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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Unresed on pg 35😊


P.s: Sorry for late unres.



U r not l@te so
don't be sorry...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hey dear,


This part was awesome,
Loved it...❤️

So in the start,
Holi preparations are going on
and in Heaven Hill,
Armaan caught Gappu eating sweets
and decided to scare him 😆
and after Gappu threw colours on Armaan
and the song sequence was nice, especially the
way you divided it, so that both sides could be seen
but then Padma interrupts the scene
but Shanky applies coulours on her and there is
another song sequence which was nice as well

And In Rangin Ashiyana,
who was the one who screamed??

And after, Armaan and the rest are going inside RA
And outside, there are lots of mouth watering food items
and the decoration is also amazing...

Finally, Amaan and Ridz will be meeting
in the next part, can't wait for the part 😊

Update next part soon
and I can understand that you are busy,
don't worry, write whenever it is comfortable for you.😊

Thanks for the PM

Take care
Luv u...🤗







Hey jess

Hws u


I'm so glad that u took time to read it😳
N u like it😳😳


Well who scream u will got to know once next part be posted😉


Who said in next part they are gonna meet😉😛


Well lets see kab milte hai😉


Well i already write all the holi special parts

But just wasn't getting time to post aj thodi mila so lets see😊


Shayed aj hi next post ho jay
I'm glad that u like the part😳


Lv u
Tc


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey everyone...
I'm Buck with new update n I know its bit smaller this time also but I assure to give u all a longer part in next..
& one more thing i want to dedicate this part to someone very very very very n usse bhi jayda wali veryyy special person...
Apu its for u 😳
So here goes the story...
Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..Shukriya..


Precap:
Rangon ki barsaat
Rishtoon ki pyar bhari sath
kya dono milega
Ya mulakat ab bhi adhuri hi rahega...


Part 15

Hearing atul Anji said: Are atul tum us waqt bahar gaye the na call karne tab pata hai kya hua?


Flashback..
When both girls screamed all was at living room & they both saw both riddhima & Minnie come out from their room with a dupatta which in both's hand which was white but someone put color on it

Padma (Watching them coming asked): kya hua?
Minnie (dramatically): Ap puch rahi ho kya hua?Ap yeh pucho kya nhi hua?
Padma (shaking head at her overdramatic daughter): Bata phir kya nhi hua?
Riddhima (giving a yeh kabhi nhi sudhar sakti look to minnie then turn towards Padma & said): Mumma main batati hoon (then showing the stole in her hand) Dekho apke ladle bete ne kya kia meri safed chunri ko ek dam color se kya kia?
Minnie (Showing her stole also to Padma): Ha mera bhi dekho..
Riddhima (continued complaining): Mumma u know na aj ki dress code hai sare light color ki dress pehnegi but all have to wear a white stole & u know I only have one white stole & see apke ladle ne kya kia...(forwarding the dupatta even minnie show her stole)
Padma (look at the stoles and then at abhi who was trying to skip from there said sternly): abhimaniyon,(Abhi stand straight then slowly turning towards padma)tumne aisa kiya????
Abhi (looks at his pyari behnas then confidently and with damn care attitude said):ha mumma wo kisi ne mujhe subah boli thi bura na mano holi hai to maine bas wohi form use kia
Riddhima and Minnie pouted
Riddhima (still with pout): Ha par it's the only white dupatta with us ab dress kaise pehnugi
Abhi (naughtyly): so what dress me thodi hi rang diya yehi pehenle koi pucha to bol dena pehle se hi holi khel rhi thi
All laughed expect Minnie and riddhima watching their parents also laugh Minnie towards Padma and riddhima towards Shashank said: Mumma/Papa ap dono bhi...
Then pouting both sit on sofa when whole family knows now they are in trouble if this two ladies gussa ho gayi tab to shammat a jayegi so 1st of all shashank go forward
Shashank (sitting in between two ladies): sorry beta chal koi nhi dusri dress pehen le meri betiyaan to har cheez me best lagti hai
Riddhima: papa u know me na main pehen leti but wo maine kal packing open ki and sirf two set dress utar k aj subah hi baki sari laundry k liye bheja so mere pass ek bhi nhi hai aur..
While Minnie said (sturnbnly): Aur mujhe sirf wohi white wali dupatta chahiye mujhe nhi pata kuch bhi
Looking at her both daughter padma sighed and come forward to solve the problem: abhi ab tumne kharab ki to tum hi le jao in dono ko tab tak riddhima jo tu abhi pehne hui hai wohi pehenke chali ja ake change kar lena (abhi who was watching his plan backfired on him only tried to protest but Padma didn't let him talk and said) not a word abhimaniyon
While tweety said: Keh diya na ... bas keh diya![Movie: Kabhi Khushi Kabhie Gham Star: Amitabh Bachchan & joya bachan both]

Making the atmosphere light
Then abhi took his sister to go out for their shopping who was full mood to looting their lovely brother
Flashback end


Atul: par wo log ayegi kab tak????i mean kuch der me guests ana start ho jayegi na
Padma: maine call ki thi but they said traffic ki wajah se they are getting late..
Armaan (with disappointment): ok abhi main chalti hoon
Padma: aise kaise beta abhi to party shuru hone wali hai and u didn't even meet..
Armaan (cutting her): wo badi mumma i mean aunty
Padma (cutting her with smile): tum bhi badi mumma hi bolo karo batai thi na pichli bar vul gaye..
Armaan (making apologizecal face): sorry aunty sorry i mean badi mumma wo actually aunty i mean bade mumma actually wo aj mujhe ek assignment k liye jana tha last minute cancel nhi kar sakti but i'll try to attend the party but at least waha half to cover karna hi padega na..may be main late ho jau don't wait for me..
Shashank: it's not done na armaan u came here aur itna sara kam leke
Armaan: wo uncle mera matlab..
Shashank (cutting him in between): bade papa..not uncle itna bhi budha nhi hoon yaar
Armaan: ok wo bade papa actually mujhe holi party k bare me aj hi pata chala so can't help it either i have two more assignment ek ko to cancel karliya but this one and raat me ek aur hai can't change those so may be dono k bich thodi time leke i'll join u guyss now plz give me permission to go..
Smiling towards him they all let him go taking promise to come back at function
Armaan got into the car while others comes to bid him bye was weaving standing on the door while his car just go away
While bg me played the tone of milenge milenge
As soon his car got out from the gate another Black BMW X5 car enter though the main gate making the way to enter in the house
3 person step out of it
While both girls there go inside shouting mumma
& the other guy follow them shaking his head


Inside the mansion
Padma & others turn around to see their kids entering in the house with full smile..
All meet them in door way only. Without bi n gappu as they were inside only
Riddhima: ap sab yaha kyun khadi ho?
Anji (pouting): Kya ridzz thodi der pehle nhi a sakti thi kya phir tum sab se ammy ka bhi mulakaat ho jati...abhi humne usi ko bye kar rahe the yaha se..
Riddhima: Phir wo gaya kyun abhi kuch der me party bhi to shuru ho jayegi..
Atul: Wo uski kuch appointments thi pehle se & he can't cancel it so he need to rush..
Minnie: To wo holi nhi khelega i mean party me nhi ayega?
Anjali: he would come back but it may be late
Riddhima (watching her gloomy face): Chill na di we will meet na waise bhi hum to yehi hai kahi bhagi thodi ja rhi hoon...Waise where is muski ap sab yaha ho wo kyun nazar nhi a rhi hai?
Anjali: Wo to apna ghar gayi hai will be back in a while..
Atul (cutting her in between): Waise riddhima where is ur frnds anji ne boht batai but kabhi mila nhi...
Anjali: Ha wohi main bhi puchne wali thi kaha hai wo pagal log maine do se to mil liye baki kab ayenge..?
Ridhima: Patience Di & DR patience and don't worry they are on their way back..so chill..now aplog andar to chalo yaha gate k samne kitne der khade rahogi..
Padma: yea all of u three n others come inside...
They all got inside in living room n there riddhima saw an elderly lady n a small boy was siting
Anji: Ridz meet my bi(while pointing towards the elderly lady)n bi yeh hai ridz u remember ek bar apse phone pe baat ki thi..n yeh hai abhi her elder brother n this little one(while ruffling her hairs) is shanaya hum ghar pe ise minnie bulate hai..
Three of them touch bi's leg to seek for blessing..

Bi found it quite impressive n bless them all with whole heartedly while the little boy was all aww to watching riddhima..

Anji: n guys this is gappu my chota devar
G: its Adri Mallik bhabi...(all laugh at his defense)
Ri(while riddhima with smile n pulling his cheeks): Par mujhe to yeh gappu naam jayada pasand hai..
Gappu (with cute smile): To phir ap gappu bulao(n look at her admiringly as riddhima's sweet voice he loved it just like he love anji)
All elders started to talk while riddhima notice gappu is sitting in a corner silently n getting bored..
She first look around to ask minnie to accompany him but minnie took more interest in having her juice watching it she smile n shift in the sofa near gappu..N started to talk with him..
Ri: Hi
G: Hey
Ri:So adri
G: its ok u can call me gappu...
Ri: Ok then gappu tell me Mujhse dosti karogi????(while forwarding hand)
G(with smile shake hand then got confuse n say): Ha But naa main apko kya bulaw phir kyun ki dost ko to naam leke bulate hai but ap to mujhse badi ho...
Ri(acting like thinking): Uhhmm...point...So kya kare???????ek kaam karo u also call me by my name na...
G: Nhi na aise thodi hi hoti hai...
Ri(act like thinking): y don't u give me a nick name then?
G: but kya naam du...
Ri: Socho socho...
G: umm ap mere frnd ho n girl bhi to main apko girlfriend bulaw.. aur ap bhi ek naam do na..
Ri: Ha kyun nhi par let's see tum mujhe girlfriend bulaogi to main tumhe boyfriend bula loon...
G(with excitement): Ha kyun nhi...
They talk like this for a while anji look at them n said: Yeh humare gappu hi hai na?
Ri: Di ap aise kyun bol rhi ho?
Anji: Kyunki aj yeh kisi ladki se aise baat kar rhi hai without hesitation even in first meet.. That's miracle..
Ri(smiling at them): kya di tang mat karo na kitna pyara to hai..
Anji tease gappu saying: Oho someone is defending others...Lagta hai mujhe meri devrani mil gayi... waise baat chalau kya shadi ki?

While other laugh making gappu embarrassed n riddhima pull his checks as he was looking so cute while blushing

Shashank (joining with anji): Waise idea to bura nhi hai, what's say?
Hearing it gappu who turned all red hide his face n hug riddhima who was near him.
Ri(with hawww): Kya papa ap bhi...kyun tang kar rahe ho...
Anji: Wah kya pyaar hai...
Ri: Di tang na karo meri bf ko..
Sh(with wide open eyes): Yeh kab hua?????(while riddhima rolled eyes)
Evryone have a good laugh over this matter
n talk a few moments more..
Then two girl rushed to ready as only they left to be ready for the party..

After few minutes a Purple color tata nano stop outside the main door..

A girl wearing Lavender mist color salwar suit with white dupatta as per holi party dress code n hairs put in French braid come out from driver's seat while another girl wearing Peach color patiala salwar suit with white dupatta n hair tied in pinned back bangs come out.& both reached the garden & the 1st girl to be awestruck with the decoration..

2nd girl: Dekha tere liye kitna late ho gayi...
1st Girl: oy koi late nhi hui abhi tak koi bhi nhi aya.,.
2nd girl: Oy tujhe maine boli thin a thodi izzat se baat kia kar badi hoon
1st Girl: sirf adhe min ka..

While a lady in Melon color salwar suit with white dupatta saw them & called cutting them in between their who is big argue: Are muski beta agayi tum(while the second girl turn around)
Second girl: yea Bade mumma (then turning towards the other girl gesture her to come in front then turning towards padma said) Bade mumma yeh meri behen hai madiha urf maddy..
Maddy (while folding hands): Namaste Aunty how's u?
Padma: Beta u also call me bade mumma like muski do & come i'll let u introduce to others..
Madiha meet the others while muski also join them...
After a while a girl wearing Pink Lavender color salwar suit with white dupatta n hair tied with simple white scarf in a loose side pony come from downstairs to go on garden as the guests starts coming but before that she wanted to do plan some Holi special things & she need help for that & the person who gonna help her is not to be seen till now..

As the girl go downstairs, She bumped with a girl there who is wearing apricot color sheath dress with white scarf with it & skinny white leggings n hair tied in side French braid, watching her there 1st girl said: Finally yaar Rapunzel u r here...
The other girl: Ha yaar a to gayi but baki sare hai kaha?
1st girl: Wo log tujhe to pata hi hai wo Mr.i knew it urf chalta phirta time machine always on time so abhi 10min baki hai wo kaise ajay pehle & that stupid fellow uski to time pe ane ki adat kabhi hui nhi so uski no ata pata ab ha anji di ayi hai so chal tujhe unse milwata hoon..
other girl: Kya yaar anji di ayi hui hai tune ab tak batai tak nhi tu bhi na yaar miss perfect sab kuch perfect kar kar k kabhi kabhi kitna bate karti rehti hai...[while the 1st girl open her mouth in a perfect 'O' shape]Ab muh maat bana meri princess Diana chall...
1st girl: Main bate kar rhi thi seriously now Rapunzel u know what u r saying? Tune hi to inna sara sawal puchi main to bas jawab de rhi thi,Waise di se mil lena but pehle mere sath chal kuch kaam hai...
2nd girl: Kya..? Dekh main abhi..
1st girl: shut up Shilpa..& come with me right now..
2nd girl: Fine chal rhi hoon yaar ridz but aise bhag mat gir jaungi...

Well the girl in Pink Lavender color salwar suit was none other than riddhima...n the 2nd girl is shilpa & riddhima call her Rapunzel as she is a hairstylist so riddhima call her that only & shilpa call her miss perfect as she always up to make everything perfect..n sometime princess Diana as she is such a princess so beautiful elegant & papa ki princess to hai hi wo...


After few minutes both girl come to the garden to see everyone is there without their two frnds...
Riddhima introduce shilpa to atul,anji,Muski n madiha & Muski introduce madiha to others
When a boy in Papaya Whip color vest with a white color shirt over it come inside the house,He saw riddhima & other in a corner while few people playing holi & some 3 lady & one man also standing with them but their back was facing towards him so he can't see their face
Riddhima & shilpa look towards him & watching him both look at their mobile clock then looking at each other said together: just on time as always mr.chalta phirta time machine...[then run towards him while in between the road put some color]

But before that a little girl wearing Baby blue color high neck low west dress with a white scarf hanging though her hair tying up her small hair in a stylish way said while putting a small bit of color on his cheeks while asking him to bend down: Happy holi Robin hood
While the guy smile @ her & said gladly while taking single bit of color from her hand & coloring her said: Same too u tinker bell

While ridz n shilpa come along & putting color all over his face said: Happy holiii Robin hood (imitating that little girl with a most innocent smile)
The guy (looking at his own state): yeh kya tha...
Ridz: Kyun mr. robin hood ko acha nhi lagi...
Shilpa: tch tch tch par kya kare hum teri tinkar bell jaisi itni achi to hai nhi jo thodi si lagayenge aur chod denge so bare it mr time machine urf Rahoool...

Well the guiy is none other than rahoool..

But before he could react on their talk a guy wearing Mint Green color vest with wite shirt n white trouser join them white putting color on rahool's face making him more rangin said: Happy holi buddy(While the girls laugh at them)

Rahool bearing all color took a deep breath to cool himself down n calming a little bit said: Abe yaar holi hai pata hai but thodi to baksh de is bande ko...
While the little girl laughed while the guy put color on her face also making her stop laughing n said: Happy holi Minnie darling...
Well the little girl is none other than Minnie...
N before minnie could come over the shock the guy move towards shilpa n coloring her said: Happy holi chudail...
Shilpa shocked n next second said: chudail kisko bola be sid k bache ruk tu...

Well the guy is sid not sid k bache 😛

Sid who was approaching to bring more color from the table so he could color riddhima too was coming back when shilpa took the action shilpa ne badi hi pyar se sid ko jor se tangdi marke gira diya n sid fall just on his face..while minnie got up on him n while turning him over now facing upper side n sitting just above his chest while rub her hands on his face making whole face colored while shilpa come with a full bucket of water n as soon minnie got up shilpa put whole color on him making him full wet.

While riddhima n rahool who was standing side was trying to control their laugh so rahool excuse himself in bahana of have drink n riddhima also leave in some excuse ...

While anji n atul n others come there while suddenly realizing it's sid atul said: Sid tu yaha???
Anji: Are atul main to batana bhul hi gayi thi sid ridz ka frnd hai n shilpa se to tum mil hi chuke ho waise sid teri aise halat kisne kiya party me enter hote hi puri puri bhega diya
Then Minnie describe the happenings animatedly by now muski n madiha is also here...
Maddy (while controlling her laugh): I never knew that sid tera bhi koi aisa haal kar sakta hai(hearing it all laugh)
By now Sid who got up look angrily towards shilpa then said: badi hasi a rhi hai tujhko waise aj holi k din tu rukha sukha kyun hogi(then taking a bucket full of water splashing it on shilpa)le ab hua HAPPY holi(while putting extra effort on happy)

While shilpa got angry n run behind him taking up the wood pichkari from nearby table to hit him with it instead of coloring n sid run for his life..


After a while riddhima n rahul also come back to see others talking n shilpa n sid is missing..
Ridhima: Di shilpa kaha hai aur Sid?
While others turn towards her watching the person with her they hot shocked.
Atul (in shock): Rahul tu yaha? tune to bola tha u can't make it up then tu yaha aya kaise ? tune to address bhi nhi li thi, tu ammy k sath aya hai kya?
Rahul (in shock): Tumlog yaha kya kar rahe ho i mean maine bola tha i've to go to one of my friend's holi party or yehi hai wo ridz hi to meri frnd hai but tum log to kahi aur jane wale the phir tumlog yaha?
Anji (with surprised look): u mean tum hi ridz ki gang ki chalta phirta time machine?
Maddy(with confused look): What chalta phirta time machine?
Ri(with confusion): Wait a min di ap log ek dusre ko jante ho?
Rahul: riddhima yeh to champ hai u remember i told u guys about them he is my boss urf best frnd cum brother..
Ri (with surprise): OMG DR u r rahul's champ we are all related n we never realize...n di ha yehi hai humare group ki chalta phirta time machine n maddy isko hum time machine isliye bulate hai coz yeh humesha har jagah exact time pe pohch ta hai chahe kuch bhi ho jay..
Atul: that means ridz u r miss perfect urf princess Diana of rahul's back to Paris gang?
Ri (giggling at his intro): yea i guess so..

While they set their catching up riddhima got up to check on shilpa n sid n muski too who were not be seen from a long time..

As she turn to roam after a while she saw a guy n a girl is fighting actually the girl is beating the guy while the guy is just trying to escape while another girl is trying to stop them by going near when she saw who are they she just screamed: Stop

All three stop n look back at her while riddhima said: kya kar rahe ho yaar bache nhi ho tum log (the girl who was beating n the guy stood their lowering their head)

While the girl who was trying to stop them said: ha yaar ridz dekh na main pani lene ayi thi tab se yeh log lad rahe hai aur chup hone ka naam hi nhi le rahe hai..
Ri: I know yaar muski indono ka to(then turning towards them said) shilpa n sid i m talking to u guyss at least look towards me(they look upward)kya bachpana hai yaar aj holi hai aj to kamse kaam mat lado...say sorry (they turn their head opposite making face like they not gonna say that)now..(She said sternly)
While making face sid said: Sorry
While shilpa said: its ok
Sid: Ridz yaar dekh chudail ne sorry nhi bola..
Shilpa (shout again): Chudail kisko bola be u bhatakti hui atma...

Before they could say further riddhima distract them by taking shilpa away with her n saying muski to come while muski excuse herself saying she will be back in a while as suddenly she got a call from hospital

While sid go back to others meeting atul,anji n maddy
And here riddhima n shilpa go somewhere to execute their holi special plan 😈
After a while
Muski was coming back to others to play holi while suddenly in mid-way he bumped with someone making both of them fall backward while rubbing themselves n getting up they look towards with whom they bumped next second both screamed together: Tu????????
That's all for today...
This part couldn't have complete without few person
rj n ayu lv u yaar for making upgraded my holi skill n hindi skill too
Lv u guys
More holi fun are coming up soon so stay tuned
I don't know next week I could update or not as I have midterm lined up let's see
Milte hai kuch hi dino me...😳
Lv u all
Khuda Hafiz
Tc
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Hiyyaaa BabyGirl...
Hayye, yeh kya...
Tumne??? Mujhe????
Yeah part specially dedicate kia...
*hugs tight and swinging side to side...*
Muwahhh Love You derrr Saraaa...

Now lets move to the part...
Mujhe bohot jaldi jaldi comment likhna hai...
I just hope main sab kuch cover karlun hehehe...

Thank god start se tumne yeah clear kardi woh ladkiyon kyun chillayi...
Hahahaha, Abhi ne badla le liya...
Lolz, he was trying to leave from there but Padma ne usko rokh diya...
Hayye, Ridz and Minnie is sooo cuteee...
Pouting pouting... hehehe...
Bechara Abhi, prank toh khel li but usko jaana pada dono koh new dupatta dilane hahaha...
Ghar ke betiya gussa hogayi toh Shashank ne mana ne ki pehla step liya...
Aur Abhi koh dono ke saat bhej diya...
Oh ho, tabhi Riddhima and Minnie se nehi milpayi Armaan koh...
Woh toh ta hi nehi ghar pe...

Flash back mein sab kuch clear hogayi muwaahhh...
Hahaha Armaan is so cute...
Badi ma aunty madi ma ke tohda tour le li hahaha...
Wah wah, Gupta's like Armaan, issiliyeh toh itni jaldi usse badi ma aur bade papa bhulwa rahe ho...

Armaan gaya aur woh log aagaye.. ufff...
Anjali ne sahi kaha, tohdi der pehle nehi aa sakte...
Waise Armaan bhi toh rukh sakta ta, lekin nehi kaam bhi aaj hi aana ta kya...
Holi ke din koan kaam karte hai yaar, itna bhi nehi pata is Armaan koh...

Chalo Armaan nehi toh kya huva...
Bi and Gappu se toh mili Ridz and Minnie...
Ayye hayye, Bi koh Riddhima pasand aayi...
lagta hai ab AR koh paas laane ki sabse important kaam Bi karenge...
Haan haan I don't know what must be going on in ur mind...
Sahi bhi ho sakta hai nehi bhi..
Aur yeh bhi jaanti hoon tum kahenge wait karo... Tik hai karti hoon na, aur choice bhi toh nehi hai hehehe...
Hai kya???? ;)

When Anjali introduce Gappu hahaha...
Oh mahnnn, he is sooo cute...
I really love his character as I said before even ;)
Lolz, the way Gappu introduce telling his full name...
Hayye, waha Armaan and Minnie ki bonding... Aur yaha tumne Ridz and Gappu ke bonding bana liya...
Super cool and awesome it was how u show Ridz and Gappu conversation...
I love their conversation and how Riddhima make Gappu comfortable around her...
Awww bf gf bana liya hehehe... its sooo cute...

Lolz, Anjali tease Gappu for being so open with Riddhima and not shy...
Waise kyun nehi, Gappu koh bhi toh Ridz pasand aayi hai just like his Anjali bhabhi...
Hahahah it was fun to read everyone teasing Ridz and Gappu...
I agree, they would look cute together sharing that sweet bonding...
Wah wah Shashank ne bhi mazak kya hahahaha...
Awww Gappu sharma gaya aur Ridz saving him from others teasing hehehe...

Then here comes others...
Main soch rahi hoon yeh log koan ho sakti hai hehehe...
But the way they were talking mujhe toh samajh mein aaya ek Muski hai...
Phir yaad aaya Muski ki behen bhi hai so , Maddy must be other girl...
Yeyyy, I guess righttt... Wohooo...
By god yeh dono toh mast se ladte hai hahahha... I love their bonding which is something new ;)

Phirse tumne mujhe confused kardi...
Main sochne laga yeh Rapunzel koan hai... Pehle bhi suna hai lekin yaad nehi aaya koan kisse use karte hai yeh nick name...
When they talk about the mr. stupid fellow, i thought they were talking about Sid hehehe...
Ahaan yeh toh apni Ridz and Shilpu hai hehehe..
Wah wah, kya nickname diya haiii heheheh... Awesome...

Ahaan, finally Ridz and Shilpu ki mr, Chaltra phirta time machine aagaya...
Hmm in dono ke reaction koh dekhte mujhe toh yeh yakeen hogaya woh Sid nehi hai...
Poocho kyunnn...
Ridz phir bhi Sid ke saat tohda acche se behave karte hai...
Lekin Shilpa and Minnie kabhi nehi behave karenge acche se hahaha...
Waise Minnie ne toh tohda sa laga diya lekin Ridz and Shilpu ne pura face pe laga diya...
Ahaaan. yeh Rahul ho sakta hai... Woh aane wala ta na aur wohi hai jiske saat yeh dono itna bura nehi kar sakte hehehe...
I mean itna bura tohdina woh face pe rang lagaye...
Wohooo Correct...

Aur Rahul ke peeche peeche aagaya Sid...
Lambi umar hai wah wahhh...
Hahaha Sid ne Minnie and Shilpu koh mast se rang lagaya...
Bechara Sid, ab nehi bachenge dono ke haat se...
Panga liya hai Minnie aur Shilpu se, heir nehi ab Sid ki haahhaa...
OMG, I m laughing loudly... Hahahhaa...
Poor Sid, bhoot bana diya usko hahhaha...

Ahaaan, Sid met with Atul and Anjali here...
Lolz, Maddy ne mazak udaya poor Sid ka... hahahha...
Hahaha Shilpu and Sid ke jodi mast hogi if they ever fall in love hehehe...
Chalo Atul and Rahul toh milgaya yaha aur shock bhi hogaya hahaha..
Hailaaa, Atul itna zyada bolte hai...
Mujhe laga woh Anjali hoga jo yh sab sawal karenge Rahul se hehehe...
Wah wah, yeh sabko pata chal gaya yeh log relatives hai :P
Der se sahi, pata toh chal gaya hahahaha...

I knew yeh log Sid and Shilpa hogi aur woh jo usko rokh rahi hai woh Muski...
As Muski koh bohot der se dekha nehi baaki sabke saat hehehe...
Wah wah kya mast daata ridz ne Sid and Shilpu koh hahaha...
Dono dar ke chup toh hogaye... Accha huva Ridz ne Shilpu koh waha se le gaya...
Ahaan. means woh dono ke dhimag mein kuch chal raha hai...
Plan sshlan haan...

Ah ohhh... Yeh kisse takra gaya...
Mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai Muski ke expression padke woh aur koi nehi Rahul hoga...
Hmmm *Detective Mode On*
Chalo tum next part jab bhi time mile post karna...
Tab tak mein dekhti hoon yeh Rahul hai ya koi aur hehehhe...

It was awesome, fun, mast, and cool part BabyGirl...
Love and enjoy it to the core...
Hayye, tumne yeh mast part mujhe dedicate ki speciallyyy...
Muwaahhh :*
Love u soo soo soo muchhh...
Continue when u are free...
Take care <3
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Unresss...finalllyyy😛
Atlast time mil gaya...and this part was a BLAST!!!
Aapko pata hai I had a bariii siii smile while reading this part 😃
Abhi bhi naa...aaj ka hi din mila tha Ridz and Minnie ki dress gandi karney key liye!!
But that part was too funny...Tweety key bollywood dialogues beech beech mey...mai has has kar pagal ho jaati thi..!! XD
And chal Abhi ko punishment bhi mil gayi...Ridz and Minnie ko shopping karwana..hahaha 😆
But but Armaan and Ridhima miltey miltey reh gaye :( Idhar sey gaari gayi and udhar sey gaari ayi...but they both didn't saw each other 🥱
And then wo Gappu wala part was tooo muchhh cute!!! Bf and Gf Awww
Anji saying: Mujhey meri devrani mil gayi...and Shanky saying: Idea bura nahi hai...and Gapu becoming too much shy...itnaa cute part tha wo!! 😃
Lekin sab sey dhamakedaar part us key baad tha...that was Muskaan and Maddy's entry..!!! 😉
I LOVED IT DII...YOU ARE THE BEST :*
Next part mey thorii si nahi buhut confusion hui because of the nick names...
Rapunzal and Miss Perfect but then samajh mey aya it was Ridhima and Shilpa 😃
I enjoyed reading that part a loottt 👏
And then wo Mr. chalta phirta time machine wala part...hahahaa 😆
And how can I forget Sid and Shilpa's part..!!
Mujhey to phley hi lag raha tha yai chalta phirta time machine Raoooll hi ho sakta hai..!!
Par yai kon larai kar raha hai...hmmm
Sid and Shilpa?! Lol 😆
Mai almost bed sey gir gayi thi...that churail and BHATAKTI HUI AATMA parh kar..hahahaha
Par yai Muskii kis sey takraii?? Aur yai holi special plan kis pey execute honey wala hai??
So muchh suspense dii!! Jaldii update karnaa...
Loved this chapter tooo muchhh...
And I love you veryyy muchhh...take super duper care :*

Edited by MadihaKSGian - 10 years ago
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resss ...
i know u r going to kill me for this but i seriously don't know main unress kab karungi [:-P] [;-)]
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Hehhehehehhehe...
Ruuupppaaa darliinggg...
Pehle to idher aaa ... I want to pull ur chubby cheeksss...
*Rib crashing hug** muuuahhh...
Kia parts diyeee yr tuneee... Me to has has k lot pot ho gai...
Shilpa Sid kutte Billi ki tarha fight dishummm dishummm...
Sarey parts bht zabardast thyyy...
Yr armaan riddhima KO jaldi milao phir ye dono n fight karenge...
Majjja aa gaya ab jaldi se update kar
Loads of love
Take care
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Unresss
finally i hope u didn't post next part
okay now coming to the part first of all hmm "kahan se shuru karu tapping finger on my chin"
chal start se start karti hun
first vo ladkiya kyn chilayi
to abhi ne revenge le hi liya from ridhz nd minni by colouring their dupata par bechara khud hi phas gya kyn phir as par padma order use undono ko shopping pe le jana pda or isi vajah se armaan se nah mil paye *pout*
BTW i love that *pouting pouting *of mini nd ridhz
loved how Shashank came first to manofy his princess
then the flashback of armaan hmm it cleared everything
loved how anjali introduced armaan nd specially gappu
aww vo gappu or ridhz ki bonding is cute loved how ridhz is making him comfortable nd how gappu introduced himself with his real name
lol gf bf bana diya anjali ne dono ko nd shanky also tease gappu
nd he shied away so cute scene
so bi also like ridhz hmm kahin yeh arranged to nah hoga let see
yaar yeh holi pe koun kaam karte h
ab is kaam ki or abhi ke prank ki vajah ar ki meet hote hote reh gyi main bhi *pout*
yaar yeh phir se hit n miss ofo agar armaan 5 min ruk jata to ridhz se mil leta na
jab yeh new entry hui to mujhe confuse ho gyi
yeh kaun ho sakta sid to definitely nah coz mini ridhz or shilpa itne khush uske ane pe impossible or phir new name rakha uska to main or confuse but u clear it that its rahul phir mujhe yaad aya ki haan vo bhi yo ane wala tha
hahaha loved how he put color on their faces nd
anji or atul how they r shocked to know see him their but finally ek mystery to khuli sab le samne
lo mystery se yaad aya sid ki entry wah maza agaya
poor sid sab bechare ke peeche pade rehte h
ok again ab main thuk gyi or mujhe jana h so agar kuch reh gya ho to ab main kuch nah kar sakti kynki mujhe jana h
bye tc
luv u so much
muahhh
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Originally posted by: RihooHaws

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Hiyyaaa BabyGirl...
Hayye, yeh kya...
Tumne??? Mujhe????
Yeah part specially dedicate kia...
*hugs tight and swinging side to side...*
Muwahhh Love You derrr Saraaa...

Now lets move to the part...
Mujhe bohot jaldi jaldi comment likhna hai...
I just hope main sab kuch cover karlun hehehe...

Thank god start se tumne yeah clear kardi woh ladkiyon kyun chillayi...
Hahahaha, Abhi ne badla le liya...
Lolz, he was trying to leave from there but Padma ne usko rokh diya...
Hayye, Ridz and Minnie is sooo cuteee...
Pouting pouting... hehehe...
Bechara Abhi, prank toh khel li but usko jaana pada dono koh new dupatta dilane hahaha...
Ghar ke betiya gussa hogayi toh Shashank ne mana ne ki pehla step liya...
Aur Abhi koh dono ke saat bhej diya...
Oh ho, tabhi Riddhima and Minnie se nehi milpayi Armaan koh...
Woh toh ta hi nehi ghar pe...

Flash back mein sab kuch clear hogayi muwaahhh...
Hahaha Armaan is so cute...
Badi ma aunty madi ma ke tohda tour le li hahaha...
Wah wah, Gupta's like Armaan, issiliyeh toh itni jaldi usse badi ma aur bade papa bhulwa rahe ho...

Armaan gaya aur woh log aagaye.. ufff...
Anjali ne sahi kaha, tohdi der pehle nehi aa sakte...
Waise Armaan bhi toh rukh sakta ta, lekin nehi kaam bhi aaj hi aana ta kya...
Holi ke din koan kaam karte hai yaar, itna bhi nehi pata is Armaan koh...

Chalo Armaan nehi toh kya huva...
Bi and Gappu se toh mili Ridz and Minnie...
Ayye hayye, Bi koh Riddhima pasand aayi...
lagta hai ab AR koh paas laane ki sabse important kaam Bi karenge...
Haan haan I don't know what must be going on in ur mind...
Sahi bhi ho sakta hai nehi bhi..
Aur yeh bhi jaanti hoon tum kahenge wait karo... Tik hai karti hoon na, aur choice bhi toh nehi hai hehehe...
Hai kya???? ;)

When Anjali introduce Gappu hahaha...
Oh mahnnn, he is sooo cute...
I really love his character as I said before even ;)
Lolz, the way Gappu introduce telling his full name...
Hayye, waha Armaan and Minnie ki bonding... Aur yaha tumne Ridz and Gappu ke bonding bana liya...
Super cool and awesome it was how u show Ridz and Gappu conversation...
I love their conversation and how Riddhima make Gappu comfortable around her...
Awww bf gf bana liya hehehe... its sooo cute...

Lolz, Anjali tease Gappu for being so open with Riddhima and not shy...
Waise kyun nehi, Gappu koh bhi toh Ridz pasand aayi hai just like his Anjali bhabhi...
Hahahah it was fun to read everyone teasing Ridz and Gappu...
I agree, they would look cute together sharing that sweet bonding...
Wah wah Shashank ne bhi mazak kya hahahaha...
Awww Gappu sharma gaya aur Ridz saving him from others teasing hehehe...

Then here comes others...
Main soch rahi hoon yeh log koan ho sakti hai hehehe...
But the way they were talking mujhe toh samajh mein aaya ek Muski hai...
Phir yaad aaya Muski ki behen bhi hai so , Maddy must be other girl...
Yeyyy, I guess righttt... Wohooo...
By god yeh dono toh mast se ladte hai hahahha... I love their bonding which is something new ;)

Phirse tumne mujhe confused kardi...
Main sochne laga yeh Rapunzel koan hai... Pehle bhi suna hai lekin yaad nehi aaya koan kisse use karte hai yeh nick name...
When they talk about the mr. stupid fellow, i thought they were talking about Sid hehehe...
Ahaan yeh toh apni Ridz and Shilpu hai hehehe..
Wah wah, kya nickname diya haiii heheheh... Awesome...

Ahaan, finally Ridz and Shilpu ki mr, Chaltra phirta time machine aagaya...
Hmm in dono ke reaction koh dekhte mujhe toh yeh yakeen hogaya woh Sid nehi hai...
Poocho kyunnn...
Ridz phir bhi Sid ke saat tohda acche se behave karte hai...
Lekin Shilpa and Minnie kabhi nehi behave karenge acche se hahaha...
Waise Minnie ne toh tohda sa laga diya lekin Ridz and Shilpu ne pura face pe laga diya...
Ahaaan. yeh Rahul ho sakta hai... Woh aane wala ta na aur wohi hai jiske saat yeh dono itna bura nehi kar sakte hehehe...
I mean itna bura tohdina woh face pe rang lagaye...
Wohooo Correct...

Aur Rahul ke peeche peeche aagaya Sid...
Lambi umar hai wah wahhh...
Hahaha Sid ne Minnie and Shilpu koh mast se rang lagaya...
Bechara Sid, ab nehi bachenge dono ke haat se...
Panga liya hai Minnie aur Shilpu se, heir nehi ab Sid ki haahhaa...
OMG, I m laughing loudly... Hahahhaa...
Poor Sid, bhoot bana diya usko hahhaha...

Ahaaan, Sid met with Atul and Anjali here...
Lolz, Maddy ne mazak udaya poor Sid ka... hahahha...
Hahaha Shilpu and Sid ke jodi mast hogi if they ever fall in love hehehe...
Chalo Atul and Rahul toh milgaya yaha aur shock bhi hogaya hahaha..
Hailaaa, Atul itna zyada bolte hai...
Mujhe laga woh Anjali hoga jo yh sab sawal karenge Rahul se hehehe...
Wah wah, yeh sabko pata chal gaya yeh log relatives hai :P
Der se sahi, pata toh chal gaya hahahaha...

I knew yeh log Sid and Shilpa hogi aur woh jo usko rokh rahi hai woh Muski...
As Muski koh bohot der se dekha nehi baaki sabke saat hehehe...
Wah wah kya mast daata ridz ne Sid and Shilpu koh hahaha...
Dono dar ke chup toh hogaye... Accha huva Ridz ne Shilpu koh waha se le gaya...
Ahaan. means woh dono ke dhimag mein kuch chal raha hai...
Plan sshlan haan...

Ah ohhh... Yeh kisse takra gaya...
Mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai Muski ke expression padke woh aur koi nehi Rahul hoga...
Hmmm *Detective Mode On*
Chalo tum next part jab bhi time mile post karna...
Tab tak mein dekhti hoon yeh Rahul hai ya koi aur hehehhe...

It was awesome, fun, mast, and cool part BabyGirl...
Love and enjoy it to the core...
Hayye, tumne yeh mast part mujhe dedicate ki speciallyyy...
Muwaahhh :*
Love u soo soo soo muchhh...
Continue when u are free...
Take care <3


Heyyy@
Jijiii
Yup jiji yeh p@rt m@ine @pke liye dedic@te ki@
@www
*hugs u bck tighter*
lv u usse bhi j@y@d@

@re k@rlo move m@ine k@b m@n@ ki@
H@@nji p@t@ h@i mujhe @p busy ho n j@ldi likh rhi ho
@ur itni busy w@qt me se bhi mere liye time nik@l@
lv u for th@t*@b iske liye d@ntn@ m@@t u know i lv u for evrything*

Ye@ S@b cle@r k@rdi @ur cle@r to k@rn@ hi thi
@ur @bhi to unke b@de bh@i h@i @g@r behne @ise ho s@kti h@i to bh@i kyun nhi
H@in@ cute dono i know 😉
@b betiy@ to gh@r ki r@ni hoti h@i n@
N up@r se they @re p@p@'s princess

Wo pehle pehle @is@ hi hoti h@i n@
ye@ ye@
@khir j@is@ bhi ho gh@r ki future d@m@d ho bhi s@kti h@i potenti@l h@i u know???????

@re @ise k@ise thodi der pehle @ j@ti
Thodi der pehle @ j@ti to s@ri suspense kh@t@m ho j@ti n@

@pu u r forgetting his job he is @ photogr@pher
n photogr@pher ko s@bse j@y@d@ k@@m occ@ssions me hi hote h@i😉

Mujhe ky@ p@t@
m@ine to @is@ soch@ y@ nhi soch@ wo to m@in nhi bolungi...😛😉

Mujhw ky@ p@t@?????
W@ise @pko choice ch@hiye ky@?????

i know even i lv his ch@r@chter 😉

I'm gl@d u like @ll this

Ye@ ye@ congo l@dy
u r right

M@in n@ boht soch soch k yeh nick n@mes choose ki@

u guess it so right
they c@n't beh@ve to good with sid
p@t@nhi kuch @llergy h@i use in dono ko to
@g@in congr@ts

@re usne r@ng se is h@l@t b@n@ne ki jurr@t ki to wo log use chod thodi hi denge?

@bout th@t love f@ct u never know😉😛😆

@b h@r b@r @is@ j@ruri thodi hi n@ h@i th@t sirf @nji bole
@tul ko bhi mouk@ miln@ ch@hiye n@

m@in kyun bolu
meri sh@it@ni dim@g me opps i me@n unke sh@it@ni dim@g me konsi pl@n h@i

guess k@rte r@ho...
@ll the best

u knoiw y i dedic@te this p@rt
u remember when i w@s upd@ting u show me my little merm@id in merm@id dress
n th@t second i put the note n re done the edit u see
i lv u @ lotsss
N i'll continue but m@y be @fter ex@m i took @ bre@k to write @s b@ki p@rts to likhi hui h@i
lv u so much
tc
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Unresss...finalllyyy😛
Atlast time mil gaya...and this part was a BLAST!!!
Aapko pata hai I had a bariii siii smile while reading this part 😃
Abhi bhi naa...aaj ka hi din mila tha Ridz and Minnie ki dress gandi karney key liye!!
But that part was too funny...Tweety key bollywood dialogues beech beech mey...mai has has kar pagal ho jaati thi..!! XD
And chal Abhi ko punishment bhi mil gayi...Ridz and Minnie ko shopping karwana..hahaha 😆
But but Armaan and Ridhima miltey miltey reh gaye :( Idhar sey gaari gayi and udhar sey gaari ayi...but they both didn't saw each other 🥱
And then wo Gappu wala part was tooo muchhh cute!!! Bf and Gf Awww
Anji saying: Mujhey meri devrani mil gayi...and Shanky saying: Idea bura nahi hai...and Gapu becoming too much shy...itnaa cute part tha wo!! 😃
Lekin sab sey dhamakedaar part us key baad tha...that was Muskaan and Maddy's entry..!!! 😉
I LOVED IT DII...YOU ARE THE BEST :*
Next part mey thorii si nahi buhut confusion hui because of the nick names...
Rapunzal and Miss Perfect but then samajh mey aya it was Ridhima and Shilpa 😃
I enjoyed reading that part a loottt 👏
And then wo Mr. chalta phirta time machine wala part...hahahaa 😆
And how can I forget Sid and Shilpa's part..!!
Mujhey to phley hi lag raha tha yai chalta phirta time machine Raoooll hi ho sakta hai..!!
Par yai kon larai kar raha hai...hmmm
Sid and Shilpa?! Lol 😆
Mai almost bed sey gir gayi thi...that churail and BHATAKTI HUI AATMA parh kar..hahahaha
Par yai Muskii kis sey takraii?? Aur yai holi special plan kis pey execute honey wala hai??
So muchh suspense dii!! Jaldii update karnaa...
Loved this chapter tooo muchhh...
And I love you veryyy muchhh...take super duper care :*


Yup fin@lly
i w@s w@iting fot it u know
i me@n u urself in it
so i w@s little @nxious to see wh@t ur re@ction @bout it
u know wh@t i me@n
N i'm gl@d th@t u like the p@rt

i'm gl@d th@t u like tweety's portion

@ww
Koi nhi
@ur w@ise bhi @R k@ miln@ itni rukhi sukhi thodi hi k@rw@ungi

m@in
J@b unki mul@k@t hogi there must hv some dh@m@k@ n@

i'm gl@d u find th@t g@ppu p@rt cute
btw cute h@i yeh to m@in bhi m@nti hoon
but its me@ningfull too

I ws little nurvus @bout it i me@n u like it or not
But fin@lly u liked n i'm so gl@d with it
@ww
i love u @lso d@rling

i know confusion to thi but u see i cle@r @ll

h@yy
p@r kyun
i me@n i know i wrote it
But itn@ buri thodi hi likh# th@t tujhe suicide k@rne ki m@nn

k@re
n tu bed se jump k@re
i me@n seriously y@@r
w@ise k@hi chot wot nhi @yi n@
tu one piece me hi h@i n@

M@in kyun bolu tu khud dekh len@

Cool down d@rling
n h@ve p@tience
itn@ j@y@d@ hyper hone ki j@rur@t nhi h@i
m@y be tod@y y@ tomorrow

lv u @lso
Tc

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