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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: gaurikajen
i already had a doubt ki pakka riddhima ko ladke wale dekhne a rahe hai
i love riddhima rahul friendship
and even shahank and riddhima relation
awww armaan to ek hug se hi ghayal ho gaya
awww shshank supported her throughout this and minnie lso supported him
chalo riddhima ki shadi ki problem to solve hui
i guess riddhima han bolegi
waiting for next part post soon

Hey
Thank you for such a lovely comment

Well ur doubt was right
Congrats😃

I'm glad u like their relations
N yup for now the problem is solved
But let's see kab tak

N I don't know when I'll able to update nxt
Actually my pc broke down almost just 2day after I post last part
I couldn't even able to reply till now on comments for that
N my previous phone was no help

Now as I got a new phone so I'm replying the comments
It's really tiring to type the whole story on mobile
N then edit it
N I don't even know when my pc will be repaired
But I'll try to do something about it

BT till then I hope u will understand
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#362

Hey guysss

EID MUBARAK

This is a small eid gift from me to all of you

Enjoy

Evryone have a nice day

The part is not edited so please ignore the spelling mistakes

N Plz plz plz read the notes below

So here goes the story...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..

Shukriya..

Precap:

Ankahein rishtoon me najdikiyaan badne lagi

Andekhi chahat se dil k dor khadakne lagi

Ek to anjaan hai aur ek ko toh ehsas hone laga

Par kya pata hai usko, ki pyar use hone laga

Part 25

Riddhima smile at their eager expression n said: YES..

Everyone squealed for a second n rahul atul n ritu give her a friendly hug while she also reciprocate but when they were continuously saying that how happy they are for her accepting this job n all armaan just stand in a side watching them n a small smile play at his face

Ri: Ok ok but listen i've some conditions..(while everyone stop at her talk when all settle down n look at her in indication of her to say more so she again started)Look DR i know ap log boht problem me ho is wajah se n i notice also u quite tensed for these days thats y i wanted to just help u guys warna mera job karne ka koi irada hi nhi thi so the thing is jo bhi reason ho as i m joining so i want to make it professional only(while atul was about to say something while riddhima speak even before that) Let me finish DR actually the thing is main yaha permanent designer nhi banna chahti as i've some other plans further so i'm here will work for u till u don't get any other capable designer for ur company uske liye jitne din lage ap log le sakte ho i don't have any problem n as soon as ur new designer will be settled i will resign from the post n don't worry i will help u all to find a perfect one for this job..It will be ok for u all na?

While all of them look at each other n then they talk about it in between while riddhima offer that she would go outside till they discuss while they said its ok so riddhima said she want some water n making this excuse she go out giving them time to discuss about the proposal she offer n after a while when she back they were all agree with her condition n quite ok with it..

Ri: That's great oh btw one more thing i don't want u guys treat me special just because u guys know me before or I'm ur relative or something.u guyss must be behave with me the way u behave with others...N please apko office hour me jitne bhi problem ho solve karwa lena i don't want to bring office n home together so aplog kabhi bhi office k bate bahar hum kahi bhi mile toh nhi karoge jaruri hui toh i'm always be here to start my work in anytime but not at home(She stop talking as she saw atul looking at her with wide eyes n rahul certainly smiling while armaan n ritu was just surprisingly looking at her)What happened y u all are looking at me like this?

Ra: didn't i told u yeh sari line uske batoon me hogi hi?

While riddhima look at him confusingly so atul said: Actually rahul ne hume bola tha jab hum tumhe yeh job offer karne k bare me soch rahe the tab that u gonna say this lines if u accept the job..

While riddhima smile a little looking at rahul while rahul also smile back but armaan seems to get a pang of jealousy in somewhere knowing rahul know her too much well but he somehow avoid it..

While ritu said: Riddhima sab agar koi bhi jagah job start karte hai all want to get some extra attention per yaha jab tumhe mil rahe hai wo bina mehnat kiye still u want to decline it..

While riddhima smile n said: Ha kyun ki i'm here for professional reasons na so i want it to be professional ab agar sab ko yeh pata chale that main DR ki pehchan me koi hoon to wo log mujhse baat karne se pehle so baar sochega but freely meri around kaam nhi kar payega ya phir kuch log har waqt jhuti tareef karte rahega which i don't want but agar unko lage main unlogo k jaise hi ek hoon to wo mere sath freely kaam kar payega n unke ideas share karne me ghabrayega nhi n it could be helpfull for my work so isiliye bas...

While everyone smile at her thinking how down to earth she is even being the daughter of famous surgeon still she can mixed up with any person so casual y n not even have a little glimpse of pride in her n agree they will not reveal her full identity to others n they more talk for a while about other procedures

After a while Atul sauid: Ridz tumhare jo bhi sawal hai tum direct ritu se puch lena she will direct u n main toh hoon hi yaha so any problem u can tell it frankly n..

Riddhima give him a Didn't-i-tell-u-no-extra-attention look while atul fumble n ritu n rahul chuckle at atul's state armaan who got a important call was back in room n ask what happen when others just shake their head indicating nothing n riddhima give both of them a look as if telling them to stop n they stop immediately n she remember something n asked looking at atul: DR mujhe join kabse karni hogi?

Atul this time keep his lips shut while ritu answer: tum kabse join kar sakte ho?

Riddhima thinking about asked: What is the date today(while rahul pass her the calendar which was above the table n she calculate something)Is it be any problem if i join after 8 days?

Hearing her everyone frown a little while rahul immediately took the calendar n smile looking at the date n said: So u r doing it finally right?

Ri(with mysterious smirk): Well i guess so..

At: Are we missing something?

Ri: actually DR there is something i need to do before i join n i need to ask for ur help for that(n with a smirk she look at him)

Before atul could ask what is it atul's phone ring it's from the attendent telling the delegates are arrived n waiting for rahul n him in conference room with whom they've meeting a few while later.atul check the time n then tell her they are coming till now make them comfortable there

At: I'm extremely sorry ridhz but mujhe n rahul ko jana padega..

Ri: it's absolutely fine DR don't worry btw apki meeting lunch time tak khatam ho jayegi na (atul nodded)then main wait karti hoon we can have lunch together n then I can tell u guys what is it that i need help..

That's when armaan said little scaristically: Someone was talking about being professional right..

While atul left confused n rahul n ritu glare him but riddhima with smile replied:Well Mr mallik I still didn't sign the papers so technically none of u r my boss right now so I its not an unprofessional behavior u see...but how would u got that it need brain to understand na but u rarely have that much..

Ar: U...

Ri: what happened oh ho cd atak gaya ya phir alphabet vul gaye bachpan me thik se sikha nhi kya u k baad v ati hai...so simple

While evryone laugh that finally someone have the guts ability to retorted on armaan mallik's statement it's really rare view to see armaan mallik speachless n armaan just glare at others for laughing

At lunch

Atul n rahul join riddhima at lunch while armaan was have a programme arranged before so he leave n even do ritu as she need to go home as her mother-in-law supposed to be come today who is not at all happy with her bahu even how much she did for her.

Later riddhima tell about her plan when atul gladly ready to cover it up for her

At night

Rangin Ashiayana

Riddhima was sitting in her fav spot in garden wearing a ash color tee shirt with green skirt n skurf n was looking at moon thinking about the marriage fasinco happened the day before yesterday while shashank who was going to sleep was look outside of garden to see riddhima sitting alone so he go there n ask what is she doing there when ridding told him what he is thinking

Sh: Waise u know it's not their fault actually u urself told them to do something like that..

Ri(surprised would be understatement if u tell her right now feeling she was literally shocked hearing shashank saying that ): Maine kab???

Sh: Don't u remember that when you were making evryone agree for anjali's shadi what u said to ma? (Riddhima give a confusing look when shashank sighed n said) it's not ur fault even it's the situation that was wrong.

Hearing it riddima suddenly recalled the talk she have with nani when she was making her agree for anjali's marriage that's when she told them that they can get her married anytime they want with their choice but agree for anji's love marriage

N here nani who was not getting agreed cause of thinking ram's temp was got finally agreed but that string of thing was still in her heart that riddima unknown to herself actually give them constant of her marriage though they know Riddhima has dreams so they never persue her that comment but few years later when Minnie got that hard to solve kind disease that time nani was have a heart problem n that's when she have a fear that she might be gone in any day n she really want to see riddhima settle before that

N even before they call all those boys mom n all nani tricky once asked to riddhima that if she have someone but riddhima think nani was just teasing so she didn't notice much now when shashank point out that previous incident she then only remember that incident too

So after recalling it all riddhima mentioned it to shashank while they point out that technically it's not anyone's fault it's just the situation n the insecurities of nani which make this thing..

Riddhima insist on that she would have a talk with nani n solve it as it was night so riddhima left it for morning

Nxt morning

The first thing riddhima did after freshen up is have a good talk with nani

Nani who was just come out doing her prayer was settle on living room having her tea n riddhima join her n she directly ask nani about the marriage thing though now riddhima know why nani do so but she wanted nani herself tell evrything to her after a little bit of pressure nani also blurt out the same thing shashank told her

When nani was said it all riddhima hug her instantly n said: nani ap kahi nhi ja rhi ho samjhe abhi to apko aur jeena hai anji di ki baby ki bhi bhi baby ko apne god me khilani hai, n jab meri designs khud ki show room hogi apko hi to uske opening k liye shubh muhrat nikalna hai phir chief guest banna hai phir bhaiya ki shadi me dance bhi toh karni hai apko aise kaise chale jaogi ap hum apko jane hi nhi denge,N aj bol diya apne n maine bhi sun liya phir dubara aise baat ki toh main gussa ho jaungi samjhe n agar meri shadi karne ka matlab ap chain se dur chali jao phir main kabhi shadi nhi karungi kyun ki mujhe apse dur nhi jana..

Both nani n granddaughter cry while hugging each other n nani

Like this they clear all kind of missinsequetions between them n padma also later join them so as priya

The ladies were to busy with their talking that they almost forgot about the breakfast

That's when shashank n ram join them..

N they both greet them inturpting their talk: Good morning ladies

Sh: Kya baat hai aj subah Subah sare gupta ladies n Kapoor ladies are here only two are missing koi sajish chal rhi hai kya humare khilaf,btw aj nashta milegi ya nhi boht bhuk lagi hai..

Pa: Oh hoo main to aj kuch banana hi vul gayi ap log fresh hoke ao tab tak main kuch bana deti hoon.. (she was about to get up when riddhima hold her n stop her from going while padma give her a surprising look)

Ri (stand up n smiling said): Nhi mumma ruko aj main sabko breakfast k liye leke jaungi bahar on my treat akhir meri job hai nayi nayi so treat is on me(then turning towards all)ap sab ready ho jao n mumma ap jiji ko bhi bulwalo main baki sabko call kar deti hoon aj to hum nani k fav restaurant me jayenge

While others smile at her idea of this sudden get together n shashank smile thinking how riddhima could easily solve the problems which could be clearly seen in her eyes.

Later at breakfast

Evryone was present there while riddima sit in between ram n shashank n padma n priya on other side of them nani sitting on head of the chair n on other side of it bi sitting n bi's one side it's priya n other side it's sid n beside sid rahul sitting n beside him armaan n in other side of armaan atul n then anjali sitting so basically the thing is armaan is sitting just opposite of riddhima..

In whole breakfast thing riddhima was fully engrossed with ram n shashank that she never noticed armaan n armaan was so engrossed with rahul that he also didn't got much time to concentrate on riddhima but he did notice the closeness she share with ram n shashank

6 days later

In this days riddhima was extremely busy with her work handling office n her secret planning though she didn't join office fully but she was introduced all as designer who gonna join soon

N evryone quite started to like her

In this six days one more thing happened that is armaan started to notice riddhima more.

But he can't figure out what is exactly the feelings that building up inside him..

Let's see what future hold up for them...

That's all for today...

Guys I really m sorry for this much late n short update (not for some people)

But what to do my pc broke down

Its still not repaired

I don't know when will it gonna be all ok

I'm posting whole part from mobile

N I can't edit the spelling mistake properly for that

Please ignore the spelling mistakes

N the index would be now on update later as I can't do it with mobile

I hope u guysss will understand the things

N now i need a suggestion about part posting

So plz plz I need all of urs help for that so please do reply for that

Well my question is that

Is it would be ok if I post like this for a while

I mean from mobile

As there is no hope my pc be repaired soon

N if I post from mobile there would be mat some spelling mistakes n mat be also part could be short

N one more thing index would be updated later

So the thing is "is it would be ok with u all"

If u guysss think u r all ok with small parta with not edited

Then I hv no problem I will try to post more often

So plz give me ur review over that

Tab tak

Lv you all

Allah Hafiz

N EID MUBARAK once again

One Non writer attempting dear devil act...

Rupkotha

Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago

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gauri

@gaurijw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#363

eid mubarak

part was superb

what is riddhima upto secret planning and all

armaan jealous hehe

i love riddhima and nani wala part

its ok if u post unedited part

i don't have any problem

post soon

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: gaurikajen
eid mubarak
part was superb
what is riddhima upto secret planning and all
armaan jealous hehe
i love riddhima and nani wala part

its ok if u post unedited part
i don't have any problem
post soon

Thanks a lot
For such a lovely comment

Wish u a very happy eid too

I'm glad u like the part
N yup something coming up
U will got to know in nxt part I hope

Thanks for your valuable opinion
I was just waiting
Now I'll start writing the nxt part
It might take little time
But I hope it's ok with u too

Eid mubarak once again
Lv u
Tc

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#365

hayye itni mushkilo se ye part post ho rha h na uff puch mat
itne mushkilo baad yeh comment tujhe mil rha h
as expected ridhima said yes
her conditions r also expected ki vo yehi bolegi
yeh ridhima ki special planning kya h??? anjy ki god bharai bhi ho gyi kiska bday h kya??? ya anniversary???
hmm Jo bhi h PTA lag jayega
oye hoye to armaan jealous ho rha

rahul se pagal janta h rahul or muski me baare mein phir bhi ab obviously rahul ridhz ko itna achi tarah se isiliye kynki dey both r friends from years

loved ridhima n nani wala scene
I mean first jab shashank ne ridhz ko reason samjhaya n phir their sweet talk
with a finally patch up
so breakfast was fun as armaan observing ridhz both in breakfast table n on office
now yeh special occasion kya he???

BTW eid Mubarak

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: palakajenian
hayye itni mushkilo se ye part post ho rha h na uff puch mat
itne mushkilo baad yeh comment tujhe mil rha h
as expected ridhima said yes
her conditions r also expected ki vo yehi bolegi
yeh ridhima ki special planning kya h??? anjy ki god bharai bhi ho gyi kiska bday h kya??? ya anniversary???
hmm Jo bhi h PTA lag jayega
oye hoye to armaan jealous ho rha

rahul se pagal janta h rahul or muski me baare mein phir bhi ab obviously rahul ridhz ko itna achi tarah se isiliye kynki dey both r friends from years

loved ridhima n nani wala scene
I mean first jab shashank ne ridhz ko reason samjhaya n phir their sweet talk
with a finally patch up
so breakfast was fun as armaan observing ridhz both in breakfast table n on office
now yeh special occasion kya he???

BTW eid Mubarak

Ok chal nhi puchti

Yea now a days I'm doing all much expected things na

Wo toh nxt part me pata lag jayegi na
So chill

Ab kya Kare
Dimag ko to pata hai
But dil ka kya khata hai
Usme toh baste wohi
But dimag hai ki manta nhi

Ab to tujhe koi complain nhi hai na that unlogo ko riddhima se puchna chahiye thi
N they were doing wrong

I'm glad that you like the part
Btw u didn't say about the post idea
I mean last me jo maine pucha wo
Batana jarur

Chal
Lv ya
Tc

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

<font color="#cc0099">Ok chal nhi puchti

Yea now a days I'm doing all much expected things na

Wo toh nxt part me pata lag jayegi na

So chill

Ab kya Kare

Dimag ko to pata hai

But dil ka kya khata hai

Usme toh baste wohi

But dimag hai ki manta nhi

Ab to tujhe koi complain nhi hai na that unlogo ko riddhima se puchna chahiye thi

N they were doing wrong

I'm glad that you like the part

Btw u didn't say about the post idea

I mean last me jo maine pucha wo

Batana jarur

Chal

Lv ya

Tc</font>

OK so this note ur talking abt pagal ladki main fb pe dhundh rhi thi
pagal hogyi dhundh dundh le kuch mila hi nah tu bhi ns yaar
OK so as abt the note I told u before too I don't really care if the part is short or long spelling or grammatical mistakes is not a big deal for me
I just want part to read
nd other else do whatever ur comfortable in but I just want part thodi adjustment to main karlungi.

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#368

Hey guysss

Look I'm bck again

As I said before

I m posting from mobile so for keeping the length long

I'm posting evry part divided in 2 or 3 part

N like part would not be short just frequent part will post in time wise

So enjoy

So here goes the story...

Shukriya..

Precap:

Ehsas k uljhan me ulajh gaye koi

Rishtoon ki bandhan suljhane lagi hai koi

Kisi ko shabd ki der hoti hai

To kisi ko samjhne ki deri

Part 26 (a)

At outside of a Caff named "amour lieu" which means love venue but lets see who are here,a girl wearing sky blue n baby pink mixed check kurta with sky blue leggings n both colour mix scarf in head which tied her hair in up n fall on her shoulder keeping her long hairs at her back shoulder n some of her Frenches falling on her forehead was standing n watching clock in every two minutes when someone tap her back making her jump in surprise when the girl turn n leave a breath n said: finally tum dono behne a hi gayi(then hugging them) I missed u nikks n rupenzel

Well guys the person who come is none other than nikki n shilpa let's see who the person is

Ni: Tu bata ridz baki sab kaha hai..?

Well the other girl is none other than riddhima

Ri: rahul n sid ko pure plan pata hai di k ghar pe bhi sab knows the plans n humare ghar me chota pa n choti ma ne baki sab almost manage Karli Minnie n bhaiya also know the details un sabko maine kal raat hi sari details bata di bas muski n maddy a jaye bas phir tum charoon bhi apna device ka kaam samajh lo ... (like this riddhima keep saying about the details that's when maddy n muski appear)finally yaar itna time kyun lagi tum dono ko..

Mu: puch mat yaar yeh madam apna makeup karle phir apna selfie leni se fursaat ho phir to hum ayenge na..

Ma: Ahaan haan ha sari galti toh meri hai na makeup main karti hoon ya tu aur phir tujhe apni mobile se alag karu phir hum kahi ja sakte hai na warna to tu har waqt wo 6'3inch 3inch k set k screen me pata nhi kya dekhke bass hasti rehti hai..dekh abhi bhi time hai sudhar ja warna pata nhi ek din log tujhe pagal samajh kar pagal khane bhej denge samjhi na

Mu: Oye ijjat se baat kar badi hoon main tujhse...

Ma(with damp care attitude):Huh sirf adhe min ki badi hone se kuch nhi hoti

Muski: adhi nhi puri ki puri 50sec ki badi hoon

The other girl was looking at one time at maddy then nxt at muski then when they were non stop fighting riddhima shout making both of them stop fighting n other two flinched n making some passerby stop at their step n look at them

Ri: Shut up. .just shut up both of u..(nikki who compose herself first touch riddhima's shoulder when she said)Kya hai.. (nikki with her eyes give her a look making her remember that where they are)Ab ek dusre pe chilla band karo n mujhe ghurna bhi aur andar chalo (saying this riddhima left inside the Caff letting them no option but follow)

After discussing evrything all left for their planned work while riddhima left for hill point

At hill point

Riddhima enter only to see evryone having sulking face specially the one who have no other option to work with armaan this make riddhima frown a little

She ask one of her coworker n they being close with riddhima blurt that armaan is having a very bad mood from yesterday when she remember last time she saw armaan two days ago when she was gone to armaan for some details about some outfit as none ritu,rahul or atul was present at office that time he was quite ok

She just was about to go in rahul's cabin as her cabin is in re-decorating as per her nessecery needs so she for a while work in rahul's cabin when suddenly another coworker stop her informing there is little more info added in the outfit she is working on n ritu ask her to collect that from atul or rahul

Riddhima enter in atul's cabin to find it empty not even rahul is in his cabin

Riddhima watch the clock to see its only 15min left for lunch so she can take a look to file if she got it when she call atul he inform the file is left to armaan's cabin

Riddhima was going there when some employee stop her n ask: Are ridz tu lunch nhi karegi it's almost time..

Ri: Main karungi na but I've some work to finish first tum log jao main bhi ati hoon canteen me bas..

Coworker: Tu vul gayi kya aj canteen band hai..hum sab yehi pas me jo restaurant hai waha ja rahe hai tu chahe to can join us

Ri: uhmm.. u guys carry on main dekhti hoon bad me.. now before Mr mallik also left I need to collect some info gtg..

Coworker(with scared expression): take care yaar you are going in lion's den,bas aj don't make him more angry as he is already bursting on evryone

[in this place I need to tell this that though riddhima keep n absolute professional behaviour here but the cross word connection between armaan n her is still there n few of worker even see them fighting but as they were very fond of riddhima they never think or make any bad comment about that]

While riddhima laugh a little n go forward when she heard a small all the best from behind by that coworker

Unknown to them that sulking lion heard the whole convo of them when he come out to have little water but when riddhima was about to turn he hurriedly got in his cabin

Inside the cabin

Armaan was quite irritated from last two days for the difference of feelings building in him

He couldn't find the exect thing that happening to him

He tried evrything to keep this weird feeling away but all seems going in vain n last two days without watching her was another aspect of it

But did it really worked

Honestly nothing is working as he can clearly see everywhere he is trying to find her n now when he hear his voice after two whole days he couldn't help but feel that smile curve in his lips making a dimple in cheeks

When he was all lost about thinking about her, riddhima knock on door making him come out frm his trance he frown a bit n said loudly to come in

Riddhima hearing his come in got that evryone was so right that even his voice is seeming how much irritated he is

Ri: Mr.mallik I need that file which mr.gharewal left with you

Ar (Surprisingly smiled at her n said): sit

Ri (look at him with surprise that a little while before he was all sulking n now he is smiling really weird guy): I'm fine u just give me the file mr.mallik I will go bck to check it before lunch time started

Ar:first of all its already lunch time started n 2nd I'm just checking some info in that file only I just need few moment then I will give it bck n till then u can sit here

Hearing him riddhima sit calmly at sofa picking up some magazines when after a while peon come n give a percel go away

After a while armaan give her the file n when riddhima was checking the file if anything else needed armaan open the percel n serve foods in two plate when riddhima who didn't notice it about to leave saying thanks armaan insist her to have lunch

Ri: it's really fine Mr.mallik I'm just going to have it anyway

Ar: riddhima it's lunch time u need not to be act all professional now n btw waise bhi I order for two so ...

Ri (hearing him she was surprised first but in a few seconds her surprise turn into smirk n said ): ohoo Gf ne ditch kar di kya lunch jo ab Akele kha rahe ho?

Ar ( with attitude ) : No one ditch armaan mallik... N btw yeh atul ka lunch tha but use anji ka call aya so he left

Ri ( with concern) : di thik hai na

Ar: Ha she is all right just her mood swings u see

While both laughed remembering about anji's crazy mood swings like now a days she got up in middle of night n sometime ask atul to cook for her

N atul is having a hard time handling his pregnant wife

Riddhima for a while without thinking much have lunch with armaan talking about business n family n sometimes fighting..

At evening

Outside of rangin ashiyaana

Riddhima standing at garden waiting for someone then she started to call evryone of her friends group n put on conference

Ri:Kaha margaye sabke sab,tum sabko 6baje yaha pohchne the na ab 7 Baj rahe hai aur ek bhi nhi ayi,I swear aj agar usne baat nhi kar payi to meri pichle 3 years ki mehnat mitti me mil jayegi n uske liye main chodegi nhi tum sabko main bata rhi hoon..

Like this riddhima keep saying when she didn't hear any noise from other side,she look at her screen to see they are still connected but no one is talking which is so unusual so she just concerned now n said: Hello hello shilpa nikki rahul sid muskaan madiha kya hua tum log baat kyun nhi kar rahe?tum log thik hona?kaha ho tum sab...

That's when a voice come saying: just tere piche

First riddhima didn't get it but when she realised it's comes just after behind her she turn n saw evryone standing with armaan yuvi n naina in front n others at their back

Riddhima gave evryone a tooth full smile n after reciting what to do they smile looking at each other then riddhima put her hand forward when one after another evryone put their hand n riddhima said: So guyzzz evryone ready for mission...

Sid cut her in between saying: istambul... (everyone give him a look saying what)

Ra : Oye hum istambul me hai kya jo mission istambul hoga

Si: Oh then mission kahani ghar ghar ki(everyone give him a look so he immediately said) yeh bhi nhi phir I got it I got it iit's mission impossible haina haina bolo na koi kuch...

Evryone shout together: Shut up sid...

That's all for today

The other portions will be posted in two days I hope

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 26 (B)

part continues...

Later evryone gone to their plan wise they decide in two part

Riddhima leading with yuvi n naina n nikki with her

N Minnie leading others with her

Ri: Minnie u know what to do right??

Mi: Chill jiji who knows mumma better than me

Ri: yea yea but Tc waise tu chahe toh in logo ko bhi sath le ja sakti hai u know papa k liye main akele hi kafi hoon

While minnie just shrugged her shoulder n said her to go on...

Riddhima with confidence walk to study room n knock warning others not to disturb n just stay outside

After hearing shashank's come in riddhima enter with small steps

Ri (in almost confidence she just said):Papa I need to talk

Shashank look up to see her face when both looking at each other

Scene faded at riddhima's n shashank's face

Here on the other side in living room

Mi: ap sab yehi raho main jake baat karti hoon..

Ar:Girlfriend r u sure tumhe sach me hum me se kisi ki jarurat nhi

Mi:chill boyfriend I can manage u know

Outside the door of study

Ni:itna time kyun lag rhi hai use??

Yu: mujhe kya pata main andar thodi hi hoon..

Na: Baby kahi aisa toh nhi hai na ki uncle mane hi nhi n ridz ko DDLJ ki tarah...

Yu (cut her in between) : baby hum tumhare film k bate baad me sunege let's ridz come bck na...

While naina pout as yuvi stop her so yuvi kiss her on her cheeks making her blush

Nikki didn't notice it But someone from behind said: guyss romance pe break lagao hum bhi yehi pe hai yaar

All turn to see its none other than riddhima

Everyone look at her with questioning eyes when she just walk away coolly not giving them any answer at their questioning look

All follow her behind while nikki said:Ridz bata na kya hua

Na: Ha ridz uncle man gaye ya nhi

Yu: Are Kuch To boll

Riddhima stop at her step n all bump with one another as they were running behind her only

Ri: Yeh koi puchne ki baat hai kya obviously papa ko to maanna hi tha na akhir unke princes ne bola aise kaise mana kar dete btw what's other part's situation...

They all shrugged their shoulder assuming they don't know

Scene cut to living room

Everyone others are sitting there when riddhima nikki yuvi n naina join them

Ri: tum log yaha pe kyun beith ho mumma maan gayi kya??(no one says anything) let me guess tum log abhi tak gayi bhi nhi na... where is Minnie???

Pr: she got from here 20min ago saying she is going to talk still not bck...

Ri: Ok choti ma main dekhti hoon ap log beitho yehi pe

Saying this she gone towards kitchen to see Minnie is picking inside but not getting in

Riddhima pet at her bck when she whines n look bck

Mi: Oh god jiji u scared me?? (While riddhima give a look saying y she is standing there) oh it's just. ..uhmm mm jiji can u do it plz mujhse nhi hogi...

Ri: Kyun tab to bada keh rhi thi tu Akele hi mana legi ab kya hua??

Minnie huffed n go in living room n sit beside armaan all look at her with questioning eyes

Mi: what I'm a kid yaar ap logo ko sharam ani chahiye mujhe sherni ki cave k samne Akele chod diya ...

Riddhima who come behind her said: koan kid tu oh plz baat to kabhi tu kid jaisa karti nhi ab badi ayi kid banne...(Minnie whined) what maine papa ko mana li mumma ko manana is ur department not mine...

When someone from behind said : mujhe kyun mana na hai??(Everyone's eyes got big when the person said again)are tum sab kab aye mujhe kisine kuch batai kyun nhi...ab kuch bolo bhi kya hua...

Mi: Hey mumma u know yeh sab apse kuch kehna chahte hai so u guyss talk main apne room me jati hoon..bye see ya tc (saying this minnie run to her room showing all all the best sign)

Padma look weirdly to her n then others who were looking at each other so she first asked to ram: Kya bolna tha tum logo ko?

Ram: mujhe kya bolna hoga jiji main to (Hitting his head as if forgot something) uff main to bhul hi gayi mujhe ek video conference attend karni hai(Padma give her a suspicious look) u know jiji foreign delegates see u later

Saying this he run towards inside n hide behind one of pillar watching what's happening

Then padma look at priya who said instantly: Oh jiji I forgot mujhe na ek important phone karna hai main bas wo khatam karke ayi ok...

Saying this she also run inside n hide in the same pillar with ram n pick inside

Now only gang left n looking at padma riddhima come forward slowly n said: Actually mumma it's just that...

Padma: just what...

A voice from behind said main batati hoon padma

All look behind to see shashank standing there with ram n priya behind him n Minnie beside him

Actually Minnie go from there n call shashank n they were coming in living room n when they saw ram n priya picking in

Pa: Shashank ap..

Sh: actually padma yeh log tumse kuch puchna chahte the infant main puchna chahti hoon.. (shashank stop a while to look at her n see her looking at him) Padma it's more than 30 years we know each other n the day after tomorrow it's going to be 27years of our marriage so all I just wanted to say that is...

Pa: Shashank ap..

Sh: let me say padma

Pa: per shashank...

Sh: no par Bhar pehle listen to me.. so Mrs. Padma shashank gupta will u marry ur this poor husband again but this time with full rituals n make him world's luckiest man ever again...

By now evryone was looking at them in awe

N padma was all shocked to even react

Her trance broke when riddhima n Minnie says :Ha kardo na mumma

N even others started to say her to say yes

While she look at all in surprise then look back at shashank who is standing in middle of their two beautiful daughters

Sh: Dekho na Padma bachoon ka bhi kitna Mann hai humare shadi dekhne ka ab toh ha kardo..plzzz

Pa (shocked hearing his statement): Shashank (glaring at him) apko pata hai na ap kya bol rahe ho ab toh humare bachoon ki shadi k umar ho gayi aur is umar me apko dubara shadi karni hai. ..

Sh: come on itna bhi umar nhi hui meri bas kuch 40+ hi toh (Padma narrow her eyes at him) ok fine 50+ hi toh hui...Buddha thodi hi hui hoon right girls...

By now all the girls standing surrounding him n boys behind them looking at padma with pleading eyes...

And as soon shashank ask them they all shout together: of course

Padma look at all of them with narrow eyes n said: yeh plan kiska tha...(Riddhima instantly hide behind shashank n padma notice it) Riddhima yeh tere dimag se nikli na mujhe pata thi aise ideas aur kiske dimag me se a sakti hai...

Before she could tell anything more nani come n said: padma abhi tujhse kuch kehna chahte hai (n keep the phone which is in her hand in loudspeaker)

Ab:mumma kyun gussa ho rhi ho apka bp high ho jayegi na aise... aur chutki pe kyun naraz ho rhi ho mumma u know na wo toh bachi hai abhi...

Ri (instantly shout): Main bachi nhi hoon bhaiya...side waise baat maat karo..

Ab: chutki jara apne phone k msg check karna n let me talk to mumma badi k bich choti logo ko baat nhi karni chahiye while others giggled n riddhima huffed n check her mobile to see there is a pending msg from abhi...

She open it... where it's written" chutki I know u r not small but let me handle mumma warna u know na she is not gonna agree n mere bare me jo bhi complaints ho main sabki Bhar payi kar dungi but for now chup ho ja plzzz"

Riddhima smile watching the msg n type " thik hai thik hai ap bolte ho to maan leti hoon abhi but iske liye punishment toh apko bhugatna padega -ur chutki"

Abhi msg reply after 2min:"jaise apki marzi mate now let me make mumma agree"

Riddhima laugh n replied "tathastu balak"

N here in phone...

Ab: mumma maan jao na plzzz ... apne bete k liye hi ha kardo...

Pa(in dilemma as she can't actually say no to his son): Thik hai,bas tere baat se maan rhi hoon ok...

Everyone started to cheer n hug each other

Riddhima took the phone n shout:lv you bhai u r the best..

N then saying bye cut the call n hug minnie n then Rahul. .

Riddhima who after hugging rahul turn n face with armaan n hug him while for a sudden second armaan feel a unknown feeling while for riddhima it was just a single hug as in a frequent second she break the hug n turn n hug nikki who was beside her, totally unknown of his feeling what she did create with her simple act

But someone else did notice the play of emotions in armaan's face but thought to have a talk with him later

So guys this is the fact that riddhima was planning for so long

Let me tell u y...

Actually it's that shashank-padma's marriage were a court marriage not a traditional one as that time shashank doesn't have a full time job n due to padma's dad's health they married in hurry

But padma always wanted to marry traditionally

Later abhi born in one year n they got so busy in life that they never bring this wish up

Few years before riddhima got to know about this she from that time started to plan for it

N she even design evryone's outfit for the function n specially for padma's wedding dress n assosories

N it's all she did hiding from shashank n padma as she wanted to surprise them n abhi n Minnie was so involved in it

So that's the whole thing...

After cheering n all

Padma stop all n said: ok everyone listen listen... main maan gayi iska yeh matlab nhi tum logo ko kuch bhi karne ki permission hai ok...

Ri: chill mumma hum log aise waise kuch nhi karenge... n btw ab se balki abhi se ap nayi dulhan ho so no talking (n pour a whole laddu I'm her mouth) yeh sugar free hai mumma chill... (then making both shashank n padma standing together minnie n riddhima hug tightly both of them with wide hand open hands riddhima said) so papa n mumma congratulations..

N after breaking the hug Padma was again about to say something when riddhima pass a thal With some clothes n all to priya n push them to a nearby room to change n ask nikki n shilpa to go with them n give at thal to rahul they also left to a room

After a while both shashank n padma enter in the living room to see only that the whole room is changed now

Everything is decorated with fairy lights n round lanterns in specific distance the living room area is totally changed the table before the sofas is decorated with flower petals n in middle of it there is two thal also one for shashank n other one for padma...

Both of them were awestruck watching such change its true riddhima ask shashank first but she didn't told her what they were gonna do n when shashank ask about how they gonna do it riddhima just said to say yes baki tension wo log dekh lenge

Evryone was by now changed n even anji n other mallik's join them all girls were wearing different shade of blue lahenga n all boys were wearing different shade of green kurta n shashank n padma wearing dress where both of this blue n green shade were visible

Shanti come forward n wo hat se jo nazar utarne wala kuch karte hai na waise kiya n put kali tika behind padma's ear...

Pa: ma yeh sab kaise...

Na: yeh toh in bachoon ka kaam hai unlogo ne hi kiya sab...

Before they could say something sid come in apron n said: nhiii... mere bina shuru mat karna function...

All look at him while rahul said:toh isme itna chillane wali konsi baat hai...

N Shilpa said: pehle change to karke a idiot...

N nikki look at rahul n give him a look n rahul noded n go to sid n holding him with one hand drag him into one of room

While other laugh at his act...

After few moments

Now the scene is like padma n shashank sitting in middle of sofa while ram n priya done the tilak of shashank...

N they give the shagun thal to shashank n shashank took it...

When someone shout from behind:yeh shadi nhi ho sakti ...

Hearing the shout all shocked n look behind to see there is a woman standing wearing a green maxi skirt with sky blue top n brown hat n stylish prada bag in her hand with a big trolly bag in her other hand...

When no one said anything she said: mere muh kya dekh rahe ho n u how could u do this to me...

N started to walk towards shashank n padma...

While all look at her with surprising eyes...

Scene stop at evryone's surprising expression...

That's all for today

N this part ends here

Soon I'm gonna come bck with new part n update

Tab tak stay tuned

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Edited by Ruppkotha - 9 years ago

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#370

OK so another part but suspense ab take reveal nah hua that yeh planning akhir h kis liye??
awesome part
loved the starting
ar moment are the best

I loved how armaan me office mein sabko apne anger se pareshan kar rakha tha but as ridhz enter a smile a dimple smile appear on his face
he is so soft nd polite with her
are yaar ab tak confuse h yeh apni feeling ko lekar
hey bhagwan kya hoga iska seriously

yaar ab story me in koi cute fun moment nah rha
I mean pehle part padhte time I used to laugh a lot.
ar ki koi fight bhi nah, mini to gayab ho gyi h
abhi me scenes shuru se sirf ek ya 2 honge
kya pikachu where is ur charm???
something is missing these days
last part mein bhi or ismein bhi

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