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palak sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Nice try...
But sweetheart u got to need to read the part for it
I'm not gonna tell u😆

*pout* matlab tu nahi btayegi very bad humppp...

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: palakajenian
*pout* matlab tu nahi btayegi very bad humppp...

Huhehehehahahahahaha😈

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Aisha Akhter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Hey everyone

I'm back with the last holi special

And I want to dedicate this part to tinker bell

Le yeh part tere naam kiya

Ab to khush ho ja

N yeh sare hue vegetable ki jaise faces banana band kar..

So here goes the story...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha hai, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai,Aur isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahuchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain,yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhand hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga,iske liye authority yani ki writer yani ki main jimmeddar nhi hoon,Krippa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekhiyega..Shukriya..

Precap:

Mile apne sare

Banaya holi ki rangin nazare

Shararat aur masti bhari paal

Ab nayi musibaat ka kya nikla hai haal?

Part 17

After riddhima told everyone her idea...

Riddhima: Papa to apko kya lagta hai yeh Chalegi na...

Shashank: Chalegi did u just said chalegi yeh douregi...i mean we can use extra food for some good cause also..

Everyone agree with her..

Actually the call comes from Treasure of heaven was have a problem n the problem was food..

Well let me tell u all the whole thing..

The orphanage is connected with Sanjeevni n in very special occasion there is always an extra kind of food arrangement for the kids which is done by gupta family which was once started as per riddhima's wish who once in her birthday ask shashank to do so, So after that in every special occasion there is arrangement made by gupta family for the kids n from last five years this arrangement is taken care by abhi n shashank as usse pehle it was taken care by riddhima only..

N the problem come up is this year the food didn't reach yet so they call abhi to inform about it..As its quite late for kids to have food..

So riddhima said y not they distribute the extra food on them isse dono problem hi solve ho jayegi..n unko jayada mehnat nhi karni padegi..

Now the question is who will go there n kya bahana banake as padma still didn't know about this masla..

They all are thinking..

Shashank:Ek kaam karti hoon main aur abhi chale jati hoon..

Riddhima: Par papa yaha khana two cars me se hai n unme se ek madiha ki hai mumma ne pucha to kya bologi..n itna sara khana destribute its quite tough hogi papa..

Maddy: to main chali jati hoon ek car me n abhi took another one badi mumma ne puch lia to i'll say i've some work to do.n badi mumma will not gonna suspicious for that..

Riddhima: It's a good idea par kya tumhe rasta pata hai?

Maddy: nhi but wo maine abhi k car ko follow kar lungi na...

Riddhima: But its festival time to raste me kahi chut gaye to let's do one thing main bhi chalti hoon i'll direct u n yaha se hum bhaiya k car se niklenge but kuch der jake i'll change seat mujhe rasta pata hai to it won't be a problem. Par main to chali jaungi par mumma se kya bolungi..

On that time minnie n gappu also come n minnie asked loudly: kaha jana hai..

Riddhima: Treasure of heaven me..

Minnie: Wow mujhe bhi jana hai...

While suddenly hearing it a idea pop into shilpa's head n she says: Ek kaam karte hai mamoni se kehna tujhe waha sabse milna hai simple aur minnie can also join u guys...

Riddhima: ha yeh thik rahegi to phir chalo..

When gappu also make excuse that he also want to go but they can't take so many people so they somehow gone from there..

Here at Treasure of heaven..

Once they complete the food distribution minnie n riddhima started to play holi with kids to the nearby small field which is place just few step outside of orphanage while abhi sit on main office let them play n talk to the governess their about the orphanage..N madiha leave saying she will meet them later...

Outside of treasure of heaven..

A guy who is totally drenched with color come out from his car n look towards the shop n go there to take a bottle of water when he come back he saw the tire of his car is flat n looking around he guess some children was done it who was looking back at him n laughing go away..

He somehow managed a mechanic to repair it n go back to search to the kids who do it in process he go towards the field where all were playing holi..

After a while the he meet the kids but they got scared n started to say sorry so that he won't complain..

When looking at their cute faces he said: ok I'll but ek condition hai..

A cute little girl from them come forward n said: wo kya hai?

The guy act like thinking n said: uhmm tum logo ko mujhse dosti karni hogi..so manjur*while forwarding hand*

The little girl said: usse tum hum sabko maaf kar doge (while he nodded) par hum to tumhe jante tak nhi hum kaise kare tumse dosti..

While another little boy said:aur tum to kitne bade ho...itne bade logo se dosti thodi hi ki jati hai?

The little girl: Abe idiot bade ho to kya hua didi bhi to humare friend hai na wo to humse kitna badi hai but didi said friendship me umar nhi dikhe jate but anjaan logo se to dosti bhi nhi kar sakte na..

The guy: ok then hum jaan lete hai ek dusre ko phir to tumlog mere dost banogi na(all kids nodded)ok then main hoon Armaan mallik..

While one by one others also give their introduction n they started to play holi till armaan's car don't get repaired.

Here in other side riddhima n minnie was also playing holi..

When suddenly riddhima said she want some water so she gone to other side when suddenly

Bg music start..

Kaise khicha tanee [Scene shows riddhima bumped with someone n in hitting each other both lost their balance as both try to hold each other to balance]

Bhigee chunaree bhigee cholee [Scene shows both fell on the small water bucket behind them cozing them both wet n colored as well... ]

Holika hai nam are [Scene shows the guy lost in the beauty before him]

Yeh tohay ankhmeh cholee [Scene shows while riddhima also open her eyes as she found no water hitting her eyes n as soon she open her eyes with children shout she realize their position n try to get up making the guy's trace fall]

Bg music end..

Both get up n then looking towards each other said together: tum yaha bhi agaye/agaiye...

The guy: What do u mean by yaha pe bhi yeh koi personal property hai kya? n btw how much time i've to tell u that its not tum its Armaan,Armaan mallik

[Well u guys know now its Armaan mallik only though i think almost sabne already guess kar liya tha n lo ap sabki AR ko finally milwa hi dia :p]

Ri: Whatever...(n turn to go)

Before she took a step armaan called her shouting: Hello miss basket is bar to nam bata k jaooo

Ri (Shouting bck): Bhad me jo...

Ar(Walking up to her): Wah ji wah kya naam hai aise naam maine apne pure life me kabhi nhi suni waise in short Bmj bulao kya...

Ri(turning towards him n pointing a finger towards him):Arghh... U...

Ar: It's armaan (with sweet smile) Btw (then coloring her in full red color said) happy Holi

Riddhima left shocked on her place n before she could react Here minnie who was coming to see y riddhima is taking so much time was going towards that way when she found riddhima standing there fuming n red color on whole face before she ask something caught her eyes looking that she got sparkles in her eyes like happiness overflowed. She just way to pass riddhima n run towards that...

Minnie: Boyfriend tum yaha...

Armaan (looking at her smiling fully while hugging her n twirling a round then said): Wow Girlfriend aj holi k din tumse mulakat what a co-incidence btw happy holi...

When they were catching up with each other riddhima look at them from still standing there n though she was not at all happy watching armaan there but still a smile play on her lips looking her darling sister laugh n talk n so happy...

As where the kids plying there is also arrangement for the elders to play so some people from nearby also join them...

N at minnie's request armaan also join them

As there was arrangement of different games,

N for making kids learn about the traditional holi kind there was section where there was game of Lath marr holi with little twist n turn..

Every elder person above 18 can participant there, minnie have great desire to attend in it but her age didn't show up so she just stood in side but make sure riddhima got into it n armaan also n others from nearby locality join in...

Partner would be selected randomly riddhima didn't wanted to take part so she somehow skip from there but minnie also put her name before on bowl where partner will be selected...

N guesss whttt

When she hear her own name she was shocked n moreover hearing her partner's name she got shocked first but later she smirked thinking about the game rules...

As it's girl who would have a long n thick stick n boys would have a shield to protect from girl's stick n they will throw flowers towards girls n girls have to skip form it...

If boys could hit at least 10flowers exactly on girls then they will win n girl have to keep them away from the boys n to protect them they can use the stick n they can also use powder color but no water...

Bg music Start...

Ar:Do me a favour let's play holi [Scene shows Everyone start to play the game while armaan stood there looking at his partner who is none other than our very own riddhima n watching her stand doing nothing about game armaan start to sing ]

Rango me hai pyar ki boli [Scene shows armaan with naughty smile in face throw the first flower towards riddhima who was not ready for that got it by the flower just at her cheeks when armaan gave her a challenging look n run after her]

Ri:Ho mere pichhe pichhe pichhe kyon aaye [Scene shows riddhima sing n put some color on air making armaan look other side]

Mera jiya jiya kyon dhadkaye [Scene shows Riddhima laugh at him while he run towards her n she run on other side while armaan got hold of her dupatta]

Ja re ja dont touch my choli [Scene shows riddhima took her dupatta back with jerk n hit armaan with the stick making him somehow skip from it]

All girls:Uff ye holi hai ye holi [Scene shows game goes on n in several groups boys win n in some girls]

All Boys:Hey do me a favour lets play holi [Scene shows Still who have chances to win running behind the girls ]

All girls:Uff ye holi hai ye holi [Scene shows all were engrossed in singing n plying lath mar holi in unique way while kids were cheering]

All boys: Rango me hai pyar ki boli [Scene shows while running suddenly armaan stop n look behind but for his sudden stop riddhima bumped with him n both fell on the ground n they both share a cute eye lock until the announcer of the game said the game is over...]

Bg music end..

Here in Rangin ashiyaana...

After the 4 gone all environment got little boring while shilpa got near the thandai stall while searching something while Shashank tap at her shoulder n said: kya dhund rahi hai tu?

Shil: Bhang..

Sha (looking here n there watching anybody her them or not): what...Tu kya bol rhi hai mujhe kuch samajh nhi a rhi hai..

Shil: Pops itne vole to ap ho nhi jo apko bhang ka matlab na pata ho...

Sha (bringing her in side): Are marwayegi kya padma ne sun liya to mar dalegi...

Shil (Giggling): Ap mamoni se itni darti kyun ho?

Sha: Oye main darti warti nhi hoon main to bas...(then lost in some thoughts of padma)

Shil (snapping finger in front of him): Oh hello mr. apne biwi k khayalo me na baad me gum hona...pops do na kaha haii bhang

Sha: Aa mere sath but yaad rakhna sabko mat khilana n padma ko na pata chale warna main to gayi kam se...

Shil (While winking towards him): not to worry pops..

Then shashank give her the bhang specialist pakora...

Before they could say something padma come there n said: kya ho rahi hai(both were hell scared when padma said)Are shilpa tune pakore taste kia nhi kya it was awesome pakora on that pakora's stall btw yeh konsi pakora hai its not look like those(padma was talking about normal pakora)

Shil (somehow getting her voice back said): Wo mamoni yeh maine banai wo kuch der pehle waha unko hatake isiliye aise dikhne me maine boht kuch dali hai na...

Pa (getting interest): Acha la jara chakhu to sahi...

Sha (almost shouting): nhi...Yeh tum nhi kha sakte

Pa (frowning): Par kyun nhi kha sakti main..

Sha: Kyun ki kyun ki maine ise bola tha yeh mere liye banane k laye aur yeh sare mere hai main yeh kisiko nhi dungi...(saying this shashank pull the bhang wale pakore ki basket towards himself)

Pa: Ek to chakhne do..(While forwarding her hand before shashank could move it away she put it into her mouth)

Shashank n shilpa look towards each other shockingly...

But at first the bhang didn't show any effect on her but padma loved the pakora n took another one from the basket from shashank as shashank was in shock he didn't realize first

After a while bhang started to show its affect...

While padma said she loved the pakora n want to have more n shilpa to made them more for her though shilpa n shashank try to stop her but she took the basket n told shashank that shilpa would make him another basket of pakora as shilpa is a very sweet girl n disappear from there...

While padma gone to others where sid n muskaan was standing n talking...

Padma offer them pakora n they also have it like that many are have it without atul n rahul as they were in other side...

Shashank n shilpa when realize that padma actually made many eat the bhang ki pakora they tried to stop her even telling atul n rahul to stop others...

Here in treasure of heaven

As the announcer of the game said the game is over they realize there position they were so close..

They got up breaking the eye lock n a awkward moment come to skip for it both of them were looking anywhere without each other n after a few second of awkward silence riddhima gone from there n started to play with kids minnie bring armaan there n ask him to join them...

While riddhima looking at her darling sister keep quite enjoying with other kids...

Bg music played...[now the scenes would show both side together & sometimes only one side & sometimes only other & sometimes both in watch side dividing the scene in two side i hope u all got it :p ]

Mu:Itna maza kyun aa raha hai [Scene shows rahul is trying to stop muskaan while she started to sing while putting color on rahul n dance the way deepeka dance]

Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya [Scene shows shilpa join her in dance nut also try to stop her doing anything crazy]

Pa:Doogna nasha kyun ho raha hai [Scene shows padma join her n dance n sing while pointing towards shashank]

Aankhon se mitha tune khilaya [Scene shows Shashank was looking at padma with wide open eyes watching her dance n try to stop her]

Si:Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi [Scene shows while sid join n color shilpa while shilpa was like iski toh but stop herself before she do anything as she remember he is doing so in bhang effect]

Ar:Manchali chaal kaise nawaabi ho gayi toh [Scene shows Here in teaser of heaven all kids started to dance around armaan while armaan dance with minnie the way ranbir did in the song same steps]

All:Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari [Scene shows in both side all the persons join in dancing while padma pull shashank's hand n put him into dance,muskaan pull rahul's hand n put him into dance n sid pull shilpa's hand n put her into dance]

Toh sidhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi [Scene shows Shilpa n muski dance while shashank somehow took padma out of dance area]

Haa jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka [Scene shows Rahul n sid dance with the girls while here in treasure of heaven kids pull riddhima in dancing though riddhima first didn't agree but to keep their heart she stood n clap hands towards them n move little bit]

Toh lattu padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi [Scene shows Atul also join others in dance while they were having a tough time stopping the ladies to dance]

Shashank called atul asking to please check on the guests while shilpa took sid's responsibility n rahul took muskaan,... N the surprising thing happen here when shilpa go to take muski in control muski run n hide behind rahul n then rahul assure that she will see her n shilpa gone in search of sid as sid run from there in between dancing...

Shilpa look everywhere when suddenly her eyes stuck into a tree watching sid siting over a branch..

Shi (thinking that main ise sab jagah dhund rhi hoon aur yeh pair k upar): Sid niche utro abhi k abhi...

Si (who was hanging his leg till now bring it over the branch n curl while saying): Nhi tum marogi..

Shi (while shouting): Sid maine bola utro abhi k abhi...

Si (shooing her then siting in branch ache se): hushh hushh hushh ...main nhi ati..

Shi (calming herself a little bit while thinking that yeh ab nashe me hai): Sid main tumhe kuch nhi karungi niche ajao...

Si: Pakka

Shi: Ha pakka ab niche ajao

Si: Bolo sid tumhari kasam

Shi (In mind saying ek bar tu niche a beta phir dikhati hoon kiski kasam): Ha wohi but tum aao to sahi..

Then sid jump from there but he fall on her n both fall on ground while sid for a while admire her then in drunk state said: u r looking so beautiful (making shilpa jerk in reality n confused with sid's behavior)

N in other side

Ral (stopping muskaan to run away): Muski muski stop...

Mu: Main kaha bhag rhi hoon main to stop hi khadi hoon (then starting to laugh in her unique style while rahul start to admire her taking the chance muskaan run removing her hand from his hold gently n stick toung towards him )

Ra (running behind her): Muski ruk...

In other side

Pa (wining like a baby): Shashank mujhe dance karna hai..

Sha (holing her tightly): Abhi nhi padma boht dance karliya hum, baad me dance karenge ok, abhi andar chalo..

Pa (again whining): Shashank...

Sha: nhi padma maine bola na nhi tumhe abhi nhi Padma, tumhe chot lag jayegi..abhi andar chalo...

Pa (sweetly): Shashank

Sha: Padma maine bola na abhi nhi chalo andar

Pa: Shashank suno to..(Pouting)

Sha (giving in her expression): acha bolo kya hai?

Pa: U know whattt..u r the besttt husband anyone could ever have,..

Sha (smile fully n said): n u r the best wife anyone could ever have n I'm really lucky to have u as my wife

Pa (elatedly): Sachi????

Sha (smiling at her): muchi...

Here in teaser of heavens outside field...

Kids insist riddhima to put color on armaan though riddhima first thought against it but minnie have some other plan..

When kids were insisting both of them to put color on each other minnie took the slingshot which was with her as riddhima give it to keep to her while she was distributing food n now she taking it took two water balloon n go little far from them n shoot them with it as a way that they thought it was done by other...

Both look at each other n put color on each other thinking about taking revenge for coloring her/him with water..

Ar:Teri kalaai hai haathon mein aayi hai [Scene shows but soon riddhima realize it was minnie only so she turn to go when armaan started to sing n dance the way ranbir do]

Maine maroda toh lagti malaai hai [Scene shows armaan twist her hand a little n give her a challenging look]

Ri:Mehenga padega ye chaska malaai ka [Scene shows riddhima hit him with her elbow in his belly making him leave her]

Upvaas karne main teri bhalaai hai [Scene shows riddhima dance the way deepika dance in the song n at end of this line she n all the other small girls put color on armaan while armaan somehow hide his face behind his hand]

Ra:Ho bindiya teri mehtaabi ho gayi [Scene shows here rahul sing n run behind muskaan n took hold of her]

Dil ke armaanon mein behisaabi ho gayi toh [Scene shows Sid n shilpa got up n sid somehow with the effect of bhang started to dance again while pulling shilpa with him]

All:Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari [Scene show everyone dancing together in both side]

Toh sidhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi

Haa jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka

Toh lattu padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi

Bg music end..

After the end of the song riddhima got a call an excuse herself while armaan's car also got ok so he bid bye to minnie n other kids n go away. Though he wanted to stay but he need to go when he was near his car he look back to see the kids were back to play holi n he look the way riddhima was gone to see only that she is talking with a guy n after a while elatedly hug him..

For a while he didn't like the scenario but taking away the thoughts apart he got in the car n drove towards Rangin Ashiyaana

Here in Rangin ashiyaana

After the song put in to end all guest started to leave somehow shashank put padma straight away inside house n telling atul to handle her he got back to see everyone off..

After a while only riddhima's friend's n family member's left...

After a while back a black Audi Q5 stop in front of the door while a guy come out from it was tottally drenched in color got in to the house to only see the party is over n shashank was bidding bye to everyone..

Watching him coming shashank said: Itni late...

The guy: main to bola hi tha bade papa wait mat karna mere liye i would be late..(While touching his leg)

Sha(hugging him n then taking him indside said): Par tewhaar ka maza to apno k sath celebrate karne me hi hai but tumhe to lagti hai time hi nhi hai tehwaar ki din bhi koi kaam karti hai kya armaan..

Well the guy is armaan

Ar (with a small smile): Actually bade papa humara business bhi to tewhaar me karne ka hi hai i mean its event management n moreover mujhe ek dost k request pe hi uske holi party ki taiyariyaan pe re-check karni thi n uske liye photoshoot karni thi..so i can't say no to my work..

Shashank took him inside while talking..

While going inside they bump into muskaan who was running n rahul was running behind her to catch her but when she bump into them she stop n said: Are bade papa apne holi nhi kheli (then putting lots of color on his face then started to laugh in her own style)

Soon rahul also come there running while armaan was shocked to see them here n he said: Rahul tu yaha Aur muski tujhe kya hua?

Before rahul could say something atul rushed from inside n said: Bade papa jaldi andar aao plz...

While armaan look back to him n shashank rush inside as he know what's coming on...

Armaan look towards atul who come n hug armaan then said: Tu agaya mere..(but before he could continue a water balloon hit him n all look back to see its sid while shilpa trying to stop him)

Ar (looking at atul): Yeh ho kya raha hai????

At (while saving himself from the water balloons now sid n muski throwing towards him): Sab batati hoon pehle yaha se chal...

Inside Rangin ashiyaana..

Shashank rush into only seen that padma is spreading everything here n there while shashank go n hold her n said: Padma padma yeh kya kar rahe ho...

Pa: Are ap agaye dekhiye maine sab phela diya ab main in sab cheezon ko saaf karwaungi..

Chalo ap bhi help karo na...(Then saying this she took a mop in her hand n pass another one to shashank while shashank stand there with wide open eyes n padma watching him not to work said)Chaliye na

Sha (coming out from trace): huh...kya?

Pa (giving him the mop handling it properly on his hand n said): Kariye na meri help...Ap karogi na...

Sha: Par padma...

Pa: Ap nhi karogi meri help (on the verge of crying)heeeaaa...heeeaaa,,,ap mere liye itna nhi kar sakte...

Sha: Riddhima kaha hai tu bachale mujhe(mumbling to himself then with a sweet smile looking at her said) Tumhare liye to kuch bhi kar sakti hoon...(then started to mop while padma took a cousoon n tore it making it spread all the place where shashank mop n hearing the tore sound while shashank look back n see he was like phir se karna padega n padma give him a sorry look n a dazzling smile)

Here atul somehow make armaan understand all the things n took him inside the house while somehow rahul n shilpa also succeed to bring muski n sid inside with help of gappu n armaan n atul..

While they enter watching the sight somehow atul n shilpa n armaan n gappu stop the smile but muskaan started to laugh loud n said: Hawww...Bade papa ap jhadu kyun laga rahe ho...

While Shashank got embarrassed n put it away n next second padma screamed: ap karo naaa...

While somehow shashank make padma understand n took her inside n make her agree to sleep n here at hall others were having a tough time to cool them..

After Shashank put padma in sleep he come back to see sid n muskaan running in whole while others running behind them..

Sha (sternly): Yeh kya ho raha hai...(While others stood at their position with lower head so Shashank turn towards shilpa n said)philosoper's stone tum muski ko lo aur andar jao n rahul u use the guest room n keep sid there..

While both of them whined. But obey n go..

Then they both sit up a while n catch up for a while n shilpa also come back n now introduce properly with armaan n they catch up for a while when shilpa suddenly ask about riddhima..

Shil: Papa where is princess diana kab ayegi wo?

Sha: Wo use kuch kaam hai to wo khatam karke a jayegi don't worry..

While armaan was confused n said: Princess diana..???

At: Are wo ridz k baat kar rahe hai tu nhi mila na un tino se i mean ridz, shannaya n abhimanniyun se unke hi baat kar rahe the chal koi nhi abhi mil lena abhi a jayenge...

Ar: I think aj bhi unlogo se meri mulakat nhi hogi coz i've to go its late mujhe ghar jana hoga n then waha se next assignment k liye nikal na hai...

While bi n anji also come back after a while they insist but armaan had to go so after a while he left with bi n gappu while gappu was whining as he wanted to stay more but next day he have school so armaan took him with them..

N as all just bid them bye n come inside on that time only abhi's car come on the front door

While Bg music...
Ek mulakat hai jaruri..
tone only

Music end as three of them got down with someone else...

Inside Rangin ashiyaana

All just sit lazily on sofa while closing their eyes while front door was open no one notice that 4 person enter in while abhi, riddhima n minnie stand a side n the other person with them stealing go behind shilpa on that time only anji look to see n about to say her name while riddhima gesture her not to say anything n the person hold shilpa's eyes..

Shil: Who is it?

Ri: Guess kar...

Shil: kyun tang kar rhi hai yaar ridz leave na..

While the person leave her eyes n said: Too bad u forget me behna...

Shil (with a stunt look back n stood with wide open eyes n shout): Appp...

That's all for today

N iske sath khatam hoti hai humari holi special 4th part..

Don't worry puri kahani abhi bhi baki hai

So wait for more

Milte hai kuch din baad

Inhi galliyoon ki inhi choubaroon me with new twist n tale n turn of story

lv u all

Khuda hafiz

Rupkotha

Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hiyyaaa BabyGirl...

Dekho dekho koan aaya haiii hehehe...

Der toh nehi huvi na... I know I know ho hi nehi sakteee...

Poocho kyunnn... Chal main bata hi deti hoon kyunnn...

Woh kiya haina, ab tumne bhi meri lines bolti hai na jab koi kahen late hogayi...

I know I know tujhe samajh aayi main kis line ki baat kar rahi hoon...

Haina haina, aayi na yaad...

Chalo aayi bhi ya nehi, main bol hi deti hoon...

Tumne next part post nehi ki na abhi, toh main late kaise hoti righttt... hahaha...

Chalo issili baat pe ek gaana gaati hoon...

Arey arey itna shock mat ho...

Waise ho hi jao, roz roz tohdina milenge mujhse gana sunne koh hahaha...

Yeh song situation pe toh nehi mil rahi but abhi abhi mujhe yad aaaya...

Toh maine socha tumse share karlun...

Waise pyar toh hai ismein, issiliyeh bas jana hi sunlo tum...

Ehem ehemm *clearing throat before starting the song...*

Ready na???

1... 2... 3...

Pyar Deewana Hota Hai,

Mastana Hota Hain...

Har Khushee Se Har Gam Se,

Begana Hota Hain...

Kaisa lagaaa??? Batana zarur haan...

Chalo ab idar udar ke baate bohot hogayiii, ab part ke baare mein tohda baat hojae...

Waise toh part hamesha ke tarah bohot amanzing and fun tha...

Ab Shuru se batati hoon tumhe mujhe kitna accha laga parttt...

Wah wah, Ridz ne kiya idea diya hai...

Waise toh Ridz ke yeh idea se bohot accha kaam huva hai aur Ridz koh faida bhi...

Bacche logo koh accha accha khana bhi mila hai...

Aur tum soch rahi ho na faida kyun huva is idea se...

Bata ti hoon bata ti hoon...

Ridz ne itna accha kaam kiya hai toh Ridz koh toh iska sawab bhi milenge na...

Bless from god for helping and making those kids happy...

Bolo bolo huva na faida Ridz koh...

Idea toh mast ta, ab shuru hogayi jaenge koan aur Padma se kya bolenge...

Waise Maddy ka idea bhi accha hai but Shashank jaenge toh Padma bohot sawal karenge...

Abhi toh jaenge jaenge as problem toh usko inform kiya hai...

Phir aayi Minnie and Gappu, yeh leh Minnie koh bhi jaana ta...

Ahaan, Shilpu ne kiya idea diya hai...

Ab toh Ridz and Minnie dono jaa sakte hai aur Shashank waha sab kuch sambhal sakte hai...

Toh Riddhima and Minnie poch gaye Treasure of Heaven Abhi and Maddy ke saat...

Maddy left saying she has work and will meet them later...

Wah wah, Ridz and Minnie enjoying while Abhi sitting in office talking with governess...

Ab aagayi teasure of heaven ke baahar...

Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai yeh ladka Armaan haiii...

Woh haina woh hainaaa...

Oooh, woh nikla paani lene aur dekha bacche log ne uske car ke tire felt hahaha...

Woh gaye baccho logo ke paas, aur bacche log dar ke maafi maang li...

Waise yeh baat toh accha hai, bacche log koh apni galati ka toh ehsaas huva.. but woh bhi toh maza kar raha ta...

Wah wah, kya condition rakha hai...

Ab toh pakka yakeen hogaya yeh Armaan hi haiii...

Yeyyy, my guess sahi huvaaa...

Kya baat hai BabyGirl... Means AR milne wala haiii haina hainaaa...

Yeah Yeah, I know u will say aage kiya hoga kissi koh nehi pata... kissi koh pata kaise hogi yaar, tujhe bhi toh nehi pata hoti hai hahahaha...unless u finished writing right ...

See see main kitni acche se tujhe jaanti hoon...

yeyyy, AR milgayeee...

Wah wah, dono mile aur ek durse se na takrae, saat mein na gire, aisa ta ho hi nehi sakti na hahaha...

AR scene describe superblyyy babyGirl...

Dono kho gaye ek dusre ke aankhon meinnn...

Hehehehe bacche log ke awaz se dono back to sense...

Aur trace broke hote hi dono bangaye dhushman hahaha...

Uff Yeh dono baat baat pe ladte kyun ho...

Hahahhaa Armaan is so funny yaar... He loves to irrirate Riddhima...

OMG, Armaan put color on Riddhima face hahahaa...

Even I wasn't expecting this hahaha, Ridz toh bohottt shock hogayi na hahaha...

Arey wah, Minnie Ridz koh dhundte dhundte aayi aur usko apne BF bhi milgayaaa...

One of my fav couple is Armaan Minnie hehehee...

Dono busy hogayi ek dursre ke saat, aur Ridz was admiring them because she was happy to see her sister happy wah wahhh...

Minnie ki request pe Armaan rukh gaya wah kya baat hai...

Arey wah, yaha game khelne wala hai sabbb...

Kiya baat hai, sunne mein toh bohot maza aane wala hai is game mein...

Wohooo, awesome song BabyGirl...

Description was superbbb, Ridz was trying to leave from there but Minnie ne uske naam daal diya game mein...

Aur jab Ridz koh pata chala uske partner koan hai toh uske naughty mind full speed pe kaam karne laga hahaha...

Oh hooo, gana khatammm aur dono phirse ghir gayi ek dusre se takra ke hahaha...

In Rangin Ashiyaana...

Ab boring toh hogi na, doh shaitaan toh kam hogaye hahaha...

waise Abhi bhi kam nehi ta but still Ridz and Minnie is the jaan of the house na...

Lolz, Shilpu bhaag dhund rahi haiii...

Shashank expression was worth when he got to know what Shiplu was looking for hahaha...

Hahaha Shashank act as he didn't get what Shilpu was talking about...

OMG, Shilpu ne sahi toh poocha... Shashank Padma se itna darta kyun hai beyyy hahaha...

Lolz Shashank was lost in Padma thoughts...

Shilpu and Shashank bonding was super cuteee...

hahahaha Shashank warn her not to give anyone else but mujhe feeling aa rahi hai kuch toh bohot maze ki baat hone wala haiii...

OMG hahahhaa, jisse bach ke kar raha ta, woh aagayiii...

Kahin Padma woh khaenge toh nehiii, woh khake talli hogi toh bohot maza aane wali haiii hahahaha...

Lolz, I was right, she ate...

hahahaa aur woh khati gayi aur basket bhi le liya aur nikal padiii...

Sirf woh nehi, usne Sid and Muski koh bhi khila diyaaa... haahaa...

Tab Shashank and Shilpu Realized, Padma ne toh dusron koh bhi khila diya hahaha...

Ab toh Atul and Rahul koh batana hoga na uske help karne ke liyeh...

Woh log teen logo koh kaise handle karege hahaha...

Back in Treasure of Heaven...

Armaan and Riddhima back to real land...

hahaha dono feeling awkward sharing that eye lock and close position...

Phir dono move away, Ridz got busy with kids and Minnie pull Armaan with her to enjoy with kids...

Ahaan.phirse songgg...

Waise jo tu samjhane wali ti woh toh smajh pehle nehi aayi but when I start reading song and description , tab samajh mein aayi hahaha...

Wohooo, main toh jhatke utke nachne lagi heheheh...

U know I was laying with Tiny next to me... Woh so rahi ti aur main utke naach ne lagi...

Hoodh was like yeh kiya kar rahi ho hahaha...

Song description ke zyada mujhe song mein interest huva...

It was awesome songgg and description is superbbb tooo...

pehle song shuru huva Rangin Ashiyana se, Rahul was trying to stop Muskaan hahaha...

Phir Shilpu joins Muskaan hahaha...

Aur uske baad Padma :O hahahah itna talli hogayi woh bhi naachne lagi hehee...

Poor Shashank trying to stop her hahaha...

Hahaha Sid color on Shilpu and Shilpu was ready to band bhaja de hahaha...

Accha huva Shilpu realized he was drunk hahaha...

Phir song change to Treasure of Heaven...

Armaan dancing with Minnie and kids around him...

Both side se sab log dance raha taa hahahaa, boht maza kar rahi hai sabbb...

Aise waise hokhe gana khatammm...

Awww poor Shashank ask Atul to check on guest while he take care of Padma...

Shilpu was taking care of Muski who go and hide behind Rahul hahaha...

Phir Shilpu went to look after Sid when Rahul said he will take care of Muski...

Hahahahah Sid tree pe chad gaya...

Awww, he was scared of Shilpu hahahaa...

Kyun nehi, hamesha daante hai aur uska band bhajate hai...

Hahaha Shilpu thoughts were super awesome woh kuch kar bhi nehi sakte as Sid is not on his sense hahaha...

Bohot pleading ke baad Sid neeche jump ki aur woh bhi Shilpu ke upar hahaha...

Arey wah, dono Sid was complimenting Shilpuuu hahaha aur Shilpu hogayi confuseddd with his sudden change of behavior...

Hahaha Muski is so funny after being drunk... Woh aur uski unique laugh...

Wohooo, Rahul is so much in love with Muski...

Muski run away and Rahul run away behind her to catch her...

Phir aayi humhare old couple pe hehehe...

OMG Padma talli hokhe Shashank ke band baja dhiya hahaha...

Awww both tell each other how perfect wife and husband they are...

Back In Treasure of Heaven...

Hahaha Minnie is so naughtyyy...

Kids wants AR to put colors on each other hahaha...

When they refused, Minnie make them put color by playing pranks on both of them hehehe...

Hawww, mujhe laga gana wahi se khatam hogaya..

lekin abhi toh gana baaki haiii ...

Waise description was superb of AR in song...

And in Rangin Ashiyana, Rahul at last got hold of Muskaan...

Sid and Shilpa stood up and again Sid started to dance with Shilpa...

Now the song end hahahaha...

Riddhima kisse baat kar rahi hai... Ek minute ke liyeh mujhe laga woh Abhi hai but when u didnt mention any name, hmmm koan ho sakta haiii...

Hwww, tu phirse new character lane wale ho??? Don't tell meee...

Ahaan. Armaan is feeling jealous seeing Riddhima hugging some guyyy...

Wohooo, woh rangin ashiyana ja rha haiii...

Back in Rangin Ashiyana...

Guest left and now gupta's and gang hai wahaaa...

I know I know yeh Armaan hi hogaaa...

Woh nikal gaya na waha aane ke liyeh, aur usse pehle toh koi aur aa nehi sakte hehehe..

I mean Ridz Minnie and Abhi nehi aa sakte...

Wah wah, Dhamad se itne acche se baat kar raha hai Shashank... I mean to be son in law...

Haan haan, pata hai tu kahenge no one knows what will happen in future...

Ufff, I m waiting for the that day AR fall in love and confess to each other...

Okey okey back to story hehehe...

Ooops Muski bumped to Shashank and put color on his face hahaha...

Armaan was shocked to see Rahul there hahaha...

Bechara Armaan bohot confused hogaya waha ke haalat dekh ke...

Atul ne Shashank koh andar bhulaya, aur Shashaank samajh gaya kiya baat hoga hahaha...

Hahahaha Padma safai karne lagi aur woh Shashank se karwaenge abbb hahaha...

Awww poor Shashank , biwi ki pakka wala gulam bangaye hahaha...

Hahahaha Padma is blackmailing him and Shashank was asking for Ridz to get back soon hahaha...

Lolz, When Shashank clean phirse Padma ne sab kuch mess up kardi hahahaha...

Kya baat hai, Atul ne Armaan koh sabkuch bata diya...

Shilpu and Rahul was successful in bringing Muski and Sid inside the house with help of Gappu Armaan and Atul...

Everyone was surrprise to see Shashank doing work and Muski laugh heehehehe...

Awww Shashank got embarrassed hehehe...

Acha huva Shashank ne padma koh samjhake andar legaya aur sola diya...

When Shashank came back, he saw Muski and Sid running around While others runnig behind them...

Shashank ke ek word se sab stop hahaha...

Aaah, finally Muski and Sid bhi so gayeee...

Shilpu intro herself to Armaan...

Koi toh poocha Ridz ke baare mein... Kyun nehi after all Ridz is her partner in pranks na hahaa...

Ah, Armaan asked who is princess diana...

Haan haan aaj toh mil lenge...

Whattt??// Aaj bhi ghar pe nehi milenge yeh dono...

Uff tu bhi na BabyGirl, kyun bhaga rahe ho Armaan koh kaam ke liyeh...

Chalo tik hai, aaj nehi toh phr kabhi... Aur woh din kab aayenge, mujhe bhi nehi pata heehee...

Kaise pata hoti, tujhe bhi toh nehi pata right...

Armaan left with Bi and Gappu, Gappu koh nehi jaana ta but Armaan took him as he has school following day...

Armaan gaya aur Ridz aagayiii ufff kya timing hai yeh log ki hainaaa...

Sab lazily beit raha ta tab aagayi Ridz Minnie Abhi and new guyyy...

Shilpu ke aankhon me haat rakha usne...

Behena bhi kahaaa...??? Hain koan yehhh...

Shilpu ki bhaiii???/ :O

Shilpu koh laga Ridz mazak kar rahi hai but when she saw him, woh bhi surpriseddd...

Now I want to know who is this new person...

batao batao bataooo.

WA mein bata na okkk... hehehe...

It was awesome and hilarious part BabyGirl...

Holi Khatam hote hi tumne apne puzzle game shuru kiya na...

Guess who is new characterr ufff...

Is baar toh I don't have a single clue who might be this new person...

Kahin Shubankar toh nehiii... :O

Woh kaise ho sakte haiii...

Chalo next part mein dekhte haiii...

Super awesome blossom and funny part BabyGirl...

Love u so much for the part...

Muwaahhh...

Take care and continue soon after ur practicals hehee...

Cuaaa...

Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Hey dear,

First of all, I am really sorry,

I have not commented on the last 2-3 parts,

but I could not spare any time,

I have not been able to read the parts

well and hence I would not be able to comment,

but I will be free by the end of June and

then I'll do my best to comment at the soonest,

hope you would not mind 😊

P.s: Keep PMing me about the updates 😊

Take care,

luv you ❤️

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

so finally ar ki meet hui yipppeee
chal introduction nah karaya ti kya jua meeting to hui i m happy with that only
wow kahan ja kar milna hua
wow atleast both celebrate holi with each other
nd dance on my fav song
i just loved it
hayye mazza agaya
ek hi part mein itne saare song sequence but all r my fav holi songs
i used to dance crazily on it on every
yeh orphanage ke baccho ko kiss karne ka man kar rha h
inki vajah se mujhe ar moments mila thanks to them
loved all the ar moments nd armaan mini moments thats was so cute
are yaar again a new entry ab kaun reh gya ???????
shilpa ka bhai ?
watever but i loved this part so muchhh
love u pikachhhuuu
*hug tight* *lots of kisses* muahhh
love u sweety

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megha bansal

@megbans

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

awsume parts both 16 n 17...

loved it...

Holi masti was superb...

finally holi over...

yaar but ek baat hai...

AR ki official meet jaldi kara yaar...

bohot l8 ho gayaa...

bata 1 se 17 ho gaya...

aur AR ab tak properly mile...

bura naa maniyo...

maine toh aiwee kahe diya...

abbey buraaa maan bhi gayi...

toh chal phutt yahhan se...

Jaldi AR ki official meet karaa...

*kicking aishu's bum...and making her fall...and then laughing...holding stomach...*

😆 🤣🤣

ab apni jiji k pass na jayio...meri shikayat leke...hhuummppp...

hahahahahahahaa 😆😆😆

Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
Reserved...

Unreserved...
Hiyyaaa BabyGirl...
Dekho dekho koan aaya haiii hehehe...
Der toh nehi huvi na... I know I know ho hi nehi sakteee...
Poocho kyunnn... Chal main bata hi deti hoon kyunnn...
Woh kiya haina, ab tumne bhi meri lines bolti hai na jab koi kahen late hogayi...
I know I know tujhe samajh aayi main kis line ki baat kar rahi hoon...
Haina haina, aayi na yaad...
Chalo aayi bhi ya nehi, main bol hi deti hoon...
Tumne next part post nehi ki na abhi, toh main late kaise hoti righttt... hahaha...
Chalo issili baat pe ek gaana gaati hoon...
Arey arey itna shock mat ho...
Waise ho hi jao, roz roz tohdina milenge mujhse gana sunne koh hahaha...

Yeh song situation pe toh nehi mil rahi but abhi abhi mujhe yad aaaya...
Toh maine socha tumse share karlun...
Waise pyar toh hai ismein, issiliyeh bas jana hi sunlo tum...

Ehem ehemm *clearing throat before starting the song...*
Ready na???
1... 2... 3...

Pyar Deewana Hota Hai,
Mastana Hota Hain...
Har Khushee Se Har Gam Se,
Begana Hota Hain...

Kaisa lagaaa??? Batana zarur haan...
Chalo ab idar udar ke baate bohot hogayiii, ab part ke baare mein tohda baat hojae...
Waise toh part hamesha ke tarah bohot amanzing and fun tha...

Ab Shuru se batati hoon tumhe mujhe kitna accha laga parttt...
Wah wah, Ridz ne kiya idea diya hai...
Waise toh Ridz ke yeh idea se bohot accha kaam huva hai aur Ridz koh faida bhi...
Bacche logo koh accha accha khana bhi mila hai...
Aur tum soch rahi ho na faida kyun huva is idea se...
Bata ti hoon bata ti hoon...
Ridz ne itna accha kaam kiya hai toh Ridz koh toh iska sawab bhi milenge na...
Bless from god for helping and making those kids happy...
Bolo bolo huva na faida Ridz koh...

Idea toh mast ta, ab shuru hogayi jaenge koan aur Padma se kya bolenge...
Waise Maddy ka idea bhi accha hai but Shashank jaenge toh Padma bohot sawal karenge...
Abhi toh jaenge jaenge as problem toh usko inform kiya hai...
Phir aayi Minnie and Gappu, yeh leh Minnie koh bhi jaana ta...
Ahaan, Shilpu ne kiya idea diya hai...
Ab toh Ridz and Minnie dono jaa sakte hai aur Shashank waha sab kuch sambhal sakte hai...

Toh Riddhima and Minnie poch gaye Treasure of Heaven Abhi and Maddy ke saat...
Maddy left saying she has work and will meet them later...
Wah wah, Ridz and Minnie enjoying while Abhi sitting in office talking with governess...

Ab aagayi teasure of heaven ke baahar...
Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai yeh ladka Armaan haiii...
Woh haina woh hainaaa...
Oooh, woh nikla paani lene aur dekha bacche log ne uske car ke tire felt hahaha...
Woh gaye baccho logo ke paas, aur bacche log dar ke maafi maang li...
Waise yeh baat toh accha hai, bacche log koh apni galati ka toh ehsaas huva.. but woh bhi toh maza kar raha ta...
Wah wah, kya condition rakha hai...
Ab toh pakka yakeen hogaya yeh Armaan hi haiii...
Yeyyy, my guess sahi huvaaa...

Kya baat hai BabyGirl... Means AR milne wala haiii haina hainaaa...
Yeah Yeah, I know u will say aage kiya hoga kissi koh nehi pata... kissi koh pata kaise hogi yaar, tujhe bhi toh nehi pata hoti hai hahahaha...unless u finished writing right ...
See see main kitni acche se tujhe jaanti hoon...

yeyyy, AR milgayeee...
Wah wah, dono mile aur ek durse se na takrae, saat mein na gire, aisa ta ho hi nehi sakti na hahaha...
AR scene describe superblyyy babyGirl...
Dono kho gaye ek dusre ke aankhon meinnn...

Hehehehe bacche log ke awaz se dono back to sense...
Aur trace broke hote hi dono bangaye dhushman hahaha...
Uff Yeh dono baat baat pe ladte kyun ho...
Hahahhaa Armaan is so funny yaar... He loves to irrirate Riddhima...
OMG, Armaan put color on Riddhima face hahahaa...
Even I wasn't expecting this hahaha, Ridz toh bohottt shock hogayi na hahaha...

Arey wah, Minnie Ridz koh dhundte dhundte aayi aur usko apne BF bhi milgayaaa...
One of my fav couple is Armaan Minnie hehehee...
Dono busy hogayi ek dursre ke saat, aur Ridz was admiring them because she was happy to see her sister happy wah wahhh...
Minnie ki request pe Armaan rukh gaya wah kya baat hai...

Arey wah, yaha game khelne wala hai sabbb...
Kiya baat hai, sunne mein toh bohot maza aane wala hai is game mein...
Wohooo, awesome song BabyGirl...
Description was superbbb, Ridz was trying to leave from there but Minnie ne uske naam daal diya game mein...
Aur jab Ridz koh pata chala uske partner koan hai toh uske naughty mind full speed pe kaam karne laga hahaha...
Oh hooo, gana khatammm aur dono phirse ghir gayi ek dusre se takra ke hahaha...

In Rangin Ashiyaana...
Ab boring toh hogi na, doh shaitaan toh kam hogaye hahaha...
waise Abhi bhi kam nehi ta but still Ridz and Minnie is the jaan of the house na...
Lolz, Shilpu bhaag dhund rahi haiii...
Shashank expression was worth when he got to know what Shiplu was looking for hahaha...
Hahaha Shashank act as he didn't get what Shilpu was talking about...
OMG, Shilpu ne sahi toh poocha... Shashank Padma se itna darta kyun hai beyyy hahaha...
Lolz Shashank was lost in Padma thoughts...
Shilpu and Shashank bonding was super cuteee...
hahahaha Shashank warn her not to give anyone else but mujhe feeling aa rahi hai kuch toh bohot maze ki baat hone wala haiii...

OMG hahahhaa, jisse bach ke kar raha ta, woh aagayiii...
Kahin Padma woh khaenge toh nehiii, woh khake talli hogi toh bohot maza aane wali haiii hahahaha...
Lolz, I was right, she ate...
hahahaa aur woh khati gayi aur basket bhi le liya aur nikal padiii...
Sirf woh nehi, usne Sid and Muski koh bhi khila diyaaa... haahaa...

Tab Shashank and Shilpu Realized, Padma ne toh dusron koh bhi khila diya hahaha...
Ab toh Atul and Rahul koh batana hoga na uske help karne ke liyeh...
Woh log teen logo koh kaise handle karege hahaha...

Back in Treasure of Heaven...
Armaan and Riddhima back to real land...
hahaha dono feeling awkward sharing that eye lock and close position...
Phir dono move away, Ridz got busy with kids and Minnie pull Armaan with her to enjoy with kids...

Ahaan.phirse songgg...
Waise jo tu samjhane wali ti woh toh smajh pehle nehi aayi but when I start reading song and description , tab samajh mein aayi hahaha...
Wohooo, main toh jhatke utke nachne lagi heheheh...
U know I was laying with Tiny next to me... Woh so rahi ti aur main utke naach ne lagi...
Hoodh was like yeh kiya kar rahi ho hahaha...
Song description ke zyada mujhe song mein interest huva...
It was awesome songgg and description is superbbb tooo...

pehle song shuru huva Rangin Ashiyana se, Rahul was trying to stop Muskaan hahaha...
Phir Shilpu joins Muskaan hahaha...
Aur uske baad Padma :O hahahah itna talli hogayi woh bhi naachne lagi hehee...
Poor Shashank trying to stop her hahaha...
Hahaha Sid color on Shilpu and Shilpu was ready to band bhaja de hahaha...
Accha huva Shilpu realized he was drunk hahaha...

Phir song change to Treasure of Heaven...
Armaan dancing with Minnie and kids around him...
Both side se sab log dance raha taa hahahaa, boht maza kar rahi hai sabbb...
Aise waise hokhe gana khatammm...

Awww poor Shashank ask Atul to check on guest while he take care of Padma...
Shilpu was taking care of Muski who go and hide behind Rahul hahaha...
Phir Shilpu went to look after Sid when Rahul said he will take care of Muski...

Hahahahah Sid tree pe chad gaya...
Awww, he was scared of Shilpu hahahaa...
Kyun nehi, hamesha daante hai aur uska band bhajate hai...
Hahaha Shilpu thoughts were super awesome woh kuch kar bhi nehi sakte as Sid is not on his sense hahaha...
Bohot pleading ke baad Sid neeche jump ki aur woh bhi Shilpu ke upar hahaha...
Arey wah, dono Sid was complimenting Shilpuuu hahaha aur Shilpu hogayi confuseddd with his sudden change of behavior...

Hahaha Muski is so funny after being drunk... Woh aur uski unique laugh...
Wohooo, Rahul is so much in love with Muski...
Muski run away and Rahul run away behind her to catch her...

Phir aayi humhare old couple pe hehehe...
OMG Padma talli hokhe Shashank ke band baja dhiya hahaha...
Awww both tell each other how perfect wife and husband they are...

Back In Treasure of Heaven...
Hahaha Minnie is so naughtyyy...
Kids wants AR to put colors on each other hahaha...
When they refused, Minnie make them put color by playing pranks on both of them hehehe...

Hawww, mujhe laga gana wahi se khatam hogaya..
lekin abhi toh gana baaki haiii ...
Waise description was superb of AR in song...
And in Rangin Ashiyana, Rahul at last got hold of Muskaan...
Sid and Shilpa stood up and again Sid started to dance with Shilpa...
Now the song end hahahaha...

Riddhima kisse baat kar rahi hai... Ek minute ke liyeh mujhe laga woh Abhi hai but when u didnt mention any name, hmmm koan ho sakta haiii...
Hwww, tu phirse new character lane wale ho??? Don't tell meee...
Ahaan. Armaan is feeling jealous seeing Riddhima hugging some guyyy...
Wohooo, woh rangin ashiyana ja rha haiii...

Back in Rangin Ashiyana...
Guest left and now gupta's and gang hai wahaaa...
I know I know yeh Armaan hi hogaaa...
Woh nikal gaya na waha aane ke liyeh, aur usse pehle toh koi aur aa nehi sakte hehehe..
I mean Ridz Minnie and Abhi nehi aa sakte...
Wah wah, Dhamad se itne acche se baat kar raha hai Shashank... I mean to be son in law...
Haan haan, pata hai tu kahenge no one knows what will happen in future...
Ufff, I m waiting for the that day AR fall in love and confess to each other...

Okey okey back to story hehehe...
Ooops Muski bumped to Shashank and put color on his face hahaha...
Armaan was shocked to see Rahul there hahaha...
Bechara Armaan bohot confused hogaya waha ke haalat dekh ke...
Atul ne Shashank koh andar bhulaya, aur Shashaank samajh gaya kiya baat hoga hahaha...

Hahahaha Padma safai karne lagi aur woh Shashank se karwaenge abbb hahaha...
Awww poor Shashank , biwi ki pakka wala gulam bangaye hahaha...
Hahahaha Padma is blackmailing him and Shashank was asking for Ridz to get back soon hahaha...
Lolz, When Shashank clean phirse Padma ne sab kuch mess up kardi hahahaha...

Kya baat hai, Atul ne Armaan koh sabkuch bata diya...
Shilpu and Rahul was successful in bringing Muski and Sid inside the house with help of Gappu Armaan and Atul...
Everyone was surrprise to see Shashank doing work and Muski laugh heehehehe...
Awww Shashank got embarrassed hehehe...
Acha huva Shashank ne padma koh samjhake andar legaya aur sola diya...

When Shashank came back, he saw Muski and Sid running around While others runnig behind them...
Shashank ke ek word se sab stop hahaha...
Aaah, finally Muski and Sid bhi so gayeee...

Shilpu intro herself to Armaan...
Koi toh poocha Ridz ke baare mein... Kyun nehi after all Ridz is her partner in pranks na hahaa...
Ah, Armaan asked who is princess diana...
Haan haan aaj toh mil lenge...
Whattt??// Aaj bhi ghar pe nehi milenge yeh dono...
Uff tu bhi na BabyGirl, kyun bhaga rahe ho Armaan koh kaam ke liyeh...
Chalo tik hai, aaj nehi toh phr kabhi... Aur woh din kab aayenge, mujhe bhi nehi pata heehee...
Kaise pata hoti, tujhe bhi toh nehi pata right...

Armaan left with Bi and Gappu, Gappu koh nehi jaana ta but Armaan took him as he has school following day...
Armaan gaya aur Ridz aagayiii ufff kya timing hai yeh log ki hainaaa...

Sab lazily beit raha ta tab aagayi Ridz Minnie Abhi and new guyyy...
Shilpu ke aankhon me haat rakha usne...
Behena bhi kahaaa...??? Hain koan yehhh...
Shilpu ki bhaiii???/ :O
Shilpu koh laga Ridz mazak kar rahi hai but when she saw him, woh bhi surpriseddd...
Now I want to know who is this new person...
batao batao bataooo.
WA mein bata na okkk... hehehe...

It was awesome and hilarious part BabyGirl...
Holi Khatam hote hi tumne apne puzzle game shuru kiya na...
Guess who is new characterr ufff...
Is baar toh I don't have a single clue who might be this new person...
Kahin Shubankar toh nehiii... :O
Woh kaise ho sakte haiii...

Chalo next part mein dekhte haiii...
Super awesome blossom and funny part BabyGirl...
Love u so much for the part...
Muwaahhh...
Take care and continue soon after ur practicals hehee...
Cuaaa...

Yeayyy
Finally u unres
U know how much i lv ur comment
I always wait dor it

Ha ha i know what exactly u are talking about

Oh my god
Jiji u really going to sing
I'm so happy
Are wah wah
Kya gana gaya
Main to apki fan ban gayi..
Waise pehle se hi thi fan
To Ab ac ban gayi

Yea sure
Chalo baat karte hai
Yup main bhi wohi soch rhi thi kya fayda hua
Then apne bola to i realize
Ha yeh bhi hai
Yea jiji
Ridz ka bhi dayda hua
Waise kya point pakdi hai apne
Maine to itni gehrai se socha hi nhi
Btw i'm glad u like this portion

Mujhe kya pata apko aisa kyun laga
Waise jo bhi laga bilkul sahi laga

Yea ab kya kare
Bache thodi shararati to hoti hi hai
N celebration means full chut hai shararat karne ki
So mouka hat se thodi hi gawa sakta hai

Yeayyy
Congrats jiji
Ur guess right..

Yea true
Main to yehi line bolne wali thi
Par mere se pehle apne bol diya
Chalo koi nhi ap bolo ya main ek hi baat hai

N sachi me apu
Mujhe actually khud nhi pata hoti hai main kya likhne wali hoon without some major point
Ab isme meri galti thodi hi na hai

N about that
Who could know me better than u
Do u think anyone have that chance????
Tch i don't think so
Coz u r my only jiji
N i lv u a lot

Yea jiji finally they meet
N i'm glad that u like their meet

Ab kya kare bolo
Hum ladte bhi to unse jinse hum pyar boht karte hai
Haina????
Though yaha abhi tak gire nhi dono in love
But kabhi na kabhi shayed...

U see i write the unexpected..
N ab tak itne parts me yeh baat to ap ko pata chal hi jani chahiye thi
waise ek baat bolu
Actually maine bhi nhi expect ki thi
Yeh wala portion to maine baad me edit karte waqt dala
U know mujhe kuch adhura adhura sa lag rhi thi without this

I'm glad apko song sequence achi lagi
I don't what come in my mind
I put the song later

Ab holi hai wo do shaitan chali gayi to kya hua use pheeki to nhi hone de sakte na
To kisiko to yeh haal lena hi tha
To y not shilpa

Ab wo kya hai na jiji
Maine wo last part me hi apko wo darne wala logic samjhai thi na

That husband are always chuhe ban jate hai apni biwi k samne chahe wo dunia k samne kitna bhi sher kyun na bane

Well lets see kya hoti hai
Abhi bol di to kaise chalega????

Kya main samjhane wali thi
Jo apko samajh nhi ayi????
Aur baad me apko samajh ayi????
Mujhe to kuch bhi samajh nhi ayi yeh line me...

I'm glad u like the song description
N about the song i also love it

Ab sense nhi hai to jiska sense hai uski to band bajayegi hi na wo log

Ab as they are all after their partners
So its indeed that they will do more craziness

Ab kisi ko to unke bich ake yeh awkardness dur karni hi thi then y not minnie
Usse better option to ho bhi nhi sakti na koi

Are kaha ab tak to bg music chal rhi thi
N as sabko dikha di to music bck

Huh main kyun bolu kisse baat kar rhi hai
Waise sab to dmg k characters hi hai
So naye kaha

Apko badi pata hai
Armaan unka damaad hai????
Agar nhi hui to????

Wait karte raho jiji
Coz abhi to boht der hai

I so lv u jiji
U comment on evry single details
N i just love that

N ya aj bhi nhi hai
Ab kya kare
Unka mulakat main karwaungi
But little more patience nhi
Bas itna keh deti hoon jayada der nhi hai very soon they gonna meet officialy
Ab mujhe pata hai wo kab milenge coz maine already kuch likh bhi li dor that

Jiji control
Waise maine kab bola wo guy hai
I never mention that
Ab shilpa ki koan hai wo to apko next part me pata chalegi
Jo main next friday post karne wali hoon

N i lv u a lots lots lots
I so glad that u like it
Lv u
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Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: Jess2014
Hey dear,

First of all, I am really sorry,
I have not commented on the last 2-3 parts,
but I could not spare any time,

I have not been able to read the parts
well and hence I would not be able to comment,
but I will be free by the end of June and
then I'll do my best to comment at the soonest,
hope you would not mind 😊

P.s: Keep PMing me about the updates 😊

Take care,
luv you ❤️

Hey jess
Hows u
Hey don't need to be sorry
Its absolutely ok
N i can understand
U don't need to feel bad about it
U do comment whenever u free
I've no problem with that
I would rather appreciate that u let me know
N again plz don't say sorry
I'll pm u further parts also u do comment whenever u can
lv u
Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: palakajenian
so finally ar ki meet hui yipppeee
chal introduction nah karaya ti kya jua meeting to hui i m happy with that only
wow kahan ja kar milna hua
wow atleast both celebrate holi with each other
nd dance on my fav song
i just loved it
hayye mazza agaya
ek hi part mein itne saare song sequence but all r my fav holi songs
i used to dance crazily on it on every
yeh orphanage ke baccho ko kiss karne ka man kar rha h
inki vajah se mujhe ar moments mila thanks to them
loved all the ar moments nd armaan mini moments thats was so cute
are yaar again a new entry ab kaun reh gya ???????
shilpa ka bhai ?
watever but i loved this part so muchhh
love u pikachhhuuu
*hug tight* *lots of kisses* muahhh
love u sweety

Yup finally they meet
N holi hai so kisi na kisi bahane se milna tha hi unhe
So here it is
They meet
N see maine tere wish bhi puri kardi n part bhi tere naam pe dedicate kiya
I'm glad u like it
I know yaar but i'm kind of lv to put song in evrything
Ab uska main kya karu bol

To karde kiss mana kisne kiya

I'm glad tujhe pasand aya

Wo to next part me pata chalegi
Aur uske liye u need to wait darling

Lv u
Tc