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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here goes the story ...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha ha, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai, Aur Isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahunchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain, yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhad hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga.Iske liye authority ya ni ki writer ya ni ki main uske liye jimiddar nhi hu...Kripa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekh lijiye...

Shukriya...

Precap:

Ek kahani ki shuruat

Kuch khubsurat rishtoon k sath
Kuch paheliyaan
Kya hat jayegi sari narazgi aur ban jayegi najdikiyaan

Janne k liye age pandni hogi...
Tabhi sabko sawalon ki jawab milegi...

Part 2

After this second person got in sense...

He instantly rush towards the room...
Here this two person continue with their blunter...
In a matter of few seconds Rahul also loss his patience and now they got into their as usual famous jhagra...:😛

& here let's see what happening inside the room...
First let u all see the room...
It's a huge beige colored room
A round size bed kept at a corner of the room...
Near the bed two side table placed in two side...
In both side table a table lamp and small vase with some flower kept...
At roof exactly above the bed there is small lights which sparkles when the room got dark...
& keep the room still with light...
A huge long balcony just before the bed and to cover this area beige color curtain placed...
A washroom attached at right side of bed which is full filled with every modern facility's...
The room is filled with some beautiful Smell...



Enough with room description baki ka khud imagine karlena...image to di hui hai...😉

Now back to story again...
As the guy enter in the room he saw a girl wearing black color night gown with her hair open siting on the bed...
And there is some pillow around the bed is now got total in a mess...
As the girl saw the man...She again become all hyper...
& throw a pillow towards him...

& start shouting...

Girl: Don't u dare Atul... (Waise kaisa lkaga jhatkaaa...I know sab ki face dekhne layek hai...Ab kis kis ka guess sahi hua wo to pata chal hi gayi sabko to agee...😉

So guys meet him...



This person is Atul ...his surname u all will got to know later
He is a sweet cute guy...
A successful business men... of Hill point company ltd...
Moreover a very great person
Who is married with his love of life...after a huge part of his nervousness & not to forget with some more drama also...
Sari drama k baat dhere dhere pata chal jayegi toh...

Now concentrate on story again...

Iski halat bhi kuch aisa hai...ki...

Pyar me yeh nikamma ho gaya..
Warna yeh bhi tha admi kam ki...:😛


In my style kahu to his halat is like...

Ek lauta mera dil tha
Bhola bhaala simple tha
Tujhse me takraya
Sarphira ho gaya...


Ok now back to story again...


As the girl shout atul got scared...
& ek dum se he was 1st cover his face with his hands..
& then dhere dhere hat hatake...
Try to make her understand the circumstance

But the girl again shout...

Girl(With lots of anger & in a very high range):Andar kadam rakhne ki koushish bhi mat karna & Dekho atul agar tum he kuch kehna hai,to pehle yeh sun lo that I'm not at all interested about it...mujhe aj sari sachai pata chal gaya hai... I know tum mujhe ab pehle jaisa pyar nhi karte kyun ki main moti ho gayi hu na isiliye...Haina... (While saying so her voice turned shout to almost on the verge of crying...)

To make his lady love understand the circumstance...

Atul (trying to say something): But... (The girl cut him in between...)

Girl: Maine kahi na mujhe nahi kuch sunna hai nahi kuch smajhna hai...tum bas is kamre se bahar jao...Yaha apna kadam rakhne k bhi kousish mat karna...

Atul (while trying to going near bed): Dekho Anjali...
& now meet Anjali...As I say atul's name u all might b already guessed who this person is...

To before continue further...

Here is her small intro...



Anjali is a young beautiful, smart, confident Doctor
She is all in over is also very much with love with her husband atul...
Work with muskaan & friends with her
Loves her family member a lot...
Now she is on leave for her maternity period as she is almost on the verge to complete her 6th month...
& she is very much possessive about atul...
Not like she don't believe him but the pregnancy made her more moody...
& her love for atul did change her for betterment...how...??
U will got to know later..

Aur iske liye kaha jay to...

Hum to aise hai vaiya
Yeh apna fashion hai vaiya
Are hum to aise hai vaiya

Baki ka about her u will got to know later..


Now back to story again...
Anji (angry yet in a crying voice):Kya dekhu atul...how can u do this to me tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho mere sath u know na how much I love u still u love someone else(then going almost in crying version)tum yeh isliye kar rahe ho na kyun ki main ab pehle jaisa khubsurat nhi hu...haina
Atul(who was in deep thought thinking about how to manofy his darling wife didn't notice what she said & when he looked she got quite & expecting him to say no or yes for answer he didn't know what to say..coz he didn't listen what she said..to he thought that abhi jo bhi bole sir hila le bacha warna aj to tu gayi...)

Didn't knowing what he is going to do...He nodded his head & said: Ha Anjali jo bhi tum keh rhi ho bilkul thik hi keh rhi ho...tum kabhi bhi galat nhi ho sakti...tum to dunia ki best ho...
By now anjali's eyes are full of tears...
Then atul thought what he said just now...
Then after getting it all...uske ankhe like button ho gayi...
When he is saying & thinking all this background me music play ho rhi thi...

Socha Tha Kya Kya Ho Gaya[Scene shows like Anjali was talking & Atul face confusing shows]
Dhuundho Mujhe Main Kahin Kho Gaya [scene shows Atul kept his hand on head as he does on DMG while thinking]
Main Bhi Kahin Kho Gayi [scene shows Atul 1st watching at celling]
Chhutti Ho Gayee [scene shows atul then watching anjali]
Chhutti Ho Gayee [scene shows atul got what he had done now and realization took over]

Then Atul's talk can be say also stupidity after his realization what he done music start again...

Are Gadbad Ho Gayee [scene shows atul's very tensed face about what to do?]
Are Chhutti Ho Gayee [scene now showing very bit of atul face and he is looking at celling & trying to think?]
Are Siti Baj Gayee... [Scene shows song ended with a mere whistle]

Music Stop

Coz usne problem thik karne ki jagah as usual bada diya...
Ab to use sirf do hi log thik kar sakte hai..
But unfortunately dono hi out of reach hai right now...
In this while Anjali just got out from bed and push atul out of the room & shut the door at his face...
& sit inside muh latkake eating chocolate...& having her loving Bobo with her...
Well let's meet her bobo...



Well...This puppy is none other than her bobo...
Yeh humesha Anjali k age piche rehte hai ...
In my style its like...

Chipak-chapak ke chalti hain
Kabhi kabhi do raahein
Jude-jude kuch aise ki laga ho jaise gum...

Actually it's a gift from her best friend...
Who is it u will got to now later...

Now back to story again...

Music start

Koi mujhe pyar nahi karta,(scene shows She was sitting with her bobo & crying comically I mean wo jo ankh me bina asu sirf dikhane wala cry karte hai waise)
Koi mujhe hug bhi nahi karta,(scene shows she hug her bobo & pout)
My hands are paining, dil pakad pakad ke,(scene shows she get up & took her stethoscope & kaan me laga k listening in her tummy if any movement happened or not)
Fir bhi koi care nahi karta,
Dil ke armaa tear drops mein baha gaye, boo hoo hoo hoo.(Scene shows she again try to cry this time a very tiny water drop from her eyes & she run & watch it in mirror & took a tissue to clean that drop very carefully)
Incomplete sapne incomplete hi rahe gaye, oo hoo achhooo,(Scene shows anjali just lean on the door & sleep at that position only )

Music stop as scene shift in outside condition

Chalo ab yeh dekha jay bahar ka haal kya hai...
Atul stand at the door music start...

Main kya karoon(Scene shows atul bangs in the door few time)
Kya karoon, kya karoon, kya karoon(Scene shows atul even called for Anjali for a while then sit near the door)
Ho, main kya karoon(Scene shows atul watching at the door & thinking wht to do)
Kya karoon, kya karoon, kya karoon(Scene shows he looking at roof as if asking god wht will he do now to make her understand)
Prem deewaani hoon, par main anjaani hoon(Scene shows inside room Anjali watching their wedding photos)
Uljhi hai jo dori voh main kaise suljhaaoon(Scene shows atul thinking how to make her understand go towards the living room)

Music stop

Scene shift in Rahul-muskaan...

Jab atul gone Rahul turn muskaan towards him and sath muski got into her sherni version...
At that moment if muskaan got the power to be vampire she might have drink rahul's blood..
Coz well there actually don't need a reason for muskaan to drink rahul's blood...
She dreams every time if she got a chance she would literally kill him...😛
Muski (Looking angrily at him): Abe tu kya bakar bakar kar rhi hai...Usne galti ki hai to man lene de na use...bich me tang erane ki kya jarurat thi tujhe... Aur ab chup beith ha, nhi to abhi mera dimag kharab ho jayegi na to bad me mat kehna maine warn nhi kia(then gesture as if she had a headache and then again looking angrily at him & Pointing her index finger towards him)...tab dekhna teri jaise Chichhunder ki kya halat karti hu main...
Rahul (He also got tempered and raise his palm & as if machar hata rahe aise uske hat k samne ghumaya taki her index finger removed from his front ): Are ja ja tu bhi konsa dud k dhuli hui hai...yeh in dono pati patni ka mamla hai inko nipatne de na kyun khud ja rhi hai is jhamele me..
Muski(keeping both hands on her hips): Abe tu phir bola...Aur kya in dono in dono laga rakha hai anji mere friend hai to jo baat usse judi hai wo mujhse judi hui hai...samjha..aur ab jayada bola na to acha nhi hoga...

In this while atul come again with a little face...
But no one notice it...
He saw her two friend to fight for no reason...
& go towards Rahul and pat his back but no use Rahul just shrug his shoulder & ignore it & continue his bickering with muskaan
Seeing this atul goes to muskaan & pat her back but muskaan also too much engrossed in his fight that ignore atul...
Atul thinks that's it...
He cover his ear with hands & scream...
Here Rahul & Muskaan was totally surprised at his behavior & when atul scream they literally hide their ear...
Then Rahul said to atul getting all irritated: Kya hai? Aise chilla kyun raha hai..?
Muski (also getting irritated): Ha yaar...tera dimag to sahi salamat hai na ya phir anji ne who bhi phor di...(then laugh at her typical style)
Atul (looking down and firstly in little high voice then in a low voice tell them): Are main kya karu tum log koi mere baat sun nhi rahe the agar wo yaha hota to ab tak to mere problem khatam bhi ho chuki hoti...ab jab tum log sun nhi rahe the to maine socha yeh acha hai tum logo ki jhagra band karne k liye to maine chilla diya...
Rahul(Decided to listen what the actual matter is so look at atul & say):Acha chal beith yaha(then hold atul's one hand and let him sit on the sofa & then letting all get be sited & then continue while looking at atul)Ab bol actual me kya hua???
Muski(she also get melt after looking at atul's face and decided to hear what actually happened): Ha yaar bol na kya hua...
With that atul told them what actually happened & what anji seem to thought
& after that tell what anji said after he got into in room...
When he completed to tell all this he looked towards the faces in front of him
But their expression was not let him think anything...

Then after a while three of them started to discuss how to make anji listen...
Coz they know in this time she not goanna listen anything from anyone of them at this moment & if she ever did listen that would be only two person but they are not here...& it almost 4am there they thought to take some rest at morning they would thought further about their decision...


More...is ...coming...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rest of the part...


At same time some other place it was 4pm...

A very shining day...
Birds crisping. All around...
Background music play...

Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Want You(Scene shows a silhouette of a guy's back part which shows the guy wearing an ash color jacket Grey color trouser and the front part still didn't shown near a door closing the door of a house)
Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Need You(Scene shows two girls one wearing tight blue jeans and dark gray shirt and another wearing baby pink color mini skirt walking on road was continuously staring at the guy or can be said drooling on him)
Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Love You(Scene shows the guy got down from the stairs near the door and his front part shows in a blur which can be said he is wearing a white vest and the ash color jacket's front part is open which can easily say that he has a very well maintained body)
Who's That Sexy Boy Sexy Boy (Scene shows the girls whispering about who is he)
Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Want You (Scene shows the blur of the guy front from down to top)
Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Need You (Scene shows one hand of guy took out a dark goggles from his jacket and put it on his eyes)
Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Love You(Scene shows those girl who were drooling for him some more girl join them one of them wearing baby pink skirt with dark blue jacket and white top another wearing a Black bean halter neck short dress another one wearing short jeans pant with Blue Bell color top)
Who's That Sexy Boy(Scene shows the girls passes nearby the guy and the guy wink at them)

The Guy:Hello Jaane Jana Ashiq Hoon Main Tera(Scene shows a girl wearing electric lavender color short sleeveless dress deliberately fall upon him and when he just hold the girl wrist and the girl is lost in her gaga land & the guy reciting the songs line but his face isn't shows fully means sometimes just shows his eyes or lips or his feature)
Hass Ke Keh De Zara (Scene shows guy smiles towards the girl showing his dimples)
Ke Mera Dil Tera Tera Tera Re (Scene shows the guy wink at the girl)
Mujhe Mein Hai Mastiyan(Scene shows the guy make the girl stand on her feet & then walk away a few step & look back & give a flying kiss towards the girl)
Maujon Kee Kashtiyan(Scene shows the guy again wink and walk backwards)
Aah Jaa Jhoome Zara(Scene shows the girl goo all gaga seeing his gesture & the guy smile showing his dimple)
Ke Tera Dil Mera Mera Mera Re(Scene shows the guy's back blur feature)

Girls:Na Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hai(Scene shows the other girls join that girl and do the signature dance step which was done by Chitrangada & prachi in the song)
Naa Jaane Kahan Ko Jayega
Deewana Kise Banayega
Yeh Ladka
Na Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hai
Naa Jaane Kahan Ko Jayega
Deewana Kise Banayega
Yeh Ladka


The guy:Kisi Ke Hath Na Ayega Yeh Ladka(Scene shows the guy do some steps alone like the same step john did in the movie but the guy did those step alone)
Kisi Ke Hath Na Ayega Yeh Ladka

Girls:Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Want You(Scene shows same girls following him & drooling seeing his handsome looks)
Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Need You
Who The Sexy Boy Everybody Love You


The guy:Aa Rakhle Haan Rakhle(Scene shows the guy traveled through a train where a girl wearing brown color coat with white shirt & almond leggings with vintage look watching him or can be says drooling over him comes & sit beside him & tying to read the magazine which he was reading by falling on him)
Kandhe Pe Sirr Apna(Scene shows the guy's hand which give the magazine to the girl and get up)
Lamba Hoon Chouda Hoon(Scene shows the girl looks at him & the guy wink)
Upper Se Dil Hara(Scene shows the girl watching him getting down from the train)
Aa Chalde Haan Chalde(Scene shows the guy walks on footpath and Again some girl wearing some cheer leaders dress drooling over him giggling together while pointing towards her)
Mere Sath Mein Jo Meri(Scene shows the guy smile seeing the attention he is getting specially from the ladies)
Tu Heera Main Hero(Scene shows the guy walks and saw a old lady wearing baby pink color Summer dress with white dot print dress crossing roads with difficulty so he goes rewords her & help her to cross the road)
Hit Hai Apni Jodi(Scene shows the old lady kiss the guy's cheek & the guy also kiss her on her cheek making her smile))

Grls:Aaja Pakki Karle Baat(Scene shows those cheer leader saw this & started singing this lines while doing the signature step of the song)
Mere Haaton Mein Dede Hath

Na Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hai
Naa Jaane Kahan Ko Jayega
Deewana Kise Banayega
Yeh Ladka
Na Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hai
Naa Jaane Kahan Ko Jayega
Deewana Kise Banayega
Yeh Ladka


The Guy:Kisi Ke Hath Na Ayega Yeh Ladka(Scene shows the guy smiled and walk away reciting the rest of the song)
Kisi Ke Hath Na Ayega Yeh Ladka(Scene shows the guy's blur image walking away)
When the song finished the guy was standing before the basketball court and he saw some kids playing there so he joined them

Meanwhile playing the ball dripped towards the gate of the bb court door and touch the back head of a person who just sitting nearby the while watching down siting on the nearby stairs of the court...

That's all for today...
Now I want to give u all a little quiz again...
How much u was correct u can see that...
& the winner of 1st 4parts quiz will get a surprise from me...I won't say what but let me see who win it...;)
As u all can see I give another two characters names & proper intro...
& there are many character left yet...
So the quiz is that...
U have to guess about who is the guy is?
And who is that person who hit by the ball...
Let's see how much can give the correct answer...
Tab tak

Allah Hafiz

One Non writer attempting dear devil act...
Rupkotha
Edited by Ruppkotha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Woohooo, finally you updated 🥳



So coming back to the part, it was awesome and those persons must be Armaan and Ridzi, definitely, I'm sure about this one.😉

Will comment more later on.


Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hailaaa, Hum badak te hai tum pe...
Baakiyon ka pata nehi lekin main kyun badak ne lagi tujhpe :(
Okey No more Nautanki hehehe...
Muwaahhh Love u <3


Comment For Part 2 :


Wah wah, phirse warning sharning ke saat saat isbaar recap bhi...
Mast hai darling, bohot mast hai...

Hayye, perfect description of the room...
Mujhe toh yeh room bohot accha laga... Main toh dekh te rehgaye...
Aur soch rahi hoon, kash mujhe bhi aisa room miljae hehehe...

At last, pata chal hi gaya yeh dono koan hai...
Bechara Atul, (Waise main kitni badi buddu hoon na, pehle bhi maine guess ki and u said its not them... Aur phirse maine un dono koh kaha hehehe... Maine kaha ta na, maine bohot weak hoon is guess game main...)
Ab pata nehi yeh Anjali us ka kiya khalat karenge hehehe...
Hahha again nice intro and songs for Atul...
Oh ho, yeh Anjali kitna chilla ti hai... Ek baar Atul ki baat nehi sun sakti kiya...
Bechare koh toh explain karne ka moka bhi nehi diya aur usko kamre se baahar kardi :O
Poor Atul...
Aur main toh bhul gayi, Anjali ki intro bhi mast hai... Aur song ki toh kiya kahe... isse accha toh ho hi nehi sakte hehehe...

Song was superb for the situation hehehe...
Anjali toh by god kiya kahe... Mujhe toh Atul ke liyeh bohot bura lag rahi hai...
Aur woh BOBO... I love it hehehe... Kitna cute hai choti si puppyyy...
Bobo ke liyeh bhi song, wah wah hehehe... Mast hai ji Mast hai...

Andar Anjali aur bechara Atul baahar khade khade yeh soch rahi hai Anjali koh kaise manae...
Ab toh sirf Rahul aur Muski unko help kar sakte hai...

Lekin yeh kiya, yeh dono toh ladne main busy hai...
Poor Atul kaha phas gaya yaar...
Aur yeh kiske baare main soch raha hai... Armaan Riddhima Na??? Waise hai kaha woh dono...
Accha chodo, un dono ka toh pata baad main pata chalega...

Is Rahul aur Muski koh toh dono se ladne se fursat hogi toh kissi aur ke baare main sochenge na...
Accha huva Atul ne chillaya... Nehi toh yeh dono toh bas ladte hi rahenge...
Dono toh yaha Atul aur Anjali ke liyeh aaya hai lekin fursat kaha kissi ki baat sunne ka...
Accha huva Atlast yeh dono Atul ke baat suna...
Usko Bol ne ka chance diya...
Plan bhi bana diya... wah wah..Humhe bhi toh bata de...
Chalo wait kar leti hoon...

Wow, sexy boy ke liyeh sexy song... Yeh toh pakka Armaan hi hoga...
Ab yeh mat kehna yeh bhi woh nehi hai ufff...
Itna puzzle mat khelo... I m bad in solving u know hehehe...
I know u know, kyunki pata chal gayi na meri guess shi nehi ti... hahaha...

super song, super description...
So hopefully next part main pta chal jaenge yeh dono koan hai jo end main puzzle ke tarah tumne bina naam bataye chod diya hehehe...
Uske liyeh tujhe jaldi update karna padega...
Nehi toh WA pe bata dena hahaha... Mujhe toh lagta hai Armaan aur Riddhima hai...
Ab tu hi bata na sahi hai ya galat okey...

Over roll, I love whole part Baby Girl...
It was really unexpected that those ppl were Atul and Anjali...
Also shock that they are married and going to be parents... Wah wah...
Anjali loves Atul so much that she is jealous hearing the misunderstanding of thinking Atul don't love her and love someone else hehehe...
Thats something very new, sacchi main...
Ab aage ke part ke liyeh I m very excited... Continue super soon...


Love u take care <3
Muwahhh :*
Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



yea...
Like ...

My heart it speaks a thousand words
I feel eternal bliss
The roses pout their scarlet mouths
Like offering a kiss
No drop of rain no glowing flame
Has ever been so pure
If being in love can feel like this
Then i'm in love for sure


yea... pata hai mujhe
But u know i talk too much to meri comment aise hi lambi ho jati hai
Aur mujhe pata tak nhi chalti...😉
😛😆

Maine kab think kiya aisa...
Aur waise bhi humare bich fever naam ki koi cheez hai kya jo aj hogi..
to rokne ko kisne boli hai...
Khuli chut hai yaha kuch bhi bolo...😛
😉😆
Me to loves u more se bhi jayada most aur bhi jayada mostest

Achi baat hai apne maan li
Warna to mujhe phir samjhana padti...
Yeh cheating hai huh
Pehle boli maan liya phir boli next decide kaogi...
Yeh sab nhi chalegi yaha...
Samjhe na...

haina mast jawab i know...😆
Shadddiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nhiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mujhe nhi karni shaddhi wadi
aur shadi k baat se sharmata kon hai
Its like a horror film for me
& u know wht i hate horror movies
except "ALONE"😉
Yeh choti lagi apko...😲😲😲
Apu apne jitni pg boli thi maine usse 3pgs extra likha means u tell me 8 & i wrote 11
Phir bhi chioti lagi apko...😲😲

Ha sirf gift hi hai
Return gift hoti to wo gift k badle me mangni pdti hai na
Aur gift k liye expectation honi hoti hai
But mujhe to kisise bhi koi expectation nhi hai
Coz i know expectation always hurts
so i escape from it
so isiliye its gift only return gift is not expected

Ha ab thik hai...
Housey darling ne toh already hi keh diya..

pata hai i wrote this part taking whole 1month...😲
Can u believe it ek month me ek part only...

Wo to sirf 50% thi ek baar uski bare me aur janni shuru karogi na phir to samjho it's like
Ab nhi bataungi...😛

WA pe hi kyun main apko aj hi bataungi na yaha
Kyun ki i'm gonna post it today...
i hope so...
Let's seee
Padogi to pata chal jayegi...
Par abhi to mujhe kuch khani hai
Maine subah vomit krdi
Phir breakfst k baad se ab tak kuch nhi khayi
So abhi bhuk lagi hai
& i'm gonna grave something fotr eat...
Lv u
Tc


Wah wah kiya song gaaya hai...
Hehehe, aur tumhari comment ke reply bhi lambi hojati hai hehehe...

Hayye, itna pyar hehehe...
Okey meri choti si baby girl... Samajh gayi hehehe...

Baapre, shaadi ke naam pe chilla kyun rahi ho...
Haan haan ab toh mana kar rahi ho, lekin jis din apni princecharming miljaenge na...
Us din main dekhungi tu kaise bhaag ti hai shaadi se hhehehe...
Accha ji, horror movie hahaha...

Haan, Mujhe toh bohot chota laga...
Woh kiya haina, writer koh lambi lagegi as they take so much time to write...
Lekin readers toh itni jaldi jaldi padte hai, part chota lagta hai...
Hahaha, accha... Chal koi nehi...
Baaki sabko toh tik laga right, meri toh demands high hi hoti hai hehehe...

Yeh baat toh tumne bilkul sahi kaha...
Gift aur return gift main different hota hai...
Hmm yeh bhi sahi hai... Expectation leads to give more pain...

Hahaha okey...
Haan toh kiya huva... Its ur first time, itna toh time lagte hai perfect krne main...
It was worth to take a month for this part...
Hahaha Accha, yeh 50% ta... Hmm lets see aage kya kiya jaanne koh milti hai ;)

Arey wah update itni jaldi...
Lekin tumne toh already muujhe batadiya na :P WA pe hehehe...
Love u too take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jess2014

Woohooo, finally you updated 🥳




So coming back to the part, it was awesome and those persons must be Armaan and Ridzi, definitely, I'm sure about this one.😉

Will comment more later on.




st of to thnks for the Gift...
I lovvveee ittt...
Actually i love this song...
i just love to dance on this number...
I took it as my bd gift...😉😆

& thanks a lot
yea...
Actually na i would update little before
But due to assignments i can't got time
& sorry for late reply
Coz after updating it i fall ill..
So Again thanks for the comment
& let's see who is this two this time...

Waiting for ur lambi wali reply this time as u say u r gonna say more about it later only...😉

Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Res


Unres

Reply to NOTE :


Hailaaa, Hum badak te hai tum pe...
Baakiyon ka pata nehi lekin main kyun badak ne lagi tujhpe :(
Okey No more Nautanki hehehe...
Muwaahhh Love u <3


Comment For Part 2 :


Wah wah, phirse warning sharning ke saat saat isbaar recap bhi...
Mast hai darling, bohot mast hai...

Hayye, perfect description of the room...
Mujhe toh yeh room bohot accha laga... Main toh dekh te rehgaye...
Aur soch rahi hoon, kash mujhe bhi aisa room miljae hehehe...

At last, pata chal hi gaya yeh dono koan hai...
Bechara Atul, (Waise main kitni badi buddu hoon na, pehle bhi maine guess ki and u said its not them... Aur phirse maine un dono koh kaha hehehe... Maine kaha ta na, maine bohot weak hoon is guess game main...)
Ab pata nehi yeh Anjali us ka kiya khalat karenge hehehe...
Hahha again nice intro and songs for Atul...
Oh ho, yeh Anjali kitna chilla ti hai... Ek baar Atul ki baat nehi sun sakti kiya...
Bechare koh toh explain karne ka moka bhi nehi diya aur usko kamre se baahar kardi :O
Poor Atul...
Aur main toh bhul gayi, Anjali ki intro bhi mast hai... Aur song ki toh kiya kahe... isse accha toh ho hi nehi sakte hehehe...

Song was superb for the situation hehehe...
Anjali toh by god kiya kahe... Mujhe toh Atul ke liyeh bohot bura lag rahi hai...
Aur woh BOBO... I love it hehehe... Kitna cute hai choti si puppyyy...
Bobo ke liyeh bhi song, wah wah hehehe... Mast hai ji Mast hai...

Andar Anjali aur bechara Atul baahar khade khade yeh soch rahi hai Anjali koh kaise manae...
Ab toh sirf Rahul aur Muski unko help kar sakte hai...

Lekin yeh kiya, yeh dono toh ladne main busy hai...
Poor Atul kaha phas gaya yaar...
Aur yeh kiske baare main soch raha hai... Armaan Riddhima Na??? Waise hai kaha woh dono...
Accha chodo, un dono ka toh pata baad main pata chalega...

Is Rahul aur Muski koh toh dono se ladne se fursat hogi toh kissi aur ke baare main sochenge na...
Accha huva Atul ne chillaya... Nehi toh yeh dono toh bas ladte hi rahenge...
Dono toh yaha Atul aur Anjali ke liyeh aaya hai lekin fursat kaha kissi ki baat sunne ka...
Accha huva Atlast yeh dono Atul ke baat suna...
Usko Bol ne ka chance diya...
Plan bhi bana diya... wah wah..Humhe bhi toh bata de...
Chalo wait kar leti hoon...

Wow, sexy boy ke liyeh sexy song... Yeh toh pakka Armaan hi hoga...
Ab yeh mat kehna yeh bhi woh nehi hai ufff...
Itna puzzle mat khelo... I m bad in solving u know hehehe...
I know u know, kyunki pata chal gayi na meri guess shi nehi ti... hahaha...

super song, super description...
So hopefully next part main pta chal jaenge yeh dono koan hai jo end main puzzle ke tarah tumne bina naam bataye chod diya hehehe...
Uske liyeh tujhe jaldi update karna padega...
Nehi toh WA pe bata dena hahaha... Mujhe toh lagta hai Armaan aur Riddhima hai...
Ab tu hi bata na sahi hai ya galat okey...

Over roll, I love whole part Baby Girl...
It was really unexpected that those ppl were Atul and Anjali...
Also shock that they are married and going to be parents... Wah wah...
Anjali loves Atul so much that she is jealous hearing the misunderstanding of thinking Atul don't love her and love someone else hehehe...
Thats something very new, sacchi main...
Ab aage ke part ke liyeh I m very excited... Continue super soon...


Love u take care <3
Muwahhh :*



Reply of previous comment

Achi baat hai samajh gayi
Warna to main dubaraaa...
Nhi samjhati...😛
Bas bolke bhag jati...😉

Apne to sirf chikh ko dekha
But pata hai when i read na maine ek dum filmy stye me dono kano pe hat rakhke sir hilake boli thi nhiii
Ghar me koi nhi thi na to kisine nhi suna...😉😆

& oh plzzz huh
Main koi prince charming me believe nhi karti
To shaddi k liye uchalne wali to main hoon nhi
But i know i have to marry someday...
Kyun ki ladki hoon to mumma papa to tension karegi hi na
& mujhe yeh bhi pata hai meri kya hone wali hai
Main batau apko...
Aisa hogi that ek din mom-dad kisi ko bhi lakar khade kar degi mnere samne
Aur as i have to be a good girl i hv to say yes to them
Oh... its scaryyy
obiously horror nhi to aur kya.,..
pata hai shaddi k naam se mujhe yaad ati hai...

Yeh Hai Udaasi, Jaan Ki Pyaasi
Shaadi Se Achcha Tum Le Lo Faansi
Laakhon Dukhon Ki Hoti Hai Ye Wajah, Haan Wajah

so keep this scary things aside...
Age badte hai
Baki ka to apko part k sath sath pata chal jayegi...


Reply of ur note comment

Hawww
Nhi bhadakte ho kya
Agar yeh thanks ap sab ko bolti toh phir i know meri kya haal hoti
So don't pretend huh...


Reply of comment of part 2

Awww...
U like it...
U know ab se toh har ek main aise shayri hogi as precape

Yeh to kuch bhi nhi
Main na apko isse bhi achiwali rroom dikhati hoon na
baad me...
Bas dolhte jao...

Pata hai mujhe lag hi rhi thi
Ap ya bubble girl to gonna say the correct one
But nhi u two stick on the first
Hmmm
Woh to hai...
Atul ki haal to ab badi buri hone wali hai...
i also love bobo
Muski aur rahull...woh bhi help
ye dono kya help karegi apu
Inka to ek ne kamm thik ki toh dusri ake kam bigad degi
kiske bare me woh tooo
Nhi bata sakti abhi...

Are maine kab bola plan karliya
Mine to bola soch rha hai sab milke
Aur plan pehle se reveal kardi na to hogayi age k maza barbaad

Chalo ab main thodi easy kar deti hoon
Pata hai kaise
ab main ha ya na me se kuch bhi nhi bolungi...😉😛😆
Sad mat ho apu...kisine sahijawab nhi de payi...

Acha ek baat batao mujhe
Main na little confused about the last wala song...
I mean did i describe too much or something
I'm feeling main boht jayada song daal rhi hoon
To its...u know wht i mean na
acha mujhe ha...
Kyun ki isbaar to full song daal di
& i'm nurvus that full song description boring ho gayi ya kind off off line hogayi ya nhi

Update to milegi but
In next friday
Kyun ki i've again got lots of hw & i need to complete it 1st then update...

i love to know tht apko pasand ayi
Aur maine batai thi na shock dene wali hoon
So it should be shocking na😉😆

Love u dheeerrr saraaa
Tc
:* :*


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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



st of to thnks for the Gift...
I lovvveee ittt...
Actually i love this song...
i just love to dance on this number...
I took it as my bd gift...😉😆

& thanks a lot
yea...
Actually na i would update little before
But due to assignments i can't got time
& sorry for late reply
Coz after updating it i fall ill..
So Again thanks for the comment
& let's see who is this two this time...

Waiting for ur lambi wali reply this time as u say u r gonna say more about it later only...😉

Tc


You're welcome,
and I love this song tooo.
Was it ur birthday?
Didn't know about it.

Belated Birthday wishes Aisha, wish you all the best in life.
And it's ok, update whenever you are comfortable.
Aww, you fell ill 😭
Hope your health is better now.


Now coming to the parts,

They were fantastic, I love your song sequences and the way you describe everything, you are too good. 👏👏

Anjie is pregnant and her dog bobo is tooo cuteee.
And the girls drooling over a guy, must be Ammy and the ball touch a person's head, definitely it must be basket.😳

I so loveddd the parts.❤️

Continue soon, eager for the next parts.

Take Care...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Jess2014


You're welcome,
and I love this song tooo.
Was it ur birthday?
Didn't know about it.

Belated Birthday wishes Aisha, wish you all the best in life.
And it's ok, update whenever you are comfortable.
Aww, you fell ill 😭
Hope your health is better now.


Now coming to the parts,

They were fantastic, I love your song sequences and the way you describe everything, you are too good. 👏👏

Anjie is pregnant and her dog bobo is tooo cuteee.
And the girls drooling over a guy, must be Ammy and the ball touch a person's head, definitely it must be basket.😳

I so loveddd the parts.❤️

Continue soon, eager for the next parts.

Take Care...




Yup it ws my birthday whn i post the part one
I mean on Dec 1
that was the occasion i mentioned before on my note

Thank u
Actually i didn't slept even 8hours for the whole week coz of exams,assignments& my mom's illness
& then i got itme to sleep to i update the part taking whole night
& gone to classes next morning without sleeping
So abhi se i thought that i'll update on my weekends
from now on I'll update on every Thursday night or Friday morning
& to mend up for whole week this parts are gonna be long like today's one
I hope u are ok with it
& yea i'm kind of better now but need to rest

Thanks a lots lots lots
Well about the answer can't say much as i want to keep it suspense on
Let's see who is it this time
& i can assure that this time also ur gonna have some shocks...😉

Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
nice one...
by the way the sexy boy would be armann...

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