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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_akshi

wow...i have no words for u..it was amazing..i really thought that phulwa and abhay will meet..but its okay...i will wait...afterall anyway u r gonna make them meet..i loved it..woww. abhay back yes...now their lovestory will start again..yipppeee 🥳



I also wanted them to met but then think after four years.. aise hi dhekum? So delayed. Ya any ways they are going to met but I want some drama...
Thanks dear for loving it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: isma21

LOVELY WRITING. KEEP IT UP.👏



Thank you... your compliments really add to the of next update... continue reading and commenting dear...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
One thing I have forgot in my post was to thank Mula for the picture I have been used in the post that one I have took from the pic gallery and mula was the one who posted it...


Thank you...












Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 10: All plans are ready

"ACP Sahab, you never used to visit our home, so we thought why should we come here and give you a surprise"

Arjun and Arti entered Abhay's home at late night. Since the day Abhay came in that village things are started to change for him, he started liking the company of somebody, Arjun and Arti were now become part of his daily routine. They were such a nice minds that even though he never care to give back the welcome and warmth they are giving him at the beginning stage of their relation both of them never cared that and just continued with the shower of love and togetherness which forced Abhay change his attitude a bit towards making new relations. So now they two also joined with Surjay kakka, Akshat and Roopa Bhabhi's group- who can talk with him personal things.

Abhay also feels good for something. An unexplainable pleasantness, inside and outside, is there for him. The feeling of something to hope for, which he was lacking for the past four years of his life. It was about a month passed by after his Rajpoor arrival. He already met with the name Phulwa many times but all his trials to maeet that lady go in vain, like something is working b/w them to keep them away from each other. Then he slowly lost the feeling that the Phulwa in Rajpoor can be his Phulwa, since if it were she, she should have heard of him also and either Phulwa or Babu someone will came to him already...

"Abhay, tomorrow there will be a big day for you" Arjun said with a smile

"Why? What is the peculiarity of tomorrow?

"You don't know? Are yar kaise police ho? Tomorrow Bhavaniji and Phulwa were planning to do the marriage of a widow. Which is against the rules of this village, but they were succeeded in convincing the bride's family as well as groom's family along with villagers, But the problem is still a set of villagers and thw whole rich people of the village is against the act. That is the tension. You don't came to know since the villagers or the lan lords don't wanted the law to interfere with" Arjun said.

" I see, so what you think this Bhavani and his gang do you feels them as some rebellions. Why I asked is there is a case Arjun a murder case of a rich man in this village.. their gang is accused to be with that murder"

"Look Abhay as far as I understood them they take stands against the criminals here, but only legally, they never do any job illegally. So a murder is a far possibility for them."

"You two started to talk about the worldly things shall I join with some of my girly talking?"

"You are most welcome Mrs Arjun singh."

That was the time Arjun's Phone rang and he went out.

"Abhay shall I share you something, for days I am thinking about it, whether I should have to tell this to you or not. Actually whenever I came across the name Phulwa, I felt like they are mentioning... You know what I mean"

"Definitely I know Arti, I also have that feeling in my mind from the very time I was here.. In b/w you told me that Phulwa's certificates were taken from the collage so i also felt that she may be alive and may be here.. But just imagine Arti, if she were here either you or me should have to came across her once in this one month. Arjun is working in their hospital he should have to..."

"But he don't know how Phulwa looks?" Arti cut his words.

"May be but will it happens like he never mention about you to them?"

"In fact yes Abhay, I have not said about her to them, since they were never bother about to know about my family." Arjun answered Abhay this time.

"She told me also about the possibility, but I never felt so. The way she described Phulwa and the way the Phulwa here is... they are two poles. I told the same to her also but this girl is never ready to hear me. Many times she tried to see her also but don't know why faild."

"The same with me also." Abhay also said.

"Any how we could have think of a very busy day for ACP tomorrow and I would say you should have to take extra care ACP to prevent any sort of bad incidents. Any ways good night Abhay."

"Good Night"

"Surjay kaka, I am going for a walk" Abhay called for surjay.

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The night has all its beauty, thought Abhay. The sky is full of stars and the moon in its perfect circle. The blue light of moon falls on the ripples and they are all shines in the white... Nights are always beautiful he remember. He remember the days he and Phulwa spend on the terrace of their home looking at the stars sharing their small dreams and the floppers of the day... about the people they met...He felt a sudden pain of loneliness in him as usual, whenever he thinks about her the huge gap she made in his life came in front of him making him feel panic. Abhays thoughts went to Takur Daroga Singh... his days are coming nearer he thought.. from the very first day he joined in the service from the help of different people in the force he was collecting proofs against Takur and he has some very solid proofs in his hands to caught him. Now what he needs is an apt time.. one more crime Mr. Takur ACP Abhay will catch you for sure.. and then you have to pay for all you deeds...Abhay knows he wont take much time to give him such a chance... Suddenly he thought that day can be tomorrow... the remarriage he will surely be against it and will act something foolish to stop the marriage that will be enough for me... Once he produced infront of court then during the trials I could charge and prove more crimes on him... So As Arjun said tomorrow will going to be a big day for me... Thank you Bhavani... Abhay grinned.

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Phulwa was standing outside her room, in her balcony. Looking at the stars talking to her housemates. I have now all my weapons ready for him, for Takur Daroga singh, What I need is a small trigger... I am sure he will give me that next day... Another crime by Takur then I could easily make him arrest and then Bhavani Bhaya will ta ke care of all the else. Count down Takur, Phulwa is all set ready to saw your down fall...The whole remarriage plan, even though they planned it for the good of Chaya... they have this idea also in their mind to trap Takur. Tomorrow I could give you the justice... the only doubt is all about the police will they take case against him but all says that the new ACP is a good man and he never bend his knees in front of money or anything so some hope is still remains... if he does not then Phulwa knows what to do..I will just go againt Bhavani Bhaya's law and wish... I have nothing to lose only gain, gaining justice for my family.

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Takur was walking along the hall of haveli like a caged lion. For the first time ever in his life somebody showed the courage of confronting him, that also a villager, Chaya's father. He told that he can even die for the happiness of his daughter, to the warning of Takur. How dare he?... Takur is fuming...

"All just because of that Bhavani group. Those donkeys are braying in the strength they have given to them. You could now get why I have called you here with this much of urgency."

"Don't worry Rudra, I am here now. Tomorrow will be the last day for their neglecteness of Takur Rudra singh."

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A small update... The next part will be on way may be tomorrow...😊 Today also I dont made them met... wait they waited 4 years then y not a bit more 😉 Chappals, tomato, egg... or flowers u can decide...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Athira,,,,,wow so they will meet at the wedding...rite??? thats grt...waiting to read abt that moment when they will meet...😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update Athira.
Good to see AP feeling each others presence and them again feeling happiness after long. Abhay and Arjun have become good friends, nice to read that. :)

Aw, they still didnt meet. Why are you making them wait so long Athira? 😆

But you are right, jahan itna long wait kiya wahan few days more sahi. Hope this time they meet, never to part again. And I know you'll be making this meeting special. Looking forward to it. 😉

Urgh. Thakur! Why is he still there? But I know you will handle well so no problem.

Good work. Waiting for next. :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
SEEM S STORY GOING ON NICELY. HOPE ABHAY AND PHULWA WILL MEET EACH OTHER IN THE NEXT PART. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m running out of my patience yaar 😆..but i m convinced because i really hope that the next day they will surely meet..loved this update also..so big day for phulwa and abhay ha..?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Athira- Only flowers for you😉

Loved it.! Short but sweet. :D

I think like any good writer, you are keeping us on edge then will surprise us with something amazing, so im ready to wait for next time😉

Arjun and Aarti also have part in Abhay's life now. Good to read that!😊

So thakur punished and Abhay and Phulwa meeting soon? So best part coming up!! looking forward to it! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
One thing I have forgot in my post was to thank Mula for the picture I have been used in the post that one I have took from the pic gallery and mula was the one who posted it...

@Athira, Aww...you are so sweet...thank you🤗
Nice update as usually👏 And thanks for sharing ur lovely SS with us🤗

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