return gift nhi gift hi diya hai...
Kyun ki mujhe achi lagti hai na sabko gift karna
Aur yeh wali gift to meri hatoon me hi thi
I can give it at any momment na
Aur meri bd se achi occation kya ho sakti hai
Right?????/😉

Ha...wo to hongi hi na ap
Kyun ki ap to sabse badi ho...😊
Me tooo love u ji...
Oh really...Apne help nhi ki to kon ki...apki bhatakti atma?????????😲


Comment k liye comment...

Main kya karu ap hi batao
Maine sochi
warning dde dete hai
Ek warning se meri kya jayegi
haina...😉😆

Well pata nhi...
Yeh nayi wali serious wali dauda kabse padne lagi mereko...😛

Actually not evrytime kabhi kabhi jab blank ho jati hoon to kuch bhi yaad nhi ati
Situation hi yaad nhi rehti gaana to dur ki baat

Heaven hai ya nhi wo to nhi pata par ha jo bhi ho is ghar k rehnewale kamal k hai...😉
Waise u didn't say hi to H squire darling...
Say hi na...😉😛😆

Actually na kya hua main likh rhi thi samajh nhi ayi itni badi banglow me kitni kamre honi chahiye to maine ankh band karke numbers pe hat ghumai jo ayi wohi daal diya...😛😆

Woh kya hai na ap jab aise secrets rakhte ho to kitne mannat leke padti hoon na
Aur upar se mujhe puzzles suljhana achi lagti hai
But na nhi suljha pati to i hate it...
are age padho to pata chalegi na...
Yea misunderstanding to hui hai
But kiski sath wo to...
abhi nhi bataungi...😉😛

mujhe pat hai apne pehle hi guess ki thi ki woh muski hai...
ha ha age hi to bad rhi hoon...

Are kahani me aur bhi boht kuch hai
Biography me sirf bio ki b bhi nhi kaha maine...

Yea right...
Muski ki speciality jo hai rahul ko aise nammmo se bulana
Ha woh to sahi hai
Inko toh kahi bhi rakhdo dur se hi pata chal jayegi yeh dono hai
kyun ki unke jagda kabhi jhatam jo nhi hoti

Waise ap kya soch rhi ho mujhe bhi to jarah batao
Main bhi to janu
Chalo yaha nhi batana to WA pe bata do...

Yea yea i know hum milte hai main to baki sab ko bol rhi thi
Btw wait for the shock coming at...
WA pe batati hoon kab coming...😛
Lv u also itna🤗 itna🤗 itnaaa🤗 saraaa
Tc


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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



I'm flying in air...
Hayeee
Itni lambi comment wo bhi mere liye...
main to kya batau...just love u lots lots lots... :* :* :* ❤️❤️

Jhooottt
Aur mainnn
Kabji nhi...[kuch jayada ho gayi na]
To chalo thik hai kabhi kabhi keh deti hoon
But yeh jhoot nhi thi...
Main writter nhi hoon...

Aur wo maine thodi likha wo to mere hatoon ne likha..
Hayyy
Ini tarif main to ...
Sharmagayi sachi me...☺️

itni padne ki baad bhi aur padni thi apko...??????????

Are maine return gift nhi gift hi diya hai...
Kyun ki mujhe achi lagti hai na sabko gift karna
Aur yeh wali gift to meri hatoon me hi thi
I can give it at any momment na
Aur meri bd se achi occation kya ho sakti hai
Right?????/😉

Ha...wo to hongi hi na ap
Kyun ki ap to sabse badi ho...😊
Me tooo love u ji...
Oh really...Apne help nhi ki to kon ki...apki bhatakti atma?????????😲


Comment k liye comment...

Main kya karu ap hi batao
Maine sochi
warning dde dete hai
Ek warning se meri kya jayegi
haina...😉😆

Well pata nhi...
Yeh nayi wali serious wali dauda kabse padne lagi mereko...😛

Actually not evrytime kabhi kabhi jab blank ho jati hoon to kuch bhi yaad nhi ati
Situation hi yaad nhi rehti gaana to dur ki baat

Heaven hai ya nhi wo to nhi pata par ha jo bhi ho is ghar k rehnewale kamal k hai...😉
Waise u didn't say hi to H squire darling...
Say hi na...😉😛😆

Actually na kya hua main likh rhi thi samajh nhi ayi itni badi banglow me kitni kamre honi chahiye to maine ankh band karke numbers pe hat ghumai jo ayi wohi daal diya...😛😆

Woh kya hai na ap jab aise secrets rakhte ho to kitne mannat leke padti hoon na
Aur upar se mujhe puzzles suljhana achi lagti hai
But na nhi suljha pati to i hate it...
are age padho to pata chalegi na...
Yea misunderstanding to hui hai
But kiski sath wo to...
abhi nhi bataungi...😉😛

mujhe pat hai apne pehle hi guess ki thi ki woh muski hai...
ha ha age hi to bad rhi hoon...

Are kahani me aur bhi boht kuch hai
Biography me sirf bio ki b bhi nhi kaha maine...

Yea right...
Muski ki speciality jo hai rahul ko aise nammmo se bulana
Ha woh to sahi hai
Inko toh kahi bhi rakhdo dur se hi pata chal jayegi yeh dono hai
kyun ki unke jagda kabhi jhatam jo nhi hoti

Waise ap kya soch rhi ho mujhe bhi to jarah batao
Main bhi to janu
Chalo yaha nhi batana to WA pe bata do...

Yea yea i know hum milte hai main to baki sab ko bol rhi thi
Btw wait for the shock coming at...
WA pe batati hoon kab coming...😛
Lv u also itna🤗 itna🤗 itnaaa🤗 saraaa
Tc



Oh ho... Mean madam hawa main ud rahi ho hehehe...
Itna high mat ud na okey...
Aur nehi toh kiya, yaad hai tum bhi mujhe itna lambi comment dete ho...
Don't think main favor kar rahi hoon... Lekin woh kiya haina, mujhe itna pasand aayi part, hayye main toh khud koh rokh nehi paayi...
Me too love u lots lots and lots more... :* :* :*

Hahah nehi nehi, kabhi zyada ho sakti hai kiya...
Lekin yeh baat sacchi hai tum bohot acche se likha...
God Baby girl... Chalo tik hai maanli tu writer nehi hai...
Aur is baare main hum baad mein decide karenge as ur story goes on okey...

Hahaha Accha ji, teri haaton ne likha jo teri body ki ek hissa hai...
Aur yeh idea bhi teri brain ne diya, jo tumne words main transper karke likh diya right...
wah wah, kiya mast jawab diya hai tumne hehehe...
oye hoyye, itna sharma o mat... Teri shaadi fixed nehi huva hai tu aise laal laal ho rahi ho hehee...

Itni??? yeh bohot lamba ta...
Mujhe toh bohot chota laga hehehe...
Yehi toh hoti hai... Jo likhti hai woh kitna time laga te hai likhne main...
Lekin jo padti hai, usko toh bas bohot kam waqt lagte hai padne main...

Wah wah, yeh return gift nehi...
Sirf Gift hai, wah... Tu toh sacchi main bas one piece hai hehehe...
Right, tumhari birthday se acche occasion nehi ho sakte...
After all thats a very special day right :D

Hayye hayye... Itna pyar...
Mujhe handle nehi hote hehehe... lekin tumne itna pyar se de diya toh main rakh hi leti hoon...
Sacchi main mujhe yaad nehi hai... U know main mrs. ghajini hoon hehehe...
Lekin tumne kehdiya toh maan hi leti hoon kyunki tum toh aise tohdi na kahenge right... ;)

Hahah Right, Ek warning se kuch nehi hota...
Waise bhi tumne baaki sabke liyeh toh warning de di taaki baad main koi tujhe kuch na kahe right...
I mean no negative comments ;)

Hahaha hota jata hai kabhi kabhi...
Mujhse pooch, mere koh bhi hota hai... But still u manage na... Thats a really big thing darling...

Haan haan woh toh hoga hi na.. After all story ki hero heroine jo rehti hai yaha hehehe...
Hailaaa, yeh kiya hogaya,,, Maine HI nehi bola... Chalo tab nehi toh abhi sahi...
HIII...
Tik haina ;)

Lolz, accha toh aankhe band karke number press kardi hahaha...
Nice nice... Yeh toh bohot accha hai...

Haan I know, kitna mehnat lagti hai...
Arey wah, phir toh likhte waqt tum bhi badi enjoy karte hona :D
Hmmm yeh toh hai... Ab aage nehi padenge toh pata kaise chalega right...

Hehehe Accha hai accha hai tumhe pata hai maine pehle guess kardi ;)
Jab aage badd hi rahi hai toh peeche mudke kyun dekhna right...
Accha Ji, Aur bhi hai...
Hmmm toh woh kiya ta jo Muski ke intro main bola :P

hahaha Sahi kaha tumne...
Yeh dono koh toh pata chaljaenge bina intro ke :P
After all dono ke baat karne ke style mast and hatke se hota hai right hehehe

Jo bhi soch rahi hoon na... Woh toh main aage aage jaakhe bataungi story ke saat saat sab kuch bataungi...
Issiliyeh tumhe toh tohda inthizaar karna padega..

Heheehe I know tum baaki sabko bol rahi ti...
Shock dene wali ho tum/?? Hailaaa, kaise shock????
Okey okey WA pe batao... .Jaldiii okey...
Love u too infinity...
take care <3
Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: RihooHaws


Oh ho... Mean madam hawa main ud rahi ho hehehe...
Itna high mat ud na okey...
Aur nehi toh kiya, yaad hai tum bhi mujhe itna lambi comment dete ho...
Don't think main favor kar rahi hoon... Lekin woh kiya haina, mujhe itna pasand aayi part, hayye main toh khud koh rokh nehi paayi...
Me too love u lots lots and lots more... :* :* :*

Hahah nehi nehi, kabhi zyada ho sakti hai kiya...
Lekin yeh baat sacchi hai tum bohot acche se likha...
God Baby girl... Chalo tik hai maanli tu writer nehi hai...
Aur is baare main hum baad mein decide karenge as ur story goes on okey...

Hahaha Accha ji, teri haaton ne likha jo teri body ki ek hissa hai...
Aur yeh idea bhi teri brain ne diya, jo tumne words main transper karke likh diya right...
wah wah, kiya mast jawab diya hai tumne hehehe...
oye hoyye, itna sharma o mat... Teri shaadi fixed nehi huva hai tu aise laal laal ho rahi ho hehee...

Itni??? yeh bohot lamba ta...
Mujhe toh bohot chota laga hehehe...
Yehi toh hoti hai... Jo likhti hai woh kitna time laga te hai likhne main...
Lekin jo padti hai, usko toh bas bohot kam waqt lagte hai padne main...

Wah wah, yeh return gift nehi...
Sirf Gift hai, wah... Tu toh sacchi main bas one piece hai hehehe...
Right, tumhari birthday se acche occasion nehi ho sakte...
After all thats a very special day right :D

Hayye hayye... Itna pyar...
Mujhe handle nehi hote hehehe... lekin tumne itna pyar se de diya toh main rakh hi leti hoon...
Sacchi main mujhe yaad nehi hai... U know main mrs. ghajini hoon hehehe...
Lekin tumne kehdiya toh maan hi leti hoon kyunki tum toh aise tohdi na kahenge right... ;)

Hahah Right, Ek warning se kuch nehi hota...
Waise bhi tumne baaki sabke liyeh toh warning de di taaki baad main koi tujhe kuch na kahe right...
I mean no negative comments ;)

Hahaha hota jata hai kabhi kabhi...
Mujhse pooch, mere koh bhi hota hai... But still u manage na... Thats a really big thing darling...

Haan haan woh toh hoga hi na.. After all story ki hero heroine jo rehti hai yaha hehehe...
Hailaaa, yeh kiya hogaya,,, Maine HI nehi bola... Chalo tab nehi toh abhi sahi...
HIII...
Tik haina ;)

Lolz, accha toh aankhe band karke number press kardi hahaha...
Nice nice... Yeh toh bohot accha hai...

Haan I know, kitna mehnat lagti hai...
Arey wah, phir toh likhte waqt tum bhi badi enjoy karte hona :D
Hmmm yeh toh hai... Ab aage nehi padenge toh pata kaise chalega right...

Hehehe Accha hai accha hai tumhe pata hai maine pehle guess kardi ;)
Jab aage badd hi rahi hai toh peeche mudke kyun dekhna right...
Accha Ji, Aur bhi hai...
Hmmm toh woh kiya ta jo Muski ke intro main bola :P

hahaha Sahi kaha tumne...
Yeh dono koh toh pata chaljaenge bina intro ke :P
After all dono ke baat karne ke style mast and hatke se hota hai right hehehe

Jo bhi soch rahi hoon na... Woh toh main aage aage jaakhe bataungi story ke saat saat sab kuch bataungi...
Issiliyeh tumhe toh tohda inthizaar karna padega..

Heheehe I know tum baaki sabko bol rahi ti...
Shock dene wali ho tum/?? Hailaaa, kaise shock????
Okey okey WA pe batao... .Jaldiii okey...
Love u too infinity...
take care <3



yea...
Like ...

My heart it speaks a thousand words
I feel eternal bliss
The roses pout their scarlet mouths
Like offering a kiss
No drop of rain no glowing flame
Has ever been so pure
If being in love can feel like this
Then i'm in love for sure


yea... pata hai mujhe
But u know i talk too much to meri comment aise hi lambi ho jati hai
Aur mujhe pata tak nhi chalti...😉
😛😆

Maine kab think kiya aisa...
Aur waise bhi humare bich fever naam ki koi cheez hai kya jo aj hogi..
to rokne ko kisne boli hai...
Khuli chut hai yaha kuch bhi bolo...😛
😉😆
Me to loves u more se bhi jayada most aur bhi jayada mostest

Achi baat hai apne maan li
Warna to mujhe phir samjhana padti...
Yeh cheating hai huh
Pehle boli maan liya phir boli next decide kaogi...
Yeh sab nhi chalegi yaha...
Samjhe na...

haina mast jawab i know...😆
Shadddiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nhiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mujhe nhi karni shaddhi wadi
aur shadi k baat se sharmata kon hai
Its like a horror film for me
& u know wht i hate horror movies
except "ALONE"😉
Yeh choti lagi apko...😲😲😲
Apu apne jitni pg boli thi maine usse 3pgs extra likha means u tell me 8 & i wrote 11
Phir bhi chioti lagi apko...😲😲

Ha sirf gift hi hai
Return gift hoti to wo gift k badle me mangni pdti hai na
Aur gift k liye expectation honi hoti hai
But mujhe to kisise bhi koi expectation nhi hai
Coz i know expectation always hurts
so i escape from it
so isiliye its gift only return gift is not expected

Ha ab thik hai...
Housey darling ne toh already hi keh diya..

pata hai i wrote this part taking whole 1month...😲
Can u believe it ek month me ek part only...

Wo to sirf 50% thi ek baar uski bare me aur janni shuru karogi na phir to samjho it's like
Ab nhi bataungi...😛

WA pe hi kyun main apko aj hi bataungi na yaha
Kyun ki i'm gonna post it today...
i hope so...
Let's seee
Padogi to pata chal jayegi...
Par abhi to mujhe kuch khani hai
Maine subah vomit krdi
Phir breakfst k baad se ab tak kuch nhi khayi
So abhi bhuk lagi hai
& i'm gonna grave something fotr eat...
Lv u
Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Note:

Before I start the part...

Thanks a lot to all of u for giving me such excellent comments[& u 4 yeh ap logo k liye nhi hai so bhadko mat apu,bubble,rj,partner]
& loves u all a lot for this

I really hope is part se koi bore na ho jay...

& rj its Ur belated bd gift...
Chal jee le tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi... 😉😛
Maine kar diya yeh part tere naam...😛
Actually hua yun maine teri birth month k puri month sirf yehi part likhi hai to sochi it deserves to be ur bd gift
Ab now no more with my bakwass
Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago

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