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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa

its superb part rup..loved the whole..



Thanks a lot di...
U comment twice feel so good
lv u
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Posted: 10 years ago
now plz rup update the next its been long
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Originally posted by: palakajenian

now plz rup update the next its been long


Sorry for late but i'll update today just editing
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Posted: 10 years ago
So here goes the story ...
Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha ha, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai, Aur Isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahunchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain, yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhad hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga.Iske liye authority ya ni ki writer ya ni ki main uske liye jimiddar nhi hu...Kripa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekh lijiye...
Shukriya


Precap:
Ek naya rishtan
Kuch khatti mithi rishtoon bhari pal
Kuch purani rishtoon ka
Anjaan bhadi mulakatoon ka intezaar
Kya layegi inki jindegi me khusi ya pareshani ka pahar...
Part 13

The person standing there was wearing a red dress which end up till her knee giving a teary smile hug them back tightly while saying: I so miss u guyss
Riddhima,rahul and minnie in union screamed: we miss u too
They all together go inside while meeting others meet her too without shashank who was coming from his room ready to go for work
He watch the person and smiling to the person he said: So finally my Philosopher's Stone is here
Person run and hugging him said: Oh pops i missed u a lot..
Padma from behind tell: Ap dono ka ho gayi ho to breakfast karne ajaiye sab wait kar rhi hai..shilpa beta tu bhi aja..
Well everyone meet the person she is none other than Shilpa Malhotra

Well she is friend of riddhima
Her dadi lives in kalcuta
She was with her till last one month
Her family means her dadi and her only twin sister.
They are non-identical twins
Her sister is there other friend
Shilpa is a hairstylist in profession
And she loves her job
Here she have a small sallon which is quite famous by last one year
She is little bubbly kind of girl
Do crazy things in joined hand with riddhima
Don't have parents but consider riddhima's parents as her own
& she is by born enemy of sid
Don't know why but they both just can't stand in a place for even a few second alone
She can kill sid anytime by her gaze only
For her & sid's relation is like she is always like in my style kahu
Ye.. hat ja re chokre
Bheja na thok re
Aa rela hai apun
Panga nahi karna
Danga nahi karna
Kar dunga main warna
Teri tai tai phish
More about her u all will got to know once u all read further..
Now bck to story again
Shilpa (politely): ayi mamoni [well this mamoni name is also given by her as her mother is from kalkatta so she knows Bangla quite well]
When she reached near dinning she saw sid there & said: Yeh bandar yaha kya kar raha hai?
Sid(winning): Dekha mamoni maine bola tha na yeh chipkali ate hi phir shuru ho jayegi?
Shilpa(rounding towards him): Tune mere bare me kuch bola?
Sid(Looking at her face scaring still get up & hiding behind Padma): Ha to yaha tere lawa aur kaon hai chipkali??
Shilpa(with sweetest fake smile): Oh really...???? Agar aisa hai to mamoni k piche kyun chup raha hai jo bolna hai samne akar bol na...
Sid(whispering to himself): marna hai kya samne jake(then merging some courage go in front then again run behind Padma & said)Nhi ati kya karlegi... 😛
Shilpa(getting angry): Teri toh..
Padma(stopping both): Times up sit on the chairs both of u & have breakfast..Tum log bhi na bache jaisa behave karte ho..jaldi jaldi breakfast karo sid aur Rahul tumhe office bhi toh jana hai na??
Then all have breakfast munching the breakfast & pulling each other's leg all though with past memories..
Later Shilpa also go back to her apartment. Where she lives & after few days her sister will also gonna join her..
At around noon riddhima got a call from anji about coming up holi events they talk for a while then riddhima run towards hospital to meet her parents taking minnie with her & to give them a surprise..
Here at hill point

After talking with riddhima, anji turned to see only atul standing there with fruits & juice
Anji (irritatedly): not again Atul maine itna sara lunch hi toh kia...
Atul (trying to convince her): Toh kya hua yeh bhi khalo,tumhare liye aur baby k liye dono k liye protein chahiye na...
Anji (making face): Acha thik hai but isse mujhe kya milegi...I mean agar main yeh sare khalu toh what will I get in return..
Atul (watching her so soon agreed to have all happily said): Jo bhi tum chaho...
Anji (Making sure): Pakka na
Atul: Ha anjali jo bhi tum kaho...(while showing his all teeth)
Anji(excitedly): oh atul I so love u..(& kissed his cheeks)
Atul was so happy he forget to ask what she want actually but once she finished the fruits anji decide to put the bomb now...
Anji (with hope):Atul mujhe na holi party pe jana hai...
Atul (when he registered what she just said): Kyaaa nhiii
Anji (irritated still with pouted voice): Kya nhi atul u promised me na u will do whatever I say u said na bolo???????
Atul (try to make her understand): Ha but anjali...
Anji (pouting): Kya but atul u know na main har saal thodi hi mangti hoon bas isbar hi toh bol rhi hoon...
Armaan who enter in the house as he forgot some files he came back to take it..
Armaan (said all of a sudden making both startled): Har saal tum pregnant bhi nhi hoti anji..
Hearing armaan's voice both get startled but anji composed herself soon & made a crying face..
Anji(looking at atul) : Atul u promised me na??????
Armaan(arching one brow up) : really champ did u said that ?
Atul(looking towards both of them): Ha par anjali..
Anjali(with fake anger): What anjali,...tumne promise kia tha yaad hai na tumhe..
Armaan(looking at atul): Champ u know na she is pregnant than how could u allow her...?
Atul (confusingly): Par maine aisa nhi kaha?
Armaan (inquired): To phir anji jhut bol rhi hai kya
Atul (confusingly): Nhi par..
Armaan (loudly): kya par par laga rakhi hai kabse,par k age bhi to bol...
Anji (looking at both of them as they didn't give her any importance just talking in between screamed & said):Ahh...(both guys looks at her worriedly) Tum log mujhe jane doge ya nhi??
Both of them said in union: Nhi
Anji (made face & said): I hate both of u..(then turn towards other side & left for her room huffing)
Scene shift to Sanjeevni Hospital where shashank,Padma& abhi works..
One girl wearing A Sunglow color 4piece salwar suit with hairs tied in two ponytail in both side stand near the reception & said: Where is Dr.shashank,Padma &abhi gupta?
The receptionist who was wearing light pink uniform with white cap look up to see who is the weirdest person want three doctor at the same time?
When from behind another girl in Toolbox color shirt & Topaz color legings with same color semi jacket & hair tied in a ponytail comes behind her & asked: Aise ghur kya rahe ho aunty pehle ladki nhi dekhi kya?
The first girl turn towards her & said while showing eyes: Minnie behave.
Minnie(winning): Kya jiji tumh e tarr raha tha pehle to sirf ladke tadte the ab to antiyaan bhi ghurne lagi hai aur dekho is nannhi si jaan ko ek to help kia phir bhi dant rhi ho...
Riddhima(widening her eyes): Minnie kya kuch bhi bol rhi hai shut up...
While here the receptionist was looking at them with wide eyes...
Minnie(watching the nurse): & ap aunty ghurna band karo hume aur bolo papa mumma aur buddy kaha pe hai?????
Riddhima(scolding):Minnieee...behave & yaha mumma papa bolne se kam nhi chalegi u have to say name
Minnie(biting her lips):Opps...I mean can I know where Dr. Shashank, Dr. Padma & Dr. Abhimannyun gupta are..??
The receptionist wax opening her mouth like in O' in shock with hand show them one side road to OT..
While both the girl walk in that way suddenly minnie stop & go bck to receptionist who was still opened her mouth Said: Muh to band karlo aunty...
The receptionist somehow close her mouth but still was shocked when minnie go back to riddhima who was shaking her head at her naughty sister..
Riddhima ask another sister about their whereabouts. When they inform Padma is in OT1 Abhi is gone out for a while & will be bck till lunch & shashank is on round..Both head towards shashank's cabin...
Here..
It's exactly look like the same cabin as shashank used to have in sanjeevni...
Both girls saw the cabin is empty they wait there for a while & hide behind the chair.
Shashank came into the cabin & he was hell tired just close his eyes & sit in his chair didn't notice anyone.
Riddhima got up & place her hands on his eyes which was closed
Shashank sensing it at once said: Riddhima..
Riddhima(pouting with complaining voice): Apko humesha kaise pata chal jati hai papa..
Shashank (getting up & hugging her): Kyun ki tu meri princess jo hai
Minnie (peeping from behind of riddhima): Aur main.???
Shashank: Ohoo my angel is also here huh...seems like its my lucky day...(while hugging Minnie then order some chocolate & ice-cream for both ladies he turn towards them) So u both together here what's cocking up??
Riddhima (complaining): Kya papa hum kya bas pranks hi karte hai kya nhi na...We were just missing u all so we bring food from home so that we could have some family moment & u know na nani bhi unke frnd ki yaha gayi hai for one week so we were just getting bored.,.
Minnie: Huh aur nhi to kya ghar me itna bore lagti hai na jab ap sab nhi hote ho...
Shashank smile towards his daughters & after a while Padma & abhi also arrived & they all have lunch together...
While suddenly Minnie said: Mumma is bar holi me kya karogi..its only 2 days left
Padma: Ohoo main to vul hi gayi thi acha hua tune yaad dila di..so aj raat k dinner k baad we will settle up about this tab tak jisko jitna ideas hai ek kar lo & riddhima plz inform ma that we will talk to her in skype after dinner so we can all decide together what to do...

Well in this stage I've to say that's how decission's for any occasion taken in rangin ashiyana
I mean even though they are not together they somehow connect & all present their opinion & the judge urf the sar panch who gonna take decisions is none other than Padma..but she do hear about evryone's opinion
Well back to story...
At night in rangin ashiyana
All sitting in sofa decided all the arrangement & give responsibilities divided while suddenly riddhima said: Mumma anji di ko bhi bula le..i think she is pregnant to jayada bhag dor nhi kar payegi but hum bhi toh is bar jayada kuch nhi kar rahe hai na...
Evryone agree with her & its decided So the things goes like
Shashank will see the food arrangement which he ask so much from Padma to give his this duty that at the end Padma give this duty to him
Riddhima will shop the things which is needed for Holika dehen & abhi would help her on that
Padma gonna arrange puja & other ritual things & shashank would help her on that & she will supervise others
Abhi,Shashank & riddhima would see the decoration arrangement
They all sit & made a quick guest list
When evry work is decided they have two days only left so discussed about things what to do
Abhi told riddhima to meet at bazar so that they can do the shopping..
Next day..
At traffic signal
A black car was stopping at the traffic point when the person inside watch a girl in Black Dress with baby pink leggings & dupatta in a scottie wearing helmet just stop side of his car near the footpath
He saw a little girl around 5 years come to that girl & called her while pulling her duppatta & he can't see her face as she was little forward he saw the little girl ask for money while the girl on scottie park her scottie & take the girl to nearby food stall & buy her some food,the guy inside the car was amused to watch this scene before him as now-a-days its very rare. In curiosity to see the face of the girl the person from inside the car wind down his car window but to his luck the signal light change making the girl go away as all this time the girls back was towards the person he can't watch who is it..
At near the bazzar..
The girl who was on signal got down from her scottie & called someone: Kaha ho ap?
The guy in other side says: I'm stuck in a emergency plz tu abhi k liye shop karle as soon I operate the patient I'll reach..
In response the girl said: Ok but main jaldi ana warna main mumma ko call karke batadungi..
The guy in other side says: As u say chutki,,..
The girl : bhaiiiyyyaaa
Then both laughed and cut the call.. & though the convo u can guess this guy & girl is none other then abhi & riddhima
As riddhima was thinking where to start looking at the list made by her & abhi about the things someone bumped into her
While both somehow balance themselves own but got hit by their head & both holding their hands with hands & mumble saying together: Sorry (hearing the voice both look up & say) Tum???????
Riddhima (While messaging her head with her palm): Not again...mr.ball tum kya meri picha kar rhi ho??
Armaan (While messaging his head with his palm): Ohoo miss khudko itna bhi khubsurat mat samjho ki main tumhari picha karungi...
Riddhima (mumble): Stupid...idiot
Armaan (stop messaging his head & looking at her): I heard that
Riddhima (this time loudly): Oh good for u tumhe sunane k liye hi tha...(then she turn & go other side)
While armaan notice this is the same dress the girl at traffic was wearing that girl also comes this way is it mean riddhima was the girl then he started to think: (but how can she, he think) par iski to har waqt gussa nak pe hoti hai how can she be the one (then she remember the way she care for Minnie then think) nhi may b yeh wohi hi ho...(then smile remembering the gesture of her as now he is sure it's her)
Next day
At hill point
Everyone at dining table...Atul is pleading anji to have something while armaan comes down in his black 4 piece Armani suit with white shirt saw them like this & shaking his head sit near them & looking at anji said: Anji
Anji (looking at gappu): Gappu in dono ko bol do mujhse baat na kare...
Gappu (who was eating his breakfast in full concentration said with food full in his mouth which didn't make anyone understand a single word): Tou.. (Bite the foods more)douo..baa ma kaoo
Armaan (smack at his head & said): Pehle khana to khale phir repeat karna...
Gappu (gulping his food): Bhavi dekho tooo
Anji (while placing a hand on gappu's head caressing his hair then making more eatable things at his plate said): tu kha gappu inke baate mat sun..
On that time a girl enter wearing Bud green color tops with blue faded jeans with sky blue jacket while screaming: Anji kaha hai tu??????
Anji (from dining table shout): Muski yaha dinning pe...
Muski (coming in): kya hua tune mujhe itna urgent kyun bulai..
Anji: Mujhe bade papa k ghar jana hai & u know this guys won't let me so u please check up & tell them & abhi chal mere sath...(while holding her hands pulling her to her rooms so that she can do checkup & guys follow them but muski put the door off in front of them)
Muski (curiously): Abhi achanak se bade papa k ghar?? Aur uparse holi hai tu ab kyun...??
Muski checkup anji while anji tell her about her plans while boys outside the room walking from one end to other & even atul call up Rahul there the three were sitting outside while muski comes out with anji who was ready for go out while both have an wide grin on their face where boys was just staring towards them surprisingly to know what's happening
Muski (laughing on something): ok anji main niche wait karti hoon I think u need to talk with them..at least tell them u r going
While the guys stand shock taking advantage of it anji go from there just saying: Gappu inhe bol dena main muski k sath bade papa k ghar ja rhi hoon aur tu bhi kal ajana waha bi k sath kal afternoon waha holi party hai...
The guys were standing there shocked hearing about their sudden departure just a day before holi..
At rangin ashiyaana
Door bel ring...
Laila open the door while smile watching the person before her & took the bag from her hand while shouting inside to all to see who came..
Evryone came out while riddhima who also come that time from door with lots of things on her hand about to call Laila y door is open but still in her pause as she saw the person before her while Laila & saran took the things from her hand & next second riddhima run & hug her tightly screaming : Di kaisi ho??????
Anji reciprocate also too others also come & hug her & meet her..
After a while anji said to all: Bade mumma bade papa ap log isse mil chuki ho but (turning towards Minnie & ridz) tum log milo yeh hai meri best frnd muski Aur muski tu to bade papa aur bade mumma se mil chuki hai let me introduce u to my cousins
Muski (cutting her words in between): I knew yeh hai ridz (then hug ridz) aww I so wanted to meet u in person skype pe wo jhappi wali baat kaha (then turning towards minnie) Aur tum ho shanaya right
Well everyone this is minnie's another name shanaya gupta urf Minnie ;)
Minnie : yea but jo log mujhe ache lagte hai they call me Minnie...(then both hi-fi)

In this place I should tell u guys that muski & riddhima got friendly when ever riddhima talk with anji & as anji aur muski was best frnds from very early so they talk many times with eachother but never meet in person
They all spend some family time later Padma asked anji to rest & they both retired to the guest room
When they were afresh after a while taking a break from holi preparation riddhima comes to their room & started to chat
Riddhima: I'm so happy di that u finally made it up to come but where is DR???(Anji & muski look at each other when guessing something wrong riddhima asked) Kya hua di any problem??
Then both of them told them their extra passiveness over anji & why they are so extra possessive about the reason also when riddhima make her convince & call to atul...
Here in Heaven hill...
Three boys sitting on siting area while armaan & Rahul is just boosting up atul to call anji & atul is getting all fussy
Suddenly the call rings at atul's mobile its written anji calling..
But atul didn't pick up the call in nervousness in the 3rd call armaan put it up & put it on loudspeaker
Otherside: Hello
Armaan (When atul didn't said anything armaan shaking at his mental brother response): Hello anji
Otherside: Nope its her cousin m I talking with mr. atul mallik
Armaan: No its his brother armaan mallik
Otherside(riddhima who was at other side before she could heard the name muski pull up the phone): Oy idiot kaha hai tu...
Armaan: Muski tu ?
Atul (hearing muski's voice atul pick the phone & said): Muski anji kaisi hai wo thik to hai na kuch hua to nhi na use?
Otherside: Abe gadhe aise koi apni biwi ko sambhal na nhi ata kya tujhe usne sirf holi hi to khelni chahi thi aur phir bhi tu...(riddhima took the phone from muski again & said) Muski kyun dara rhi hai give it to me Hey DR its ridz here...
As the phone was on loudspeaker everyone was listening & armaan got a feeling like he know this person but can't make it out...here when he was in deep thought they all talk & end the call already when atul call armaan he come in sense & looked quizzically
Atul: Kaha khoye hue hai bhai chal sare problem solve hogaya ridz ne sab thik kar diya
Armaan (little bit amused): Really how?
Atul: Holi ka puja unke ghar hai they called us all & kal afternoon wahi holi party anji ghar ane k liye bhi mann gayi but holi k baad..& bade mumma hai waha to they will take care of her & tu ab waha chal last time tune bade mumma se mili thin a but bade papa se mil nhi paya is bar sab se mill lena..
Right then atul's cell ring & its urgent to go to work..
He looked towards armaan so armaan said: Tu tension mat le I'll tackle that out u go aur main waha kal afternoon ajaungi tu mujhe place ki address msg kar dena
Atul: Par armaan waha financial department ka kaam tu kaise aur even mem ne bhi bulai kal subah humare office ki taraf se jis orphanage me holi party di gayi hai waha kuch kam bachi hai tu itna sab akele kaise..
Rahul (cut him in between): Are atul to main chala jati hoon na ammy k sath tu ja anji k sath mill le waise bhi tere se gussa thi main yaha ammy k sath milke baki sab tackle kar hi lungi...
Atul (shaking head like he used to do on dmg when he like the idea)l: Ha yeh sahi rahega thnks yaar (then hugging rahul)Tu mera sacha yaar hai
Armaan (dragging both of them apart): Agar yeh tera sacha yaar hai to main koan hoon...
Atul (hugging armaan): Tu to mera bhai hai bhai..
Rahul (mumble): Jealous (though armaan heard that but ignore it)
Atul(coming out of the hug): Acha suno tum dono phir kal afternoon ajana waha main address msg kar dungi
Rahul (looking apologicaly): Sorry yaar main nhi a paungi I have to go somewhere else..
Armaan (mumble to himself): matlab meri holi shanti se kategi..
Rahul (rolling his eyes at him): Whatever
Atul (who didn't notice anything): Phir tu humare sath holi nhi khelegi..?
Rahul (consoling): Are champ sad mat ho I need to go at a frnd house wo boht din baad abroad se lauti to waha se jaldi nikal k main ane ki koushish karti hoon na..
Atul (happily): Acha chal phir tum log jaldi jao kam khatam karo main bhi ready hone jati hoon...
Then both of them go in different way...
At night
In Rangin ashiyaana...
Atul comes at evening & everyone meet him shashank & Padma already know him after holi ka dehan they have dinner & sit while talking...
They were talking randomly suddenly anji turn towards riddhima
Anji: Ridz teri dost ki paltan kaha hai?tu to keh rhi thi bas ek bahar hai baki sab yaha phi raj aya kyun nhi
Riddhima: Wo di wo log kal ayenge sab aur yaha hi holi manayenge tab ap unse mil lena aur waise bhi kal subah subah ships I mean shilpa to a hi jayegi apko company dene maine use phone pe batai pata hai she is so excited to meet u aur baki sab se bhi kal mil lena..Acha di ab baki baat baad me u go & take rest...tomorrow gonna be a busy day u know...
All retire for their room though there were spare rooms still muski go in ridz's room as she don't wanted to sleep alone..
Next day...
Morning time...
Riddhima & Minnie gone to abhi's room while other was sleeping they do something & come out chupke se no one seen them without Shashank but he also join them in their plan...
After half an hour...
Evryone was up Padma send saran to call abhi as he comes late last night for emergency...
While before saran could go abhi come out from his room while rubbing eyes saying: Good morning mumma...
Laila who was taking one of puja thali just turn & watching him next second scream...
Hearing her scream abhi open his eyes fully looking into surprise to see all were looking at him & laughing secretly when saran was just looking towards him amusingly atul & anji also laughing muh chupake while shashank who just come to the hall room saw him & try to keep a straight face but fail to keep it straight Padma shake her head & gone back to kitchen, Minnie & riddhima was not looking at him & trying to show they are very much busy with some interesting talk...
While muski come & see him & started to laugh loud & everyone look towards her
Riddhima (touching her shoulder): Muski tu thik to hai na??
Muski (in between her laughter nodding her head then pointing towards abhi then laughing weirdly): Wo...
Abhi (who was totally confused): Kya hua sab mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho??koi batayega kya hua hai??(when no one says anything still continue on their process) Saran tu bata..kya hua...
In background music of kick's that kicka kicka wala sound played & stop
Saran: bhaiya ji..
Abhi: Ha bol...
Saran: abhi tak to holi party shuru nhi hui to apne chehre pe rang kyun lagaya?
Abhi(confused): Kya?
Saran: Ha aur wo bhi har color ki rang kyun lagaya?
Abhi: Kya bol rhi hai ?
Saran (repeat his previous questions): abhi tak to holi party shuru nhi hui to apne chehre pe rang kyun lagaya?
Abhi: maine chere pe rang...(then with a hand touch his face & see in his finger there are many colors) Tu jaldi jake ek mirror le a..
Saran: Mirror lau??
Abhi: ha jaldi ja..
Saran: Choti ya badi wali
Abhi: jo bhi mile wohi le aa
Saran: jo bhi mile wohi le aau?
Abhi (irritetedly): Nhi tu kuch mat la yehi beithe reh
Saran: sofe pe beithu ya floor pe
Abhi: Arghh (then go to his room & a scream heard next second) riddhima minnieee...
Aj k liye yehi tak thi humare safar
Actually I was thinking to post he upcoming holi part back to back bas isiliye I m late
Sorry for that kaan pakadke(kuch logo ko chodke)
& itni der tak mujhe bardaj karne k liye shukriye (yeh kuch logo k liye nhi hai)
So yeh raha part
I know little boring the but upcoming one I think u hope u like
& ab going to come special part for holi
I know I m late for the occasion
But still I think u all will like it
Lv u all
:*
Tc
Aisha urf rupkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss
Unresss

part was awsume Aishu...
loved the way u wrote it...
AR bickering...
shilpa's entry...
shilpa sid nok-jhokk...

Anjie blackmailing atul for going to holi party...
at rangin house...

it was all superb...especially the prank riddhima n Minnie played on
abhimanyu... bechare ko ranging bana diyaa...
hahaahahaha...
all was awsume :D
Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sooo it was aweeesome as usual
love the whole part...
waiting eagerly ki kab sab milenge
yaar m tto excited..
Well u know both the reasons
1. Is the special one.
2. When they will meet..sab jude hue hai tab bhi alag alag
yaar aaj tweety ko nahi dikhaya...kyaa baat
Armaan and ridz part was really short...
hospital one very very funny
shilpa awww...she was lookin sooo cute...
Rangin ashiyan ki holi discussion was aweesome
anji throwing tanturums ufff...

I miss u too..i miss u too bas do baar miss kiya

Sid and shilpa relation well DMG mai har couple ladta hi tou hai..yaha tou ATUL ANJI bhi lad rahe hai..koi pyaar sai baat nahi kar sakta

Nahi ati kya karlegi oye phir gadbad kardi...sid nai ati kaha usse ata kehna tha dmg ki gadbad yaha bhhi

Times up kyon watch neeche nahi laga sakte..wrist watch nahi hai wo toh neeche hoti hai eyes kai

Not again atul maine itna sara lunch toh khaya (prob occured...mummy ji apka beta sukhad pda hoga..phir mat kehna atul tumhere rosy jaisa paida hau hai..)

Kya par par laga rakha hai (abe armaan inke par nikal aye isiliye par par kar rahe hai..samjhnni ata nikka bacha)

Soo this was the half as prob occured...
toh theek ho gayi then rest is ress ko unress kardungi nor will cont..on blog
with love
sanju ur sami phulanmata
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part rup..will give long comment in blog..hehe..love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey baby girl...
Another awesome part and I m loving it...
It was just another hilarious part...

So lets start from the beginning of this part of course hehehe...
Ary wah, another entry...
Its a surprise, I wasn't able to guess it was Shilpa...
Philosphers stone padke mujhe Harry potter ki yaad aagayi hehehe...
Love the bonding Shilpa share with the Gupta's...
And Shilpa Intro was superb :)

Lolz, another bickering couple...
This is going to be so much fun, jo bhi dekho bas ladti rehti hai hahaha...
Another couple added to the tom and jerry part...

By god Anjali and her mood swings...
I guess I shouldn't be the one to say anything about mood swings hehhee...
Ab dekho kya huva tohdi der pehle...
main di koh poocha aaj mamma ne kya banaya aur mujhe mamma ki haat ke khana khana ta...
But jo mom banayi hai woh mujhe pasand nehi aaya so main rone lagi...
Ab ismein koi kya kar sakti hai right... Maine kal mom koh kaha and she didn't make it so mujhe rona aagayi...

Chalo chodo, back to the part...
Atul hamesha phas jaate hai when it comes to Anjali and her demands...
But these guys are so protective and possessive...
Tohdina Anjali fight ke liyeh jaane ki permission maang rahi ti...
Waise bhi apne ghar mein apne bohot acche se dyan rakhenge na Anjali ki...

The here comes the devils hehehe...
I so love everything about Gupta's... They are the best family ever hehehe...
Mujhe pata ta woh Gupta sister's mein se koi hoga...
Surprise to know it's Minnie hahaha...
She is so cute and funny mahnn...
Lolz, she call aunty to the nurse hahaha...
Phir jab woh bola dad mom and buddy kaha hai toh mujhe Ridz ke dialogue sunke Kuch kuch hota hai ki yaad aagayi...
Jaha choti Anjali apne papa koh phone karte hai in a party to ask permission for summer camp...
Hehehe I so enjoy it...
Accha hai Ridz ghar se baahar mature hoti hai...
Lekin Minnie toh choti hai so she act like a child but I just love her character like that...

I just love the bonding Shashank share with his daughters...
Also Gupta share a strong bond with each member in the family and how much they respect Padma decision...
Lolz, waise Padma bhi kabhi kabhi bohot acche mood mein hoti haina ;)
Woh bhi apne mood badhalti rehti hai hehehe...

Arey wah sabne kaam divide karliya... Mast hai, lolz Shashank act like a kid sometimes...
They make plan for Holi in two days... wah wah, kitni fast hai yeh Gupta's hehehe...

When I read the intro of this girl and she helping the little girl I knew it was none other then Riddhima...
Aur Riddhima koh jisne dekha woh koi aur nehi ho sakte hahahaha... But Armaan hi hai jo hamesha ladkiyon koh dekhte hai bas soch mein padjate hai ;)
Then the conversation between two person padke I was sure that its Riddhima and Abhi kyunki woh dono plan to meet shopping in bazaar for Holi...
Lolz, AR meet hahaha...
Like always it was entertaining... Love their bickering over every small thing...
Ridz curse Armaan and Armaan telling her he heard it...
Then Riddhima saying it was mean to hear hehehe... Hilarious...

When both leave either side and Armaan thinking about the girl who he saw a while before helping the little girl in the road seeing Riddhima dressing style...
The way Armaan first think how can that girl be Riddhima as her anger in always in tip of her nose hehehe...
Than remembering how Riddhima took care of Minnie in the flight, again Armaan thought change about Riddhima...
Without knowing Armaan was thinking a lot about Riddhima now hehehe...

Again back to Mallik's hehehe...
Anjali is angry with Atul for not agreeing her demand after his promise the previous day...
Lolz, poor Gappu got smash on his head by Armaan for talking with his mouth full...
Love to see Anjali showing love on Gappu and how she was ignoring Armaan and Atul for not giving her permission...
Here comes the sherni hehehe...
Anjali always her way to get what ever she wants... Anjali got Muski help to tell them that she was fine enough to play holi hahaha...
Muski is her doctor and Anjali didn't dare to ask for permission and just left with Muski after check up telling gappu that they are invited to the holi party in Gupta house the following day...
Poor Atul, usko Anjali ke mood swings jhelna pad raha hai hahaha...

Finally, Anjali reach Gupta house and everyone was happy to see her there...
Also Muski met with Ridz and Minnie who in short period of time becomes good friends...
Shanaya is Minnie real name... Niceee... Shanaya Gupta. wohooo Awesome...
Lolz, How much pranks Ridz play on everyone, she is the mature one who always make others understand hehehe...
Thank god Ridz ke kehne pe Anjali call Atul but Atul was upset that Anjali left like that...
Hearing Muskaan voice, Atul started with his question who was acting he was angry on Anjali hehehe...
Atul is so cute mahnn... Gussa bhi hai lekin concern too for his Anjali...

Oh ho Ridz ke awaaz sunke Armaan soch pe padgaya yeh awaaz itna jaana pehchaan kyun lagrahi hai hehhe...
Armaan toh sochpe doob gaya aur waha Ridz ne sab kuch tik kardiya Atul se baat karke...
Atul bohot khush hai as everything got clear between him and Anjali..
Work came but Armaan and Rahul said they will handle so Atul could spend times with Anjali...
Lolz, yeh Armaan and Rahul bhi na... Ek dusre koh kitna hate karta hai hahaha...

Back in Gupta house...
Everyone spending time with Anjali, Muski and Atul...
Anjali asking about Riddhima friends who inform that they would be coming the following day in Holi party...
Wohoo, means AR is going to meet in Holi Party as Armaan would come as Anjali brother in law and Rahul deny because Riddhima already invite her hehehe...
Poor Armaan was thinking Rahul nehi hoga but yeh toh aur mast hone wala hai...
Jitna Armaan koh Rahul se problem hai Muski koh bhi hai hahaha...
Whole gang would celebrate Holi together...

Accha now back to the part hehehe...
Off track chali gayi na hahahaha... chalo back on track okey...
Ahaan, Holi hai aur Ridz and Minnie kuch pranks na khele, aisa toh kabhi ho hi nehi sakte hehehe...
Lolz, target toh Abhi hoga right...
Pakka yeh dono Abhi koh rang lagaya hoga... Aur Shashank koh pata na chale, woh bhi ho hi nehi sakte hehehe...

Lolz, seeing Abhi face... Sab has rahi ti and Abhi koh pata hi nehi chala dumbo...
Holi hai aur Abhi didn't expect that his two sisters to do prank around the house, how can he didn't think...
Riddhima and Minnie is too good hahaha... They acted like they didn't see Abhi and why others was laughing...
Padma ne bhi kuch nehi kaha, bas sar hilake chali gayi apne kaam karne ke liyeh...
Lolz, Muski and her famous laugh... Then ridz asking Muski if she was alright hehehe...
Tab Abhi koh kuch gadbad laga hahahaha...

Abhi and Saran conversation was hilarious hahaha...
I just love Saran character... Lolz har baat pe sawal sawal sawal...
Abhi got irritate with his questions and left hahaha...
OMG, Abhi saw his face and he knew it is done none other then Riddhima and Minnie the two munchkin in the house hehehe...

Superb Part Baby Girl...
Maine toh bohot enjoy ki...
dekho main aajkal sabke ff pe comment bhi nehi karti hoon but maine tumhare FF pe comment kar rahi hoon...
aur tumhari himmat kaise huvi kehne ki yeh boring part hai haan...???
Sorry Bhi bola... Oh mere liyeh nehi hehehe... Accha hai nehi toh tujhe bohot acche se dekh leti main u know that right...
Chalo part khatam meri comment bhi completed...
Milte hai agle comment pe :P

Tab tak ke liyeh Allah hafiz...
Love u lotsss, Muwaaahhh <3
Take care...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi that's a siperb part aisha urff rup ;-)
loved the parts its really wat can i say hilarious nd funny too
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so start se start karte h shilpa is the new character its really a surprise nd unexpected maine seriously shilpa guess nah ki thi
mujhe laga its Nikki hogi
u know wat mujhe tumhari story mein bechara sid sabse pareshan character lagta specially girls ke mamle mein poor guy, anjy, ridhz or minni kam the ke shilpa bhi uff poor guy loved their bickering nd how sid is scared of her
yaar vaise ek baat h is story ke saare couple ladte jyada h romance kam karte h
shilpa's intro nd her bonding with Gupta's is amazing

now coming to anji atul nd armaan
loved how atul nd armaan is protective towards her nd always pampers her but anjy nd her mood swings
loved the scene where anjy tricked atul nd bechara atul phas gya
loved that scene where anjy, atul,nd armaan is arguing

yaar u know wat i just loved ridhz md minni they r the best
omg loved sanjeevni reception scene minni is just soo cute
nurse ko aunty bola Haha haha
then shashank cabin
loved shashank bonding with their kids he is really a cool daddy
loved their family they r so adorable nd bestest
wow a super fast holi party planning yaar sirf 2 days mein *clapping*
loved how they divide their work
nd shashank he is such a kid at times
loved the scene at the traffic signal scene
mujhe starting se pta tha ki tha scooty girl is ridhz who help that little girl nd that car boy who is admiring her is none other than armaan ;-) but unfortunately they didn't meet
yeahhh so ar again meet but again they started bickering loved their cute fight it as always entertaining loved how armaan is arguing abt ridhz being the same girl whom he saw at signal but unknowingly he is attracted towards her
tgen loved the scene where anjy is angry with both the mallik's nd is not talking ti them
loved how anjy said gappu to tell both if them that she is not talking to them nd he id telling them with his mouth full of food and armaan smacked him at his back head nd he complained to anjy nd she so cutely like a mother tell him to ignore them

so finally anjy Gupta House aahi gyi
she knows how to get wat she want so calling muskaan with her help doing her checkup she is gone
loved how this time again ar was abt to talk with each other but muskaan ne phone chin liya but ridhz ki awaaz sunke armaan soch mein padgya
again ridhz nd minni plays a prank on abhi hahaha
so minni ka really name shanaya h hmm awesome
now i m eagerly waiting for holi party ismein bahot saare khulase nd surprises honge for everyone
firstly rahul bein friend of ridhz ,then anjy being ridhz cousin to armaan , a next meet nd many more
i m soo excited fir the next part uff can't Wait ;-) :-P :-*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi

Great part
So Shilpa is a new character in the FF
and she and Sid are enemies and
they are always fighting 😆

Loved AR parts and excited for
the holi celebrations part

Update soon

Thanks for the PM

Take care 😊

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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