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Posted: 13 years ago

This is a random story no connection with the serial I just took took characters frm it... I started writing it still wondering what will I right? Just know wanted to write abt Abhay-Phulwa. Since missing them a lot now a days but What??????
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They are two, but born for being one.

The story dealt with two people, Abhay and Phulwa.

Abhay: A serious nature guy. He obeys his elders and respect them. He is a bit arrogant, he cannot stand any kind of dishonesty and crimes. He is sympathetic towards fellow beings but fails to show it as such. A bit egoistic and he always need his loved ones to care him first. Born in a rich family his father is a business man and mother a perfect house wife.. his family contains his elder brother, his wife, dadi ma, his cousin and bhua.

Abhay

Phulwa: Very bubbly girl. Considers herself as strong, adventures girl. In fact she is but in the chakker of showing herself as strong and adventures falls in many problems and then rescue by her dear friend Abhay. She is a bit childish. Pampered by every one in the two house both her own and her baba's best friend's house, that is Abhay's house. She is the only girl child in both the houses so she is getting more consideration. But all those things made her a bit bigada hua, but with Abhay's company she remained as a good girl. her family contains father, mother, younger brother Babu, Chacha Bhanua, chachi Guntta, bhua (father's younger sister) Gayatri, chacha's son (Lattu).

Phulwa

Abhay- Phulwa: Bought up together. Two poles. When one like books and his room the other likes to spend time with friends, parties and full masti, one like Hindustani and the other western. When one thinks what will be the lecture today the other thinks how to get out of the class. Still both stayed together as best friend. when ever a problem comes to their life both think of the other first. When ever they get something new wanted to share with the other first. Every happiness, sadness they shared together... They where two but their mind remain one.

So my story is all about these two people... Will update the first part may be today it self. This will not be a continuous thing as far as I was concerned now will be a SS. Small Small incidents... It will not have a complete story, no ending and the most important thing is any one can add their bits to the story also... Just as we do with the serial characters. Only one condition is retain Phulwa and Abhay as I described in their character sketch. Even can introduce new characters but just introduce their behavior, character first. So that is it, pls tell me about your opinions... Planning to update the second part today itself. 😊

PART 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23

PART 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=2

PART 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=3

PART 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=4

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=6

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=7

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=8

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=10

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=12

Part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=15

Part 11: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2935397&TPN=16

Part 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23?pn=19

Last part 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/phulwa/2935397/they-r-2-but-4-being-1-ff-last-prt-updat-page-23

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Posted: 13 years ago

A full pink room, the walls is full of cute pictures of flowers and babies. The alarm is ringing for a long time. But the one under the pink blanket is unaware of that still sleeping peacefully. The room is in full chaos books and cloths are shattered here and there plus a basket ball.
Down the stares somebody enters in the house in jogging cloths. He wears a black colour jogging pants and a red colour T shirt. It was Abhay. " Amma juice". I am at Phulwa's room. He knows she will be sleeping now also, with the lull of alarm clock. He opened her door, as he expected, he placed his hand knees on the door a bit above his shoulder and examined the room. From the childhood this girl is an expert in making her room as bad as possible he thought. Placing all these in place is like his daily routine now. He shake his head with a smile and looked down. But I was never complained abt this, he thought in his house if somebody misplaced anything he just complained and make them place it in the proper position. This girl is always made him behave a bit differently. His Phulwa. He loved her the most but she never understand his feelings. She is a rolling stone. He made the room look decent. Then Phulw's mother entered, "Abhay you never change, let it be like that allow her to do this then only she keep it clean and tidy". " Its ok amma. My juice?" "Are baba here is your juice. now I am going i have a lot of work in the kitchen. Wake her up son." "Yes Amma".

He slowly sit besides her and called her. She opened her eyes and sit. She just looked around her room as usual he made it clean. She looked at her dear friend, who is now scanning her notes, oh he will going to start the lecture now... She use a single note book for all the subjects and wo bhi fr the whole semester one. Abhay always advice her to concentrate more on studies but she just wanted to do all kinds of enjoyments in the collage, and she smiled on her thought of Abhay is there for doing all studies, so that they can live their life happily ever after. He wants to be an IPS officer, so here I am a brave girl of a brave IPS officer, I am taking all the steps and training fr being a courageous police officer wife, I dont wanted to study anything more Abhay.But he never going to know what is in her mind a complete book worm. Phulwa get irritated on that thought. If she feels something like this fr any other guy she will just hold his collar and will tell into his eyes.. "I love you and you should have to love me too." But its Abhay... "now will you stop dreaming and do your daily things? I will come to pick you on 9 am". Said Abhay with an angry look. She slowly nodded.

Will continue with this tomorrow as u people wish... Can contain a lot of mistakes pardon me fr that. Pls add you both comments and also add you suggestions and your part of the story if interested. 😊

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mimi_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

Athira...grt...excellent chracterisation...looking forward to your first update...i know u will do a grt job...😊...i alwys wanted to see them in the backdrop of city...😊...looking forward to reading your updates...😊 Sorry Athira i see U have already updated...sorry i missed it...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you mimi. you are the first one to comment on thank u so much fr the encouragement will try my level best to tally with your expectations but even if I failed pls support me and correct me when ever needed.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Athira...grt work...👏👏...both of them love each other and they dont know that...😃😃...and Abhay arranging Phulwas room...thats too cute...😉

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Ameres

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Posted: 13 years ago

Athira, great work!

Love the idea of different characters. I can so imagine both Sargun and Ajay in these roles. Perfect! :D

Aww, they both like each other but cant tell? How cute. Really the first part is SO adorable. 😳

Waiting for the next update! ;D

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mimi_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

Athira...I really think this Phulwa is tailor made fr Sargun...I think she must b like this in real life...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Anu, Mimi and Mula First a big thank you to all of you. I was really confused before but now feels good. Thank you to all.

Mimi: Yes mostly she must be like this. I first think of making Abhay like this and make Phulwa a ruling figure, but I always want him to be an angry young man with disciplined life. Hopefully u people really like it. I was already finished with the second part now just wanted a few more addings and all but was afraid of ur responses that is why not posted it along... Now I am confident will do it with confidence...