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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Jess2014

It's ok, take ur time and update at ease 😊

By the way, Merry Christmas dear.

Same to u...😃

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

😳

Waie apki pairing se main soch rhi thi
Yeh AR k wajay AM ff bana du kya...
I mean u see u love AM bond better na...😉
To kya khayal hai... batana jara...😆

details k liye thodi jayada intezar karni hogi apko...
Coz abhi toh mujhe boht kuch aur bhi batani hai...
Ap hi se sikha hai...
Remember apne kaise suspense me chod deti ho apni ffs ...😉😆

Hawww...
Apko nhi pata thi that main sabko achgi dekhna pasand karti hoon...

Next part kuch hi der me post hogi so tab pad lena ok...😉😆

Yea...right...
Btw i do the same...

lvs u lots...
Tc

Nehiii...

Aise karenge toh meri saat saat tumhe bhi shoes and all se maarenge yeh log hehehe...

Waise Idea toh bura nehi hai...

Lekin Minnie toh chotu si pyaari si acchi hai...

hehehe...

Accha, hmmm phir toh inthizaar karna padega...

No other choice and option right hehehe...

Hahaha, right... Jaise Apu waise uski baby girl ...

Wah wah, kiya baat kahin na maine hahaha...

^rolling eyes^ kitna nautanki karte ho na hum hahaha...

Mujhe pata nehi hoga toh kisse pata hoga baby girl...

Itni jaldiii...hayyeee...

Waiting eagerlyyy...

Hehehe okey...Muwaahhh

Love u too lotsss...

take care...

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Nehiii...
Aise karenge toh meri saat saat tumhe bhi shoes and all se maarenge yeh log hehehe...
Waise Idea toh bura nehi hai...
Lekin Minnie toh chotu si pyaari si acchi hai...
hehehe...

Accha, hmmm phir toh inthizaar karna padega...
No other choice and option right hehehe...
Hahaha, right... Jaise Apu waise uski baby girl ...
Wah wah, kiya baat kahin na maine hahaha...

^rolling eyes^ kitna nautanki karte ho na hum hahaha...
Mujhe pata nehi hoga toh kisse pata hoga baby girl...

Itni jaldiii...hayyeee...
Waiting eagerlyyy...

Hehehe okey...Muwaahhh
Love u too lotsss...
take care...

Point to hai...
Waise maregi kaon...???
Yeh bhi toh bata do...

ha badi pyari baat kahi hai apne...😉😆
isi baat pe ek song...

Jaise mera tu
Waise tera main

yea...almost done phir bhi time lagegi...😛😉😆
lvs u
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

This part is dedicated to one of my frnd ayushi...Happy Birthday ayu...
This part is ur Bd gift
I don't know u would like this part or not but I hope u like it
& a very happy wali birthday...
& Merry Christmas to all

So here goes the story ...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha ha, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai, Aur Isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahunchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain, yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhad hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga.Iske liye authority ya ni ki writer ya ni ki main uske liye jimiddar nhi hu...Kripa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekh lijiye...
Shukriya...

Precap:
Kuch raste judte judte adhuri reh gayi
Kuch mushikilon ka fasla abhi bhi pehli reh gayi
Judi hai kuch rishte pyari si
Purani hai yeh kahani par andaaz nayi si
Dekhte dekhte pal guzar gayi
Kahani me har pal nayi mor a gayi...
Janna hai kya hai age..
Toh muh mat taro parlo part to maine post kardi dekho hai yeh apke age...😉😛

Part 4

Aj ki part start with like this that the girl is praying in church suddenly a old lady wearing from behind called her with her name...

When 1^stshe opened her eyes

Then she turned brightening with her smile
Then the lady smiled towards her & called: Riddhima...!!!!

Yes everyone this is our sweet si pyari si heroin of the story Riddhima Gupta..
One more much wanted intro...;)
Inke liye kya kahu...
Kuch kehna hi nhi hai actually for this lovely lady
Phir bhi meri style me hi kuch keh deti hoon...

Ek Ladki Ki Tumhe Kya Sunaao Daastaan
Woh Pagli Hai Sab Se Juda
Har Pal Nayi Uski Ada
Phool Barse Log Tarse Jaaye Woh Ladki Jahan
Hai Khafa To Khafa Phir Khud Hi Woh Maan Bhi Jaati Hai
Laati Hai Hoton Pe Muskaan Woh
Chup Hai To Chup Hai Woh
Phir Khud Hi Woh Gun Gunaati Hai Gaati Hai Meethi Meethi Gyan Woh
Kaise Kahoon Kaisi Hai Woh Bas Apne Hi Jaisi Hai Woh
Phool Barse Log Tarse Jaaye Woh Ladki Jahan

More details about her is coming soon...

So now back to story

Riddhima: Sister Dulce...good to see u

Sister dulce is the Main care taker of this place. She knows riddhima from years. Coz riddhima used to visit here in evry public holiday even the kids & oldies love her a lot.Sister dulce also like her a lot.U can imagine anyone as sister dulce as she is out of dmg charachter.

Sister dulce:Same hear dear.This kids again spilled u with water na I must teach them a lesson
Riddhima(Offending them)No sister I actually don't mind. Moreover they are just kids
Sister Dulce(Smiling at her antics):ok as u say but u should not offended them evrytime they might got spoiled with it.Btw how come u here today it's not an public holiday today
Riddhima(Smiling a little): I know sister but today I came here to bid bye coz tomorrow..[What she said I want it to keep secret coz it will be gonna expose later]

Here in BB court...

Lovely come to the court & see Minnie with armaan...She is already so faseneting with armaan that in every place she just saw him...& already building dreams to marry him...😉😛😆
So in this process Minnie always miss her scold when armaan is around

Let's see what happened today...

Lovely (While coming in a hurry but seeing armaan her eyes goes low down her steps go slow down): Minnie beta jara idhar aao...
Minnie(Knowing why her voice is so sweet right now hiding her smile & thinking something said):Are ap yaha aao na Boyfrnd kab se aapse milne k liye bol rhi thi par ap ho ki inke samne hi nhi ati...

Hearing Minnie armaan's expression was got like this

Lovely very shyly with her stole rounding though hands come towards her & give Minnie the phone while Minnie go away smiling devilishly towards armaan...
Armaan (Thinking in mind): Minnie kaha phasa di yaar...Are kaha ja rhi hai ruk ruk wapas aaa...
His thinking mind got rest when lovely sit near him...The whole place shaked as if its earthquake
&
BG music...

Har ek frnd kamina hota hai...😈😈😈

Minnie come back after a while and the scene is worth to watch armaan sitting in a corner just like a baby who is trying to save himself from the cruel world & lovely just evrytime armaan move away to yeh uske aur kareeb jake beith jati hai literally she think she is falling for him but actually not falling for it could be say falling on him

Watching the scene Minnie very carefully controlling her grin go there
Armaan saw her coming & took a breath of relief & plead to her with eyes to save him
Minnie come there & say to lovely: here ur mobile.
Then turning to Armaan she said: Boyfrnd I've to go..& tomorrow I'm going back
Then they talk for a while taking each other's number & promise to contract..

Here In a house just beside the road...

Scene shows the door opens & shows the simple living room where sitting arrangement done with purple sofa & purple walmet at wall a lamp shade just side of the sofa & a orange mate at floor just like the pic given below...

An small kitchen at right and just before the kitchen two chair kept as dinning.
A girl enter in the apartment though the door & kept the keys near the door key place & walked straight near the stairs passing the study room which is near the stairs and little shelf where books places...just like this...

She gone up to the stairs and just left side there is a door & a door also in right side she enter the right side door above it there was a bedroom as she open the door all can see the room now...
It's a kid's room inside the room the wall is painted in pink and a small bed kept there neatly covered with bed sheet & quilt & pillows neatly keeping there..

Watching the room empty she sighed and went to the room just above it which door is just left to the stairs.
As she enter we see a room painted in light purple a bed kept there neatly placed the pillow & quilt
A TV is placed on the wall a huge Almira placed near the bed and other side of the room there is work room which is covered though a curtain which divide these two room.

The girl kept her hand bang in hanging place inside the Almira & took a piece of comfortable wear a white salwar suit and enter the room to have a cool shower & after that she got out from the washroom & brought out two huge bags & started to pack
After a while she heard a noise of click of door & got down & watch her little sis and her nurse to enter & as usual the nurse is taking deep breath & her sis just lay on the couch.
She shakes her head a little watching this two & mumbled; ye dono kabhi nhi sudhregi...

She enter in the kitchen and took out water in two glasses & go out giving one glass to the nurse & give her little sis one glass & while getting the water she just chilled her throat first then notice the hand which was gave her water is now folded & her elder sis is watching her while folding her hands in her chest.

She just hugged her elder sis & said(with a cute voice):jiji...(then separating from her hug she making a cute pout towards her & holding her ears say)Sorry jiji...main aj bhi late ho gayi

The girl exclaimed:Minnie...Tu har din yehi karti hai...tu abhi abhi ek major surgery se recover hui hai pata hai na tujhe...u should be more careful & lovely ji ap isko bahar kyun jane di...

Welll this little girl is Minnie & the lady with her is lovely lets see who is the sister...
Lovely:Oh ji riddhima ji yeh meri koi baat sunti kaha hai...

Here see riddhima is Minnie's elder sister Riddhima Gupta who lived here for study.& this is her apartment.[Minnie ka full name janne k liye u all have to wait little more for now just know she is one of gupta]

Riddhima:ok ok boht hua pata hai mujhe ap dono ka roj ka excuse & now just hurry up u two pack all things main bas ticket book karne hi wali hoon..
They nodded & headed towards their room

Riddhima checked about tickets & all while lovely comes to her

Lovely: Oh ji riddhima ji mujhe kuch puchni thi
Riddhima: Ji sister lovely boliye
Lovely: Actuallly apne batai to thi aur maine hospital main bhi who transfer ki application de di thi but kuch der pehle un logo ne bola main abhi nhi ja sakti mujhe ek month yaha rukni padegi
Riddhima: Par aise kaise I know humare jane ki baat ek week bad thi but ab kya karungi...(then thinking something)ok ape k kam karo yeh apartment to ek month baad khali karni thi apko ek hi month late hone wali hai to ap yehi ruk jao abhi k liye main aur Minnie chali jati hoon aur apki kaam ho jay to bol dena I'll book ur ticket..
Lovely:Ok Ji yeh changi rahegi tusi log jao menu bas kuch hi din ki deri hogi

Saying this lovely got to Minnie's room at upstairs to help her in packing

Meanwhile riddhima back to her lappy to cancel the ticket but she got a call which tells her she need to go somewhere urgent so after informing Minnie & lovely she got out & the ticket thing totally escaped from her mind

At night
Their flight will be started at 1 in the night & they thought they will go out at 11 so that they don't have to rush when they got in to airport moreover riddhima have to cancel the ticket which she booked for lovely even for her best friend who is now not going coz her friend meet with an accident but she can't cancel her all tickets as Minnie is with her & 2^nd she got a call from home saying if she can come fast as there is some emergency
Here when they enter in the airport a gush of air touches riddhima's face she was wearing a Electric lavender with silver design done salwar suit

Minnie wear a Carolina blue shirt & blue faded jeans wear walked in with her
Riddhima don't know why but feel something important gonna happen in her life...

Same time near the ticket place a guy wearing black jacket black jeans were standing & talking with the person standing opposite the desk means the assistant there a girl who was wearing dark blue coat and white shirt and a lady hat with short navy blue uniform with a name plate at her chest indicating her name as lotus

Guy: Hey beautiful
Lotus (smiling towards him): Good evening sir how can I help u?
Guy (while talking just staring at her eyes): Actually I came to take a ticket to India but now thinking to ask for a job at airport to accompany u with ur work
Lotus (Smiling & blushing a little at his flirtier behavior said): Sorry to inform u sir but both of them are unbillable right now
Guy (Showing a dejected feelings at his face): Don't say that plz my little heart with break into pieces
Lotus: Sorry sir but next flight for India is all booked u can go only if any one cancel a ticket from that otherwise u have to wait sir till the next flight
Guy(Now being little serious): Can u plz re-check I really need to go
Lotus(Re-checked & then inform): Sorry sir no ticket is available
Guy: Can u tell me about the next flight
Lotus: That will be at next day sir this is the last flight for today
Guy(Got a call): excuse me

Meanwhile Riddhima canceled the ticket & when she was going towards Minnie whom she let sit on waiting area she bumped with the guy but before the guy turn she said sorry & gone from there. The guy turn but can't see her face just saw the dupatta of her which very slowly touch his face with the breeze...

& BG music play
the starting instrumental music of Tu hi tu from Kick

But the music stop when lotus called him

Lotus: Excuse me Sir(the guy come towards her) there is a good news for u sir one ticket is just cancel a few minite back u can took it if u want so should I book it sir?
Guy(smiling as he got the ticket then again back to his flirt image): Hey 1^st of all don't call me sir I feel like a 60year oldies & 2^nd of course book the ticket after all u arranged it so difficultly how could I refuse(winking at her)
Lotus: Sir for not addressing u as Sir I need to know ur name 1^st & will u plz tell me which name i should book the ticket
Guy(Acting like sigh): What to do after meeting gaze with u I almost forget to introduce my name...Hi.I'm Armaan Malik.& ticket also got in this name young lady

Lotus(doing some work at computer): Mr.mallik u have to collect ur ticket from next counter
Armaan: Will u be at there also
Lotus:No mr.mallik another colleague of mine will help u there
Armaan: Well that's disappointing. But It's ok nice to meet u miss lotus

Then armaan gone & collect his ticket.

Here Riddhima made Minnie eat her medicines & food properly & ask her to wait there she will be back.
She gone for the bags for checking as after minnie's checking done she requested the officers siting their to let her sit at waiting area till they done their checking with luggage. As they have to board the languages later so she gone for a minimal check where the officers made some mistakes & as a result the trolley handle broke...

Above in this problems she got some more problem when she was canceling the ticket more of it a guy bumped to her while coming back to Minnie & the guy was holding a kid whose chocolate messed hand touched with Minnie's white coat which was at her hand was spoiled due to as it was minnie's fav coat so she got a bit upset.

So more of it Riddhima was little bit disturbed with all this continuous problems

After 1hour all passenger asked to be boarded on plane...While riddhima & Minnie enter in the plane Minnie said she wanna use washroom an airhostess volunteer though riddhima want to stay but Minnie asked her to go so hesitantly she gone at their seat & see a guy covering his face with a magazine Siting at her chair she re check her ticket then said: Excuse me

But didn't got any reply she called out at mere time but after that when she didn't get any reply she searched if there any airhostess near them but she didn't saw any one.so she uncovered the magazine from the persons face...

& the next moment 3shout filled the place...

That's all for now...
I know its not much entertaining like before
& even shorter then before
But don't know why isse jayada nhi hui mujhse
So todays quiz
Who is the guy siting on riddhima's chair?
& who r the three person who shout

Next part will be posted soon tab tak
Khuda hafiz...

Non writer attempting dear devil act...
Rupkotha

lvs u all...
Tc

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

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Wohooo... Pehli baar meri guess sahi huva hai hahahaha...

So here comes the heroine at lasttt... Uff kaha ti yaar hehhe...

Hmm so she is going back to India ... Accha hai... Jaldi hero se bhi milenge...

Then Armaan and Minnie scene...

Poor Armaan koh kaha pasa diya yeh Minnie ne hahaha...

I was imagine the part when Sister lovely sit and the place shake hahaha...

Then Armaan sitting like a scared little kid...

Minnie is just naughty like in DMG and Love her muwahhh

Then the description of Riddhima house woh superb ta...

Hmmm mujhe toh pehle se hi pata ta Minnie ki behen hogi yeh Ridz...

Maine mention nehi ki kyunki meri guessing bohot kharab hoti hai...

Yeh kia, abhi bhi Minnie ki real name ke liyeh wait karna padega.. ufff... aur kitna wait hah...

Waise I love the apartment description... Its like a dream to see such a wonderful place...

Aur Ridz ke room toh superbbb hai...

Yeh ridz ki best friend koan hai beyyy...

Oh no, Sister lovely has to stay back... Koi nehi, woh kuch din baad join karenge...

Love the way Minnie make up with Riddhima for being late...

I love this new bonding of Riddhima with Minnie... I m sure this is gonna be sooo cute...

Finallyyy, they are in airport...

Armaan flirting with the attender in the counter hahaha...

hero and heroine takra gaya lekin dono ne ek dusre koh dekha tak nehi...

Arey wah, Armaan koh milgaya ticket... Thanks to Ridz hehehe...

Lekin yeh kiya, dono ne ek dusre koh dekha nehi...

Finally they are in same flight...

Omg Ridzy ne kisko dekhaaa... Armaan hi hoga I m sure...

Aur dono ne chilla ya kyunnn...

Kiya suspense pe chod diya baby girl...

So meri guessing hai woh teen log jo chillaya woh ridz Armaan and Minnie...Aur waha chair pe woh Armaan hoga...

ab kaise kyun chillaya tu hi bata doh...

uske liyeh jaldi jaldi update kardo next part...

Love the whole part...

It was short but worth to read...

Pictures was perfect and I love woh Armaan shocked expression wala pic hahaha..

Muwahhh, Love u...

Take care...

Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Nice part 👏👏

Finally the girl was Ridzi,

I loved the pics, they matched with the sequences,

So Minnie is Riddhima's sister,

And the songs were also really good,

and who screamed when Riddhima removed the magazine, mmm...maybe the first person was Armaan, then the other Riddhima and the third Minnie or sister Lovely...🤪I really don't konw about this one...

And continue soon, waiting for next part eagerly...

Thanks for the PM.😊

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
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Wohooo... Pehli baar meri guess sahi huva hai hahahaha...
So here comes the heroine at lasttt... Uff kaha ti yaar hehhe...
Hmm so she is going back to India ... Accha hai... Jaldi hero se bhi milenge...

Then Armaan and Minnie scene...
Poor Armaan koh kaha pasa diya yeh Minnie ne hahaha...
I was imagine the part when Sister lovely sit and the place shake hahaha...
Then Armaan sitting like a scared little kid...
Minnie is just naughty like in DMG and Love her muwahhh

Then the description of Riddhima house woh superb ta...
Hmmm mujhe toh pehle se hi pata ta Minnie ki behen hogi yeh Ridz...
Maine mention nehi ki kyunki meri guessing bohot kharab hoti hai...
Yeh kia, abhi bhi Minnie ki real name ke liyeh wait karna padega.. ufff... aur kitna wait hah...
Waise I love the apartment description... Its like a dream to see such a wonderful place...
Aur Ridz ke room toh superbbb hai...

Yeh ridz ki best friend koan hai beyyy...
Oh no, Sister lovely has to stay back... Koi nehi, woh kuch din baad join karenge...
Love the way Minnie make up with Riddhima for being late...
I love this new bonding of Riddhima with Minnie... I m sure this is gonna be sooo cute...
Finallyyy, they are in airport...

Armaan flirting with the attender in the counter hahaha...
hero and heroine takra gaya lekin dono ne ek dusre koh dekha tak nehi...
Arey wah, Armaan koh milgaya ticket... Thanks to Ridz hehehe...
Lekin yeh kiya, dono ne ek dusre koh dekha nehi...

Finally they are in same flight...
Omg Ridzy ne kisko dekhaaa... Armaan hi hoga I m sure...
Aur dono ne chilla ya kyunnn...
Kiya suspense pe chod diya baby girl...
So meri guessing hai woh teen log jo chillaya woh ridz Armaan and Minnie...Aur waha chair pe woh Armaan hoga...
ab kaise kyun chillaya tu hi bata doh...
uske liyeh jaldi jaldi update kardo next part...

Love the whole part...
It was short but worth to read...
Pictures was perfect and I love woh Armaan shocked expression wala pic hahaha..
Muwahhh, Love u...
Take care...

i know...
Kuch dino se boht critical quiz de rhi thi toh socha thodi si easy de du
u see ab tak to koi sahi guess nhi kar pa rhi thi isiliye...
Aur heroine,...
Hmmm...let me think
Kaha thi kaha thi...*tapping finger on cheeks*
ha abhi nhi bataungi...
Age pado pata chal jayegi...😉😆

maja aya na...
Main bhi likhte waqt wohi soch rhi thi...
Aur i was like apne writing pe khud has rhi thi...😆
me too love her na...isiliye to aise shararatoon pe daal deti hoon...😉

Aur boht wait...kyun ki maine abhi part 8 likh rhi hoon & i don't right her full name yet...
So keep waiting...

main kyun batau kon hai...
Jo bhi hai...
Baad me pata chalegi na...
abhi to u can keep guessing for that...
Kyun ki maine bhi nhi sochi abhi tak kisko banau uski best frnd...😉😛😆

Btw achi baat hai lovely has to stay back...
Kyun achi baat hai woh bhi nhi bataungi.😛

Cute...lets see cute hoti hai yea kuch aur...😆

yeh to armaan ki speciality hai...intro nhi padi thi kya...wohi pe to bvatayi thi with song...😆

are abhi kaha
Milna to ho hi jayegi...
Aur kya kya ajube hogi woh bhi pata chal jayegi...
Btw nazar se nazar takrane bas kuch hi palo ki der hai...
So dion't worry

Hmmm
Lets see...
isbaar sahi hoti hai yea wrong
but don't worry woh bhi pata chal jayegi in next part kyun chillayi..
Kis liye chilayi..
Kiski wajah se chilayi...
aur kon kon chilayi...

APU
DID U SAY IT WAS SHORT...
ITS the same length as before...
but thodi si cut ki maine coz from lst parts mujhe 2part me post karni padti thi aur boht time lag jati hai...
Toh maine ek hi bar me post ho jay uski koushish kia bas...

lvs u alsooo
Dherrr
Saraaa
Tc

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Jess2014
Nice part 👏👏
Finally the girl was Ridzi,
I loved the pics, they matched with the sequences,
So Minnie is Riddhima's sister,

And the songs were also really good,

and who screamed when Riddhima removed the magazine, mmm...maybe the first person was Armaan, then the other Riddhima and the third Minnie or sister Lovely...🤪I really don't konw about this one...

And continue soon, waiting for next part eagerly...

Thanks for the PM.😊

Thanks a lot...😳
yea...its ridz
wht to do...
I was just thinking aur kitna sabko intezaar karwau...😉
yea...minnie is the little one
well lets see who it is...
Btw as its 4parts complete & one month complete for this ff
as i promised before i'll give the gift...
So i'll think i;m gonna give it today...😉
& i think for that u don't really need to wait more..😉😆

wells...
lv u...
Tc

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Thanks a lot...😳
yea...its ridz
wht to do...
I was just thinking aur kitna sabko intezaar karwau...😉
yea...minnie is the little one
well lets see who it is...
Btw as its 4parts complete & one month complete for this ff
as i promised before i'll give the gift...
So i'll think i;m gonna give it today...😉
& i think for that u don't really need to wait more..😉😆

wells...
lv u...
Tc