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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

yea just editing it...
btw i'm also waiting for ur update...
U said ur gonna update that today...
Wht about that...

I will update tomorrow for sure,😊

I was busy today so could not complete the part

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Jess2014

I will update tomorrow for sure,😊
I was busy today so could not complete the part

will be waiting for that...

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Thanks to all of u for supporting me till now..
As today its complete one month for this ff...
& as I promise before its an gift for all of ones who take part on quiz
& one more thing is everyone give the same answer so I can't choose only one..
So this part is everyone's gift whoever takes part on quiz
& a very happy new year to all of u...

So here goes the story ...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha ha, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai, Aur Isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahunchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain, yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhad hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga.Iske liye authority ya ni ki writer ya ni ki main uske liye jimiddar nhi hu...Kripa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekh lijiye...

Shukriya...

Precap:
Kahani me ek aur chehra
Kuch rishton ka khul gayi pehra
Adhuri mulakat na jane kab hogi puri
Dekhna hai age kya rahegi yeh rishte adhuri...

Part 5

Three person shout: AAAHHH
Forward by it a laugh also

Scene span the faces which shout & it was riddhima & one airhostess & the guy himself who shout & the laugh was from a kid who was sitting beside. Actually the airhostess come to see if there is any need of help & saw riddhima shouting watching towards the seat & when she turn watching the nazara she also shout & suddenly hearing both shouting the guy also shout...

Now came to the real nazara why they shout...

Back to 10min before...
Flashback start...
With two sec black & white then in colorful version... 😉

Armaan enter in plane & when he searched for his seat he saw a little kid siting near his seat alone. When he asked about his parents little kid didn't budge to say anything He tried to make the kid laugh but when he failed an idea stuck at his mind so he took out something from his bag & put it on then sit then covered his face with a magazine which he borrowed from the airhostess a while ago...

Actually the thing with which he covered his face was a scary mask & he know as he didn't put seat belt so later or sooner any person will tuck him to wake & then with that scary face they will scared & most obviously that may made the kid smile..& that's what exactly happened

Again with two sec black & white then in colorful version...😉

Back to present...

After their shouting & laughing track gone off Armaan instantly put off the mask and have a hi-five with the kid who now standing before armaan. But before armaan turn towards the two girl an another airhostess came and called riddhima to came with her so she was gone

& here armaan turned & found one airhostess standing there while a while ago he saw a girl standing there with this airhostess he thought it was all his imagination so he ignored it & ask forgiveness from the airhostess & back his attention toward the kid

Armaan: Hey u have fun?
Kid (Tell in an accent English): Yea...obviously two faces scaring like hell really a sight to watch
Armaan (Extending his hand for a shake): So let's introduce. Hi I'm Armaan Malllik
Kid (Accepting his hand): Rowan Potter
Armaan: Nice to meet u

Then they talk a while and back to his seat

Here Riddhima angrily come with the airhostess to Minnie who called her near the washroom as she want something.

After a while...

Now riddhima & Minnie back to seat but riddhima frown seeing someone else at their seat Minnie was little bit piche so she didn't saw it.Here as riddhima saw the same blue-eyed guy who was there a while ago with some scary mask she really got irritated above all she was irritated a little before but after watching another messed up about seat it really irritate her but still clammily she called the guy

Riddhima: Excuse Me
Armaan (he turned his face & saw a girl with beautiful long hair in salwar kamiz standing there): U calling me...
Riddhima: Actually the seat u r siting right now is my seat
Armaan: Sorry u might be have an mistake but I wouldn't mind if u really want to take this seat even after I sit here (Saying this he wink at her)
Riddhima's eyes got like button watching this guy flirting with her while he was actually siting in a wrong seat. But before she retorted Minnie saw armaan & shout

Minnie (Surprisingly & Excitedly): Boyfrnd
Armaan (Seeing Minnie here being shocked): Girlfriend u here?
Minnie & Armaan (Happily both say at the same time): Tum yaha kya kar rhi ho/rahe ho?
Minnie & armaan (Again same time answered): Main India Ja Raha hoon/rhi hoon

Then both laughed at their same time talking.
Here riddhima was getting all confused nudged Minnie & bringing her a little far bending towards her whisper:Tu isse janta hai?
Minnie:Ha jiji yeh to wohi Basketball court me jo thi na my boyfrnd batai to thi apko chalo main apko milwa deti hoon

Before riddhima could say something Minnie bring her towards armaan by nagging & then excitedly said: Boyfrnd meet my Jiji...& jiji meet my boyfrnd whom I met at basketball court wo yaad hai na apko(In her excitement she really forgot that she actually didn't say there name to each other so armaan think to took the charge)
Riddhima(Whispering at her ear): Tera wo Mr. Ball??(Minnie nodded)
Armaan (While extending his hand armaan thought to introduce himself): Hi I'm Armaan,Armaan Mallik...Naam to suna hi hoga[guys again my srk films effect don't mind with this plz.😉😛]
Riddhima(Pehle se hi her mind was disturbed with all airport problems then suddenly her younger sister getting along with some random guy who nearly scared him like hell she really didn't like it & moreover armaan's flirtrious behavior & the prank reprimand it all above so being riddhima she little arrogantly said): Nhi suna(Meanwhile a basketball which was rowan playing with hit her head she bend a little and give it back to rowan ruffling his hair a little while rowan run to his seat keeping his ball away)

Hearing her word Minnie giggled & armaan was like ...WHAT...!!!! Wala expression on his face as he registered her word. Riddhima then glared at Minnie so Minnie stop giggling & said:Jiji(She look at her pleading to not behaving rude as she already know till now airport misery riddhima's mind is at a foul mood now)

Riddhima(Turning to armaan): Namaste (folding her hands avoiding shaking hands)Ab tak to Minnie ne meri intro de hi chuki hai.So Now Can u plz step aside coz that was our seat.
Armaan(1^st watching her behaving like this then he also arrogantly said): Well main hat jata but wo mera seat hai..Miss Basket
Riddhima(Stepping ahead):That's my seat & I'm not basket
Armaan(defending):No that's my seat & as u didn't tell me ur name so I thought it will be cool with u to call u anything & see u have a such a lovely relation with basket it just hit on the correct place ur head(Then laughed out at his own joke while Minnie also giggled with him)
Riddhima(Ignoring his so called joke):Look mr ball don't waste my time just leave my seat
Armaan(Protesting at her talk):I'm not ball & that's my seat
Ridhima(Snapping her finger at him):That's what u are Ball just can rolling with talk in air now move aside that's my seat
Armaan:That's my seat
Riddhima:My seat

Like this their fight start & both of their word got like lastly...My Mine..My Mine

Bg music

AA dekhe Zara tune

Here Minnie just watching a while at armaan & then the next at riddhima & try to stop them but when they don't She shout: STOPPP

Both got quite.& during their fight they really didn't realize they r fighting like tom & jerry while Half of the class people was staring at them even some airhostess got there to solve their problem. One of them come forward & Ask for their tickets then checking that she said his seat is wrong. That thing embarrass armaan more.

The seat was like 3seat near the window & armaan was sitting in middle. Then he got up & sit the beside seat when Minnie immediately sit on the seat near the window leaving no choice for riddhima rather than sitting in middle with armaan. Watching it armaan smirk thinking Ab ayega asli maza & making plan now how to keep his badla as even he was wrong but he was not at all ready to confess it that to in front of her.

Here after settle down Minnie riddhima got up saying that she will be back after riddhima gone Armaan & Minnie started to talk as they were one sit distant so armaan got up and sit on riddhima's chair.After a while after coming back riddhima saw armaan again siting on middle but this time she ignored him & just ask him to shift but Minnie requested her to sit on armaan's chair while riddhima can't say no to her so she also settle down.

After a while there is an announcement about seat belt. Minnie can't belted it even riddhima is sitting far from her so she ask an airhostess to help her totally ignoring armaan's presence when the airhostess was doing her job armaan started to talk with her actually not talk flirt with her.

Armaan (Making as if unknown): Hi...u work here? (Riddhima watch them talking & think andha hai kya dikhta nhi hai that she is wearing airhostess uniform means obviously she works here)
Airhostess (Smiling a little): Yes sir. As u can see though my uniform I'm an airhostess here
Armaan(Making surprising face):Oh really but I thought administration don't appoint any person under 18(Riddhima made a face thinking kitna phekta hai dikhne me to yeh 25+ lag rhi hai aur isko 18 bhi nhi lag rhi hai)
Airhostess (blushing a little at his word): Sorry sir but I'm above 18
Armaan (Making face as if she don't believe it): Oh really but u don't seem like that

For a while riddhima was listening to their talks but then thought to ignore it so shaking her head a little she started to notice the other things in the class & here Minnie was continuously giggling hearing armaan's flirtious talks with airhostess & seeing that airhostess blush for nothing. Armaan glared at Minnie for her giggling.so at last Minnie control her laugh.

Minnie(controlling her giggle):Thank u aunty. Now can u plz leave me my seat belt is belted now
Airhostess got embarrass at her talk & quickly got from there. While armaan wink at her. Then turning to Minnie

Armaan(wining like a kid): Kya yaar girlfrnd bhaga dia na...
Minnie(turning a little towards him): Wht...!!!!!! Sharam nhi ati tumhe tum apne girlfrnd k samne dusre ladkiyoon k sath flirt kar rahe ho...Aur main to bas us stupid ladki se tumhe bacha rahi thi dekha nhi kaise ghur rahi the tumhe jaise ki abhi kacha kha jayegi..
Armaan(Rolling his eyes):Yea right
Minnie(Bending little forward to watch riddhima & saw her sitting with closed eyes then turning towards armaan):boyfrnd kya tum abhi us seat main shift ho sakti ho?
Armaan(Frowning a little):Abhi to announcement ho chuki hai abhi to uth nhi paunga after 10min shift ho sakti hoon kya hua kuch problem hai kya..Do u need something?
Minnie(Thinking something):Actually na boyfrnd meri jiji ko plan board off k waqt darr lagti hai she need to hold on something or distract her mind in something wo panic ho jati hai aur abhi to wo tumhare sath beitha hai to woh kuch kahegi bhi nhi.
Armaan(Understanding her problem):Don't worry main kuch karti hoon..but u ok na?
Minnie: Yea.i'm f9

When they were talking they heard someone chanting something so they both turned their head towards that direction to see riddhima with closing eyes tightly holding her dupatta tightly which is on her lap chanting something. Armaan saw this & an idea stuck at his mind.
Armaan (Snapping his finger while making sound in front of riddhima's face):Yooo...Kya pad rhi ho miss basket?
Riddhima with a nerves face she open her eyes & looked at armaan then again closed her eyes.Armaan didn't let go off it he again said with a teasing tone: Agar meri praise hi karna hai to jor se karo na I don't feel bad to listen my praises u know...😉
Riddhima (Hearing his talk she open her eyes little irritated & said with an irritated voice): U wishhh
Armaan(Watching his plan working though little slow): Are meri wish karne ki kya jarurat I know I'm handsome smart intelligent hot charming & most illegible bachelor ki koi bhi ladki meri praise karne se thakti nhi hai to wish karne ki jarurat hi nhi padti
Riddhima(now totally irritated with his self-praise forgot about takeoff & opening her eyes look at armaan with stretching her forehead a little): Tumhe nhi lagta tum apne apko kuch jayada hi uchai me dhakel rahe ho
Armaan(carelessly said): No not at all.I know I'm the best like u know...
Koi hero yahan, koi zero yahan
Koi star hai, koi bekaar hai
Main kaun hoon tumse main kya kahoon
Hai sach to yeh doston, oh
I am the best, I am the best, I am the best

Then after singing this little without any sur & intentionally making the worst voice to irritate her again said:waise tum jealous ho na mujhse isiliye aise bate kar rhi ho..i can feel ur pain(then made sound like tch tch though mouth)
Riddhima (opening her mouth in a big O): Jealous my foot.Shakal dekhi hai apni insaan k roop me chalti phirti Bandar lagte ho
Armaan (Little offended): Oh hello issi face pe na boht ladkiyaan marti hai...
Riddhima (looking angrily at armaan): Ha ha marti hogi andhi jo hai sabke sab.

Here Minnie was just watching their bickering while holding her giggle as she got what armaan trying to do & they all here the announcement about now they can open their seat belts now.

Armaan:huh...(then he turn his face towards Minnie & winking again turn towards opposite of riddhima without letting riddhima realize that they are boarded off)

When riddhima with a sulking face turn her opposite side then she realize that they were about to board off but then when she saw towards window & her eyes got like abhi bahar a jayegi..coz it was showing black still some cloudy as it is night. She realized that that they actually boarded off.Armaan notice this change of expression & nudged Minnie to see while they both hi-fived & giggle along watching her face. Hearing giggles riddhima's trance broke she turned to see both of them laughing & realized it was armaan's trick to get her over the nurvusness.Then she realized she is actually being rude with him without reason so she think to apologize but before she could say something armaan continued...

Armaan: If u want then u can thank me u know it's not a very big word
Riddhima(Genuinely just whisper a little):Thanks
Armaan(Acting as if she didn't hear anything): What did u say mujhe kuch sunai nhi dia
Riddhima(little loudly):Thanks. & sorry
Armaan(Looking towards her):Thanks ka to pata hai but why sorry?
Riddhima(Slowly):Actually I was being so much rude so that's why
Armaan(ignoring her sorry speech mischively said): Itni rukhi sukhi thanks????
Riddhima(Surprisingly): Rukhi sukhi...!!!!!
Armaan(mischiefly said): Ha itna help kia to kuch to milna chahiye na thanks k badle me...I mean to say (bending towards her)u know...
Riddhima(Pushing armaan a little far): Hey get off...How dare u...
Armaan(Mischiefly smiling): What happened main to coffee k baat kar rhi thi what did u think??(Raising one eyebrow)
Riddhima(Realizing & stammering): No..no..nothing..
Armaan(Hitting her arm with his arm said): Yoo dirty mind kya sochi thi...Kuch kuch ho rhi thi kya tumhare dil me??????
Riddhima(this time irritated with his flirting): U...
Armaan(hiding his smile making innocent face): Yea me...
Riddhima(shaking her hands in air as if just kisi cheez ki gala daba di ho like that): Tum na bhad me jao mujhe nhi kehna tumhe sorry...(Then she got off from the seat to ask airhostess if another seats are available or not)

Minnie Nudged armaan:Boyfrnd jao na jiji ko manao wo gussa ho gayi na to mujhse bhi baat nhi karegi

Their whole convo was heard by an old couple who was with rowan the old guy said: Yes son, go fetch her

Rowan:Yooo buddy go for it

Armaan thought Isse gussa dilana to easy thi ab manau to manau kaise..When suddenly something stuck at his mind he go to another airhostess and whisper something to her ear & meanwhile riddhima was just talking with the airhostess about changing seat & armaan just tell his plan to Minnie she tell it to rowan, rowan tell it to his grandparents like this whole plane know the plan actually from the starting all saw the chemistry..

She come back to seat & taking her bag told Minnie to come with her.

Then the time music start...

Riddhima & Minnie walking on the passage when rowan with a little glitter come forward & started to play When riddhima watch at him with confusing face the next moment armaan started to sing she turned back

Armaan: Suniye to[He stand before her while wearing a cow hat and a beige cow boy style jacket over his shirt]
Rukiye to[Riddhima turn and started to go when armaan said this line while indicating one hand towards riddhima]
Kyun hai khafa[scene shows some passengers from their seat got up & block her road while gesturing with hand as if asking what happened]
Arre Kahiye To[Scene shows riddhima turns & armaan standing there]

Aisi Kya Jaldi Jaane Ki[Scene shows ridhhima again turned]
OOO..[Scene shows all the passenger get up from seat & sing ooo while hat ko idhar udhar hilakar]

Deewana Hoon Maana[scene shows armaan again comes in front riddhima this time with a yellow tiny flower and giving it to riddhima while riddhima glare & turn away]
Suniye Deewane Ki[scene shows armaan sit in floor opps I mean to say plane ki floor pe like tantric baba pose without closing eyes & hands indicating towards riddhima]

Music is playing in background

Riddhima(holding minnie's hand whispering in her ear):Yeh tera mr.ball yeh kya naya tamasha laga k rakhi hai
Minnie up her shoulder & twist her lips indicating she don't know
Riddhima(fed up with all this):use bol yeh tamasha band karne ko.
But before Minnie could answer armaan again comes from somewhere in front of them

Ye Shaam Ka Dilkash Manzar[scene shows armaan with hand shows the outside from window as if its evening]
Ye Saahil Aur Samandar[scene shows armaan bring riddhima near window while showing the sea's which is looking from the plan window]
Kehte Hain Aap Na Jaayein[scene shows armaan then look at riddhima but riddhima give a look meaning to leave her hand armaan leave it & again sing indicate towards outside & then showing with hand not to leave]
Hum Par Ye Karam Farmayein[scene shows armaan sit on his both legs & walking on knees go behind her]

Suniye To[scene shows riddhima stop in her track & armaan is standing now & singing behind her]

Kehti Hain Balkhati Lehrein[scene shows armaan collided with riddhima as for her sudden stop but both balance there self-own & armaan sing looking at everyone at plane without riddhima as if he was not following her]

OOO...[scene shows riddhima started to come towards armaan so armaan turn around immediately seeing it riddhima do arghhh with hands as if will kill armaan now then turn around again to go & sit]

Aap Zara Kuchh Der to Thehrein[scene shows armaan again turn & sing while indicating towards her]

OOO...
OOO...[everyone say together]

Music end

As everyone started to say riddhima to maan jao na...
While riddhima turn & saw armaan standing on her knees while holding ear & even after everyone back to their seat & riddhima also go back towards her seat after lot of making faces done by Minnie...

After a while an airhostess came with food or can be say with dinner. In a while armaan gone to use restroom riddhima got up & convince Minnie to seat middle this time & got in her actual seat near the window. So now they are seating like near window riddhima siting then Minnie then other seat is occupied for armaan who is not back yet.

Then riddhima called the airhostess to give their dinner meanwhile armaan also back & smirk seeing this new seat management.

Riddhima ordered her & Minnie's food while pampering & being strict also at time about her diet. Which armaan did notice & smiled seeing this two sister bond then he saw her tucking Minnie in blanket which is given by the airhostess for sleep & stroking Minnie's hair when she asleep. Armaan literally surprised seeing this new version of riddhima which rarely seen in today's so called modern girls.

After a while he also asleep.

Morning time...

They are still have two hours for landing.
Armaan wake up 1^st due to some movement & saw the most beautiful sight in front of him. Riddhima curly wise sleeping in the chair while her head bending towards backward little slightly towards window Minnie is now standing her legs keep them on armaan's leg & her head on riddhima's lap while riddhima's one hand on Minnie's hand protectively holding her & other hand is in her hair. Some of strands falling on her face while riddhima frown a little armaan blow air towards her while in sudden gush riddhima wake up & saw armaan little bending towards them.
Being caught like that is really embarrassing so armaan made up saying: Kab se bula rhi hoon kumbkaran ki tarah soti hi ja rhi thi madam hum bas do ghante me land kar jayenge uth ke fresh ho jao samjhi na

Hearing his words riddhima stretch a little & notice half of the plane is still asleep without some airhostess. Then before she say something he got to get fresh.

After a while waking Minnie riddhima also got fresh & again ready for landing this time Minnie hold her hand though armaan tried to talk but she ignored.

Once they landed & way out of plane,

Riddhima (whisper to Minnie): Dekh maine itni der tak us idiot ko jhela hai but aur nhi ok.We are going to be checked on women's area.

After a little bickering with riddhima Minnie at the end thought something and goes to say something to armaan & when she was back with riddhima she told riddhima that she was gone for saying bye.

Then they go with the all checking while they have time for all things done both of them set across an table on cafeteria as Minnie said she is hungry.

As they set a hand comes with the menu while riddhima took it & started reading after reading it she asked Minnie while saying some item name that what she wants to it while her head was still buried on menu book.

Riddhima (taping a finger on her head): Minnie tu kya legi I think teri liye sirf sandwich mangwa leti hoon ghar jake phir kuch kha lena aur mere liye(She turn to the person who give her the menu card & watching the person she got shocked & said) Tum???????(Then burring her head in her plump)No not again (bringing her hairs all behind)Yaha bhi(while she turned to Minnie hearing her giggling but tried to stop her giggle as riddhima glared at her)

That's all for today
Aj ka koi quiz nhi hai
Coz its New year beginsss
Happy new year to all of u once again...
Milte hai kuch lamhe k baat
Khuda hafiz

Non writer attempting dear devil act...
Aisha urf Rupkotha

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Amazing Part,

Loved it,❤️

So Armaan wore a scary mask to scare someone so that the kid will smile 😆

Minnie and Armaan parts were too cute.

Armaan (While extending his hand armaan thought to introduce himself): Hi I'm Armaan,Armaan Mallik...Naam to suna hi hoga[guys again my srk films effect don't mind with this plz.😉😛]
Riddhima(Pehle se hi her mind was disturbed with all airport problems then suddenly her younger sister getting along with some random guy who nearly scared him like hell she really didn't like it & moreover armaan's flirtrious behavior & the prank reprimand it all above so being riddhima she little arrogantly said): Nhi suna

This part made me laugh 🤣, poor Armaan,

The song sequence was really nice.

I loved every bit of it,

Continue soon and thanks for the PM.😉

Love u 🤗

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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megha bansal

@megbans

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

yeeeyyy i'm the first one to comment...

yyyiiipppiiieee

part was super awsume

loved it...

haaye armaan ne kitna irritate kiya bichhari riddhima ko...

minnie ke saath milke 😛

hahhahha

tera voh song

rukiye toh...awsume hai...

m downloading it...espply to listen to it...

superb

ayur jab voh kuch khaane ke ;liye canteen gaye

aur armaan came there as a chief that was too awsume...

loved it whole

i was laughing reading it whole..

hahahhahaa

upd8 next soon

bye

luv u :*

tc :)

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Amna

@Amna_xd

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

awsooome yr...loved it to the core
loved mini and armaans bondign
and how armaan fight with riddhima and how he manofied her...just loved all the parts <3 <3

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: megha_kajen
yeeeyyy i'm the first one to comment...
yyyiiipppiiieee

part was super awsume
loved it...
haaye armaan ne kitna irritate kiya bichhari riddhima ko...
minnie ke saath milke 😛
hahhahha
tera voh song
rukiye toh...awsume hai...
m downloading it...espply to listen to it...
superb

ayur jab voh kuch khaane ke ;liye canteen gaye
aur armaan came there as a chief that was too awsume...
loved it whole
i was laughing reading it whole..
hahahhahaa

upd8 next soon

bye
luv u :*
tc :)

oppss
Sorry to inform
u r second one...
Btw better luck next time

lv u yaaarrr
love the fact that u liked it
yea...pehli meeting hai to irritate to karni hi thi...😉

Achi baat hai na..isi bahane tu woh gana dubaran sun legi
main to likhte waqt puri yehi sun rhi thi bas

Btw maine kab bola woh armaan hai...😛😉😆
Screen me to uski chehra bhi nhi dikhai ab tak...😉😛😆
i am gratefull to make u laugh at the 1st day of the year

next ka pata nhi may b i have to go little unbalanced in upcoming days
exam a rhi hai...
But who cares about exam...
lets see about the other things..😉😆

lvs u also
tc
btw once again...

Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Amna_xd
awsooome yr...loved it to the core
loved mini and armaans bondign
and how armaan fight with riddhima and how he manofied her...just loved all the parts <3 <3

Thanks a lottt
I am glad that u like it
yea...wht to do u know kehte hai nafrat pyar ki dusri pehlu hoti hai
To isiliye maine socha to start from opposite...😆
thanks once again...
&
Btw once again...

Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Awweeesome part di...loved it alot...vaise toh blog pai cmnt kar diya tha bt yaha bhi likh diya...it was MIND BLOWING...maza aagaya...maine 2nd time padha ...u r a grt writer nahi toh inni jaldi jaldi uds maon toh kabhi nahi de pati hoon...1 and a half month and 5 parts aur main i guess 4 months and only 6 parts...

chalo bohut bolli mere ko aap pehle bhi rply kar chuke ho phir karna padega ...baaki sab ko rply karo...mere ko naa karo chalega

love u loads

sanju

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#80

Originally posted by: sanjudmgian
Awweeesome part di...loved it alot...vaise toh blog pai cmnt kar diya tha bt yaha bhi likh diya...it was MIND BLOWING...maza aagaya...maine 2nd time padha ...u r a grt writer nahi toh inni jaldi jaldi uds maon toh kabhi nahi de pati hoon...1 and a half month and 5 parts aur main i guess 4 months and only 6 parts...
chalo bohut bolli mere ko aap pehle bhi rply kar chuke ho phir karna padega ...baaki sab ko rply karo...mere ko naa karo chalega
love u loads
sanju

Thanks to u again little sister
Yea i read that even replied also
Its my pleasure that u like this read it two times
Seriously its a huge compliment for a new one like me

well sanju in that case i'm worst then u
u know y chalo batati hoon...

Wo kya hai na maine yeh ff likhna start ki thi june ya july me i took 1 monthe for each part till 5th one..
Anu insist me to write so maine start to kardi thi but woh kya hai i used to be so busy with assignments,homeworks,uni & all ki mujhe likhne ka jayada time nhi milti thi
so maine pehle sochi thi i'll post it only if i write the whole story..
But wo kya hai mujhe apni birthday k din se start karni thi na to maine dec 1 se start ki tab mere pass already 4 part likhe hue the as after that i got little more time so i finish till part 8
So yeh jaldi post karne wala tag to tum mujhe mat do i'm more slower than u i mean i took 5 months to write 5parts only...
But abhi na ek problem a gayi hai i've finals in next month to shayed main like this regularly update na de pau...

Btw aise kaise chalega...
Bilkul nhi chalega i reply to all
aur kahi pe bhi comment karo ek bar ho ya 100 bar sabko equal right hai reply pane ki
So main to reply karungi...

lvs u dherrr saraaa
Tc