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Posted: 13 years ago

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Mimi: Yes I know every one like him as an angry young man. So he is... 😉 😊. Yes I will update the next part today itself...

Akshi: 🤗 Glad to see you dear... Yes yes jaldi jaldi karoongi yar... But now I am getting scared could I make up with you people's expectations 😕 Pls tell me if I fails anywhere and so I can correct myself...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part two 😊

She is digging in her cupboard for finding a cloth for collage today... While Abhay is already in his black T shirt and blue jeans. He looked at the clock 8.30. then he looked at the photo of him and Phulwa taken at her last birthday... She must be searching for the cloths still Abhay thought. He took his phone and called her.
" Why abhay, why are u calling me at this time you will be come exactly on 9.00 will you? pls now put the phone down. I know u want me to late and by telling that reason you want to go to collage with out me and want to spend some cute time with that Arti. right? Dare you Abhay if you do the same today also I will tell about her in home." She finished in single breath.
Abhay wanted to laugh aloud but controlled knowing the nature of his girl. He swallowed it and then said teasingly, " So you know, then why are you insisting to come with me every day and made me some excuses for not taking to you to the collage along with me, why cannot you do that by your self?"
Phulwa is losing all her control now. She wanted to break the flower vase in her room on his head.. But the pain is again for her. She stood silent. Abhay knows, that hurt her. Since from the very childhood she was the most important person in his life she wont tolerate any one else taking that position and in fact he will never allow any one else to to take her position in his life. He said in an apologizing tone " Are baba I wont going to leave you to day, he posed and continued, will wait for you endlessly". He said it in a double meaning, not just mentioning today but the entire life.
She felt a sudden uplift, and a particular vibration in her mind. His last words "will wait for you endlessly has some special effect on her she was blushing. Her heart was trembling like it get something it waited for a long. Her eyes filled with tears.
" Acha Phulwa wear your black chudithar today" A voice from the other end wake her up. 'Ok'. She smiled and cut the call.
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Arti: A studious girl like Abhay. They were the toppers of the class. She admired Abhay a lot. Abhay also respected her. But the relationship they share is nothing but a close friendship and the bond that exist b/w two students who share the same POV towards studies. But the entire collage taken their relation in other way and making rumors abt them. But both of them never care abt that since they know the one who wanted to know abt them will never go with these rumors. Arti is a calm and silent girl. She will be find either in lecture hall or in library. She is the daughter of a family friend of Ray Singh parivar. ( Abhay's Family).
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She was ready even before the time and already on break fast table, today he could go to the collage on correct time with her. She knows Abhay is not doing all these to get some time alone with Arti, and also knows he dont have any kind of feelings for her, but he wanted her to value the importance of time and be a bit more disciplined in her life. But she loved teasing him with the name of Arti. But when he accept it, she get hurt. She dont like him talking abt any other girl with love.
"Phulwa, are you ready? Shall we go?". Abhay entered, both of them went for the collage.

So here ends the other part... Pls shower with both positive and negative comments. The next part may be a continuation or a new one. A new incident as I said the entire thing will be independent that allow any one to add their parts. I really want you people also take part in it but as your time allows... 😊

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akeash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

i love this. please continue the story. in abhay there is no much different in the character, phulwa's one got different shade. looks interesting.

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thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Akeash: Thank you so much for the encouraging words. I updated the second part. ya you find it correctly its Phulwa who changed here Abhay is almost retained to his original self since I love him like that... But one difference is there I think I dont made it clear for the readers yet, but will be soon.The real Abhay is not a shy type guy but our this Abhay is a bit shy type. that is the one difference but that also we will remove soon since he wanted to be an IPS officer... Thank you soo much once again. These words have a good effect.

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mimi_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Why abhay, why are u calling me at this time you will be come exactly on 9.00 will you? pls now put the phone down. I know u want me to late and by telling that reason you want to go to collage with out me and want to spend some cute time with that Arti. right? Dare you Abhay if you do the same today also I will tell about her in home." She finished in single breath.

He said in an apologizing tone " Are baba I wont going to leave you to day, he posed and continued, will wait for you endlessly".

U know even our Abhay had the habit of saying...Are baba...after his accident after waking up he had told phulwa...Are baba..hum bhi aapko chod ke kahi nehi jaaenge...😊

Acha Phulwa wear your black chudithar today"

OK so they like to colour coordinate their clothes...soo sweet😊

Excellent work Athira...PLS continue...eagerly waiting fr your next update...see u at the AT tonite...😊

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avantika-akshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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i loved it..👏

"Since from the very childhood she was the most important person in his life she wont tolerate any one else taking that position and in fact he will never allow any one else to to take her position in his life."

fantastic lines...❤️

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thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank you so much Akshi 🤗... Yes I also loved that sentence when I wrote it...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I really loved this line ...the sequence is very very cute,,,,Abhay wanting to laugh aloud bt controlling is also too cute...😊😊😊...love this AP...will this Abhay be sadu when he gts angry...😊???

Thank you so much fr loving it. 🤗 . Sadu? Still I dont know, since this Abhay is a bit shy like our Ajay, but after all he is Abhay na so 😉... ...

U know even our Abhay had the habit of saying...Are baba...after his accident after waking up he had told phulwa...Are baba..hum bhi aapko chod ke kahi nehi jaaenge...😊

Yes, Yes Mimi I do remember, The sentence you quoted is in fact one of my fav. in the whole serial the way he said it and the tone of that " Are Baba" 😍 Ho that man was simply superb, Abhay ray singh. Ya Ajay is a good actor. 😉 😊. You know he tells this are baba in one more scene 13th march when Phulwa was trying to put colour on him... I just watched that scene... it was lovely in fact all PhAb was... miss them deeply even after these much of days...

OK so they like to colour coordinate their clothes...soo sweet😊
Yes, actually he wants, poor Phulwa she was unaware abt his shirt colour, but after seeing him also in black she will be double happy...

Excellent work Athira...PLS continue...eagerly waiting fr your next update...see u at the AT tonite...😊
Thank you dear 🤗 Ya will continue after this much of good words who wont do that... I will surly. Will update the day after tomorrow... since now I have to think of new incidents... Yes will meet u in AT to night.

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thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mimi_s
I really loved this line ...the sequence is very very cute,,,,Abhay wanting to laugh aloud bt controlling is also too cute...😊😊😊...love this AP...will this Abhay be sadu when he gts angry...😊???

Thank you so much fr loving it. 🤗 . Sadu? Still I dont know, since this Abhay is a bit shy like our Ajay, but after all he is Abhay na so 😉... ...

U know even our Abhay had the habit of saying...Are baba...after his accident after waking up he had told phulwa...Are baba..hum bhi aapko chod ke kahi nehi jaaenge...😊

Yes, Yes Mimi I do remember, The sentence you quoted is in fact one of my fav. in the whole serial the way he said it and the tone of that " Are Baba" 😍 Ho that man was simply superb, Abhay ray singh. Ya Ajay is a good actor. 😉 😊. You know he tells this are baba in one more scene 13th march when Phulwa was trying to put colour on him... I just watched that scene... it was lovely in fact all PhAb was... miss them deeply even after these much of days...

OK so they like to colour coordinate their clothes...soo sweet😊
Yes, actually he wants, poor Phulwa she was unaware abt his shirt colour, but after seeing him also in black she will be double happy...

Excellent work Athira...PLS continue...eagerly waiting fr your next update...see u at the AT tonite...😊
Thank you dear 🤗 Ya will continue after this much of good words who wont do that... I will surly. Will update the day after tomorrow... since now I have to think of new incidents... Yes will meet u in AT to night.