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gauri

@gaurijw

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#411

after such a long time reading this ff

haha poor armaan shart haar gaya...

wase mujhe college jane ke liye bhi minimumadha ghanta lagta hai ok i guess m typical girl

lets see ab riddhima kya karati hai usse

abhi entry was superb

chalo armaan riddhima will perform together

waiting for next part

update soon

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#412

pikachu!!!! finally to agayi Tera pm dekh ke shock lga mujhe almost heart attack agaya mujhe!!!
hihihi awesome update
hahahaha ridhz me dimag lgaya yaar to irritate armaan missed call ka raaz ye tha bechara armaan hi ghum gya ki ye hua kaise hahahaha
I guess it's a bad day for armaan bet bhi hargya warn kiya tha both Sid abhi n rahul but mana Nah haar gya na ab
oye hoye abhi ki kya entry thi
or armaan bhi relax hogya ki ridhz ka bf Nah h bhai h hahaha
but its short yaar thoda lengthy like
now now poor armaan ridhz kya punish karegi

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

Hey its an wonderful story I read all 29 parts in one go and it was awesome u are one heck of a great writer I must say... ainvayi jhoot bol rahi thi that u r not a good writer... Armaan's entry was awesome... please update soon and do PM... it has been 6 months from the time u have updated... I hope u had not discontinued the story please ... if u had then please complete it ... please please please... please update soon and do PM to me...

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

Hey update soon do PM and soory baaki me chapters means ch25 se ch29 index main nahi the so I got confused but please update soon and do PM to me

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
Res
unres

hailaaa...
yeh koan aayi haiii...
*Took the spec, cleaning it and putting it back...*
Arey wah, yeh toh meri babygirl haiii...
*Waving both hands* Hiii Babygirl...
I know I know tu kyun gayab hogayi ti...
So u don't need to say sorry...
Kyunki main toh teri sorry lungi nehi :P
Chalo chalo, ab story koh lekar aage padte hai...

Part was awesome like usual...
Maine toh bohottt enjoy ki...
Aisa nehi laga, tum itni din baad likh rahe ho...
Wohi masti mazak, suspense... Superbbb...

hahahaha Ridz ne Armaan ke bike koh sell karne ke liyeh add daala...
By god, issiliyeh sab milkar itna miss call maar rahi hai Armaan koh...
bechara, jo apne bike ke liyeh itna deewana hai... Uske naam pe bike koh sell karne ke liyeh add dalwa diya...
Hahaha Armaan ka shock hona toh banta hai...
Ahaan, usko samajh aagaya kisne kiya hoga yeh hehehe...

Wah wah, Abhi aagaya...
hahaha kiya entry maara hai Abhi ne sabke saath...
Uske aane se pehle, sab soch raha ta kaise andar jaae...
Abhi toh bohot smart nikla hahaha...

Aur ghar ke andar, sab unko bhagane ki tayyar kar rahi ti...
lekin Ridz ne rokha, kyunki usko shak hogayi woh Armaan nehi koi aur hai...
Abhi ka wait kar rahi ti, kaise chance chod de dekhne ke liyeh kiski himmat huva aise andar aane ki jab ki ladies function chal rahi ti...

hahaha Ridz and Minnie excitement was super awesome...
Dono kitni khush hogaye apne bade bhai koh dekh ke...
Mast song hai Babygirl... description was super awesome...
hahaha Armaan jo Ridz se baat karne aaya hai, woh Ridz koh dance karte huve dekh ke kho gaya...
Aur Rym was watching Armaan expression, not bad...
Yeh toh bohot smart hai, ab cubic ke role play kar rahi hai toh clever and smart toh hona hi haina...
maine bhi bohottt enjoy ki song koh :D

Hahahah when Minnie introduce Armaan to Abhi...
Abhi ne Ridz koh ghira diya hahaha...
Armaan soch raha ta woh Ridz ki bf hai aur Abhi ne :P hahaha same same socha but for Minnie...
Dono ke expression dekhne layak ta...
Chalo ab toh introduction hogaye acche se, aur Abhi and Armaan become buddies too...
Wah wah, kitni jaldi dono buddies bangaye... Accha hai...
Behen pe line maarne ke liyeh bhai koh set karna padega pehle...
As Abhi is very much possessive about his sisters...

Chalo sangeet ke liyeh saari tayyar bhi hogaye...
Armaan is head, sabse kaam pooch ke note bhi karliya...
hahaha Armaan and Ridz challenging...
Aise kaise Armaan challenge nehi karte, woh Ridz se tohdina haar maanenge...
Lekin Rahul and Sid ke baat maanna chahiyeh ta Armaan koh...
Ab pata nehi Ridz kiya kiya karwaenge Armaan se...
Love AR and others conversation...

hahahah When Armaan saw Ridz ready before the timing, woh toh kho hi gayye...
Usko already kuch kuch ho raha hai Ridz koh normally dekh ke, Ab toh bohot kuch hone wala hai...
Dil mein ganti nehi, guitar, voilin aur bohot kuch bhajenge heheh...

hahaha Rym toh apni kaam bohot accha kar rahi hai...
Usne Sid koh jaan bhujkar ghira diya...
Taaki Ridz Armaan ke saath dance kare heheheh...
Well done Rym, aapne toh bohot accha kaam kiya hai...
Kyun nehi, after all bua haina Ridz ki...
Ridz ke dhimag se zyada Rym ke dhimag chalti hai...
Lolz Shilpa ne kitna maara Sid ke peir pe...
Poor him, already was in pain aur yeh Shilpa ne saara gussa uske peir pe nikal diya...

Ab kiya karenge AR???
Of course dance karna hi padega...
Hmmm Ab Armaan ka kiya hoga...
I mean woh toh already apne dil koh control nehi karpa raha hai Ridz koh dekhke...
Itni close hokar dance karna padega toh, uske dil toh baahar aajanege nehi???
Heheh chalo next part pe dekhte hai...
Dono toh bohot zyada bahane banane wala hai...
Lekin I m sure, Rym mana lenge hehehe...

Continue soon...
Waiting for the next part eagerly...
Muwaahhh
Love it and love u more...
take care <3

Yes yes, my comment is on first :P
toh kiya huva I took a little time to unres hahaha...
res toh pehle maine hi ki na...
toh jab log dekhenge meri hi comment hogi sabse pehle :D
Muwaahhh
love u loadsss... <3

Hey jijiii
*hidding behind hands doing pick-a-boo*
Plz jayada jhatke mat khana
i know boht late thi na
is baar to usse bhi late *bitting lips nurvus smile*

*Weaving back with same excitement*
yes one n only ur babygirl

huh..
maine apko sorry boli bhi nhi
yeh toh baki sabke liye thi*with attitude*

Lv u jiji
i m glad u like it
i almost lost my essence evn if it hv any or not

nhi jiji
sell nhi
wo toh offeer free ka tha
matlab wo aise hi bike de deti paise bhi nhi leti

Akhir riddhima ki bhai hai
Smart to honi hi thi

oobviously happy to hogi hi na
Akhir ek hi toh bhai hai

Ab cupid hai ya nhi abhi se kaise bata sakte ho ap huh..
yaha kuch bhi ho sakti hai u know

hmmm
Kafi samajdaar hogayi ho app
dekhte hai kya hoti hai

Main toh puri band bajte hue dekh rhi thi
Apne sirf kuch instruments dekhi jiji :p

Dono ne abhi mani kaha hai so tension not

ab continue karne hi toh ayi hu ;) :p

yohooo
Congo jijiii
no probs jiji
i almost took forever to update so whats issue right
yea yea i know
Lv u
tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: gaurijw
after such a long time reading this ff
haha poor armaan shart haar gaya...
wase mujhe college jane ke liye bhi minimumadha ghanta lagta hai ok i guess m typical girl
lets see ab riddhima kya karati hai usse
abhi entry was superb
chalo armaan riddhima will perform together
waiting for next part
update soon

heyyy
thanks for reading btw

well mujhe with shower lowest 20min lagti hai n without shower 5-10min ;)

i m glad u like abhi's entry

i never said that they will perform together
dont get hopes up

about that
plz let me know if u r still interested to read
There's a small promo posted
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: lashyyy
pikachu!!!! finally to agayi Tera pm dekh ke shock lga mujhe almost heart attack agaya mujhe!!!
hihihi awesome update
hahahaha ridhz me dimag lgaya yaar to irritate armaan missed call ka raaz ye tha bechara armaan hi ghum gya ki ye hua kaise hahahaha
I guess it's a bad day for armaan bet bhi hargya warn kiya tha both Sid abhi n rahul but mana Nah haar gya na ab
oye hoye abhi ki kya entry thi
or armaan bhi relax hogya ki ridhz ka bf Nah h bhai h hahaha
but its short yaar thoda lengthy like
now now poor armaan ridhz kya punish karegi

Tinker belll
kuch der bad aur ek shock lagne wali hai
Tab batana kaisi lagi shock :p

i m glad u like the update

i know
brilliant thi na plan ;)

ab kabhi kabhi sabki baat bhi manni chahiye na
aise thodi hi hoti hai
ab baat nhi mani toh phaal toh bhugatna hi tha

hmmm
dekhte hai kya hoti hai
tab tak lv u
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: Sp8699
Hey its an wonderful story I read all 29 parts in one go and it was awesome u are one heck of a great writer I must say... ainvayi jhoot bol rahi thi that u r not a good writer... Armaan's entry was awesome... please update soon and do PM... it has been 6 months from the time u have updated... I hope u had not discontinued the story please ... if u had then please complete it ... please please please... please update soon and do PM to me...

Heyyy
i really appreciate ur comment
Thanks a lot
but again i really not a writter to b honest
i m nthg like a writter u know what i mean
i mean sometimes i feeel so weird that i really write it or to say it "my story"
Its still so weird

hawww
i m not lying
Sachi me *pout*

i m glad u like the story

N about that
i m extremely sorry for this much late update or coming whatever u point it out
actually i was almost forget about it
i almost lose interest in ar ffs so i almost forget about it
One of my frnd msg me a few times back
Then i come back
n u know what
ur comment really bring back the old comment memories in my mind
n i was smiling like idiot that my roommate thought i hv some problem :p
n dont worry
this time i m coming back with intension of completeingg it
only if u still have the interest yet to read
thanks a lott
for the comment
tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Sp8699
Hey update soon do PM and soory baaki me chapters means ch25 se ch29 index main nahi the so I got confused but please update soon and do PM to me

hey again
yup
after u mention i saw that
and thanks for mentioning otherwise it might have stayed like that
i used to post from phone so i didn't notice that
but i correct it
n yea will do gladly
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#420

I know I know

I took like forever right

N I know most of all forget about the story
But this time I'm not gonna make an excuse

Coz truth to be told I myself almost forget about it

I lose all interest in AR so I stop reading ar ffs n writing also

Through I know I at least should have inform u all

But u know what happen

A few days ago one my friend remind me about it and ask for update as her bd gift
Usually its rare so it almost caught be off guard

But I promised her then that I will do that

Then I open my account n read my full story again as I also forgot what I wrote :p

N also comments on it n it inspired me so much that I just start again

But for only this story

I m on my break now so I m gonna write until it finish

I don't knw if u guys still have interest or not
let me know please
but before update I want to post a small preview

I already write parts but if there is no audience thn I m nt gonna post
but if even one is interested thn I will post nxt part after three days
till then enjoy the small promo...

1^st promo:

Screen shows the writing of it

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..

Shukriya..

BG voiceover:

Shaddi ki masti me yeh kya nayi pareshani..

Scene shows..

Riddhima armaan and Rahul standing infront of rym while rym looking at them with emotionless faces and turn her face so now all are facing her back n with dramatic affect turn and said in a very serious tone: U know what guys I m very ashamed of all of u

All were head down hearing her words..

Kya hogi ab inki bhabishya bani...

Janne k liye rahiye ARMAAN k sath hi...

N comment karne apki ray bhi bata di jiye

N abhi k liye plz isse hi kaam chala lo u know right bd girl whom I m dedicating this 1^st ever promo of ARMAAN obviously u

Lv u all