Ankahein Rishtoon Mein Andekhi Ansuni Najdikiyaan AR FF

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Gavina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Hey dear

I'm catching up on all the parts

and once I have finished reading,

I will then comment,

All the parts are equally amazing

and I loved them

Sorry for the delay,

Thanks for the PMs and keep sending me

Take care...😊

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: destinationn
NICE FF...READ SOME..LL READ FURTHER...

thanks for reading..
Glad u like it
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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: gaurikajen
nice ff
read all parts in one go
armaan riddhima kitna ladte ha by god
and minn and gppu are so sweet
so finally muskan is also having some feelings towards rhul
armaan is also jealouse seeing riddhima with someone else
post next part soon
and pm me when u update next

Thanks for reading it
Glad u like it..
N for Pm plz like this post u will get the pm

Little note For those who wants pm

Thanks once again..
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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: Jess2014
Hey dear

I'm catching up on all the parts
and once I have finished reading,
I will then comment,

All the parts are equally amazing
and I loved them

Sorry for the delay,
Thanks for the PMs and keep sending me

Take care...😊

Hey

Well its ok as i say before
N don't need to say sorry once again
N i'm glad u r liking the parts
N do comment whenever u feel free

Tc

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

So here goes the story...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..Shukriya..

Precap:

Finally they meet

With proper intro n proper set

Milke dono kiya bhi kuch kaam

Ab dekhna hai yehi haal chalegi ya badal degi kuch yeh rangin shaam

Part 21

As soon as they got out from the club area a silence pin drop inside the car making the situation more odd..

To come out from this situation riddhima thought to start the convo

Ri: Uhmm wo thanx

Ar(while armaan surprised): thanx????

Ri: Ha wo u r dropping me at home n leave muski with rahul so bas usi liye...

Ar(with mischievous grin): Oh to u r saying thanx for that leaving muski with rahul or for dropping u at home

Ri: Uhmm for both i guess

Ar: to u should say thanx two time na as u have two reason to say thanx

Ri(getting confused riddhima was about to say thnx again when she saw that hidden smile at armaan's face so she got that he is pulling her legs): U na forget it..

While armaan laughed loud while riddhima give him a look like its not funny..

Ar: ok ok peace i ws just kidding btw no need to say thanx as far i know rahul will keep good care of her

Ri(smile hearing him): u r not that much bad u know..

While armaan look at her with surprise then smile a little n started to think what she told a while ago n he feel something unknown feelings building in though he brushed it out next second..

N keep driving n riddhima without noticing what her little word create in his mind started looking outside from the window..
While again silence econed in the car making the situation little odd..

To come out from this situation armaan on the radio to listen

Rj: So abhi is waqt isi lamhe me jo log chal rahe apne manzil k taraf thodi paal ko thehrake isi geet k sang apne ap ko janiye kya ap jis manzil k liye chut rahe hai wo apki sath hi to nhi hai...So stay tuned we will be right back after this wonderfull song named journey from the movie Piku..

BG music start

Dheere chalna hai mushkil to jaldi hi sahi [Scene shows Both look at each other as the song start on radio n hearing the rj]

Aankhon ke kinaaro mein bahaane hi sahi [Scene shows watching both looks at each other both look away while armaan keep driving n both keep glancing at each other stealingly]

Hum chale baharon mein [Scene shows their car go on a very sunsan wali sarak while armaan make the car speed little higher]

Gungunati raahon mein [Scene shows While armaan drive in high speed riddhima got scared n hold his hand which was on gear]

Dhadkane bhi tez hain [Scene shows feeling her hand armaan look at her to see her eys close tightly n she is looking so cute]

Ab kya karein [Scene shows armaan gaze fall on her hand which was over his bicap,He thought how to call her n whisper: Basket]

Waqt hai toh jeene de [Scene shows Riddhima hearing his voice look up to see he slow down the speed n looking at her]

Dard hai to seene de [Scene shows riddhima look at him to but as he look at her hand so her gaze also got there n she instantly put away her hand from his bicap]

Khwahishein anjaan hai [Scene shows both feel something unusual]

Ab kya karein [Scene shows again both lost in the silence thinking what to do now]

Shabdon ke pahaadon pe likhi hai dastaan [Scene shows both remind about there previous meets at airport,mall,market n holi festive, how they fight without reason]

Khwabon ke lifaafon mein chhupa hai raasta [Scene shows armaan stop the car while riddhima look at him to see him got out n open the door for her while riddhima see out to see they already reached n come out from the car]

BG music end

As soon as riddhima come out she turn towards armaan to see him looking at her so she said: ok then mr mallik thanks for the ride..n good n8

Ar(smiling bck at her): yea good n8..

While riddhima started to go bck suddenly he remind something n run towards her calling her: basket...basket..(hearing his call she turn bck n stop to see him running towards her) kitna tez chalti ho yaar kitni der se bula rhi thi..

Ri(with soft smile): main tez chalti hoon yeh bolne k liye tumne mujhe bulaya????

Ar: nhi wo yeh bolne k liye bulaya that what's the plan????

Ri: Plan???? Kaisi plan????

Ar: I mean about muski n rahoool

Ri: Its rahul...n plan kuch bhi nhi hai..abhi k liye ghar jao n take rest

Ar: but partner unka bhi to kuch karna chahiye na????

Ri: partner????

Ar: Ha ab i'm helping u on it to hui na partner????

Ri: really i mean tum to sure nhi the na????

Ar: Wo kya hai na maine socha itni khubsurat ladki itni surity k sath bol rahi hai to sach hi hogi

Ri(rolling eyes): Oh plz..

Ar: ok jokes of a part..but whats the plan????

Ri: well abhi tak to maine kuch socha nhi kal sunday hai to tum or DR ghar pe hi honge na????

Ar: DR????

Ri: Are atul jiju..

Ar(with confusion): yea we will but yaha atul ka kya kaam..????

Ri: Wo tum kal hi jaan jaogi tab tak k liye abhi ghar jao rest karo kal milte hai...

Ar: par kaha????

Ri: Tumhare ghar but di ko mat batana unke liye surprise hai..good n8

Saying this riddhima go inside while armaan also gone back to heaven hil waiting for next morning..

At heaven hill

Armaan reached n get fresh all ready to go for bed in only lemon green his shorts n white vest but before that he took his guitar n started to play "Evry night in my dreams i see u i feel u" on his guitar N started to think about the event happened whole day when his mind drift to thought of riddhima...

He started to think how nice she was looking on semi western dress with minimum makeup n their eyelocks n their car journey when suddenly he remember about muski n rahul he instantly took the phone n call maddy to confirm about muski reaching home n after talking with her he come to know muski is back long ago with rahul droping her back but she seems quite lost..

Armaan started to think kya main sahi kar rhi hoon i mean muski aur rahul..i know rahul will keep her happy n i saw muski to care for him n getting jealous but what aboit rahul..i need to check on him n his feelings also before i help them..

Kal busket se is bare me baat karni hogi waise ek baat to sure it means rahul n basket r only friends..Safe for me...

"safe for me..!!!!!!" armaan dude what r u thinking yaar...basket n u no no no no no...she hates u... no actually she don't hate me..wo hi toh aj bol rahe thi na that i'm not that bad..that means she likes me...Dude stop thinking about her n now go to sleep n remember no basket

Saying this to himself he started to go to his bed when he triped over a basketball n fall with it infront of his face..

He look up to see the basket ball n said: Again baskettt...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Scene faded at his bechara face..

Next morning

At rangin ashiyaana

Padma is almost screaming on evry passing by today..

Anyone can say her mood is extremely bad today n its better to be away from her today.

While all were siting on dinning for breakfast n while abhi also join to see padma scolding laila for some silly mistake..

He asked riddhima though eyes what happen while riddhima whisper: over sleep n have a fight with papa..

While abhi laughed secretly while riddhima said: Bhaiya haso mat plz kuch karo na mujhe aj di k ghar jani hai par koi to baat hi nhi kar pa rhi hai plz shant karwao mumma ko only u can do this..

Hearing his little sister demand abhi smile n go to padma n said: Mumma relax come seat here

N within few seconds all padma's gussa was run away with abhi's gesture n talks..

So after a session of hearing padma's complain about shashank n getting a good scold for shashank by riddhima though that was totally fake as after evry scold done riddhima was secretly saying sorry to shashank, they all got ready to go to anji's house abhi would drop them n go to hospital as he has some work to be done..

At heaven hill

Anji wearing a off white maternity gown is sitting with muh phulake while armaan wearing Blue-gray t-shirt with Blue-magenta violet color three quater n gappu wearing jungle green t shirt with Bitter lime barmuda pant is pampering her n atul wearing white polp shirt with black trouser is doing uthak bethak n bi wearing bisque color salwar suit is smiling at the scene

When armaan got a call n excused as it was his some old friend..

Bi: Anji ab to maaf kardo na ise..

G: bhabi inko maaf na karna hai to maat karo but baat to karo humse

Actually hua yeh despite being sunday atul was gone to office n when anjali got to know about it she got furious this much she didn't even have breakfast properly..
Now evryone is pampering her for having some more fruit..
bck to present

At(after hearing gappu he stop doing what he was doing n smack at gappu's back head): oye tu bhai hai ya dushman

An(bringing gappu close n hugging him n rubbing his bck head n turning towards atul): y did u smack him????galti khud karo aur is bechare ko maro..ab to baat hi nhi karungi tumse..

While a voice from behind said: humse bhi baat nhi karogi di????

Anjali look behind to see shashank wearing Cadet grey color kurta with white trouser,padma in Bubbles color saree, minnie in Celadon color sundress n riddhima in Flamingo pink salwar suit with Flirt color design done on borders with same color scarf n bottom n hair tied in a loose side ponytail n tweety on her shoulder

An: Ap sab yaha????

Pa: kyun bhai hum apne beti k ghar nhi a sakte kya????

An: Badi mumma yeh ap kaise bate kar rhi ho obviously ap sab a sakti ho yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai????

While atul come forward n touch shashank n padma's feet while anji give him an angry look which make him hid behind riddhima n riddhima also notice this fact instantly n gappu greet them all n welcomed them n with bi all settle down..

An: Are wah aj toh yeh bhi(pointing towards tweety) sath hai...

Tweety: Tere dar per sanam chale aye

Tu na aye to hum chale aye

While all giggle hearing its song..

When a voice come from behind: Arz kiya hai..

Wo aaye mere dar pe,

khuda ki rahmat hai,

kabhi hum unko,

kabhi wo humko dekhte hai...

Hello evryone...

All turn around to see its armaan while riddhima smile a bit n minnie shouted n run towards him:Boy friend...!!!!!! Tum yaha????

While others got confused except riddhima n shashank though riddhima have a smile on her face but shashank have a surprising expression hearing this new info..He look towards riddhima to see her clam not so shocked that means she know armaan hi anjali's devar..but to confirm it shashank who was standing beside riddhima whisper to her: armaan wohi airport wala ladka hai kya??

While riddhima nod n with small node tell him about last night events with skipping rahul muskaan's prt telling will talk about it later..while others busy asking armaan n minnie how they know each other as this supposed to be there first meet

When armaan just tell them about their first met in basket ball ground skipping other meet while minnie was too much excited to realize that..
Beforte evryone could settle down gappu with minnie run inside to play their own..
While anji introduce riddhima n armaan with each other n even they didn't correct them telling they already know each other..
Then evryone settle together n talk while armaan left impressed watching the comfort level riddhima share with his family..Even anjali forget that she was angry..

While evryone was laughing continously over some jokes cracked by Armaan but as soon armaan's gaze fall over riddhima he lost on her beautifull smile..

When riddhima feel someone's strong gaze he look towards armaan but before only he look at other direction not to get caught but after a little look back to riddhima to see her passing a smile towards him which make him smile too.

After lunch gupta family was proceed to depreture but anjali ask riddhima to stay till dinner someone would drop her later..

So riddhima stay but at afternoon while anjali was feeling tired riddhima forced her to take a nap..

Now evryone is sitting in living room without anjali n gappu who gone for play with friends..

Ri: DR,mujhe na apki permission chahiye..

At:permission per kyun????

Ri:Actually wo kya hai na DR ab anji di se apki shadi ho chuki hai to unse judi faisle to apse puch kar hi karni padegi na like unke liye kuch karu bhi to apse puchke karni padegi na..(with sad bechara face)

At(while hearing her atul was little surprised tried to correct her): Ridz aisa nhi hai tum jaisa..

Riddhima brust out in laughing while bi also join her n armaan set there toutally confused..while bi say : are atul yeh badmash (while saying badmash caught her's ear)teri tang khich rhi hai.. Ri(whining): Bi bi chodo na dard ho rhi hai(while bi left her ear saying badmash n riddhima hug her from side watching it atul smile n armaan got more confused watching her this side) acha DR on a serious note actually i ws thinking to arrange a godbhadai for di..

Then she told her plans n evryone appreciate that n now venue also decided its heaven hill n before all decoration start anjali would moved to rangin ashiyaana by riddhima with some excuse..

After the discussion done atul left to make some phone calls when bi left to watch anjali now only riddhima n armaan left alone..

Things got little bit awkward between them..armaan notice after knowing he is anji's devar riddhima stopped fighting with him but he really started to miss that riddhima..but this silence now is killing him so he thought to break it..

While on other side riddhima keeping a distance from armaan after knowing he is anji's devar,though the thought may be little old fashioned but she really didn't want to fight with him now anymore thinking it may hamper the reputation of her family although she is always a good girl never fight with anyone but don't know why she always get involved in fight with armaan but now she took this resolvation that she won't fight with him but now this silence is too much awkard so thinking to break it..

Both said at the same time: wo..

N now looking towards each other said again together: nhi tum pehle..

This time both laughed hearing the same word from each others mouth

This time armaan said first: nhi tum batao kya bol rhi thi????

Ri(reminding herself jhagda nhi karni hai so agreed what he said): Wo main bol rhi thi tumhari muski se baat hui.????

Ar(little surprised again as riddhima didn't argue back): ha subah hui thi she seems little lost but mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha..(while riddhima nod in a gesture to say further) how could be u so sure that rahul love muski????

Ri: isn't it obious???? Tumne kabhi uske ankhon me dekha hai humesha..(While she keep saying about how she got to know about rahul's love armaan was lost in her) tum samajh rahe ho na maine kya boli...?

Ar(coming out of thought): huh...ha main samajh gayi (then started to think what she actually said when again riddhima's voice break his thought)

Ri: to wo pehle tum kya bolne wale the..

Ar(thinking to ask about her changing behaviour): wo actually(then looking at her eyes he thought otherwise n ask something else) next plan kya hai ab????

Ri: influence..then confession

Ar: matlab????

Ri: leave it on me but yea one thing u have to do ...

then she told her plan n riddhima ask once his prt of work done inform her on rangin ashiayaana's number

The day gone like this armaan keep thinking about riddhima's behaviour n riddhima left after dinner with atul.

Next day...
Riddhima called rahul to meet her urgently n no one was at home without minnie n servents...so it got more easy for her plan...
During lunch time rahul come to rangin ashiyana...
Both settle on living room with twety on one of sofa post..

R: Riddhima tune call kia tha kya urgent kaam hai...?
Ri: Boht hi urgent kaam hai itni urgent ki main kya batau...
R(roll his eyes): Bol kya hai??
Ri: Tu muski ko kab batayegi...??
R: not again yaar,don't tell me yehi sab bolne k liye tune mujhe office se yaha bulaya wo bhi urgent...
Ri: Dekh rahul u promised me u will do whatever i say if i prove muski have feelings for u..
R(knowing there is no point arguing with her as she not gonna let it go): mujhe karna kya hoga?
Ri: jayada kuch nhi just go on confess ur love...
R: Riddhima...tu samajhti kyun nhi its not that easy...
Ri: Arey aise kaise not easy but three words hi to bolni hai...
R: But wo word kaise bolu...
Ri: Really now rahul tu ladka hoke yeh bol rhi hai.. i mean simple sa three word hai...
While tweety sing:Sharmaana Chhod Daal, Raaz Dil Ka Khol Daal
Aaju Baaju Mat Dekh, I Love You Bol Daal
Nai To Pachtaayega, Kunwaara Reh Jaayega
Baat Zara Iski Apne Bheje Mein Daal

While riddhima loughed n saiud: see yeh tujhse jayada akalmand hai...
While rahul glare n said: Aise nhi hoti yaar ridddhima..Main nhi wo mujhe kacha chaba jayegi...
Ri: Tu itna darta kyun hai muski se..emimi tell him isn't it easy to say...or yeh to panjab ki sher hai na jara bata ise kaise bolne chahiye...
While tweety sing:Angrezi mein kahte hain ke I love you
Gujaraati maa bole tane prem karuuN chhuuN, chhuuN, chhuuN
Bangaali mein kahte hain aami tumaake bhaalobaashi
Aur panjaabi mein kahte hain, teri to, haa
tere bin mar jaavaaN, main tainu pyaar karNaa
tere jaiyo naiyo labni, o saathi ho

Ri: see this is spirit..Dekh rahul i don't know anything but this time u have to express ur feelings warna yeh na ho k tu yaha kaise bole yeh sochte reh jay aur waha koi aur teri pyar ko chura le jay..
Scene faded at rahul's tensed expression..

On other side
At muski's cabin
A beautifull table decorated with different medical instruments n case files one side there is a sofa kept n other side a bed n rotating curtain stand.
While a girl wearing black kurta n white trouser in doctors place siting with glommy mood n a guy wearing grey shirt n blue trouser siting infront of the girl..
G: Bol armaan kya baat hai[obiously the guys is none other than armaan]
Ar: Actually muski main tujhe ek baat puchne ayi thi..
M:ha bol na..
Ar: Muski tu to rahul ko janta hi bachpan se toh tujhe better pata hogi i mean actually mere ek friend hai use rahul pasand hai kya tu bata sakti hai use koi aur pasand hai ya nhi..Actually na main yeh baat tujhe nhi puchti but u know na main rahul se jayada baat nhi karti but ab mere friend k khatir bas tujhe puch rhi hoon..tujhe pata hai kya??
M(look at him shockingly): nhi mu-mujhe nhi pa-pata..Armaan if u don't mind meri abhi duty hai main thodi der me ati hoon..(saying this she run out of her cabin to terrence thinking why suddenly evrything is so up behind her to lead to rahul only)

While muski left armaan took out the cell n make a call in rangin ashiyaana: Partner half of plan A done..What's next..
While from other side ridhima said: other half of plan a is done also now its time to wait...

Scene faded at their evil smile..

At night..

Riddhima got a call n said: hello..

A voice from other side: We check in, will reach till morning..

While riddhima jump in happiness hearing them n said: lv u both..i will be at airport to receive u both..

While on other side..

Armaan was again thinking about riddhima..

Ar: main uske bare me itna kyun soch rhi hoon...Wo kaise bhi rahe uske marzi..Nhi ab main uske bare me bilkul bhi nhi sochungi..

While suddenly his phone ring he recieved it n hearing the other side he shout in disbelieve: Whattt...

That's all for today..

i don't know why but now a days i just can't write

Even if i have time but it all seems like I go blank whenever i try to write something

I don't know what to do with this problem

If anyone have any suggestion over this

I mean suggestion over how can i get over with this problem of lack of desire to write plz say..

It might help me to write

Next part i will update when i could write too..

Tab tak k liye

Lv u all

Khudha Hafiz

Non writer tenta osa diavolo atto

Rupkotha

Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago

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Rihoo Haws

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

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Hey BabyGirl...

Arey wah, tumne itni jaldi phirse update de diya...

I know I know, tumhare exam jaldi shuru hone wala hai issiliyeh tum in dino mein jaldi update de rahi hai...

and I m so much loving this story babygirl...

Lekin tumne I guess mistakely part 20 likha hai, as far as I remember, iske previous part 20 hai...

Chalo koi nhi, tu correct karlena...

Now about the part, kiya baat hai Babygirl...

Tumne AR koh dikhaya starting mein...

Wohoo, it was treat to read AR moment in the beginning...

Lolz, Armaan kabhi nehi sudar sakte...

Ridz ne thanks bola toh uska bhi mazak bana diya Armaan ne...

Waise awkward toh hogi na after all they came to know already they share a relation hehehe...

AR moment with song sequence was a double treat to read...

Song sequence was beautiful describe... Wah wah, both developing an unknown connection...

Aise dono ghar toh poch gaye...

Hahahha, Ridz is fun too sometimes...

Armaan tohdina usko aise bolne ke liyeh rokhenge...

Arey wah. partner bhi bana diya Armaan ne...

Accha hai, ab dono milke dhamal karenge... hehehe...

Bechara Armaan, cnfused hogaya sochke Ridz uske ghar kyun aayenge hahaha...

In Heaven Hill...

hayye, Armaan toh Ridz ke bare mein soch rahi hai...

Wah, kitna accha dost hai Armaan, woh maddy koh call ki dekhne ke liyeh Muski ghar pochgaye hai ya nehi...

Armaan was also thinking about Rahul and Muski, wah wah Armaan Muski ke liyeh soch raha hai...

Phirse baat ghuma ke Ridz pe aagaye hahaha...

Armaan sacchi mein paagal hogaye hai, woh khush ho rahi hai yeh sochke Ridz and Rahul ke beech kuch nehi hai hahaha...

Ab kiya hoga Armaan ka :P usko toh har jhaga bas basket dikh raha hai hahaha... Basketball kyun na ho hahaha...

Baapre... Mujhe laga padma issiliyeh gussa hai kyunki Ridz ne raat mein baahar gayi ehehe...

Lekin yaha toh scene kuch aur hi hai... Padma toh Shashank pe gussa hai aur shikar baaki sab bangaye...

Ridz request Abhi to calm down her so they could go to Anjali house...

Arey wah, Padma ne toh Abhi ki bolne pe ek baar mein shaant hogayi...

hahaha Ridz se Shashank koh daant bhi padwa diya...

Woh kaise seriously daantenge Shashank koh, after all uski prince charming jo hai toh sorry toh bolenge na...

Oh ho, yaha Heaven Hill mein ab Anjali gussa hai...

Aur target toh as usual Atul bana hai...

Ah oh, ab toh koi nehi bacha sakte Atul koh Anjali se...

Sunday ke din kaam karenge toh biwi gussa hogi na...

Bi and Gappu was enjoying while Atul was being punish hahaha...

Awww, love the bonding Anjali share with Gappu...

Bechara Atul koh daant pada for smashing Gappu... woh bhi warning ke saat hahaha...

Wow, Gupta joins mallik and they spend some fun time...

Anjali bhi jaldi bhul gayi woh Atul se gussa ta, good for Atul hahaha...

Ah finally, Ridz ne Atul koh bata diya she was to arrange babyshower for Anjali...

Hahahah it was worth when Ridz pull Atul leg haha...

Bi koh samajh aagayi aur Armaan was surprise to see this side of Riddhima...

Again AR part... Wohooo

Ab toh lagta haii bohot saara AR moment padne koh milenge haina BabyGirl...

Waise I also miss tom and jerry... Ridz toh ladna hi chod di...

Oh toh yeh baat hai, jabse pata chala woh Anjali ki devar hai, Ridz ne decide kiya no more fighting...

Lekin woh toh hone se nehi, i m sure Armaan would make Ridz fight back with him not often toh kabhi kbahi hehehe...

Arey wah, Armaan toh already Ridz pe lattu hone laga hahaha...

Baat baat pe Armaan khone laga hai Ridz pe... Bada pasand aa raha hai Armaan koh Ridz seeing this new side of her being with Malliks and Guptas...

Ahaan, toh yeh dono ne plan bana hi liya RM ka confess kara ne ke liyeh...

Ab dekhna hai kiya plan hai in dono ka...

Lolz, Ridz toh hadd karte hai...

Bechara Rahul koh office se bhulaya yeh kehke urgent kaam hai...

Aur Rahul koh pata chala Ridz ki zaruri kaam kiya hahaha...

Bechara, usko toh koi option nehi hai Ridz ke saamne na bolne ka...

Wow, sacchi kaha Ridz ne... Tweety bhi is Rahul se zyaada samajhdaar nikla hahaa...

I just love those lines by tweety... She is such a cutyyy...

Arey wah, yeh toh rhythm hogayi na hahaha...

Ek tarah Riddhima apni plan koh anjaam de rahi hai...

Aur dusri taraf Armaan, poch gaye Muski ke paas...

ahaha I m sure yeh Ridz ne kaha hoga Armaan koh yeh sab bolne ke liyeh...

Bechar Muski, woh toh yeh soch rahi hai yeh sab uske saat kyun ho rahi hai...

Har koi kyun Rahul ke rishte kissi aur ke saat fixed karne ki baat kar rahi hai, woh bhi usse jab woh confused hai usko kyun itna bura lag rahi hai hehehe...

Awww, bechari Muski, uski dill toh tut rahi hai dheere dheere...

AR ne toh apna kaam kardiya...

Ab dekhna hai Rahul confess karte hai ya dar se chup rehte...

I m sure yeh dono ki plan mast hogi, after all Ridz ki idea jo hai hahaha...

Ahaan, so new characters would be relieve soon haan...

Ridz ka toh samajh mein aaya kisne phone kiya hoga as Ridz ne kuch din pehle kissi koh order de diya aane koh...

Jisne maine Mr, and Mrs. Mallik kaha...

If sacchi mein they are parents of Armaan and Atul, then jo Armaan koh phone kiya woh bhi same hoga...

Hahaha Armaan toh shocked hogaye...

Ab dekhna hai meri guess sahi hai ya nehi...

It was awesome and hilarious part BabyGirl...

maine toh bohttt zayada enjoy ki...

I m just loving and enjoy it so muchhh...

Continue super soon because this is getting better and better as it goes on...

Take care... Muwaahhh

Love u so muchh, more most and mostest...

Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago

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gauri

@gaurijw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

superb part

chalo ar m friendship to hui or armaan has feelings towards her to

rahul musk good going musk jealouse

now who is coming

post soon

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

nice part
loved how their relationship is turning
so armaan ko kuch kuch hota h rha
really enjoyed the armaan feelings for ridhz is growing
loved how all the time he is thinking of ridhz
nd ridhz she is cutest
loved her bonding with all anjy nd atul nd bi
nd how armaan is shocked seeing her bond with
but is confused too abt ridhz behavior
continue soon
loved the part

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Amazing ff !!
Loved all parts <3
Very well written !
Loved riddhima's relation wid shanky and even rahul n sid !!
Atul bichara having tough tym due to anjie's mood swings !
Loved d holi parts !!
Padma had bhang pakodas lolzzz !!
Earlier armaan and ridz only use to fight and now dey hv become quite nice to eaxh other !!
Armaan started to feel for riddhima :))
Riddhima bonded soo well wid armaan's family !!

Waiting for next part eagerly !!
Continue soon !!

And if possible den pls do pm me !

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
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Unreserved

Hey BabyGirl...
Arey wah, tumne itni jaldi phirse update de diya...
I know I know, tumhare exam jaldi shuru hone wala hai issiliyeh tum in dino mein jaldi update de rahi hai...
and I m so much loving this story babygirl...
Lekin tumne I guess mistakely part 20 likha hai, as far as I remember, iske previous part 20 hai...
Chalo koi nhi, tu correct karlena...

Now about the part, kiya baat hai Babygirl...
Tumne AR koh dikhaya starting mein...
Wohoo, it was treat to read AR moment in the beginning...
Lolz, Armaan kabhi nehi sudar sakte...
Ridz ne thanks bola toh uska bhi mazak bana diya Armaan ne...
Waise awkward toh hogi na after all they came to know already they share a relation hehehe...
AR moment with song sequence was a double treat to read...
Song sequence was beautiful describe... Wah wah, both developing an unknown connection...

Aise dono ghar toh poch gaye...
Hahahha, Ridz is fun too sometimes...
Armaan tohdina usko aise bolne ke liyeh rokhenge...
Arey wah. partner bhi bana diya Armaan ne...
Accha hai, ab dono milke dhamal karenge... hehehe...
Bechara Armaan, cnfused hogaya sochke Ridz uske ghar kyun aayenge hahaha...

In Heaven Hill...
hayye, Armaan toh Ridz ke bare mein soch rahi hai...
Wah, kitna accha dost hai Armaan, woh maddy koh call ki dekhne ke liyeh Muski ghar pochgaye hai ya nehi...
Armaan was also thinking about Rahul and Muski, wah wah Armaan Muski ke liyeh soch raha hai...
Phirse baat ghuma ke Ridz pe aagaye hahaha...
Armaan sacchi mein paagal hogaye hai, woh khush ho rahi hai yeh sochke Ridz and Rahul ke beech kuch nehi hai hahaha...
Ab kiya hoga Armaan ka :P usko toh har jhaga bas basket dikh raha hai hahaha... Basketball kyun na ho hahaha...

Baapre... Mujhe laga padma issiliyeh gussa hai kyunki Ridz ne raat mein baahar gayi ehehe...
Lekin yaha toh scene kuch aur hi hai... Padma toh Shashank pe gussa hai aur shikar baaki sab bangaye...
Ridz request Abhi to calm down her so they could go to Anjali house...
Arey wah, Padma ne toh Abhi ki bolne pe ek baar mein shaant hogayi...
hahaha Ridz se Shashank koh daant bhi padwa diya...
Woh kaise seriously daantenge Shashank koh, after all uski prince charming jo hai toh sorry toh bolenge na...

Oh ho, yaha Heaven Hill mein ab Anjali gussa hai...
Aur target toh as usual Atul bana hai...
Ah oh, ab toh koi nehi bacha sakte Atul koh Anjali se...
Sunday ke din kaam karenge toh biwi gussa hogi na...
Bi and Gappu was enjoying while Atul was being punish hahaha...
Awww, love the bonding Anjali share with Gappu...
Bechara Atul koh daant pada for smashing Gappu... woh bhi warning ke saat hahaha...

Wow, Gupta joins mallik and they spend some fun time...
Anjali bhi jaldi bhul gayi woh Atul se gussa ta, good for Atul hahaha...
Ah finally, Ridz ne Atul koh bata diya she was to arrange babyshower for Anjali...
Hahahah it was worth when Ridz pull Atul leg haha...
Bi koh samajh aagayi aur Armaan was surprise to see this side of Riddhima...

Again AR part... Wohooo
Ab toh lagta haii bohot saara AR moment padne koh milenge haina BabyGirl...
Waise I also miss tom and jerry... Ridz toh ladna hi chod di...
Oh toh yeh baat hai, jabse pata chala woh Anjali ki devar hai, Ridz ne decide kiya no more fighting...
Lekin woh toh hone se nehi, i m sure Armaan would make Ridz fight back with him not often toh kabhi kbahi hehehe...

Arey wah, Armaan toh already Ridz pe lattu hone laga hahaha...
Baat baat pe Armaan khone laga hai Ridz pe... Bada pasand aa raha hai Armaan koh Ridz seeing this new side of her being with Malliks and Guptas...
Ahaan, toh yeh dono ne plan bana hi liya RM ka confess kara ne ke liyeh...
Ab dekhna hai kiya plan hai in dono ka...

Lolz, Ridz toh hadd karte hai...
Bechara Rahul koh office se bhulaya yeh kehke urgent kaam hai...
Aur Rahul koh pata chala Ridz ki zaruri kaam kiya hahaha...
Bechara, usko toh koi option nehi hai Ridz ke saamne na bolne ka...
Wow, sacchi kaha Ridz ne... Tweety bhi is Rahul se zyaada samajhdaar nikla hahaa...
I just love those lines by tweety... She is such a cutyyy...
Arey wah, yeh toh rhythm hogayi na hahaha...

Ek tarah Riddhima apni plan koh anjaam de rahi hai...
Aur dusri taraf Armaan, poch gaye Muski ke paas...
ahaha I m sure yeh Ridz ne kaha hoga Armaan koh yeh sab bolne ke liyeh...
Bechar Muski, woh toh yeh soch rahi hai yeh sab uske saat kyun ho rahi hai...
Har koi kyun Rahul ke rishte kissi aur ke saat fixed karne ki baat kar rahi hai, woh bhi usse jab woh confused hai usko kyun itna bura lag rahi hai hehehe...
Awww, bechari Muski, uski dill toh tut rahi hai dheere dheere...

AR ne toh apna kaam kardiya...
Ab dekhna hai Rahul confess karte hai ya dar se chup rehte...
I m sure yeh dono ki plan mast hogi, after all Ridz ki idea jo hai hahaha...

Ahaan, so new characters would be relieve soon haan...
Ridz ka toh samajh mein aaya kisne phone kiya hoga as Ridz ne kuch din pehle kissi koh order de diya aane koh...
Jisne maine Mr, and Mrs. Mallik kaha...
If sacchi mein they are parents of Armaan and Atul, then jo Armaan koh phone kiya woh bhi same hoga...
Hahaha Armaan toh shocked hogaye...
Ab dekhna hai meri guess sahi hai ya nehi...

It was awesome and hilarious part BabyGirl...
maine toh bohttt zayada enjoy ki...
I m just loving and enjoy it so muchhh...
Continue super soon because this is getting better and better as it goes on...
Take care... Muwaahhh
Love u so muchh, more most and mostest...