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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..athu it was mindblowing..the look on abhay's face when they said that her marriage is fixed was hilarious..woww just love ur writing...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mimi: Thank you soo much Mimi... Good to know that you people like my work...

Anu:
Yes Anu accepting a person as such is the best part of a relationship... When that kind of an acceptance is there the breaking of that relation will be minimum...

Fa-Ameer: We all miss them I think there are more fans for their pair than we really think so mostly one or the other will bring them back... since they dont done a daily soap last for a long and people still wants them back so probably they will be back together... Thank you so much for liking my SS... expecting the support in future also...

Nity:
Thank you... Ya will update it soon...

Akshi: He should be like thousand people slapped him together... For a moment he felt like he was losing him self... Thank you dear for likening it... Read in future also... Support me too...



To all here...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just read the next part. Aww so they will be getting engaged now? So sweet. So good to read that everyone accepts their relation.

LOL! Could so imagine both AP's reaction over hearing the news of Phulwa getting engaged. Abhay must have been devastated but in the end surprise was sweet. 😳

Great work! Continue soon! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Athira, this part has to be the one i liked most! It had everything from romance to comedy and your writing made it all the better😃

The one thing we hide from each other is also now known to us. So that makes us close even more. Now we don't have to act to each other. You can be your true self, the same for me too. If you cannot be the same with me then to whom you can behave so?

I love this bit. So beautiful and true. Their love should serve to bring them closer and not create barriers. While shyness comes with the feelings, Abhay would never want his Phulwa to change for anything in the world😍

Their families really sounds great! I like every single member in it! They are all so funny and so close to each other. This is one difference i like in your SS. You portray their family life as simple but so beautiful filled with small joys.😊

Abhay got scared there! That was brilliant on your part! Giving him and Phulwa a shake before letting them know. The photo snatching bit was sooo sweet😆

If Abhay had known he was the groom, he would not have mentioned age and readily agreed for the wedding😆😆

This was such a great piece. You bring new and surprising ideas in every part. I'm sure you'll continue to dazzle us. Can't wait for next part!😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ami: Thank you soo much for the kind words... Ya the best part of anyone's life is their family which can enjoy every small bits of happiness life gives to us together... For me a family with a lot of memebers who loves and care is the best...

Yes Abhay wont mention anything just say " Ya we can think of an engagement tomorrow and marriage the day after " lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 6: The beginning of an eternal relation''..

The house is completely decorated with flowers and lights. All are in a festive mood. Today is the most awaited day of Phulwa- Abhay, engagement. The decision was too fast that all have a feeling of something is still missing'. Abhay's elder brother Akshat and his wife Roopa will miss the ceremony, sine the flights are not available. But they are planning to visit the family after that.


Phulwa is ready with her Golden-Red fish cut lehanga. She was actually planning for a gown but her Abhay is so particular about the Indian look so she finalized with lehenga itself. She was not wearing any heavy accessories, except a long ear ring. She is wearing two bangles each in both hands. Her hair is untied' covering her back completely. After dressing her up every one went out of the room leaving Phulwa alone in the room. She looked herself one more time in the mirror to make sure that she is presentable to Abhay, she was sure how bad she may look he will not stop loving her but she wanted to look best just for him. She moved to the window of her room from where she could get to see a good picture of Abhay's room.


Abhay was looking at himself' He feels good for himself.. He can stole Phulwa's eyes completely, he thought confidently. As already decided they are in dress coordination. Abhay is also wearing the golden Shervani with a back neck covering collar, which is piped with red. He had a sudden desire to see Phulwa. He slowly looked out through his window.


Out side he met with the eyes of a girl, who looked liked she is composed of all the beauties of the world. Her eyes were the most attractive one he ever seen. They were calling him to come and dip in their depths. He was feeling too good for his own luck, that girl is just his own.


Phulwa cannot look at him for a long time his intense gaze was too strong for her to stand. Her eyes lowered, but still remembering the handsome man they just met with. He was looking adorable. The smile on his face was killing as usual. She felt like she is floating in the air. Nothing is seems to be real now, as if caught in a dream. She looked up to met him once more, but he was already gone.


"Phulwa" Imarti called her "Let us go dear" She followed her mother.


Every one was look above like they are watching some angel coming down. She was looking not less than that.. Abhay felt proud and anger at the same time. Which was more??? Even he don't know. She walked slowly to stand besides him. Phulwa looked up expecting Abhay's eyes over her, She was correct. Both smiled to each other.


Phulwa slowly slides the ring through his fingers. She is making her name and life close to his heart today. Her long last dream'. He also does the same. From today their life is bounded together. There wont be any existence for Phulwa or Abhay with out the other. The party was continued, Phulwa looked around to see her family mates, she should be very lucky to get them she thought, born to such a caring and loving parents and now going to the house were she will get two who love her more than her parents. A husband who have nothing important then her happiness'. And entire family who always stand along her. She felt like she is the most blessed one over this earth' Her eyes fall on the devi matha statue'. "Pls keep these all like this ma"''. She prayed.


Phulwa was standing a bit away from all the uproar. Abhay come from her back and whispered to her ears "Dreaming abt me?" She looked back shocked. He hold her hands not allowing her to move away from him.

" Abhay leave me, some one can notice us".

" So what today I don't care abt any one other than you and me. First you come with me to your room."

" Now? Phulwa exclaimed , " Are you in your senses? Any one can search for us. "

" No one Phulwa, in fact I placed Babu and Lattu to take care of the one who will look for us, they will handle, also we are not going for one or two hours, just 30 m is what I am asking from you. Wont you give that much to your lovely would be hubby? Abhay asked with a pleading face.

Phulwa smiled at him and told him placing her hands on his cheeks " If I could trust my life with you then I could give anything for you".

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They enter into Phulwa's room. Phulwa entered the room first'. She cried out a hai out of utter excitement the room she just left before hardly three four hours was now fully decorated with flowers , with her fav blue roses and yellow tulips. Abhay was standing behind her, happy at her excitement.


"You liked it wont you?

"I loved it Abhay, But when did you do all these?"

"In fact Babu and Lattu helped me here also a lot'.. I just wanted to give you a surprise,"

"You never used to be Abhay, you always be a BW and now behaving like a real collage guy"

" Ha Ha, just for one day don't dream a lot"


Both fall in a long laugh for this. Abhay stopped in b/w and moved more close to her. Phulwa sensed his feelings and her face also took another look. Abhay cupped her face in his hands then kissed her at the forehead. Then whispered to her ears " Don't open your eyes" Then move her towards the dressing table, turned her to the mirror. He slowly taken out a chain from his pocket and put it across her neck . Then slowly placed a kiss on her neck and asked her to open her eyes.

She opened them to see a nice chain containing a locket in heart shape having their first letters in it "PA". Phulwa's eyes were going round in the surprise. " Abhay I love this this is beautiful."

"But not more than you Phulwa "


Phulwa could easily recognize the new glitter in her Abhay's eyes. He leaned more to her


"Bhaya, Jijiya , all are asking for you two" Babu entered.


Abhay leaned back " Oops you wanted to come now itself."


Both walked down stairs. Guests are started to leave' a few remains now. All left the home within an hour leaving the family alone. Phulwa and Abhay went to their own rooms to change. All others also go for fresh to meet a few minutes latter in the hall of Ray singh parivar. Akshat is calling from US to congratulate his brother and his bubbly ( He used to call Phulwa using that name.).


" Ok Akshat we will plane a trip after your arrival. In fact we will fix the place and inform you". Said Abhay.


" What was he telling Abhay"


"He was telling that we wanted to have trip with them on this happiness".


" Shall we go Malshej ghat" Lattu asked in a jerck.


"Malshej ghat?" Every one utter.


Yes I wanted to see that place. Where we can see different seasons together and also the water fall to the road.. Wow. Just an amazing spot I would say.


" That is a wonderful option I think" , Abhay and Babu supported Lattu.

" Als that place is just 150 Km from Mumbai so we can make it a small deal but enjoyable."

"So I think we can fix with the place Malshej ghat in pune. right Mangro? " Asked Prathap ray singh.

Mangro nodded to his friend.

"So now the time for sleep good night to all''.."

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That day ended for them in another good note' planning to go for Malshej Ghat to enjoy the happiness they have now unaware about where life actually wanted them to go... All went to sleep with out knowing the huge shadow of grief waiting to engulf them in no time'''''..

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Here ends the sixth part... as usual all sorts of comments are welcome...

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I know even though for them it ends in happiness for us it end in a question mark... Be with me at any cost I wont let it ends in a bad one...

Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
good writing. all the six parts are truly superb.👍🏼 i think there will be a turn in the story from the next part. waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
woww..i loved it..as usual it was amazing..loved some dialogues like

phulwa saying" its very beautiful"
abhay "not more than u"
woww...i loved it..arre what yaar...grief... what grief..?
eagerly waiting for ur next part..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
GOOD. SWEETLY WRITTEN.👍🏼 aahaa... now the main story going 2 be start... waiting for the next up date.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Great update. Abhay-Phulwa's engagement part was really cute, could imagine them both.
Esp the part about them looking at each other was shoo sweet! These two are so adorable. 😳

Aww! Abhay decorated the whole room for her! Thats super cute. He really is the sweetest guy. 😳

Ouch! Grief? But I know you are going to handle it well, so good luck with that. Waiting for the next part! :D

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